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Vespertine Veil
The academy's dark corridors promise knowledge and power. But the place that should shape her future may very well become her grave.
Kintoira Academy, a school that teaches both the light and the dark arts, was meant to train the next generation of soldiers. But nineteen-year-old Nori quickly discovers it’s a battlefield of rivalries, forbidden magic, and deadly secrets. For centuries, Veils and Noctryns have fought to keep the fragile balance. Light without shadow is blinding, and darkness without light is all-consuming.
Within the academy's gothic halls, the true war brews not only against corrupted magic stirring beyond the gates but also among the students themselves. And then there is him. The boy she grew up with, who is as dangerous as he is compelling. She must decide whether he will be her undoing... or the only ally she can trust in a place full of conspiracies and deception.
Nori is thrust into a world where every mistake could cost her life, and every secret has a consequence. When professors vanish without a trace, relics disappear into the shadows, and the passageways hum with ominous whispers, Nori discovers that survival comes at a heavy price. She must decide how far she's willing to go to protect those she loves, even if it means risking everything.
Some secrets are written in ink. Others are carved in blood.
Kintoira Academy, a school that teaches both the light and the dark arts, was meant to train the next generation of soldiers. But nineteen-year-old Nori quickly discovers it’s a battlefield of rivalries, forbidden magic, and deadly secrets. For centuries, Veils and Noctryns have fought to keep the fragile balance. Light without shadow is blinding, and darkness without light is all-consuming.
Within the academy's gothic halls, the true war brews not only against corrupted magic stirring beyond the gates but also among the students themselves. And then there is him. The boy she grew up with, who is as dangerous as he is compelling. She must decide whether he will be her undoing... or the only ally she can trust in a place full of conspiracies and deception.
Nori is thrust into a world where every mistake could cost her life, and every secret has a consequence. When professors vanish without a trace, relics disappear into the shadows, and the passageways hum with ominous whispers, Nori discovers that survival comes at a heavy price. She must decide how far she's willing to go to protect those she loves, even if it means risking everything.
Some secrets are written in ink. Others are carved in blood.
- GenresFantasyDark RomanceDark
417 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 22, 2025
About the author
Alisha Korvane
1 book19 followersAlisha Korvane is a fantasy author who weaves tales of arcane peril, slow-burn romance and high-stakes steeped in betrayal and heavy with secrets. Her writing is for those who find comfort in candlelight and chaos, and who believe that beauty and ruin often walk hand in hand.
Her Debut novel, VESPERTINE VEIL, is a haunting blend of quiet rage and aching devotion, crafted for readers drawn to the melancholy halls of dark academia and the shimmer of forbidden magic. Alisha writes for those who never stopped believing in the beauty of the broken.
She lives in rural Kentucky on a small farm with her husband and three sons. When not building worlds or creating turmoil on the page, she can be found curled up with a good book, overanalyzing something, or starting new home projects that she’ll probably regret the next day.
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Her Debut novel, VESPERTINE VEIL, is a haunting blend of quiet rage and aching devotion, crafted for readers drawn to the melancholy halls of dark academia and the shimmer of forbidden magic. Alisha writes for those who never stopped believing in the beauty of the broken.
She lives in rural Kentucky on a small farm with her husband and three sons. When not building worlds or creating turmoil on the page, she can be found curled up with a good book, overanalyzing something, or starting new home projects that she’ll probably regret the next day.
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November 28, 2025
I was completely drawn in by the depth of the FMC’s character arc. Her internal struggle, the constant battle between who she thinks she should be and was raised to be and who she truly is, was written with such authenticity that it felt personal. And the betrayals… they hit with a rawness that I genuinely felt in my soul. Those moments weren’t just plot points; they were emotional punches that made her journey even more powerful.
The relationships shaped around all of this conflict, growth, and pain were portrayed beautifully and kept me fully invested from start to finish.
I’m already counting down to the next book and can’t wait to see how her story and these relationships continue to evolve. This series is quickly becoming a new favorite.
The relationships shaped around all of this conflict, growth, and pain were portrayed beautifully and kept me fully invested from start to finish.
I’m already counting down to the next book and can’t wait to see how her story and these relationships continue to evolve. This series is quickly becoming a new favorite.
