This book was just plain bad. It was poorly written and lacked any sort of editing. Grammar, syntax, and formatting errors were abundant and distracting. Attempted metaphors and similes that made no sense. It read like an outline of ideas and thoughts instead of an actual flowing story. Every chapter ended with some sort of statement that was clearly just trying to come across as a ‘bad ass’ quote that could be taken well out of context. I could keep going, but I digress.
The plot itself might have had potential, but it was hard to tell as it came across as extremely unrealistic due to a complete lack of context and descriptions. And honestly, the errors were so distracting, it was hard to pay attention to the plot at all.
I don’t enjoy leaving such a negative review on a debut novel, but this book should have never been published, at least not in its current state.