Griffin continues his habit of devoting too many words to backstory, telling us in every book the life history (it seems) of every character. Just about the time a scene gets flowing, Griffin throws in a line or two about this or that character’s history. This wouldn’t be so bad if it happened once and done, but he never misses a chance to tell us that Matt Payne killed a serial rapist or that Jesus Martinez and Charley McFadden took down the man who killed Dutch Moffitt.
Griffin has too many characters in these stories, too. In the real world, police departments are made up of many officers, but in a book, keeping them all straight is a chore that detracts from enjoying the story. Not helping matters is several characters sharing the same first name (Matthew for one). Again, this happens in real life, but it doesn’t make reading this book (or others in the series) any easier. I have now read the first 4 books in the series, and there are still characters I can’t keep straight.
A second problem with this book is it’s slow. Almost the first half of this 426-page novel is set up. I kept wondering when the premise in the back cover blurb – Matt Payne needing protection – was going to happen. It never did.
And that’s where this novel fails epically. Nothing happened throughout all 426 pages.
There was no tension. The reader never felt as if any character was in danger. Except for the vague ill-defined need for protection for Matt Payne – a threat that never materialized – there was no threat to anyone. Several story lines were never really were resolved, only wrapped up in a rush via a bunch of short paragraphs in the last chapter. And the murder of a patrol officer early in the book, which should have been a major component of the story, disappeared except for brief comments here and there.
Quite frankly, this book reads like Griffin was pressured by his publisher to crank one out and this lame effort is the result. If this was the first W. E. B. Griffin book I ever read, it would have been the last. I never would have read another.
So, overall, a book that was a colossal dud. Any author can have an off day, so I’ll give Griffin a chance to redeem himself. But if his next book is no better that this one, he’ll be off my ‘To Read’ list.
Goodreads: Can you tell me why the first two books in the series list John Kevin Dugan as the author while W. E. B. Griffin is listed as the author on the rest? How about a little consistency?