In a world of uniforms, discipline, and unrelenting control, one recruit learns that surrendering isn’t weakness. It’s exactly what he’s been waiting for.
By Command Alone is the first book of the Kinky ABC Anthology, a collection of stand-alone stories where each letter explores a different kink. In this first book, ‘A’ is for AuthorityKink. Each book can be read on its own, but together they form an unapologetic alphabet of fun. So enjoy.
Turns out I’m not into this extreme type of physical and psychological degradation guys. Hale is too mean and it doesn’t work for me, happy that it does for Lane tho.
Yall ever say “You are pissing me the fuck off, I’m gonna shove my foot up ur aah”? Well, you won’t believe what I just read.
Omg, I just finished this book and I have thoughts. As a reviewer, and as a mistress,I went through a full rollercoaster of reactions. The absence of aftercare at the beginning? Honestly, a major point of contention for me. It immediately set off alarms, and from a critical standpoint, the dynamic initially reads as deeply unhealthy for any real-life BDSM framework.
That said… the author clearly leans into a dark, unapologetically filthy M/M dynamic, and wow it commits. The progression of their relationship is messy, morally gray, and definitely not meant to be aspirational, but it’s undeniably compelling from a narrative perspective.
My sub was completely hooked too, especially with the heavy emphasis on humiliation and degradation. The objectification? Intense. The way one of them is reduced to nothing but an object… it’s dark, it’s provocative, and it absolutely delivers for readers who enjoy that kind of power imbalance in fiction.
From a structural standpoint, I will say the emotional payoff hits when finally aftercare is introduced. That shift adds a layer of depth that, for me, redeemed a lot of the earlier tension.
The ending itself? Strong, satisfying, and thematically consistent. The epilogue, though… I’m still a little conflicted personally, it didn’t fully land for me.
Overall, as a review: this is a bold, divisive M/M read with a heavy focus on dark dynamics, and while it’s not a model for healthy relationships, it’s incredibly engaging within its genre. Definitely recommended just know what you’re walking into 😉
✨️ BOOK REVIEW 📗 𝔹𝕪 ℂ𝕠𝕞𝕞𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝔸𝕝𝕠𝕟𝕖, 𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝟏 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐊𝐢𝐧𝐤𝐲 𝐀𝐁𝐂 𝐀𝐧𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐥𝐨𝐠𝐲 (𝘈 𝘪𝘴 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘈𝘶𝘵𝘩𝘰𝘳𝘪𝘵𝘺) 𝘛𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘵𝘰𝘭𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘮 𝘵𝘰 𝘰𝘣𝘦𝘺. 𝘏𝘦 𝘧𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘩𝘦 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘥 𝘪𝘵. 𝘐𝘯 𝘢 𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘭𝘥 𝘰𝘧 𝘶𝘯𝘪𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘮𝘴, 𝘥𝘪𝘴𝘤𝘪𝘱𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘦, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘶𝘯𝘳𝘦𝘭𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘤𝘰𝘯𝘵𝘳𝘰𝘭, 𝘰𝘯𝘦 𝘳𝘦𝘤𝘳𝘶𝘪𝘵 𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘯𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘴𝘶𝘳𝘳𝘦𝘯𝘥𝘦𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘪𝘴𝘯’𝘵 𝘸𝘦𝘢𝘬𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘴. 𝘐𝘵’𝘴 𝘦𝘹𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘭𝘺 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘩𝘦’𝘴 𝘣𝘦𝘦𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘪𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘧𝘰𝘳. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶 💚💚💚💚💚 This was quick and dirty - in the very best way 🔥 Lane joins the military and finds exactly what he is looking for (and needs) in Drill Sergeant Hale. This book brings all the kink and heat, but also the swooniest parts too. This is an awesome debut and I can't wait to learn my ABCs 😏 *𝘊𝘩𝘦𝘤𝘬 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘵𝘳𝘪𝘨𝘨𝘦𝘳𝘴! #bookstagram #gaybookstagram #mmbookstagram #romancereadersofinstagram #bookish #booklover #bookrecs #gaybooks #gaylove #mmbooks #mmromancereads #mmromancebooks #mmromancereader
What I expected: a novella that explored an authority k*nk between a recruit and his superior. I mean, from the title and blurb, that’s the impression I got. I was expecting it to be erotica. That’s fine.
What you will actually get when you read this book: -mostly degradation and humiliation, rather than just authority (to the point where it almost feels mislabeled?), followed by some praise at the end -100% erotica, no plot or character development at all in 144 pages -check the TW on this because there’s also crazy foot stuff, nasty smell stuff, and worst of all the “love interest” forces someone to perform s*xual acts on the main character, that the person does not consent to
Look, I’ll read anything once. And I don’t get triggered, so I didn’t read any content warnings. But this book had me more disgusted than feeling anything else. I found myself thinking things such as:
“Did he actually just use that word?” “He put his foot WHERE?” “He smelled like WHAT?” “He licked WHAT???”