April 13, 2026
Re-read finalized published version 4/2026. I still give it 6 stars an can’t wait for the next book
I ARC read this for the author several months ago, and I have been impatiently waiting for it to release! It drops on 11/22. It truly was a 5 star read for me.
It’s wholly original in the romantasy realm. I’ve read nothing like it, and in the age of romantasy, that’s very hard to say. This series is worth being traditionally published. I hope it blows up on TikTok and bookstagram and gets the attention it deserves.
There are some familiar romantasy themes woven throughout: it’s a dark academia with games and trials, shadow wielders, light and dark magic, it reminds me a bit of my the stylings of my OG favorite urban fantasy series, The Fever Series by Karen Marie Moning, (specifically the relationship between the FMC and the MMC, the whole vibe…) which in my world, is the absolute highest compliment I can give an author.
This is the official blurb from the author:
The academy's dark corridors promise knowledge and power. But the place that should shape her future may very well become her grave.
Kintoira Academy, a school that teaches both the light and the dark arts, was meant to train the next generation of soldiers. But nineteen-year-old Nori quickly discovers it’s a battlefield of rivalries, forbidden magic, and deadly secrets. For centuries, Veils and Noctryns have fought to keep the fragile balance. Light without shadow is blinding, and darkness without light is all-consuming.
Within the academy's gothic halls, the true war brews not only against corrupted magic stirring beyond the gates but also among the students themselves. And then there is him. The boy she grew up with, who is as dangerous as he is compelling. She must decide whether he will be her undoing... or the only ally she can trust in a place full of conspiracies and deception.
Nori is thrust into a world where every mistake could cost her life, and every secret has a consequence. When professors vanish without a trace, relics disappear into the shadows, and the passageways hum with ominous whispers, Nori discovers that survival comes at a heavy price. She must decide how far she's willing to go to protect those she loves, even if it means risking everything
I ARC read this for the author several months ago, and I have been impatiently waiting for it to release! It drops on 11/22. It truly was a 5 star read for me.
It’s wholly original in the romantasy realm. I’ve read nothing like it, and in the age of romantasy, that’s very hard to say. This series is worth being traditionally published. I hope it blows up on TikTok and bookstagram and gets the attention it deserves.
There are some familiar romantasy themes woven throughout: it’s a dark academia with games and trials, shadow wielders, light and dark magic, it reminds me a bit of my the stylings of my OG favorite urban fantasy series, The Fever Series by Karen Marie Moning, (specifically the relationship between the FMC and the MMC, the whole vibe…) which in my world, is the absolute highest compliment I can give an author.
This is the official blurb from the author:
The academy's dark corridors promise knowledge and power. But the place that should shape her future may very well become her grave.
Kintoira Academy, a school that teaches both the light and the dark arts, was meant to train the next generation of soldiers. But nineteen-year-old Nori quickly discovers it’s a battlefield of rivalries, forbidden magic, and deadly secrets. For centuries, Veils and Noctryns have fought to keep the fragile balance. Light without shadow is blinding, and darkness without light is all-consuming.
Within the academy's gothic halls, the true war brews not only against corrupted magic stirring beyond the gates but also among the students themselves. And then there is him. The boy she grew up with, who is as dangerous as he is compelling. She must decide whether he will be her undoing... or the only ally she can trust in a place full of conspiracies and deception.
Nori is thrust into a world where every mistake could cost her life, and every secret has a consequence. When professors vanish without a trace, relics disappear into the shadows, and the passageways hum with ominous whispers, Nori discovers that survival comes at a heavy price. She must decide how far she's willing to go to protect those she loves, even if it means risking everything
December 22, 2025
This has potential. The plot, characters and bit of world building we got was good, I enjoyed it. The story left me wanting to see how things unfold, there are characters I want to get to know more.
However, it was in desperate need of more editing. There were so many instances of repeating information as new information or even just random lines. There were inconsistencies in the story, the first couple of chapters act as if the FMC made an almost brash decision within the last year to join the academy, which would explain how completely unprepared she is but then the rest of the book, suddenly, she always knew she would join the academy since birth, her best friend and her mother also knew she would join the academy. The inconsistency of this opened up a ton of other issues for me in the story. The pacing was also god awful. I'm not against skipping things to get to the next part, but this was jarring and harsh and at times I didn't even know what was going on and very little information was given to fill in the gaps. The ending for example, a big fight occurs, she storms off. The next chapter she's sitting in a classroom hiding from said fighting partner and then halfway through the paragraph, oh you learn it's been several WEEKS since the fight, but it was so fast and out of no where, I had to read the paragraph several times just to put it all together. Everything felt like just a "checking off the boxes of things I want to happen so I can move to the next thing" instead of an organic flow.
