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When Mr Darcy discovers Elizabeth Bennet's true feelings, he's grateful the ill-fated proposal he had planned to make in Kent was stopped. But as the London Season drags on, he realizes the he cannot be happy without her. Determined to become the man worthy of her regard, he returns to Hertfordshire with a singular purpose—to win her heart.

If only it were that simple. Darcy has indeed reformed himself, tempering his pride and learning humility, but Elizabeth's wounded feelings and lingering resentment cannot be overcome in a day. Just as she begins to see the changes in him and tentatively accept his friendship, a host of new obstacles emerge to test them both.

Meddling relations with their own agendas interfere at the worst possible moments. Well-meaning friends offer advice that only complicates matters further. Most troublesome of all is a rival suitor—charming, persistent, and determined to claim Elizabeth for himself—who seems to appear whenever Darcy and Elizabeth draw close.

Yet Darcy perseveres, and slowly, painfully, Elizabeth's heart begins to soften. Just when happiness seems within their grasp and all misunderstandings appear resolved, malicious gossip begins to circulate about Elizabeth's character and reputation. The whispers threaten not only her standing in society but Darcy's as well, forcing them both to confront an agonizing can their love survive such a scandal, or will propriety and duty destroy their chance at a future together forever?

Officious Interference is a low angst novel length Pride and Prejudice variation. Set in the regency era, this tale is an enemies to lovers second chance romance that includes a love triangle and a scandalous elopement. The content is closed-door.

Enemies to lovers romance - pining/unrequited love - interference of meddling friends and relatives- class differences - false accusations, gossip, scandal - ruined reputation - jealous friend/villain - love triangle

334 pages, Kindle Edition

Published February 9, 2026

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3,511 reviews44 followers
February 15, 2026
Another great story by an amazing author.

I'd probably even read the dishwasher manual, if I knew that Amy D'Orazio wrote it.
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1,351 reviews80 followers
Review of advance copy
February 22, 2026
Interference, Rumour, and Steadfast Devotion
This variation takes a familiar moment in Pride and Prejudice and tilts it in a fresh direction: Darcy never makes the disastrous Hunsford proposal, yet he still cannot put Elizabeth out of his mind. A fruitless London Season only confirms what his heart has already decided, and he returns to Hertfordshire with Bingley determined to show her the better man he has become.

Add to this the appearance of a rival suitor—a particularly engaging smile, polished, and ultimately, far too pleased with himself. He is attentive, and always just where Darcy least wants him. For me any rival adds that mild twist of angst to the stomach—and this one certainly does. Still, Darcy is unwavering. He sets himself to wooing Elizabeth with an earnestness that is endearing and satisfying to watch. I know who I’m rooting for.

When interference from various quarters, coupled with malicious gossip, threaten Elizabeth’s reputation and the fragile understanding they have only just begun to form, Darcy’s steadiness truly shines. You have never seen stubborn devotion until you have seen our hero determined to defend and rescue the lady he loves. I loved it.

Appreciatively, Lord Saye isn’t left out of this story, and a fortuitously overheard conversation by him and Miss Goddard finally helps Darcy save the day.

A steadfast Darcy, a softening Elizabeth, and that characteristic Amy D’Orazio charm we all know and love make it a very enjoyable read.

Highly recommend.

I received an advance copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.

Audiobook - February 20-21, 2026
Excellent narration by voice actor, Elizabeth Grace, one of my favourites.
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591 reviews3 followers
February 10, 2026
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Officious Interference: Read February 9-10, 2026
Officious Interference-Caroline’s Comeuppance: Read February 10, 2026

Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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Officious Interference: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
by Amy D'Orazio
Kindle Edition, 334 pages
Published February 9, 2026 by Quills & Quartos Publishing (first published January 5, 2026)
ASIN: B0FG1HFR2Z
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You are rather disposed to call his interference officious?

When Mr Darcy discovers Elizabeth Bennet's true feelings, he's grateful the ill-fated proposal he had planned to make in Kent was stopped. But as the London Season drags on, he realizes the truth: he cannot be happy without her. Determined to become the man worthy of her regard, he returns to Hertfordshire with a singular purpose—to win her heart.

If only it were that simple. Darcy has indeed reformed himself, tempering his pride and learning humility, but Elizabeth's wounded feelings and lingering resentment cannot be overcome in a day. Just as she begins to see the changes in him and tentatively accept his friendship, a host of new obstacles emerge to test them both.

