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i love the memory loss trope, always will. and Prima did it beautifully. the fact that Ren continued to make and do things that were connected to his lover without remembering it, alternating between present and past chapters and seeing connections being made, feeling the fmc’s yearning for Ren to remember her, the way she looked at him, the way she spoke of things. all of it had me emotional, i sobbed. it’s why i love this trope so much.
however, the the reason this book lacked so much for me is the writing. the first 15-20% are written so confusingly that i genuinely considered dnf-ing. but i powered through bc of the memory loss trope. throughout the book, the interactions between the MC’s, their relationship, their emotions, their dialogues of each other, all that was great. but when it came to describing the world and things happening around? it was horrible. i could not keep up and eventually started skimming through anything to do with the world. i blame it on this being a novella bc the world this is set in clearly needs a lot more time to be built and understood. but even then, some things were just bad writing. for example, i was constantly confused on where we were, they would be on a boat and suddenly there’s sand and a beach? when did we move?!?!
so overall, the memory loss trope was done beautifully, i liked the MC’s and their relationship, the storyline, plots, twists, all that seemed so so lovely and i was genuinely so excited, but the writing needs a lot of work to bring this all together smoothly. it was hard to keep up with the world, layout of things, side characters, and anything else that was not direct interaction between the MC’s.