Lastly, I felt this story relied very heavily on themes from other stories. Yaretta was just Amber from Fourth Wing. And there was several instances that I was like, oh okay Dain or sounds great Xaden, ohhh Corrine is Imogen, complete with strength training. Nothing felt organic or her own. We also have a weaver at the end from Discovery of Witches, which I understand it was the end of the book so I'm okay with not having all the information but what even was that?
Okay, I'm done ranting. Despite my issues, honestly, it wasn't that bad. I enjoyed it. I never wanted to put it down. I will be picking up the next one because I do really think this has potential.
However, it was in desperate need of more editing. There were so many instances of repeating information as new information or even just random lines. There were inconsistencies in the story, the first couple of chapters act as if the FMC made an almost brash decision within the last year to join the academy, which would explain how completely unprepared she is but then the rest of the book, suddenly, she always knew she would join the academy since birth, her best friend and her mother also knew she would join the academy. The inconsistency of this opened up a ton of other issues for me in the story. The pacing was also god awful. I'm not against skipping things to get to the next part, but this was jarring and harsh and at times I didn't even know what was going on and very little information was given to fill in the gaps. The ending for example, a big fight occurs, she storms off. The next chapter she's sitting in a classroom hiding from said fighting partner and then halfway through the paragraph, oh you learn it's been several WEEKS since the fight, but it was so fast and out of no where, I had to read the paragraph several times just to put it all together. Everything felt like just a "checking off the boxes of things I want to happen so I can move to the next thing" instead of an organic flow.
Lastly, I felt this story relied very heavily on themes from other stories. Yaretta was just Amber from Fourth Wing. And there was several instances that I was like, oh okay Dain or sounds great Xaden, ohhh Corrine is Imogen, complete with strength training. Nothing felt organic or her own. We also have a weaver at the end from Discovery of Witches, which I understand it was the end of the book so I'm okay with not having all the information but what even was that?
Okay, I'm done ranting. Despite my issues, honestly, it wasn't that bad. I enjoyed it. I never wanted to put it down. I will be picking up the next one because I do really think this has potential.
January 23, 2026
✨ Dark academia vibes? Absolutely.
✨ Magic + light vs. dark? Yes please.
✨ Identity, self-discovery, and moral tension? Front and center.
This book pulled me in with its moody atmosphere and that delicious what side am I really on? energy. The magic system paired beautifully with the light-versus-dark themes.
It’s one of those stories that feels both introspective and spellbinding—quietly intense, emotionally layered, and just a little haunting in the best way.
I flew through it and immediately found myself thinking, okay but when is book two? 👀
⭐ 4.5 out of 5 stars
And yes, I’ll absolutely be waiting (impatiently) for the sequel.
✨ Magic + light vs. dark? Yes please.
✨ Identity, self-discovery, and moral tension? Front and center.
This book pulled me in with its moody atmosphere and that delicious what side am I really on? energy. The magic system paired beautifully with the light-versus-dark themes.
It’s one of those stories that feels both introspective and spellbinding—quietly intense, emotionally layered, and just a little haunting in the best way.
I flew through it and immediately found myself thinking, okay but when is book two? 👀
⭐ 4.5 out of 5 stars
And yes, I’ll absolutely be waiting (impatiently) for the sequel.
December 12, 2025
A Gripping Debut You Won’t Want to Put Down
**no spoilers**
This book completely took me by surprise in the best possible way. I had no idea what I was getting into when I first picked it up, but by the end, I was absolutely hooked. The plot is excellent. It’s layered, smart, and constantly moving forward. Every time I thought I had a handle on where things were going, another twist would hit, keeping me glued to the page.
The writing is immersive, which is especially impressive given that this is the author’s debut novel. The pacing is strong, the dialogue feels natural, and the tone strikes that perfect balance between mystery, tension, and emotional depth. It’s one of those books that you fall into easily and don’t want to crawl back out of.
