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554 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 30, 2026
while the first half or so was truly fun & exciting (just imagine it: a grieving bisexual woman in her 50s whos a sexy pirate on an adventure, what more could u want), this book in its whole feels more like the 2nd book of a trilogy where enough has seemingly been explained to the reader already & the real culmination is yet to come.
initially, the world was very exciting to me: sea mythology, an empire (?), various cultures & histories which were relayed in some detail through snippet chapters in between the plot. but then i was halfway through and the magic system still had not been fully explained (eikons were explained completely only in the Discussion Questions chapter at the end of the book; i still dont know what 'foil' means in the world of the book). it was constantly so overwhelming. i didnt know why i had to read about some boardgame from a snippet chapter. another time, far later in the book i would realise that some 2-page snippet chapter on pronouns would only explain why an extra (a character's child), who was mentioned about 4 times, was referred to with some specific pronoun. the worldbuilding relayed to us simply wasn't truly purposeful, using up so many pages of the book for no reason. the exposition was simply not there at all, leaving me stumbling in the dark & growing more & more irritated by the chapter that the author hadn't given a guiding light to figure it all out. yes, the audience is always smarter than you think, but we require a path to be that smart.
the characters seemed at first also very exciting . . . and then rather stuck in their personalities . . . and then there were too many of them with here recurring the same problem as with the exposition: it was as if we were expected to know them all already.
the pacing was also rather clunky. it really did feel like only bad shit kept happening; i was as if an undead being beaten by a gigantic storm with no relief. sure, there was a culmination, so the events lead somewhere, but there was no rest really anywhere. every event was important, every event lead to deaths, leading to every event being insignificant, every death being insignificant. there were also suddenly pov chapters of characters whose pov was rather pointless. some things couldve been left mysteries & relayed otherwise. all those pages really could've gone to better use.
i really really wanted to love this. i can love trashy novels, truly, wholly, totally, but it was really quite difficult to enjoy this novel by its end (which i think is reflected by this review too). i think i would have much preferred this if it were the 2nd novel in a trilogy.
"That buys us... two more days? Three if we are exceptionally competent at incompetence?"