After a betrayal, an abduction, and a rushed rescue mission, the wayfarers reach the Ashen Dome only to find that the enemy has beaten them to it—Fjorna Daro is about to take command of the mask of bovids.
Thick-armored half-beasts inhabit the dome, hesitant to form an alliance with Lago-Sterjall and his companions. The horned warriors are proud to display their culture and might, but there is one pivotal secret they are not yet revealing.
The parallel journey of Kitjári and Nalaníri is sending ripples of hope across the lands of Noss, unleashing rebellions and alliances among enslaved tribes—but soon the boar and bear are diverted toward a new mission in lands more treacherous than any they've encountered thus far.
Parting ways after the battle at the Lequa Dome, Banook now begins his own adventure through Negian territory, gathering an ursid army as he marches toward the half-collapsed Heartpine Dome.
Meanwhile, the Red Stag continues his campaign of terror, advancing ceaselessly toward the Scoria Dome, where he hopes to capture the mask of chiropterans—wings could provide him with an uncanny advantage in war, and the bats within the dome are as numerous as the stars.
Feral Flame is the fourth installment of the Noss Saga, an epic LGBTQ+ fantasy series.
Joaquín Baldwin writes epic fantasy with a queer touch. As a multidisciplinary artist, he’s been recognized for his work in cinematography, photography, 3D design, and illustration, and his animated shorts have won over 100 awards. He unadvisedly decided that writing novels was the next thing on his list. While at Disney, he worked on films such as Zootopia, Encanto, Frozen and Moana. He spends an inordinate amount of time crafting the complex world of the Noss Saga. Visit him at joaquinbaldwin.com.
How to encapsulate the themes of this book...I think the title honestly says it all. Feral: wild and filled with emotion both anticipated and unexpected, but hitting hard and raw in those moments meant to tug on heartstrings. Flame: Passion burning, motivations challenged, the will to keep going, and the insanity that comes with power. At the risk of sounding biased for this series, Feral Flame was...well, unbelievable. Incredible. And one of the few books that has made me cry a little.
At risk of this review being too long, I'll split it into sections so you can jump around as needed!
Fantasy genre captured perfectly: Joaquín has an incredible talent of creating a world that's both fantastic and realistic. The world building that he unveils never feels too fast or out of place which is nearly impossible for fantasy novelists to achieve. From the new domes to the revisited domes to the various lands throughout Noss, nothing felt out of place or like it didn't belong. His descriptive writing style paired with the BEAUTIFUL illustrations paint the perfect picture of the novel as it unfolds.
Epic as it is queer? Accurate. VERY accurate!: If you've made it to this point in the series, you're not shy to queer representation. Joaquín is...without adding spoilers to my review? He's managed to make unrepresented identities of the queer community be seen in a normal way. There's no celebration or party or shock at talking about queer identity, it just exists. One conversation in the book in particular made me put it down and actually feel like he captured the perspective and emotions of me as a queer ace kid not having the words for who I was. And Joaquín doesn't make everything perfect and idyllic. There's prejudice and hate in this world as well, but it's addressed. It's challenged. And it makes the people feel real, whether Silvesh, Miscam, or Negian.
Pacing and action is balanced, mostly: As a warning, this book is fast-paced compared to the others. There's a LOT Joaquín has to tackle, and tackle it he does. I feel there was a lot of editing that had to be done to keep this story contained, but that's mostly because I wanted to hear more details, be there for the off-screen conversations, watch the challenges unveiled in the constant transitions. That's unrealistic for a fantasy book, especially one that needs to keep things moving. But WOW there's a lot that happens in this book, and none of it feels out of place. That's one of the reasons I couldn't put this book down, it just kept me guessing and going and wondering and questioning. Though it took me nine days to read? That's fast for me. And that's why I say 'mostly,' because I couldn't keep myself from reading more.
What happens to ___ in the book??: You'll find out, don't worry. Joaquín leaves no stone unturned, so you'll have all of your cliffhangers replaced with brand new shiny cliffhangers that leave you begging for more. The main part I struggled with while reading this book is wanting to keep going with a certain character arc. I didn't want the journey to stop, and where some authors struggle with the pacing of their many, many characters (Not naming names, of course) Joaquín is strategic and fully intentional with where he interrupts the action. It left me needing to keep reading. I stayed up too late on work nights wanting to make sure I got to the next part because I needed to know what happened next for those characters.