The characters are just as compelling as the plot. Their backstories are complex and intriguing, and you get the sense that there’s so much more beneath the surface just waiting to be revealed. The slow-burn romance is woven in beautifully, adding emotional stakes without taking over the story. I’m fully invested in these characters and their secrets.
I need book two like I need air. The way this one ended left me desperate for more. I love discovering new authors with this much promise, and I cannot wait to see what else they bring to the table.
If you love slow-burn fantasy romance with secrets, layered worldbuilding, crazy plot twists, and a plot that never stops evolving, Vespertine Veil is one you have to read. It’s epic, addictive, and a brilliant start to an awesome series.
**no spoilers**
This book completely took me by surprise in the best possible way. I had no idea what I was getting into when I first picked it up, but by the end, I was absolutely hooked. The plot is excellent. It’s layered, smart, and constantly moving forward. Every time I thought I had a handle on where things were going, another twist would hit, keeping me glued to the page.
The writing is immersive, which is especially impressive given that this is the author’s debut novel. The pacing is strong, the dialogue feels natural, and the tone strikes that perfect balance between mystery, tension, and emotional depth. It’s one of those books that you fall into easily and don’t want to crawl back out of.
The characters are just as compelling as the plot. Their backstories are complex and intriguing, and you get the sense that there’s so much more beneath the surface just waiting to be revealed. The slow-burn romance is woven in beautifully, adding emotional stakes without taking over the story. I’m fully invested in these characters and their secrets.
I need book two like I need air. The way this one ended left me desperate for more. I love discovering new authors with this much promise, and I cannot wait to see what else they bring to the table.
If you love slow-burn fantasy romance with secrets, layered worldbuilding, crazy plot twists, and a plot that never stops evolving, Vespertine Veil is one you have to read. It’s epic, addictive, and a brilliant start to an awesome series.
December 14, 2025
I didn’t want this book to end. I can’t wait for book 2. I think this book is a great recommendation for if you liked Fourth Wing, read this.
-Slow burn
-Betrayals
-Rivals to lovers?
-Interesting magic system
-Slow burn
-Betrayals
-Rivals to lovers?
-Interesting magic system
June 26, 2026
I went into Vespertine Veil expecting a cool dark academia fantasy, but those final 50 pages completely changed my rating. What started as a solid 4-star read became an easy 5-star because of the brilliant reveals, the sky-high stakes, and a final page that left my jaw on the floor. I need the sequel immediately.
From the dedication, I felt like this book was written for readers like me. Then I turned the page and found a map, which is always a win.
Nori is a fantastic heroine. Watching her discover she's neither fully light nor dark, but something incredibly rare in between, made for a compelling coming-of-age story. Her growth throughout the novel felt natural, and by the end she's a completely different person than the girl who first arrived at Kintoira Academy.
The gothic academy setting is exactly what I want from dark academia: shadowy corridors, dangerous forests, forbidden magic, hidden alcoves, and secrets around every corner. The mystery of the missing relics and disappearing professors kept me hooked, and when everything finally came together, it was so clever and satisfying.
Then there are the MMCs. That's right. Plural. Ambrose is the childhood friend who's been quietly loving and protecting Nori all along, and his devotion absolutely melted my heart. But Kingston... Kingston was my favorite. Cold, intimidating, morally gray, and impossible to figure out? That's exactly my type of book boyfriend. I do think a couple of plot points involving him - particularly the fangs and the mental bond - felt a little rushed, but they seem intentionally set up for the next book, so I'm excited to see where they go.
The writing is descriptive without becoming overly flowery, and I was pleasantly surprised by how polished it was. It's refreshing to read an indie fantasy with so few typos.
My only minor criticism is that the pacing occasionally wobbles. Some scenes linger a little too long while a few important reveals move very quickly. Even so, none of that mattered once the ending hit. Every answer raised even bigger questions, and that cliffhanger was perfection.
If you love dark academia, magic schools, slow-burn romance, protective and anti-hero love interests, forbidden magic, shocking twists, and endings that make you immediately search for the sequel, Vespertine Veil absolutely deserves a spot on your TBR.
