Thank you de Vree for giving me an ARC in exchange for an honest review before publication- heads up, this is a long review.
I’ve been told that since this review she has changed several things about the book (as also said on her social media), so i was not reviewing an ARC (finished copy), but instead reviewing a beta copy. I was not told this when applying & receiving & reading- all emails and posts on social media said this was a finished ARC. i do not know what has changed since writing this review (re-write 536 / Feb 7th 2025):
There's a handful of things I liked about this book- there are some lovely passages and insightful quotes about family and time (the ones featured on social media), but there's more things I disliked, which took me out of the immersion completely. I really, truly wanted to like this and be involved in the world, but something wasn’t clicking for me.
Firstly: There are hardly any descriptions of the setting or the characters. I do not have any idea what Genevieve looked like until the fifth chapter where I learnt of just her eye colour. Her hair colour came in the final 1/3 of the book where she dyed it a different colour. Her sister had a similar timeframe, however only being described as 'pale' and 'curly' and 'blonde'. When we meet anyone who is not white (pale), the description is 'dark skinned' (perfectly fine) and then 'chocolate' and 'mocha'. This is not fine at all, when you haven't described anyone else as foods, or in 'indulgent tones'. We are past the point in writing where all black people are chocolate. All of these characters have 'honey eyes' but one of the white characters have 'periwinkle blue'. This annoyed me for the vast majority of the book. All of the characters we meet are curly haired except for one. They are all tall. They all have glowing skin. And if this is not the case, I have had to make it up because there aren't any descriptions of them.
There aren’t many descriptions of the world or when it is set. Immediately I am led to believe we are set in the past in an old city in a small cabin in the mountains. Everyone here travels by foot or horseback, with fires as stoves, and fight with spears and traditional armour, however people can take photos, things such as keypads and elevators exist and the language conveys otherwise. I found most of this book challenging since I didnt know what I was meant to picture, or how big the world is (are we on an island??). There are tunnels connecting each town/city, so why would anyone ever travel above ground?
Secondly: I dont believe any characters in this. It was extremely unclear that Louella was the younger sister when for the first few chapters she is constantly filtering over Genevieve, and often makes more sense than her in situations. The two of them did not feel like sisters at all, with no relationship outside of 'you're my baby sister!!' and 'you baby me too much!!' and this was extremely repetitive. Our supposed MMC Caspian comes up with the pet name 'Little Girl' with is not a pet name if you dont know the person, and felt rather creepy. He is constantly belittling her and gives us no reason to like him, but suddenly is careful around her, and wishes to help, only to turn around again. This was the case with a lot of the characters- hot and cold, not knowing what they wanted, then disappearing until they became needed for the plot again.
Thirdly: the overall plot just felt messy. The flashbacks were so confusing as all they did was explain something we had already been told. Genevieve constantly thinks 'but oh no, that's too dangerous based on what happened last time- i can't tell the others' however that doesn't mean anything because we, the reader don't know!! Why should I care about these secrets that I dont know anything about? If this is from her perspective, then we are supposed to know everything she does but instead it felt like we were just a character being told everything. There's a lot of 'show don't tell' but It really would be nice to have things told. Characters are falling in love at first sight and then not being explored, powers appear and then aren't developed, there was a plot about how the two girls might not be sisters that was immediately closed because 'you'll always be my sister!' but I'm not invested because I know nothing about your powers, where they come from or who your parents are. I don't know why she's being hunted by the king, or why she has these powers, or why she can't awaken everyone at once, or why she feels a need to run away, or why Grandma is hunted underground. Waffles is said to have 'so much power' but then Isn't elaborated on. Why does he get to stay out of a paining, and how come only he can change magical forms?
Having a prologue setting up the king or twelve cities, or Grandmas underground operation, or any of the politics of the world I think was needed, since from Genevieve's perspective, she already knows this- but we don't, so why aren't we in on the know? Any foreshadowing would be nice leading up to the 'twist reveal' at the end but nothing was set up. Everything just happened.
As a final point, the sex scene written into this was extremely confusing and made me uncomfortable. It's as if de Vree forgot that Genevieve was extremely drunk (within a minute) and was completely fine with Luke not knowing this, or taking advantage. It then seriously weirded me out in this setting for her to then pull out a vibrator (that she named) multiple times to think about him and get off. Why? This didn't add anything to the story or our character, since after this chapter it's not thought of again. There were no warnings of this anywhere in the book, or anything content warnings for readers who may wish to avoid topics. I didn’t want to read about a graphic torture scene, but I wasn’t aware it was happening.
After the excitement i had about getting to read this, I am disappointed in its final product. Two stars as I am intrigued by Maximillian, but that would be the only thing keeping me interested in the rest of the series. It felt like there were lots of ideas and wanted to write about all of them, but didn't manage to link them together, so each chapter felt like a new trope (which isn’t necessarily a bad thing, but not my thing).
This is a book i would happily reread with a few rewrites and a lot more time editing, as I truly loved the idea and premise and the snippets de Vree had shared on social media. I would be more than happy to discuss more about these points I made (and more) to anyone wanting to listen, or to anyone who has read this. If there is a second one, i’ll pick it up in order to see where it goes next, but i’m not as invested as I was at the start.
Thank you for the ARC and an opportunity to give my personal, honest thoughts.