What comes next?: Read and find out you goof! Joaquín teases at what's to come, and I'm upset I have to wait to hear what's next. But if I've made it four books in as you have most likely, you trust in his capabilities to create a good and engaging story. Feral Flame leaves off at just the right place, and I have some guesses as to where it'll go next. But even if this book came out WAY sooner than I was expecting, it's not soon enough. I've been hooked since book 1, and I'm on the edge of my seat.
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So is Feral Flame worth it? Yes. Yes. Yes. Eighteen times yes. It's action-packed, there's romance, there's shock, there's character development...it's what I've been waiting years for in a fantasy series. I can't wait for book 5 whenever it comes out. Highly recommend - you'll love this one if you've gotten to this point, no question.
The Noss Saga is unlike anything I have read. There is no denying that fact. The animal-shifting masks, the furry nature, and the LGBTQ+ representation is in all honesty a wonder to live through. We need more books like this series.
I wish I could give the entire series (so far) a 5 star review. If you have read my previous 3 reviews you know by now why I can't do that. Because a lot of the issues I brought up about writing craft, editing and narrative structure are still present in this book.
I must state that I am excited for book 5. I will pre-order it whenever it is ready. That should tell you that I think you should make up your own mind whether about reading this book series or not. Despite the many flaws I have been pointing out, it is good enough to warrant a read. Especially if you are part of the furry and LGBTQ+ communities.
I feel that this book warrants a change in mindset compared to how I reviewed the last three books. In the last three books laid out a huge checklist of problems with the main character Lago and what I wanted to see to address those problems. I think the reason I was so harsh is because book 1 and the beginning of book 2 promised "Death and danger can come out of nowhere. The characters will be challenged". Since book 2 however, it is undenial proof that this is not the case.
I firmly believe that this book series is Joaquin Baldwin's most precious baby. You can tell by his writing. The worldbuilding around it (Even if a lot of it comes off as surface-level because of how it is presented in the story), the craft projects, the maps, the artwork and how eager he is to share Noss with the world. I still applaud and am envious of what he has accomplished.
But I think at this point, I must state that this book series is not here to give you an epic where the characters are constantly challenged, where the stakes escalate and characters must face traumatic events that change them forever. This is a story of comfort. There will be challenges, but the story never goes into the deep emotional depth these characters deserve. The challenges will almost always be a gatekeeper that the characters simply have to get past or unrelated to the main antagonist.
The reason I say this, is because at this point the main character Lago has had 4 books and not once across these four books has his wants, needs, flaws, philosophy, past, lust or decisions been challenged. He is in the right. Period. He is never given the chance to progress or develop his character.
When these events do try to happen, we are never given enough emotional depth for the scene to have the impact it deserves, or for the story to say "Lago is wrong!" without the author making it clear "No, no, Lago is right. He can't be wrong". Why do I say this? This is because every time a character points something out that Lago does, they immediately lose the argument against Lago, usually because they have to backtrack. They always end up with "Oh, he is right" or they suddenly decided to say the stupidest thing imaginable and they are never allowed to have good arguments Lago can't counter. I would say it goes as far as being contrary to their established characterization. They should be smarter than this. It is quite clear Joaquin is not allowing them to be. Because if they were, Lago would be challenged.
As for the emotional impact? I finally got what I had been desperately begging for since Book 3: for Lago to be challenged without the support of other characters. He did solve the problem on his own. It did, however, come off as a very shallow experience. Maybe Lago just lacks depth, or maybe Joaquin Baldwin doesn't want to write emotional depth to this degree. He does not want to see Lago hurt. If you follow Baldwin on any social media, Lago is clearly his baby. So I could see how he can't bring himself to hurt him beyond the surface level. I don't know which.
Some of you may say "Hey! Wait a minute! Lago gets physically hurt all the time!" (Usually because of his own stupidity, I might add.). I am not talking about physical pain. Physical pain is easy. Emotional pain is hard. And so far, Joaquin Baldwin has proven that he can't write emotional pain to the level this story, that Lago, deserves.
In some ways, this is too little, too late. I say this because the entire section of the book I am talking about proves that nothing truly traumatic can happen to Lago. The entire mini-arc was plot armor at maximum security. It was such a missed opportunity. We could have seen Lago vulnerable, but we never even scratched the surface.
The arc in question:
Going back to how the story handles conflict. Most of the conflict follows this formula: The heroes need to go to X. On the way to X they encounter a gatekeeper, they must pass the gatekeeper. They succeed. X leads to Y. On the way to Y, they encounter another gatekeeper. Repeat.
