This rating grates on me.
I liked everything that happened. But I couldn’t help but feel like it was unfinished.
They have spent over a year searching for Amorrette, and all five books that was Grace’s main focus. Even when they were doing other stuff it was always brought up and on her mind.
Of course it was!
And the guys put in so much work. And yes they helped a lot of people, and took down a lot of bad guys.
But nothing they did really contributed to finding Amorrette.
A guy just showed up out of nowhere and reached out to people from Grace’s old life in case she had contact with them.
And then two pages later we read about how the sisters had talked on the phone, and we see them meet up in less than half a page or something.
It was honestly really disappointing. The build up delivered 10/10. But the end result was like a ballon with a hole in it. It just sank back down to earth.
And I swear Alphabet was suspicious of Rachel two pages before it seemed like she was a key player in getting Grace back into modelling. And she was the one who delivered that message about her sister as well. What happened to those suspicions??
What happened with O’Rourke? Still don’t know if I’m spelling it right, but I was waiting for him to show up in this book. I really liked his character and felt like he had the potential for a really good character arc.
He was close with the guys once upon a time, and had become enemies. And he had an interest in Gracie. I just felt like there was potential there, but he was never even mentioned in this book, let alone made an appearance.
I still think there should be more pages. Some of the previous books were shorter than this. But it still wasn’t long enough. Additions like the side mission with the trafficked kids is great, but when it takes the focus away from the real mission, and the books are relatively short, it all just clashes.
Especially when we are reading a book about multiple relationships who all need to be explored and connections needs to be formed.
Maybe if the books had been longer or the series had been longer the end wouldn’t have felt so rushed, and important pieces of the plot and story wouldn’t have been dropped.
We didn’t even find out why traffickers suddenly stopped coming after her.
Yes, they killed important players that had come for her. But one of the last things we heard from someone as they were deep in the trafficking world was that everyone was looking for Grace because she had gone missing.
And when she mentioned getting back into modeling this was on of their major concerns. But after she met Amorrette and we only saw them hug we are suddenly rushed into an epilogue where she is back into modeling.
It made no sense and got no explanation.
And in that scene. Was she modelling or was she on a mission? She was up on a stage and cameras were flashing, and she was taking her dress off or something. But then the «target» walked in and they suddenly had a mission to do??
But one of their other major concerns when she wanted to go back to her job was how THEIR job required them to be ghosts.
So she couldn’t step into the light without them, but they couldn’t do it if they wanted to keep doing what they were doing.
All of these issues were something they were discussing in the last ten percent of the book. It was all so rushed, and done without any explanation.
And that guy from the cliffhanger in the book prior to this. The one who raped her. He could have easily been used to solve some of these problems. He could have been someone important. And dealing with him could have removed some of the threats to her.
But instead he turned out to be a nobody, who practically knew nothing. And had only pretended to be big and scary when he had Grace after she was first kidnapped and trafficked.
It was such a waste.
And by the way. There is a bonus scene where we get to see Amorette and Grace together. Which I only found out about because I was reading it on kindle and not an actual book. But what do you mean it’s not just in the book?? Why do I have to go out of my way to get a bonus scene of the sisters reuniting after I have spent five books waiting for this to happen?
This book wasn’t all that long, the pages would not have made that much of a detrimental of a difference.
We didn’t even really get any answers about what had happened to Amorette in that bonus scene.
I couldn’t give a lower rating than this cause I can still see myself read this book and the whole series multiple times.
I really do love the story. And I love Grace and all the guys. Bones is definitely my favourite though!
I loved seeing how their relationship developed and it was such a contrast to book one.
And I loved how Grace was involved in their missions for real now. But that she wasn’t suddenly an expert operating on their level. But they actively worked around it, and we saw her struggle but strive to be helpful.
Overall I love the series, but I was disappointed by the end.
I may have reread the entire series immediately after I read this book. And unfortunately I stand by everything I said after the first time.