From the dedication, I felt like this book was written for readers like me. Then I turned the page and found a map, which is always a win.
Nori is a fantastic heroine. Watching her discover she's neither fully light nor dark, but something incredibly rare in between, made for a compelling coming-of-age story. Her growth throughout the novel felt natural, and by the end she's a completely different person than the girl who first arrived at Kintoira Academy.
The gothic academy setting is exactly what I want from dark academia: shadowy corridors, dangerous forests, forbidden magic, hidden alcoves, and secrets around every corner. The mystery of the missing relics and disappearing professors kept me hooked, and when everything finally came together, it was so clever and satisfying.
Then there are the MMCs. That's right. Plural. Ambrose is the childhood friend who's been quietly loving and protecting Nori all along, and his devotion absolutely melted my heart. But Kingston... Kingston was my favorite. Cold, intimidating, morally gray, and impossible to figure out? That's exactly my type of book boyfriend. I do think a couple of plot points involving him - particularly the fangs and the mental bond - felt a little rushed, but they seem intentionally set up for the next book, so I'm excited to see where they go.
The writing is descriptive without becoming overly flowery, and I was pleasantly surprised by how polished it was. It's refreshing to read an indie fantasy with so few typos.
My only minor criticism is that the pacing occasionally wobbles. Some scenes linger a little too long while a few important reveals move very quickly. Even so, none of that mattered once the ending hit. Every answer raised even bigger questions, and that cliffhanger was perfection.
If you love dark academia, magic schools, slow-burn romance, protective and anti-hero love interests, forbidden magic, shocking twists, and endings that make you immediately search for the sequel, Vespertine Veil absolutely deserves a spot on your TBR.
November 29, 2025
I wanted to rate this higher, but it had a couple of faults.
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{Academy Fantasy Romance; tiny bit spicy; MMF; good mix of plot and romance}
“If it wasn’t blatantly obvious that this place doesn’t favor individualism by the way I’ve been treated since my test came back inconclusive, the student’s attire would be a dead giveaway.”
Nori spent years in her mother’s shadow, wishing to be just like her mom. Her mom is a respected Light Warrior, and so is her best friend, Ambrose. I love that Nori is not Superwoman even as she treks up a mountain to pass the entrance exams.
“Even when defeat is the clear result, you must never show them weakness,” she thinks. Lovely attitude.
The main story seems to dwell on a slow-burn love triangle while Nori attempts to become at least a mediocre warrior. Following her BFF leads to “I mean too much to him but not enough to set aside his ambitions and explore what we could grow into.” And one of the Noctryn is assigned to train her basically coddles her like a precious kitten.
Attending the academy is supposed to waken her powers, but they have yet to show. In the meantime, she learns a little about both sides of power coin: dark and light. The dark side is supposed to be the booby prize one takes when their powers are not useful in combat, while the light is the version she is supposed to inherit. Things don’t go as wished.
THE MAGIC SYSTEM:
Noctryns: dark side, really sorcerers without limits, can toss shadows around like batons.
Kingston
Makon
Veils: light side, with shifting or elemental powers (like fire).
Ambrose, her former best friend, the guy who got away
Banter:
“I’ve yet to see casting accomplished with one’s head on a desk, but I’m open to trying,”
BUT I quit near the end...and here is why:
⁃ Endless Monologuing (not just one evil f...k explaining their master plan)
⁃ No main character agency (I like a FMC who is not superhuman who somehow succeeds but never saw her express any leadership or way to meld her savior group together)
⁃ The FMC is supposed to figure out the mystery for monologuing to work
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{Academy Fantasy Romance; tiny bit spicy; MMF; good mix of plot and romance}
“If it wasn’t blatantly obvious that this place doesn’t favor individualism by the way I’ve been treated since my test came back inconclusive, the student’s attire would be a dead giveaway.”
Nori spent years in her mother’s shadow, wishing to be just like her mom. Her mom is a respected Light Warrior, and so is her best friend, Ambrose. I love that Nori is not Superwoman even as she treks up a mountain to pass the entrance exams.
“Even when defeat is the clear result, you must never show them weakness,” she thinks. Lovely attitude.
The main story seems to dwell on a slow-burn love triangle while Nori attempts to become at least a mediocre warrior. Following her BFF leads to “I mean too much to him but not enough to set aside his ambitions and explore what we could grow into.” And one of the Noctryn is assigned to train her basically coddles her like a precious kitten.
