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Seducing My Ex's Father In Law: Ch. 229-280
Judy’s fated mate rejected her to marry the Lycan Chairman - Gavin’s daughter. As if that wasn’t bad enough, he ruined her family and tried to make her his secret mistress! Judy’s response? “I’d rather sleep with your father-in-law than ever be with you!” Gavin is known for his power, wealth, and being the ultimate playboy who never sleeps with the same woman twice. But Judy’s about to break all his rules… again and again.
335 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 28, 2025
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October 8, 2025
great story line
The story is awesome and I enjoy reading it but there are a million grammatical errors and confusion on names and plots but my biggest issue is that 4 books in and it’s still not concluded. Everything just feels super dragged out now to get more money. Personally I’m only giving it 1 more book just because I’m invested in the story line but if it’s not completed by then I’m done. This book is just not good enough for me to pay $60. I’ve already spent $40 so I’m hoping number 5 is done but if not I’m done reading and I’m giving it a horrible review. Which is hard for me because I love reading and I’m willing to work with any author who follows their dream to become a writer but something has to give here.
The story is awesome and I enjoy reading it but there are a million grammatical errors and confusion on names and plots but my biggest issue is that 4 books in and it’s still not concluded. Everything just feels super dragged out now to get more money. Personally I’m only giving it 1 more book just because I’m invested in the story line but if it’s not completed by then I’m done. This book is just not good enough for me to pay $60. I’ve already spent $40 so I’m hoping number 5 is done but if not I’m done reading and I’m giving it a horrible review. Which is hard for me because I love reading and I’m willing to work with any author who follows their dream to become a writer but something has to give here.
October 11, 2025
Series not finished....
Im upset with this series. I thought it was completed and now im here trying to find the rest. I wish it was finished. Will they tell us when its finished
Im upset with this series. I thought it was completed and now im here trying to find the rest. I wish it was finished. Will they tell us when its finished
March 16, 2026
This book infuriated me. I am disgusted with how poorly Gavin treated Judy as soon as Rachel showed up. Also, the ending was abrupt with zero closure. I thought this was a completed series, but I guess not. I wasted so much time on this to just be left hanging! I endured the atrocious writing quality because the plot was epic, and now I cannot even find out how it all ends.
March 16, 2026
And after a high there must be a low (where tf is book 5 though)
February 12, 2026
THE FRUSTRATION!!
The frustration is real with this one. All chapters! Misspelling, characters switch, names wrong, half way new details added that were never there, like Judy having a car??! What in the world just happened??? I get so invested and suddenly… abruptly!… I scream to myself, “why???” After spending almost all the chapters getting Ubers or being driven by others… this is just a tiny detail of all the mistakes happening in there.
I’ve stopped reading at chapter 777. They’re becoming shorter and shorter and being dragged for too long. I’m almost certain the author uses A.I. to write her books… She’s writing a couple of them simultaneously… and to add to that suspicion, “the breath I didn’t know I was holding”. They struggle to breathe apparently, a LOT! The most favourite expression of this novel.
On other hand… It’s stupidly addictive even with all the grammar being stomped on.
I’ll be damn if I catch myself invested in another book like this with so many mistakes that makes your blood boil.
It’s infuriating! I read it with such eager and rage, simultaneously. It’s a love hate relationship.
But at this point I’m certain the author is in for the cash and not the story… I just want it to be over with.
I won’t give another star because it desperately needs to be proofread. Plot holes need to be corrected, characters out of place need to be fixed! Character names should be consistent!
So much potential and so little care. Enrages me because I still want to know what happens next… but I’m stopping it here. Will probably read more when someone says it’s actually finished, just because of morbid curiosity
The frustration is real with this one. All chapters! Misspelling, characters switch, names wrong, half way new details added that were never there, like Judy having a car??! What in the world just happened??? I get so invested and suddenly… abruptly!… I scream to myself, “why???” After spending almost all the chapters getting Ubers or being driven by others… this is just a tiny detail of all the mistakes happening in there.
I’ve stopped reading at chapter 777. They’re becoming shorter and shorter and being dragged for too long. I’m almost certain the author uses A.I. to write her books… She’s writing a couple of them simultaneously… and to add to that suspicion, “the breath I didn’t know I was holding”. They struggle to breathe apparently, a LOT! The most favourite expression of this novel.
