Despite being one of the tribes we learned about in school (sadly, only when we cover the Trail of Tears and the "Five Civilized Tribes"), Chickasaw media feels fewer and farther between than many other Native American tribes. I was thus delighted to pick up one of the few fiction books about Chickasaw ancestors including the Chickasaw/Choctaw language, especially with my interest in learning more of the language myself.
Phillip Carroll Morgan weaves a very intentional story throughout and I felt like I was reading a tale that was handed down over many campfires. The story of the shipwrecked Scotsman Robert and the goat, Lizbeth; their intersection with wordmaster Iskifa, led to find and rescue them via a vivid dream; the events that occur at the Yamohmi and the moral lesson encompassed within.
The story takes a little while to get going as it builds via alternating perspectives. The main villain isn't introduced until halfway through the book. While the story is well-woven, I also thought the sentence structure needed more variety as it didn't flow off the tongue seamlessly - this was something that was particularly clear to me as I read it aloud to a listener.
I loved the presence of real Chickasaw/Choctaw words, wishing there were even more of them.
That being said, I do have mixed feelings on the lack of translation of all of the Chickasaw words. Many have translations in text and most of the ones that are not translated occur in Robert's chapter where he really would have no idea what was being said. While I respect and agree with thinking about who the audience is and decentering a white, English reader, since Chickasaw has so few people who understand the language, the preservationist in me wishes that we could preserve more of what was written here. There were definitely words that I was unable to find via an internet search, probably due to conjugations or different use cases than are in the current online tools.
Still, such an important book and I really do wish there was more Chickasaw-centered fiction out there!