Anyways, I can solidly say it wasn’t for me, but if you’re super into the k*nks listed above, maybe you’ll find this hot?
There are things I loved in this and things I hated. It feels kind of all over the place and the kinks feel disjointed instead of woven together into the characters. But that's probably because the characters themselves were all over the place. I feel like more pages were necessary for character development here; it felt like the story was broken up into two halves - first half being degradation and almost hate (self and otherwise), with the second half being more accepting and caring, but there wasn't really a middle ground to join the two.
There are also a couple very crass inner monologue and dialogue moments that I think were included due to the military setting, but actually sat rather uncomfortably and felt forced. Like the characters didn't feel like they'd say or think those things, but "military" and toxic masculinity. Things are toxic in here in general, so buckle up. Check the tws/cws before hopping in.
There was also a lack of character descriptions or even a timeline/setting timeframe to reference. I guess it's not surprising necessary since this is pure smut, but it would have been appreciated imo.
All in all, I ate this up and I'm immediately running to the next book in this collection, but it's not a favorite read of the year by any means.
Well damn. This was hot AF 🔥 Hale is the drill sergeant of wet dreams honestly! At first I really didn’t know how this was going to turn out but I was happy with the ending- I’m sure Lane was too 😉.
I saw there weren’t many reviews so I really wanted to write one. Firstly, a lot of the negative ones would’ve been avoided if people read full trigger and kink list! I read it and I was ready and excited. (not a fan of foot play either but the way this was done was hot because it was all about submission and degradation)
this was super short!!! i would give up everything to get a full length book where we get more of what happens to them and with them. I honestly didn’t expect the ending to be that way, where it seemed to be he got a bit softer but that’s what made me crave for more book. This is a super fun and fast paced read though, FULL SMUT with a sprinkle of plot.
I love this dynamic so much. I loved how it was done and how raw and honest Lane always was. I wish we could’ve gotten dual POV because I bet Hale’s thoughts were crazy.
This is my first book by this author and I hadn’t considered the other in the series because I chose this one specifically based on the kinks and dynamics but it was so good I’m going to read the others even if they’re not my typical reads!
If you know me, you know I don’t give 5/5 🌶️ often yet, here we are. This was smutty in like… a what am I actually reading?? way.
Have fun
Scale: ⭐️ - would've DNF'ed / continued out of spite ⭐️⭐️ - shit, but whatever ⭐️⭐️⭐️ - meh, could've been better ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ - lit 👅 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ - loved it, inject this shit into my veins 🤪
Rating:3.5 rounding UP to 4 Bonus note: READ THE CONTENT WARNING ON THIS BOOK! -ˏˋ⋆⋆ˊˎ- Story: 2/5 Spice: High - Erotica High. Space High. 225 uses of the C*** word high. Characters: 2/5 -ˏˋ⋆⋆ˊˎ- Overall reco: I knew this was erotica going in, but I've seen it splashed around the romance threads bunch. I wouldn't really consider it 'romance' in that it doesn't actually have an HEA. It does but more of a HFN or really, how most erotic novellas/novels end, with a payoff.
This is some SPICY SHIT (without that kink specifically, thank god). Like I've read a lot of erotic novellas (pumpkins, magic rocks, mystical dildos), and they are usually high in the spice. This was another level. Almost all 131 pages were about being edged. Like edged to god damn oblivion. Everytime I felt that surely, surely we'd get that release.. it was pulled away. Like damn. DAMN. I haven't been edged by a book like this in a LONG time.
I hated all the characters. That did not stop me from enjoying it. I didn't care for the story (I did like the sad little twist at the end, but again, that wasn't an HEA. it was an ending though. still enjoyable) The point of the book was the enduring of that lip smacking spice and hot damn was I enjoying it. (I don't even like feet shit..)
”Theres a reason I joined the army. And it sure as hell wasn’t patriotism. It wasn’t about honor, or brotherhood, or waving some flag on a hot summer day. No, fuck no. It’s because every time I imagined a man barking orders, towering over me, grabbing my jaw and snarling “say ‘yes, sir’” into my throat—I came so hard I saw stars.”
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”You begged for his. But this one? You’ll adore it.”
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Lets take a moment to appreciate that cover 😮💨 it’s what dragged me into this hot mess.
I learned that Lane was thirsty as a dog before I even knew his name. Right off the bat, it felt like I was reading bro’s diary; it was THAT personal THAT quickly.