It is almost never: The heroes encounter a problem. They try to solve it, but it leads to another problem. Now they have two problems they must solve. They work to try and solve the new problem but they fail, and now that failure has consequently led to to a new problem. Now the heroes has three problems.
So do not expect Noss Saga to follow the escalating conflict structure commonly used in storytelling. That is not really here. That is why I say it is a safe story.
The characters are not here to go on an epic quest and adventure that changes them forever. This is an EPIC FURRY LGBTQ+ FANTASY novel. That is what it is marketed as. It is EPIC in scale, in that it affects the entire planet. It is furry. It is LGBTQ+. It is fantasy because it has fantastical elements. It is not an Epic in the way you expect an Epic to be. It is marketed wrongly. I do not believe that is Joaquin Baldwin's fault, because there is no ‘Cosy Epic’ genre.
The characters in this series are here to succeed and to experience a world of wonder and beauty. When they are put in danger, the story makes sure they are still fundamentally themselves. They are not allowed to be challenged past the surface. They are not to be damaged in a way that affects their future actions. They must remain who they are and come out of the danger without meaningful lasting consequences.
Wow, I have have spent a lot of time going going over my core belief about this series so far, and not this book in question. I think it is time I comment a little bit about this book.
Feral Flame is a good book. I think this was the book that most felt like "not much happened." The reason is that it slowed down a bit. We get to experience the Tjardur. It returned to some of the things that made Book 2 good. We get to feel and explore the worldbuilding instead of being told it.
I do want to warn that this book do romanticize drugged sexual consent. This part of the book is what I very much in someways could classify as rape. And it is shown as a positive. In the context of the worldbuilding, I can see what it is attempting to do. However, I feel I must point out that these are still characters being drugged, and manipulated into having sex while under the influence.
While on the subject, this scene in question kind of functions as another "reward" for Lago without him having to earn it. Heck, in this case I would call it rewarding his already bad sexual behavior. I call it reward, because the scene very clearly feels like something Baldwin was excited to write. In my opinion, this scene would have had 10 times the emotional impact and character growth, had he been forcefully rejected from the sexual experience and then had to discover something about himself. Rather than given another "positive reinforcement for his already negative behavior".
I do want to reiterate, as I said in all three previous reviews, that this scene makes Lago's already sexually exploitative and, in some ways, predatory behavior, even worse. Which is why, I find it such a disappointment from a narrative standpoint.
Maybe I am the one who expects emotional romantic attachment. Even in the LGBTQ+ novels I read. To feel that the characters should build a strong emotional foundation alongside the physical one. So maybe I misunderstood what one should expect from these novels. Clearly, the book works for many readers, given how many five-star reviews it has received. Clearly, a lot of people come here to see what sexual encounters Joaquin Baldwin can come up with for Lago and his characters. The feeling of not having to deal with the strain that emotional attachment can bring. Maybe that is why I struggle with Lago's behaviors? Because I expected the main character to be someone I can emotionally invest in, someone comfortable for me to believe in. Instead, I feel like we're getting private sexual fantasies without consequences in the story.
As for the other stuff in the book? It is good for the most part. The Tjardur comes off as culturally real. It still contains some logical fallacies such as a scene where they need a disguise and the skinny, blue-eyed character is "Too obvious" while the character with obvious animal traits is the "Right choice for the disguise". Etc. I also don't think Joaquin Baldwin's "Tarot" scene worked. It read way too much like an instruction manual for how to read his made-up "Tarot cards" rather than an actual fortune-telling scene.It was the most eye-rolling scene I have read because of how poorly written it was.
Dang it! I must end it with something positive! I still absolutely love Jiara's adventure! I still love the side characters! I still love the unique and rich world Joaquin Baldwin has created! I will read book 5! I have immense respect and appreciation for Joaquin Baldwin! I deeply appreciate him for writing these books!
I am so worried that these four reviews of criticism is mistaken as hate when all I want is to show how much I care about this series to spend over 20 hours writing four reviews! Aaaaaaaa!