Attending the academy is supposed to waken her powers, but they have yet to show. In the meantime, she learns a little about both sides of power coin: dark and light. The dark side is supposed to be the booby prize one takes when their powers are not useful in combat, while the light is the version she is supposed to inherit. Things don’t go as wished.
THE MAGIC SYSTEM:
Noctryns: dark side, really sorcerers without limits, can toss shadows around like batons.
Kingston
Makon
Veils: light side, with shifting or elemental powers (like fire).
Ambrose, her former best friend, the guy who got away
Banter:
“I’ve yet to see casting accomplished with one’s head on a desk, but I’m open to trying,”
BUT I quit near the end...and here is why:
⁃ Endless Monologuing (not just one evil f...k explaining their master plan)
⁃ No main character agency (I like a FMC who is not superhuman who somehow succeeds but never saw her express any leadership or way to meld her savior group together)
⁃ The FMC is supposed to figure out the mystery for monologuing to work
November 11, 2025
I was fortunate enough to be able to read this as an ARC reader. I went in with zero expectations, as this is a debut novel and wasn't sure what to expect, but let me tell you, I was BLOWN away.
If you're looking for a Gothic fantasy/Dark Academia that's slow burn, high-stakes and has a thick plot, this one is for you!
The tension was **chef's kiss** and the MMC made me OBSESSED! But the thing I truly loved, was there was an actual plot in the background and one that made you become invested!
Nori, the FMC, enrolls at Kintoira University, an academy to become a future soldier of the realm. The academy teaches light and dark arts, but the two regiments certainly don't care for each other. They must face a series of tests to determine which regiment they belong but Nori is in for a surprise! All the while, she's trying to live up to her best friend, Ambrose's expectations and keep their childhood friendship alive, all while secretly falling in love with him. Of course, as any good book has, there are characters and plot twists that make her life treacherous at best. There's a corrupted magic at the gates and hidden enemies that want her gone.
The writing was top notch and the pacing kept me turning pages. I will definitely be re-reading this one!
If you're looking for a Gothic fantasy/Dark Academia that's slow burn, high-stakes and has a thick plot, this one is for you!
The tension was **chef's kiss** and the MMC made me OBSESSED! But the thing I truly loved, was there was an actual plot in the background and one that made you become invested!
Nori, the FMC, enrolls at Kintoira University, an academy to become a future soldier of the realm. The academy teaches light and dark arts, but the two regiments certainly don't care for each other. They must face a series of tests to determine which regiment they belong but Nori is in for a surprise! All the while, she's trying to live up to her best friend, Ambrose's expectations and keep their childhood friendship alive, all while secretly falling in love with him. Of course, as any good book has, there are characters and plot twists that make her life treacherous at best. There's a corrupted magic at the gates and hidden enemies that want her gone.
The writing was top notch and the pacing kept me turning pages. I will definitely be re-reading this one!
July 19, 2026
This book completely captivated me from beginning to end. From the very first chapter I was hooked, and I could barely put it down.
The characters were written so well, each with their own depth and personality, making it impossible not to become invested in their journey. The world was immersive, the pacing kept me turning the pages, and every chapter left me wanting just one more.
That ending had me on the edge of my seat! It was intense, emotional, and left me desperate to know what happens next. If you enjoy fantasy with compelling characters, gripping twists, and a story that refuses to let you stop reading, I can’t recommend this enough.
I absolutely loved every minute of it and can’t wait for more from Alisha Korvane.
July 27, 2026
First, I want to say that I really enjoyed this book and definitely plan to continue with the series. I only wish Goodreads allowed half-star ratings, because this was a solid 3.5-star read for me. Based on the concept, plot, and characters, I can absolutely see the potential for this series to become a 5-star read.
I’ll keep this as spoiler-free as possible, but I did find myself wishing for more interaction with the side characters and deeper world-building. At times, it was difficult to fully understand some of the dynamics and relationships because there weren’t enough moments spent developing them, especially as the story moved toward the ending. Because of that, the big shock-and-awe moment didn’t hit as strongly as it could have. The timelines were also unclear in places, which made certain sections confusing and had me going back to reread so I could make sure I was following everything correctly..