At first this book started off just inappropriate, then it became filthy (in a good way), then it was just depraved, then back to mouth watering, then just flat out depressing, then I was wondering WTH am I reading. However, by the end I started to think I was the one with issues because I couldn’t get enough 🙂↕️.
This was a full circle moment because in the beginning you’re like ’This guy Lane is a kinky bastard’ and it gets to a point where you’re considering if he has any self respect because let me tell u, there is no aftercare in the beginning and Hale gets MEAN at times 😭 but then you see Hale’s real intent, how he’s actually possessive of Lane, and he starts throwing praise into there. Thats when you realize this book was made for a good time 😌🙌🏽
One star off because, to put it bluntly, that epilogue was pointless. It didn’t give a much needed romantic conclusion, it just left me even more unsatisfied imo. Though, I don’t think these two are really fit for a romantic relationship seeing as Lane just views Hale as his biggest wet dream come true.
I’m trying anything to get out of this reading slump. I will say to me this was very much a psychological deep dive into why people enjoy this type of degradation. Not my thing personally for various reasons, but I see why some people enjoy it.
An authority kink was a new trope for me, and I was immediately invested. For such a short story, it delivered plenty of tension and anticipation. Honestly, I was stressed on their behalf. I can't imagine being put through drills while trying to keep my focus elsewhere.
- Size difference - Age gap - Drill Sergeant x recruit - Edging - Authority kink
Spice:🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ Book Type: E-book/ KU Tropes: - LGBT/ MM - Authority Kink - Power Dynamic/ Sergeant & Recruit - Degradation Recruit Lane and Sergeant Hale What a start to the alphabet! This series is going to be a steamy one for sure. If you are wanting something that the plot is smut, this is hands down the series to start. If you like something that is more story based, I think you should skip this. All in all, J. De Saint did an great job at portraying the "A" for Authority through the whole novella. Will be catching up to the current one soon.
I was really enjoying this book but I’ve decided to dnf due to a missing content warning. Chapter 0006 contains a scene where MMC2 forces someone else to perform sexual acts on MMC1, even when he says he doesn’t want to.
Not bad for what I assume is a debut. Give it 4.5 stars. A quick sexy, smutty read in a military setting. The author highlights quite a bit of the more _niche_ kînks, if you will. So, for that it was refreshing to see some different *taste* on page.
Short but Effective, filthy ! hot.... Lane was put trough it man.... 🤣 this series is a genius idea! I cant wait for more!!!!!! absolutely recommend but check your TW because this aint light *eyebrow wiggles*
Wow- so while this isn’t the normal “dark MM” I read, it was better. The degradation, the humiliation, the depravity. How one could be so used but crave it, how one could be so sexually tortured and appreciate it, how one could go from being denied to come to then come so many damn times and keep going!?
Hale is absolutely everything a military alpha is dreamed to be- mean, arrogant and selfish but it’s his authority that gets Lane absolutely wrecked. Lane is the needy, whiny, moaning, orgasm denied whore that can’t do enough to get the attention he didn’t know he needed.
Spice was 10/10 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ Story- well the plot was simple: man wants to be used, man who can use absolutely abuses the power then destroys the needy but gives it all and then some.
"I want him to break me. I want to be taken apart, muscle by muscle, breath by breath, until I'm nothing but a wet spot on the floor whispering "yes, sir" into his boot."
A is for authority alright 😏😉🤣. Holy moly hotness, what did I just read? I have seen this book recommended in many book groups and decided to give it a go. This was a filthy, kinky, spicy novella 🥵🥵. I am a new fan of this author and can't wait to read more of this kinky alphabet. I really liked the writing and flow of this story as well. I loved all the power dynamics and dirty kinks in this. The dirty talk was chef's kiss 🔥🔥🔥🔥. This was definitely a one-handed read 😏😉💦. If you're here for the filthy smut and various kinks, then I recommend this book for you 😜.
First of all, read the content warning/kink list and don't say you weren't warned.
This book was a kinky, quick read. Some of the kinks aren't my thing in particular, I sometimes have a difficult time especially with humiliation and degradation, but the author did an excellent job in writing the MC as someone who is completely into them and that made all the difference for me. I quite enjoyed the story and will likely read the author again.
I love me a spicy book, but some of this was a bit too intense for me. Way more pain than I'd like. And the whole foot scenes threw me out of it pretty hard because it's definitely not my interest. Im not the target audience for this specific book so I'm gonna hold back a rating. Highly recommend if you are looking for intense degradation and pain (basically an abused sex toy but he's happy with it) 😅