PS - Seriously Joaquin Baldwin... what is your obsession with animal sex organs? And we keep having every character make jokes about Proco's balls. You do realize it comes off as an author joke rather than as the characters speaking naturally? XD
“They were surrounded, outnumbered. Betrayed…” Yet, the story has only just begun, in the 4th installment of Joaquin Baldwin’s epic fantasy series, Noss Saga: Feral Flame. The action picks up right where Book III left off, as our heroes find new allies to aid them in their continuing pursuit of stopping The Red Stag’s march of conquest across the continents of Noss, as well as those who have betrayed him seeking their own power. In this book in particular, we come to discover much more about the Tjardur clan, and from them learn more of the true history behind the Acoaposhi peoples so often mentioned before. This true history shows far more nuance about much of what we thought we knew, and helps shape what we will come to learn further as the saga progresses.
With Books I and II of Noss Saga, the stage was set and our heroes started on their quest. With Book III, the group separates, their quest takes different paths for the same goal, the saving of Noss. Now with Book IV, the actions of the different groups begins to bare fruit. Our heroes are learning, growing, adapting, and being readied by the journey for what lies ahead as the saga builds. The story that unfolds makes it evident that Joaquin Baldwin has created a beautifully sprawling epic that combines Robert Jordan’s storytelling, Phillip Pullman’s sensible details, and J.R.R. Tolkien’s fanciful nature. The world-building, the storytelling, the character design, even the included artwork. It all draws the reader in and leaves them with the desire to read more, see more, know more. Baldwin has done a phenomenal job with all of these facets of the story, and even more. Noss Saga is nothing short of wonderful thus far, and I cannot wait for what lies in store for our heroes and for Noss itself, in what has become a truly sprawling and great epic fantasy series.
This review is based on an early review copy received (which is identical to the final release).
By the time you reach book 4 in a series, things will either be coming together like a perfectly tuned machine or coming apart at the seams. I'm happy to say, Feral Flame is an example of the perfectly tuned machine. At this point, the party has split up and there are multiple threads running through the plot and it all flows quite well.
Something that has become clear by this point of the series is the Noss Saga books are, at their heart, about people trying to do the right thing despite great opposition. Most of the governments on Noss seem to want to emulate The Red Stag despite claiming to oppose him. Its definitely an underlying lesson worth taking inspiration from.
Aside from the characters and the masks, one of the big stars in the series would be the domes. Each one is it's own self contained ecosystem that's been closed off from the outside world. So far I've always felt a lot of eager anticipation when a new dome is entered by the characters to discover whats inside. The Ashen Dome, home of the Bovids, is no disappointment. I'm impressed by how well thought out the diverging societies in the domes are.
Its honestly difficult not to gush in detail about all the events that happen and details crafted into the world, but this is a review and not a synopsis.
If you enjoyed the past 3 books, this is an easy 'Yes' for you. Its not even a gamble. If you're new to the books and this sounds like something that interests you, then read Wolf of Withervale, Masks of the Miscam, Relinquished Realms, and then definitely come back and read this one too.
How well do you know yourself? How secure are you in that image? What are you willing to go through, to do, to sacrifice, to *endure* to maintain that truth (or to discover unknown depths)?
The protagonists of the Noss Saga have surpassed many hurdles on their journey thus far, and the questions I posed above have been rattling around my head since the beginning of the series. Identity, self, and the knowledge and acceptance of both are prominent themes in Noss, and some characters face their mightiest challenges yet. The risk of losing that which makes you who you are is a terrifying prospect indeed, but there are those who can guide you back should you let your heart open to them.
While the wayfarers have been no strangers to dangerous encounters before, the tension and sheer dread in scenes of Feral Flame eclipse what has come prior. In a moment of last resort, Lago subjects himself to his most emotional tribulation yet.
This is not without balance, however, as the whole of the group encounter a clan entirely aware of themselves (who allow the adventurers to open their minds more fully and embrace suppressed desires).
As for the more structural elements of the novel, Feral Flame has the task of following multiple groups across large swathes of the world of Noss. At every junction where I began to wonder what was happening in other quests, a new chapter and perspective shift appeared. I was never left wanting for long and the narrative flowed well between the various parties. Feral Flame is a thoroughly enjoyable read that continues the pattern of excellence of the Noss Saga books.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
This is probably the fastest I’ve yet read through any of the books in the Noss saga. Feral Flame begins right where the events of book 3 left off, and it doesn’t let up from there. There are some incredibly well written and tense moments in this book which led to me spending hours saying to myself I would only read one more chapter. As usual, the balance between action, characters, and worldbuilding is done amazingly well. If there is any character you felt attached to from the previous books, then chances are good you will get to see another side of them in Feral Flame. If you’re returning to this series for the high fantasy, then the world of Noss remains as vibrant as ever. Every new book is a reminder of how much there is to love in this series, and I look forward to seeing where that journey goes next.