Meddling relations with their own agendas interfere at the worst possible moments. Well-meaning friends offer advice that only complicates matters further. Most troublesome of all is a rival suitor—charming, persistent, and determined to claim Elizabeth for himself—who seems to appear whenever Darcy and Elizabeth draw close.

Yet Darcy perseveres, and slowly, painfully, Elizabeth's heart begins to soften. Just when happiness seems within their grasp and all misunderstandings appear resolved, malicious gossip begins to circulate about Elizabeth's character and reputation. The whispers threaten not only her standing in society but Darcy's as well, forcing them both to confront an agonizing question: can their love survive such a scandal, or will propriety and duty destroy their chance at a future together forever?


My Library Notes:

Caroline's Comeuppance: A Bonus Scene from Officious Interference
by Amy D'Orazio
ebook, 6 pages
Published February 10, 2026 by Quills & Quartos Publishing
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79 reviews
February 11, 2026
Another delightful read

Amy D’Orazio again delivers. She has interesting twists in her book and I always enjoy the character of Saye, who always adds humor to Darcy and Elizabeth’s story. Once I started, I couldn’t put it down.

I did find the character of Charlotte disturbing and enjoyed the breadcrumbs along the way.
185 reviews1 follower
February 11, 2026
Another winner!

Full disclosure, this is my favorite author! Truly enjoyed this variation, especially the character twists of Charlottes and Mr. Bennet, it really played a large part of the story. Of course, I love Saye, who knows just what to do and with much humor. Well done!,
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February 14, 2026
4.5 stars

This Pride and Prejudice variation is full of mischief and plenty of meddling! It seems everyone is inclined to promote or adjust matters to their benefit or the perceived benefit of others. The success might be 50/50, with some schemes worrying better than others!

Initially, the Colonel interferes which inadvertently keeps Darcy from making his disastrous Hunsford proposal. I actually really love variations without it because I feel it allows Darcy to have a bit of an easier time winning over Elizabeth. Goodness, when he confessed his love, it was pure swoon. I am obsessed with that moment in the story. Darcy sets out to win her, and he does, but almost too late.

Because everyone is intent on maneuvering people the way they would prefer, ODC's happiness is not assured. I have never read through a third of a story so fast as to find out what happened. The story becomes quite angsty about halfway through, and I hung on every glance and stolen moments ODC was able to have. Thank goodness for Saye, one of my favorite, hilarious additions to Amy D'Orazio stories, who vindicates the wrongs committed that threatened to keep ODC apart!

However, as angsty and emotional as 40% of the story was, the ending, while satisfying in conclusion, lacked some of the emotional closure hoped for after all the ruckus that was created. Overall, this was a fantastic variation, and one I would recommend!

I received a copy for consideration. All thoughts contained here are my own.
213 reviews
February 15, 2026
lackluster

Ms d’Orazio is a stellar writer, but this was phoned in from a cell phone in Mongolia, where coverage hovers between zero and one bar. The backstabbing villain makes no sense and Mr Bennet’s turn defies logic. Georgiana is not needed in the story; her only purpose is to create a reason for Saye to arrive in Meryton.

The plot itself suffers from a barrage of bad ideas. The major ostracism a character faces is but a part time affliction: “You Jezebel! Oh, but don’t forget our party on Wed night. Jezebel!”

Saye was so appalled by this book that he didn’t even bring Florizel.
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1,156 reviews
February 16, 2026
The middle section is excellent, with Darcy and Elizabeth’s courtship and real romance. If this level of depth had been shown throughout it would be an easy 5 stars.

Unfortunately the rest is weak and deserves 1 star. The start is slow and I almost DNF. The end is rushed and the angst overly manufactured and the resolution lacklustre. Various hints were thrown in but led no where, Mr Bennet was unreasonable, and Elizabeth temporarily forgot what had happened earlier in the novel. Charlotte’s role could have been very interesting but she appeared only for two brief conversations despite the plot centring on her actions. I am so bored of Saye, he is thrown in for absolutely no reason and he’s a one trick pony, which is a shame because I loved him when he was first introduced. I heard that the online version of this story was very different, with Lady Catherine as the saviour, and it sounds much better - it’s a shame the author changed the work for publication.
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1,876 reviews15 followers
February 11, 2026
I loved it!

Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.

It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is part of the ‘Happily Ever After with Mr Darcy Series’. This is a low angst novel length variation set in the regency era, this tale is an enemies to lovers second chance romance that includes a love triangle and a scandalous elopement, and the content is closed-door. This story contains the enemies to lovers, pining/unrequited love, interference of meddling friends and relatives, class differences, false accusations, gossip, scandal, ruined reputation, jealous friend/villain, and love triangle tropes.

