The chances are, if you read this novel, you’re doing so because of The Wicker Man. The film started as an adaptation of this novel (they bought the rights to the book) but immediately went the way of so many adaptations, by throwing away everything but the basic idea (Puritanical policeman investigates occult goings-on in a remote community) and one scene (the through-the-wall seduction). And, in this case, that was probably a good thing.
Ritual follows Detective Inspector David Hanlin of Scotland Yard’s Special Branch as he arrives in a Cornish village to investigate the supposedly accidental death of a young girl found dead at the base of an oak tree. Hanlin believes it to be a ritual killing, in part because a monkey’s head and several bats had been nailed to the tree above her, but also because he’s obsessed with the idea of rooting out witchcraft and ritual killings.
This would have made for an interesting detective-story-with-a-twist, but Ritual isn’t your standard detective novel. For a long time, reading it, I wasn’t sure if the writing was inept or merely strange. Sample sentence: ‘David tabulated the remark on his brain slate.’ for David deciding to remember something, or ‘Oh, do please transport yourself from the murky shadows.’ instead of the usual 'Step into the light’. In the end, I settled for mostly strange, a little inept. The style is, I suppose, comic — not the in the sense of being funny, but in the sense of wringing every scene and every character for as much grotesquerie as possible. In part, it reminded me of Richard Hughes’ darkly Dickensian style from A High Wind in Jamaica, only not as successful.
Which is a pity, because, aside from the link to The Wicker Man, the prose style is about the only thing that comes close to working. As a comedy, it’s not funny; as a detective story, it follows no logic; it doesn’t play its occult elements for thrills, so it’s no use as a horror novel; its characters are all so grotesquely drawn, it’s got nothing to say about them. It has a twist at the end — but a short story’s worth of twist, not a novel’s worth.
I don’t want to say it’s bad. But, even once I got over the shock of it not being what I was expecting, I still wasn’t sure what to make of it, so never got into it. In the end, it seemed to be grotesque for the sake of being grotesque, like a Gerald Scarfe political cartoon satirising some now long-forgotten event. Perhaps, then, for Wicker Man completists only.