DNF @ 18%
This writer clearly thinks her readers are stupid with attention spans of a gnat. Within the span of 3 pages (pg 33 - 35) she used the exact sentences.
"Warin's controlled fire. Torr's shadowed intensity. Demeter's wild energy. Lennix's grounded calm."
Mind you the fmc just met them and all of a sudden she has deducted their personalities? Speaking of the fmc she has the survival instincts of a fart.
Their are also a lot of inconsistencies in just the little I read:
-"They're Demeter's," he says, nodding at the clothing. "Smallest of us. They'll be big on you, but better than sleeping in field clothes." - SHE JUST DID. THEY GAVE HER CLOTHES AFTER SHE WOKE UP.
-"they're clean and soft and better than sleeping in my field clothes for a third night." - SHE HAS ONLY BEEN THERE FOR ONE NIGHT!
- "You said you'd explain. So explain. What are you? What is this bond? And why me?" -
And you already told me most of this yesterday. Dragons, extinction, the beacon calling compatible humans. What I need to know is what happens now. What does this bond actually mean?" - BOTH QUOTES ARE IN THE SAME PARAGRAPH.
-"The library," I remember. "You said I could use it?" "Second floor, west - THE NEVER SAID THAT. LOL. THEY SAID THEY STAYED UP USING THE LIBRARY.