When Mr Darcy discovers Elizabeth Bennet's true feelings, he's grateful the ill-fated proposal he had planned to make in Kent was stopped, but as the London Season drags on, he realizes the truth, he cannot be happy without her. Determined to become the man worthy of her regard, he returns to Hertfordshire with a singular purpose, to win her heart; if only it were that simple. Darcy has indeed reformed himself, tempering his pride and learning humility, but Elizabeth's wounded feelings and lingering resentment cannot be overcome in a day.

Just as she begins to see the changes in him and tentatively accept his friendship, a host of new obstacles emerge to test them both. Meddling relations with their own agendas interfere at the worst possible moments. Well-meaning friends offer advice that only complicates matters further. Most troublesome of all is a rival suitor, charming, persistent, and determined to claim Elizabeth for himself, who seems to appear whenever Darcy and Elizabeth draw close.
Yet Darcy perseveres, and slowly, painfully, Elizabeth's heart begins to soften.

Just when happiness seems within their grasp and all misunderstandings appear resolved, malicious gossip begins to circulate about Elizabeth's character and reputation. The whispers threaten not only her standing in society but Darcy's as well, forcing them both to confront an agonizing question, can their love survive such a scandal, or will propriety and duty destroy their chance at a future together forever? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
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32 reviews1 follower
February 15, 2026
Another enjoyable read with plenty of meddling, mystery, and mischief

Officious Interference is full of people sticking their noses where they don’t belong, creating one obstacle after another for Darcy and Elizabeth. Some interference is kindly meant — misguided attempts to help — but plenty of it is not. Add in the less‑than‑benevolent meddling, and you have a plot that keeps your mind engaged from start to finish.

I won’t give too much away, but most of the interference is introduced and resolved in a timely fashion. Still, two particular schemes wind their way through much of the book, leaving you guessing who is behind them and adding a welcome thread of mystery.

Lord Saye is Lord Saye, complete with his questionable boys‑club humor. The rapport between the Fitzwilliam brothers and Darcy brings plenty of laughs and more than a few head shakes. Darcy himself is sweet and determined, especially after realizing he may not be the “prime catch” everyone has always told him he is — at least not in Elizabeth’s eyes. Once he understands she is the only one for him, he sets his sights firmly on winning her hand.

The story is well written, moves at a good pace, and offers enough twists and turns to keep the reader engaged. Elizabeth can be a bit obtuse when it comes to how others perceive her. She’s so focused on Jane’s relationships — and on castigating herself for past mistakes, including being tricked by Wickham and unkind to Darcy — that she sometimes misses what’s right in front of her. I’ll stop there before any spoilers slip out.

Overall, this is an enjoyable read with a mix of familiar canon characters and new faces. Not everyone behaves as they did in Austen’s original You’ll have to read it yourself to uncover the who, how, and all the delightful (and exasperating) interference. I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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798 reviews17 followers
February 13, 2026
In a moment of uncharacteristic perceptiveness, Darcy's plan to propose to Elizabeth at Rosings is foiled when he notices her barely concealed anger at dinner. Colonel Fitzwilliam had earlier spilled the beans to Elizabeth about Darcy's officious interference with Bingley. Thinking that all is lost, he throws himself into the London Season, determined to find another Elizabeth Bennet to marry. You can imagine how well that worked.

After confessing his sins to Bingley and dealing with his anger, they return to Netherfield, determined to win the affections of the two sisters. Jane still loves Bingley, but doesn't trust him at all. Elizabeth has already learned of Wickham's atrocious character and has begun to wonder what else she got wrong about Darcy.

Into the mix comes the Goddard family, where Mary King is staying after her debacle with Wickham. Son Robert has brought his friend, Sir James, who soon becomes smitten with Elizabeth. Darcy has a rival. Both he and Bingley have a lot to prove to the sisters. Elizabeth's slow recognition of Darcy's regard, her confusion about it, and her eventual belief in his sincerity are beautifully handled.

Lord Saye arrives at Netherfield with Georgiana. The humor he provides is a balance for all the angst. Beneath his insouciance lies an observant man, capable of solving problems under the radar. When a scandal unfairly targets Elizabeth, a member of her own family is surprisingly cruel, and a friend becomes the villain. But it's all sorted out, thanks to Saye. Riveting, as always, from Amy D'Orazio. The cover is a 10+. Elizabeth's hair is perfect!
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153 reviews6 followers
February 16, 2026
In this new variation by Amy D’Orazio, we’re given a deeper look at Darcy’s steadfast admiration for Elizabeth and Elizabeth’s gradual softening toward him. The story begins in Kent, at the pivotal moment when Colonel Fitzwilliam reveals that Darcy separated Bingley from Jane. But in this version, Elizabeth discloses to Darcy’s cousin that it is her own family he is referring to.

