AI, or just bad? Who knows.
This book has some potential. The premise itself isn’t particularly imaginative, but it could be interesting.
Instead, it reads like it was built using AI and never proof read.
Sloppy action sequences, weird rapey bits where the MC and other female cast members ignore the ideas of drunks and consent, all over the place plot lines, very little exposition or explanation, and instead just a short, poorly written attempt at a Japanese based urban fantasy.
Rewrite the story, get a good editor, clean up the plot, and this could be an interesting read. As it is now… the author needs to not be allowed on KU.