On other hand… It’s stupidly addictive even with all the grammar being stomped on.
I’ll be damn if I catch myself invested in another book like this with so many mistakes that makes your blood boil.
It’s infuriating! I read it with such eager and rage, simultaneously. It’s a love hate relationship.
But at this point I’m certain the author is in for the cash and not the story… I just want it to be over with.
I won’t give another star because it desperately needs to be proofread. Plot holes need to be corrected, characters out of place need to be fixed! Character names should be consistent!
So much potential and so little care. Enrages me because I still want to know what happens next… but I’m stopping it here. Will probably read more when someone says it’s actually finished, just because of morbid curiosity
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January 1, 2026
OK, I found this story on Facebook and read a few chapters and got hooked, but I will say I can’t help feeling it was AI written because of the constant repeat descriptions of stuff happening and there is horrible spelling mishaps and messing up on she and he and people‘s names like I think it was supposed to be Rachel speaking at one point, but they said it was Irene and Irene wasn’t even there It was something like that. Either way I found myself hooked.
October 1, 2025
Just to long to be worth the money
I don't know if the author reads these comments but we need a 5th book that is just a few chapters to sum this up. The book being this long is ridiculous. The story is good and enticing don't get me wrong. But it's far too long for even the author to get details right without missing things and forgetting details already put in it. Mixing up names to mates... etc. It needs a serious edit or even the author to just proof read what is already going.
I don't know if the author reads these comments but we need a 5th book that is just a few chapters to sum this up. The book being this long is ridiculous. The story is good and enticing don't get me wrong. But it's far too long for even the author to get details right without missing things and forgetting details already put in it. Mixing up names to mates... etc. It needs a serious edit or even the author to just proof read what is already going.
October 13, 2025
waiting on Book 5,6 or 7 ?!
Well now, please don’t end this series like this !!! It was just now getting really good and I must say that I didn’t mind spending $10 on each series than I had purchasing coins on another app but come on Caroline don’t do this to us and to yourself , you know you must finish this series with a better ending than half way. I love the story at the end but please please tell us there will be just a few more book series to add to book 4 ❤️
Well now, please don’t end this series like this !!! It was just now getting really good and I must say that I didn’t mind spending $10 on each series than I had purchasing coins on another app but come on Caroline don’t do this to us and to yourself , you know you must finish this series with a better ending than half way. I love the story at the end but please please tell us there will be just a few more book series to add to book 4 ❤️
February 24, 2026
It's a challenge. This book seems to have had ZERO proof reading done before posting. The whole book has errors where events are posted out of order then repeated in the right spot. People's names were changed then changed back. Words out of place. And then there are the sections where the author just seems to spazz out on the keyboard and you never learn what was supposed to be happening.
But beyond that the story is good. Lol
But beyond that the story is good. Lol
November 23, 2025
Dragging the Plot
A lot of grammatical errors. Plus she is dragging the story with a lot of meaningless events in between. Starting to make me uninterested, I pretty much skipped most pages on this one.
A lot of grammatical errors. Plus she is dragging the story with a lot of meaningless events in between. Starting to make me uninterested, I pretty much skipped most pages on this one.
February 23, 2026
don’t bother, leaves half way through the story!
As with all the books, this leaves half way through the story, it’s not a completed novel, and judging by comments on facebook, it just keeps going forever! Its feb 26 now and comments are from 13 weeks ago
As with all the books, this leaves half way through the story, it’s not a completed novel, and judging by comments on facebook, it just keeps going forever! Its feb 26 now and comments are from 13 weeks ago
October 4, 2025
A bit disappointed
I don't like how naive the characters are and It lacks excitement and I think you need to post more books faster the wait is a killer
I don't like how naive the characters are and It lacks excitement and I think you need to post more books faster the wait is a killer
October 7, 2025
Can't Stop Reading
Adventurous, Daring and Bold. Absolutely love it. Wish there was more to read and less waiting time between the release of chapters.
Adventurous, Daring and Bold. Absolutely love it. Wish there was more to read and less waiting time between the release of chapters.
March 21, 2026
Liked the story but where’s the ending. Wish I know it wasn’t finished.
January 18, 2026
Livid I have paid on Kindle for four books and the story is still incomplete and just randomly cuts off Midway on the fourth book. I don't want to be directed to another website or app to pay more for a story when I have already purchased it
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