This was a very cute and quick read! Elliot has had a childhood crush on his best friend Damon, and has healing magic, but the magic really only works when he has Damon by his side. Seeing Elliot's various sides of, nervous around his best friend, but also confident in bed, makes him a cute and relatable character. Very nerdy in the streets, flirty in the sheets. And Damon is definitely a best friend that anyone would love to have. Accepting and very defensive of his friend.
My critiques *SOME SPOILERS*:
The pacing was a bit too fast. We went from: introducing the characters in first grade in prologue -> awkward boner in chapter 1 -> best friend finding out from someone else that our Main MC is gay -> Bi panic -> acceptance -> first sex scene -> more Bi panic -> dating, all within a 2-3 hour read. I felt like there wasn't much space for the characters to truly shine and have growth.
I feel like the prologue could have included a section of them in middle school as established friends, and Elliot beginning to understand his feelings for Damon. Going straight from blushing first grader to 18 year old boner was a bit of an aggressive jump for me.
Also, there is a small section at the end with Damon running after Elliot and being stopped by the teachers. The teachers bring up how Elliot is a model student who wouldn't get in trouble, and the way they phrase it makes Damon think that it was a subtle racist comment. As a POC, this is definitely something that happens in schools, and the author missed a chance to really expand on that. Because while it is a valid concern, it came out of no where basically at the end of the book, and then went no where. Also, Damon was essentially cheating on his girlfriend (who seemed like she was trying to set him up with Elliot, but we don't really know that until the end), but that was basically ignored and glossed over. No feelings of remorse, just Bi panic. I'm all for bi-awakening and panic, but not at the expense of another character who seemed like a good person.
Overall, this is a good read for people within the age group of the characters (the spicy scenes definitely felt awkward to read as a 30 year old), and someone wanted a quick LGBTQA read. Would definitely read another book by this author.