What do you think?
Rate this book


344 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 7, 2015

"It would be for you ... I'd take a hundred bullets. Kill a hundred men. Keep you safe no matter what."


In the three weeks since the false alarm at the park, he'd only gone out to foundation events or meetings, aside from one barbecue hosted by an old high school friend. He'd talked and laughed with his former classmates while eating hot dogs and drinking beer, but Shane had the feeling his heart wasn't in it. There seemed to be a switch he flicked on when he had to be polite and friendly. He didn't talk much otherwise and kept to himself most of the time. It made for an easy detail, at least.


"Nothing wrong with someone younger or older bringing a different perspective to a person's life. A new energy. Isn't that what it's all about? Finding people who make our lives better? Friends, lovers, whatever. People who wake us the fuck up."

The storyline – the president’s son and his Secret Service agent falling in forbidden love with one another – in itself is already a winner. Factor in the aspect of age difference – barely legal Rafa and nearly-two-decades-older Shane, an intense action/suspense subplot, lots of unresolved sexual tension, and a tasteful command of moving the story in the right direction from Keira Andrews, and you’ve hit the jackpot with Valor on the Move.
Although to be honest, when I read the blurb and the reviews, I was afraid that while this may check off the hotness factor, the story and the characters will come off as shallow. But boy, was I glad to be proven wrong. I certainly loved the characters and found the story gripping and heart-pounding. The chemistry between Rafa and Shane felt authentic and not a bit uncomfortable. Keira Andrews developed these characters’ relationship by continuously pushing them closer and then pulling them apart. Strangely, it’s a push/pull that’s not at all exasperating. The rifts surely tore my heart but every time they gave in to their heart’s desire was a surefire magical moment.
There were two particular moments though which really made this book solid for me.
The first one was during Rafa’s confrontation with his entire family where he just went full-on beastmode. That was a very powerful moment. I felt the hurt and betrayal. The agony and repression. The pain and heartbreak. All of the ugly emotions that Rafa felt; I felt it. It was a surprising turnaround of events but delivered with great impact and just at the right moment. It did not only mark a shift in the storyline but also allowed me to see the dynamics of Rafa’s character.
The second one was during the aftermath of the heart-racing ordeal which Rafa and Shane went through. I was moved with how Shane described the horror of going through all of it. It allowed me to see his vulnerability – how his training still did not compare to the real deal. My respect for the author just went levels up after that because she made Shane every bit human then. Keira Andrews did not make Shane just this hot Secret Service agent who is full of confidence and good with his job. She broke Shane down and showed the many dimensions of his character.
The book is, for me, well-balanced – sweet, tension-filled, sensual, and heartwarming. All the elements working together to create that perfect fast-paced story that you surely won’t be able to put down until you reach the very end. Highly recommended!
This could have easily been a 2 star book for me. And seeing all the 4/5 stars kind of makes me wish I was joking but...

I honestly really didn't care for the book.

I KNOW! I wanted to love it like all the cool kids (LOL) but unfortunately I'm stuck being the awkward loner this time around.

I read all the glowing reviews and I couldn't wait to get my hands on this one. And then... Then it just felt like I was making myself finish it. And we all know that reading for fun and pleasure (and addiction) shouldn't feel like a chore. Which had me saying:

I think what it really came down to was how I felt about the character, Rafa. His character really confused me. He felt like a much younger character than his 21 years. His character screamed:

I felt bad for the kid. And that's what he read like too, a kid. I didn't feel like I was reading about a man. His behavior and speech felt very much that of a teenager. And maybe that is how he was suppose to come off since he was so sheltered by his living arrangements, but then again he has lived outside of the White House. He's in his last year of college and lived in a dorm on campus. So I was really put off by his age and demeanor compared to his mentality of a teen.
I will give major kudos to him for how the confrontation between him and his family went about his sexuality. I feel like I finally got a glimpse of his real age by the maturity of the way he handled it. It was a really raw moment that made this a 3 star read for me.
I didn't feel comfortable with the relationship between the characters. Sometimes it felt fine, but most of the time I was kind of cringing. Now that doesn't mean the character Shane was inappropriate or came off as a creeper. It's just Rafa feeling much younger than what his age is made it feel weird for me. I think I might be alone in this since everyone else loved them together.
The other part of the book I didn't care for was where they only knew each other for a short period of time. But since they shared a few meals and conversations and one kiss it must be love.

It just wasn't believable for me. Although I really did like Shane. He's a likable character and one I think I would have enjoyed more if he had been paired with a more mature "man".
Please don't let my review stop you from reading the book. It is obviously loved by loads of people. I just had personal issues with the characters. AND! although I wasn't loving it, I did continue on reading it in hopes that I would start enjoying it like everyone else did. It was just unfortunate that didn't happen...BUT!






"I'm glad you didn't disappear."
"But I did. I haven't really been me. Not until this summer. Until I started cooking for you. When I'm with you, I don't have to hide."
"I'd take a hundered bullets. Kill a hundered men. Keep you safe no matter what."
![]()
“Remember that with some waves…you can’t catch them. Better to dive through and wait for another one. There’s always another one.”
“The natural instinct when a person hears a gunshot is to drop to the ground. We have to train to stay on our feet and block our protectee. Take the bullet if need be. We’ve trained over and over to stay calm and use deadly force when it’s called for. (...) ...it wasn’t like training, but it still doesn’t feel quite real.”![]()

Rafa and his siblings had always just been Castillo, his father’s name. His parents had worked hard to make them into the whitest, most non-threatening Hispanics Republican money could buy while still courting the Latino vote with great success.
“We’ve discussed this before. My parents left the old world behind to make a new life for us here in America.”


"But sometimes life smacks us upside the head when we least expect it. You've been smacked but good, Shane. Admit it."