This book draws you deeper into a richly-realized fantasy world, exploring some really cool new corners of the world and slowly ratcheting up the stakes. While it's not as propulsively plotted as the previous entries of the series, I especially enjoyed the new perspectives that different characters brought to the central idea of wearing the transformative animal masks. Those goes both for the bovids, who have a rich and complex society that goes in a totally different direction than any of the other dome-dwellers, and for Puuja and Pol, who continue to be really fun bundles of trouble even as they develop in character and skill. Harrowing scenes early on show the power and peril of connecting with one's feral side, and the examination of the Tjardur provides new wrinkles to the central mysteries of aether and threads.
If you've just finished "Relinquished Realms" you don't need to read this review as the cliffhanger at the end of the previous novel will have left you incapable of waiting to see what happens next.
On the other hand, if you're looking to see whether this series holds up now that we're four books in, let me assure you that every novel brings you deeper into the story and characters. Where the previous novel was a fast-paced adventure through new worlds, this latest entry in Baldwin's "Noss Saga" is a more casually paced exploration of his characters as they continue on their journey. That is not to say that there is not peril but it is much more measured in this installment. Now that the party has been split further we get a story told from 5 different perspectives spread across the whole of Noss.
This is an unapologetically queer novel and even among the books so far it stands out for highlighting the power that comes from being authentically yourself.
Disclosure: I received an early review copy of this book.
Returning once again to the world of Noss after the previous installment's riveting cliff hanger was an absolutely wonderful treat! Once I started reading, I did not have a single session that was shorter than three consecutive hours. I ended up finishing my first read through in a late night binge of seven hours straight, as I just could not set the book down once I got to the final third. I am currently giving the book a second read through to see if I can catch anything I might have missed in my ravenous reading through the first time. If you've enjoyed the last few books in the series, I know you'll love this one too!
Joaquín has done it again with another fantastic entry into the Noss Saga. The story picks up right where we left off in the 3rd entry and the pacing is much quicker this time around now that more pieces have fallen into place. That being said, there's still a ton of lore to behold as we continue to explore new worlds and see deeper facets of the characters we've come to be acquainted with. I had a great time with this book and I would hope that you get to experience a similar joy.
Another wonderful entry in the Noss Saga. Joaquín Baldwin does a wonderful job chronicling our heroes tale. Feral Flame is a story of exploration, discovery, and learning in various forms. There were quite a few standout moments in this book, but the thing I loved most was watching our intrepid adventurers grow in their understandings of themselves and the world. I can't wait for our next journey through the world of Noss!
Another book down which brings with it more amazing stories, love, and secrets! But also brings us so close the end of this saga! While I'm excited with every addition to see where the story will eventually lead, it also hurts to know before we know it we'll have to say good bye to these characters and this world. That is how much I've enjoyed reading these books and I still can't wait for the next!
Another compelling entry in the Noss Saga. As before, once I picked up this book I could hardly put it down; Joaquín's storytelling is exciting, gripping, and takes you on a journey of queer discovery, imagination, and growth, all while telling a compelling story about finding out who you are in a world spinning beyond your control. I cannot recommend this book enough. 💙
This fourth book in the series continues the saga. The struggle continues on as the companions travel to a new dome and face newer threats. In the course of events they gain new allies and learn more about themselves. All in all this is an excellent read and the series just keeps getting better. I particularly enjoy meeting the different cultures within each dome that they visit.
Like the previous books in the Noss Saga, once you get started, the book will grab you and refuse to let you go. Joaquin is a master at making me yell swear words in the middle of the night when he ends a chapter on a cliffhanger only to swap perspectives.
My primary love of Feral Flame is part of why I loved Wolf of Withervale and Masks of the Miscam: it takes its time to explore an area in depth, allowing us to spend time there. That's not to say things don't happen, LOTS happens regularly, it feels like things are going too fast at times, and yet we still stay in places long enough to get a deeper understanding of the unique cultures of the domes in question.
And we learn a LOT in Feral Flames. I won't spoil what that is, but suffice to say you won't be disappointed in the least.
While the first three books of the Noss Saga did a great job establishing and progressing the world's cultures, characters, and conflicts, Feral Flame makes it all so much deeper. The worldbuilding and character reveals have left me incredibly excited for what comes next. Gonna have to reread the whole series again and see what these new secrets reveal.