That single revelation shifts everything. Most notably, Elizabeth is never left alone at the parsonage in her anger toward Darcy, and as a result, he never has the opportunity to propose. The infamous quarrel between Darcy and Elizabeth never takes place — though the emotional intensity still simmers beneath the surface through their internal reflections.

Instead, we get a story of Darcy intentionally courting Elizabeth… with unexpected competition in the form of Sir James, a gentleman connected to the Goddard family.

This was a low-angst read with just enough pining to keep the pacing engaging and the romance satisfying. Fans of Lord Saye will laugh out loud at his sharp comments and antics. I burst into laughter when he referred to Netherfield as the “nether regions.”

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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2,711 reviews207 followers
February 17, 2026
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars.

The author's story description covers all the bases well without giving up the "BIG" surprise (for me) as to who is responsible for the spread of gossip which will either ruin Elizabeth or force her to marry where she is not fully inclined.

Yes, it is after the Hunsford visit but without Darcy making that disastrous proposal. Back in London he finds his heart it not looking for a replacement for Elizabeth. So he determines to show her he has changed and to win her affection. However, we find another man also looking to win her. He, too, is well qualified as to looks, connections, wealth and friendship with Elizabeth.

We have Mary King and her family playing a part in this story and with that Wickham's true character being revealed. Lord Saye arrives on the scene as he brings Georgiana to join her brother. He always adds some humor to this author's stories. Plus the Colonel is on the scene. And the Jane/Bingley thread is here.

I always enjoy this author's stories and will automatically look to "borrow" her books from KU when I see a new release. I highly recommend this story.
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129 reviews3 followers
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
January 22, 2026
The disastrous proposal did not happen.

To everyone’s relief, the disastrous proposal was prevented. Darcy got to know Elizabeth’s dislike from Colonel Fitzwilliam, and was, therefore, had more time to prepare himself and planned a better wooing. A flirty Darcy was quite beyond imagination.

However, much was in the way, more than enough suitors for one, more undesirable and unexpected marriage proposals for another, and even some scandals which made Elizabeth seemed more ridiculous than her youngest sisters; meanwhile, there was Saye who acted as the detective as well as the judge to our delight.

The most unexpected villains, yes, in my opinion not only one, were at the same time preposterous yet true to human nature.

Happy read!
2,544 reviews20 followers
Review of advance copy
December 30, 2025
Power of Gossip.

What a great variation re-envisioning Darcy and Elizabeth’s realization of their feelings for each other. Familiar characters portrayed in new and different ways pushed the plot in unexpected directions. I think seeing more of Darcy and Elizabeth’s thoughts and shared feelings revealed in many different situations was the best part. Once acknowledging love, their commitment was steadfast and true. So swoonworthy! Of course the lighthearted banter of Lord Saye kept me smiling as he just HAD to assist his cousin Darcy.

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
48 reviews
February 11, 2026
very good

So much excitement! So much tension! I was glued to the story. What’s going to happen next? Very well written and well done.
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18 reviews
February 11, 2026
Another very enjoyable read from this author! This book had an excellent balance between drama and humor and was all around a very fun variation.
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1,234 reviews63 followers
Review of advance copy
February 16, 2026
A little love, but a lot more interference

Darcy and Elizabeth's meeting in Kent doesn't quite go according to canon. This shift alters the trajectory of Darcy and Bingley's second chances with their lady loves. Charlotte is also not quite according to canon. A hint of what's to come?

Eventually, they arrive back at Netherfield, with Caroline in tow. Lord Saye arrives at a later date when he accompanies Georgiana to meet Elizabeth and her sisters. The poor dear has no idea how to navigate the Bennet insanity.

All this build up takes about half the book. Only once the complication of the Goddard's party makes a mess of Darcy's hopes, do things really start to cook.

I enjoyed this Darcy. He learns fast and changes quickly. And as one has come to expect from this author, the camaraderie between Darcy and his cousins is a treat! Lord Saye is always the perfect foil to Darcy's straight man. 

I was left scratching my head a bit over Mr. Bennet and his behavior. There didn't seem to be any emotional backlash for Elizabeth regarding how she was treated by her family and all her neighbors. This made me feel a lack of closure.

A half-angsty story, with unexpected curve balls. Entertaining and enjoyable to read.

I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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