I tried to get through this book but once I got to page 526 I was exhausted and it already took too long to read. I kept putting it down and coming back. I understand it’s a slow burn, but the characters were stagnant for so long at least 50% of the book. I struggle btw 2-3 stars for rating because there were some good things about the book.
I loved that Naji wasn’t a perfect character. Chi had some funny moments, not all his parts was funny and got kind of annoying at times, but for me his character kinda did what he was supposed to. Dess seamed like a cool character as well, but she wasn’t funny and for someone with anxiety issues she seems like she would be a little much. I liked that Iman made sure everyone respected Naji from the start, and that he didn’t ignore that she had a condition. This not being an insta-love was a breath of fresh air (if it was done right), but I do like that it was supposed to be a build up.
With all that being said. This story was not executed right. This could’ve been a 5 star story, but for one the length killed it, for two the errors (gets the authors every time), and three the unnecessary murders. Omgggg I wanted to scream, why is this murderer just killing ppl? I’m guessing the author needed us to believe he was like that? But everyone he killed was for something stupid. Then what boggles my mind is it was so unrealistic. I get this is fiction but come on now, you still have to make it make sense. You go and kill the cafe ppl ON THE SAME NIGHT THEY EMBARRASSED Naji, and not ONE person had suspicions that it was 1. Iman, 2. Naji, 3. Paris, 4. Someone connected to either of them? He was super messy in the kill. The fact that he even killed them made me want to stop reading. Actually when he killed Carter the white man that he interviewed I was gone stop reading then but I kept pushing. I mean authors do know you can make a savage black MMC without drugs, SN, and murderers right? It’s so annoying.
Besides the unnecessary murders, the personality of the MMC was not sexy at all. Why does it seem like a trend for the authors to make these men not have any emotions? So if he smiles or laughs that makes him less gangsta? I really don’t get it. It makes their character boring asf. All he knew how to do is be mad about everything all day and kill?
On top of all this I hated how Naji’s character got stuck. She got kidnapped and now she just stuck in the house all the time. She can’t work, she can’t have a phone, and she doesn’t have friends. Now I understand that when you’re kidnapped that is how it’s suppose to be, but because that is not really what the story was building up to it was like damn let this girl do something ANYTHING. The reason for forcing marriage was dumb too. What was he protecting her from? I was confused on that, and it just didn’t hit like it was supposed to. I don’t like forced marriage books and when i realized this was where this was going I almost again DNF. I wish the author would’ve went a different way with this, let them meet in neutral ground. It would’ve made a much better storyline. This one just didn’t make enough sense to me.
Now because this review has gotten too long, I’m gone wrap it up. With this story being as long as it was almost everything made no sense. This man hated white ppl but his daddy was white. His daddy left him, his sister, and his mother in the hood because his white family didn’t approve of them. No one batted an eye once that story was told. The MMC’s anger didn’t fully make sense because we didn’t get to know him for real, Naji’s career should not have been skipped over that was needed. To make us believe she was just so famous and not write us through that part of her life was crazy. There were full chapters that could’ve been completely left out. Because of how long this book was it got exhausting before getting to the end. It was too long wasted on things we didn’t need and the things we needed we don’t get. Man it’s so much more I want to say, but I’ve already wrote a whole nother book.