I wanted more because I really liked the concept and the plot. I also felt that the story was strongly inspired by other books and characters—almost to the point where certain moments made me feel like I had stepped back into those familiar stories. That said, I still found plenty to enjoy, and I’m interested to see where the series goes next.
I’ll keep this as spoiler-free as possible, but I did find myself wishing for more interaction with the side characters and deeper world-building. At times, it was difficult to fully understand some of the dynamics and relationships because there weren’t enough moments spent developing them, especially as the story moved toward the ending. Because of that, the big shock-and-awe moment didn’t hit as strongly as it could have. The timelines were also unclear in places, which made certain sections confusing and had me going back to reread so I could make sure I was following everything correctly..
I wanted more because I really liked the concept and the plot. I also felt that the story was strongly inspired by other books and characters—almost to the point where certain moments made me feel like I had stepped back into those familiar stories. That said, I still found plenty to enjoy, and I’m interested to see where the series goes next.
July 4, 2026
READ IT!!!
This was such an intriguing read with twists, turns, betrayals, & loves. A tale of friendship, magic, resilience, & unlikely allies. I absolutely loved the MFC, she had the best inner dialogue & had me cackling. I loved every single character in this novel, they all felt like real people! I enjoyed exploring this world & the magic system immensely! I finished this novel same day, I couldn’t put it down, I literally canceled plans so I could finish this book - & it did not disappoint!!! That ending!!! I need book 2 Now!!!
This was such an intriguing read with twists, turns, betrayals, & loves. A tale of friendship, magic, resilience, & unlikely allies. I absolutely loved the MFC, she had the best inner dialogue & had me cackling. I loved every single character in this novel, they all felt like real people! I enjoyed exploring this world & the magic system immensely! I finished this novel same day, I couldn’t put it down, I literally canceled plans so I could finish this book - & it did not disappoint!!! That ending!!! I need book 2 Now!!!
August 1, 2026
It’s good! The plot is there. Is it new and untouched territory? No, but it’s a good time so far.
I definitely see similarities to Harry Potter and Fourth Wing. We have trials, an FMC with a once-in-a-lifetime, super special power, and she’s incredibly lonely. Her best friend betrayed her, her new friend betrayed her… blah blah blah. We’ve all read this before.
BUT! I’d like to see where it goes. I hope it takes a different approach than Fourth Wing; otherwise, it’s going to have to be a DNF for me.
I definitely see similarities to Harry Potter and Fourth Wing. We have trials, an FMC with a once-in-a-lifetime, super special power, and she’s incredibly lonely. Her best friend betrayed her, her new friend betrayed her… blah blah blah. We’ve all read this before.
BUT! I’d like to see where it goes. I hope it takes a different approach than Fourth Wing; otherwise, it’s going to have to be a DNF for me.
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November 27, 2025
This was really good! The plot flowed well, descriptions were good, and the world building was natural. Lots of similarities to other academy-based romantasies (Fourth Wing, Riftborne, etc). Fully recognizing that this is indie and a debut novel, it could have used one more edit to catch some storyline inconsistencies, word misuse (i.e. ruin vs rune), and some typos. But I really liked it and will keep an eye out for the next one. Very solid debut.
December 8, 2025
I really enjoyed this book! I was invested from start to finish and I am looking forward to the next book!
I enjoyed the FMC’s character, and how the author really opens the door to this characters life, her struggle with what she wants, who she is, the relationships she makes, the heartbreak she encounters, all set in a dark academia/ war college setting.
Such a page turner, and a debut novel!
I enjoyed the FMC’s character, and how the author really opens the door to this characters life, her struggle with what she wants, who she is, the relationships she makes, the heartbreak she encounters, all set in a dark academia/ war college setting.
Such a page turner, and a debut novel!
November 30, 2025
ummmm okaaaayyyy!!
So this was a slow build for me but I liked this!! It was like fourth wing vibes mixed with Harry Potter vibes and vampire vibes!! Was not expecting to like it so much until that second half of the book had me locked in! Hope there is a next book because I got into this!
So this was a slow build for me but I liked this!! It was like fourth wing vibes mixed with Harry Potter vibes and vampire vibes!! Was not expecting to like it so much until that second half of the book had me locked in! Hope there is a next book because I got into this!
March 19, 2026
Amazingly! Sucked me right in. Unique magic system. Awesome world building and character development. Didn't see the plot twist and cliff hanger at the end at all. Can't wait for book two!! Only criticism is the end was a bit rushed in my opinion. but still, it doesn't detract from the writing and story! Highly recommend!
April 7, 2026
So! The plot, the multiple slow burn relationships, and well paced action was amazing! This was so unique and I loved all the plot twists! But the best part was the dual slow burn options! The tension was amazing! Whiplash looked good in this book! Can’t wait for book 2! Our FMC is finally finding her destiny!!!! That ending has me yearning for some yummy connections in the next book!
July 1, 2026
Certain aspects are very similar to Fourth Wing. War school, 2 options for the female lead to end in, childhood friend who FMC is in love with and a bad boy MMC who controls shadows. BUT there are distinct differences. overall good story, just wish character building and relationships were built a little stronger and there was way too much repetition about MMCs looks.
November 25, 2025
half way done, plot is not new but writing is good. will continue to read except female lead is a little annoying. they are in a school and she expects the guy to be there for everything when he's in a different class/level. a little ridiculous
book gets better after she sees him for what he is and she's not so whiny. ends with a cliffhanger?
book gets better after she sees him for what he is and she's not so whiny. ends with a cliffhanger?
November 26, 2025
This story is amazing
This story is like a tapestry that you can only see the back of until wham it’s turned and many things make sense. One of the BEST KU novels I’ve read to date. It’s a refreshing change in how this story was put together. I hope for more books to come.
This story is like a tapestry that you can only see the back of until wham it’s turned and many things make sense. One of the BEST KU novels I’ve read to date. It’s a refreshing change in how this story was put together. I hope for more books to come.
November 30, 2025
I devoured this book in two days
This was a great read that scratched all my Romantasy itches. It started out feeling a little too similar to another very popular read but then took enough twists and turns of its own to make it unique and so intriguing. Can't wait for book two! 🤩
This was a great read that scratched all my Romantasy itches. It started out feeling a little too similar to another very popular read but then took enough twists and turns of its own to make it unique and so intriguing. Can't wait for book two! 🤩
December 17, 2025
This was another meh read. A lot of things could have been given deeper details and I felt like I was missing some info the entire time? I don’t know but it just needs more information and connections between characters. But it has potential!
I’m not sure if I will continue the series…
I’m not sure if I will continue the series…
July 4, 2026
so good! must read!
So good! So so good! I’m only sad that there’s not a second one out yet. This book will suck you in and you won’t be able to stop reading it. I literally finished it in 2 days.
So good! So so good! I’m only sad that there’s not a second one out yet. This book will suck you in and you won’t be able to stop reading it. I literally finished it in 2 days.
July 24, 2026
Blah
This was definitely a mash up of Maze Runner, Fourth Wing and some others. There were parts that I loved and others that were pointless and stupid. The arguments felt forced, the trials didn't pull me in and over all the book fell flat.
This was definitely a mash up of Maze Runner, Fourth Wing and some others. There were parts that I loved and others that were pointless and stupid. The arguments felt forced, the trials didn't pull me in and over all the book fell flat.
August 7, 2026
Serious Problem - It Wasn't Long Enough
I read this book in a day. I couldn't put it down. Slow burn, friends, enemies, betrayed, lost, alone - it was perfect. Beautiful world building. I need book 2 ASAP!
I read this book in a day. I couldn't put it down. Slow burn, friends, enemies, betrayed, lost, alone - it was perfect. Beautiful world building. I need book 2 ASAP!
November 24, 2025
This book will keep you guessing every step of the way. It will shatter you and leave you wanting more. Can’t wait for the sequel.
December 1, 2025
A MUST READ!! This book will keep you guessing until the very last page. No annoying fluff to just make the book longer, but enough to make you understand the world you are in. Needless it to say she is now my new favorite author, and I will be reading all her published works! You won't be disappointed, read the book!
January 13, 2026
Saw this on tik tok. Read it in a couple of days. Amazing characters and great plot with some awesome twist and turns. Can’t wait till her next book comes out.
Did Not Finish
February 2, 2026Dnf 36%
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