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Colossal
Eric is a hockey goalie with one goal of his hide as much of his sizable presence behind desks, lockers and hockey pads. That is, until a new girl named Marlow arrives at school and can't hide her adoration of the 6'6" bruiser. Both of them are inexperienced in the ways of love, but their attraction is a magnetic force—and soon enough, they're spending their lunch period in the shadows of the library, sating each other's hunger. But why won't Marlow introduce him to her parents? Is she ashamed of his freakish appearance or...is she scared to tell him something?
96 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 15, 2025
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Jessa Kane
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October 23, 2025
Jessa's horniest book to date🤣🤣🤣🤣 This would not be a Jessa Kane book without the Daddy kink and tbh I admire her ability to include the daddy kink where it clearly doesn't belong 🤣
This was hysterical, absolutely ridiculous and so kinky like MY GAWD.
3 stars just for the laughs🤣
(P.S he is colossal everywhere.)
buddy reading with my one and onlyyyyyyyy Cha
This was hysterical, absolutely ridiculous and so kinky like MY GAWD.
3 stars just for the laughs🤣
buddy reading with my one and onlyyyyyyyy Cha
May 2, 2026
2.5 stars
I don’t think Jessa Kane realizes she’s writing about high schoolers 💀🤣
I don’t think Jessa Kane realizes she’s writing about high schoolers 💀🤣
October 17, 2025
LOL!! This shit is BANANAS 🤣
Marlow loves Erics 💦💦💦💦💦
Marlow loves Erics 💦💦💦💦💦
October 17, 2025
We like them THICC!! We like them CHUNKY!! My favorite JK series is BACK with a vengeance! 💦 👅
Brilliantly filthy insta-love SMUT! Innocent corruption teased out by uncontrollable desire & unsuspecting characters. Includes an all time favorite trope with the mmc giant insecure about his size & a sheltered fmc that see’s him as her loving protector.
💦 dirty talk!
💦 she’s a SELFPROCLAIMED cum slut *gulp*
💦 protective mmc that can’t believe his luck
Is it even remotely realistic? Hell NO! 18-year old getting called Daddy lol *smutty side eye* However, for such a short story it doesn’t really matter. I was in a mood for a ridiculous plot!
4.5 ⭐️
high school romance
double virgins
plus size mmc
insta love
breeding kink
Daddy kink
dirty talk
size difference
HEA
Brilliantly filthy insta-love SMUT! Innocent corruption teased out by uncontrollable desire & unsuspecting characters. Includes an all time favorite trope with the mmc giant insecure about his size & a sheltered fmc that see’s him as her loving protector.
💦 dirty talk!
💦 she’s a SELFPROCLAIMED cum slut *gulp*
💦 protective mmc that can’t believe his luck
Is it even remotely realistic? Hell NO! 18-year old getting called Daddy lol *smutty side eye* However, for such a short story it doesn’t really matter. I was in a mood for a ridiculous plot!
4.5 ⭐️
high school romance
double virgins
plus size mmc
insta love
breeding kink
Daddy kink
dirty talk
size difference
HEA
October 16, 2025
Wowza. What is this crack?! 🤣🤭🫣🥵
Look, my rating was solely for the entertainment I got and the hotness and kinkiness delivered by Eric/Colossal (18) and Marlow (18). 😂 I honestly couldn't be bothered by all the other stuff happening in this story. 🤣
This is a novella, and everything basically happened in a span of two days, so don't expect too much, mmmkay? Okay. 😂
Anyway, these two are freaks in the sheets (or wherever they ended up getting it on). 🫣🥵 They're hawt together, and just can't seem to get enough of one another. This is very much insta-lust through and through, so… 🫣🤭
Still, I had fun with it and the way they got the hots for each other. The epilogue was cute too, and it shows them still totally head over heels crazy for each other. 😄
Book info:
- Novella
- Highschool setting
- Huge guy x Petite girl
- Mild daddy kink 😉
- Dual V! 💖
- Sport-ish romance (hockey)
- No cheating, OM/OW, separation
- HEA (7 yrs later, married, and w/ 3 kids)
Look, my rating was solely for the entertainment I got and the hotness and kinkiness delivered by Eric/Colossal (18) and Marlow (18). 😂 I honestly couldn't be bothered by all the other stuff happening in this story. 🤣
This is a novella, and everything basically happened in a span of two days, so don't expect too much, mmmkay? Okay. 😂
Anyway, these two are freaks in the sheets (or wherever they ended up getting it on). 🫣🥵 They're hawt together, and just can't seem to get enough of one another. This is very much insta-lust through and through, so… 🫣🤭
Still, I had fun with it and the way they got the hots for each other. The epilogue was cute too, and it shows them still totally head over heels crazy for each other. 😄
Book info:
- Novella
- Highschool setting
- Huge guy x Petite girl
- Mild daddy kink 😉
- Dual V! 💖
- Sport-ish romance (hockey)
- No cheating, OM/OW, separation
- HEA (7 yrs later, married, and w/ 3 kids)
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October 15, 2025i’m going to find you Jessa, and force you to write like you used to.
October 16, 2025
I’m a huge Jessa Kane fan, but this one fell short for me. You guys know I’ll read anything, and I won’t kink shame, but this one made my nose wrinkle a little. This is a teen fic + Daddy fic. I don’t usually give long reviews on short novellas, but here we are.
Eric ‘Colossal’ Von Hagen (18, virgin, Colossal hockey star) feels more like an ogre than a regular guy. At 6’6”, he towers over all of his classmates and has to order custom size jeans. It’s a regular day at school until he finds a Fairy Tale sitting at his desk.
Marlow (18, virgin, artist) has been homeschooled during her teen years, but now she’s been let out of the attic where her evil stepmother keeps her and girlfriend is ready for the “D”.
The two lovebirds are insta, which is awesome, we learn Marlow is a self-diagnosed cum slut, then there’s some breeding, and a HEA.
SEX: Our crazy virgins have some uncoordinated touching at 27%, some sloppy oral at 46%, and the final deed at 67%. I’m good with teen sex, it was just the Daddy thing + breeding that gave me pause. She’s calling him Daddy in a baby voice, and they actively try to get her pregnant during their first romp. He still lives with his mom and doesn’t have a job!!! In this situation, none of that made sense to me.
MISTAKES: Jessa’s books are notorious for having errors that could be fixed with just ONE proofread. The main thing in this one is Marlow’s stepsisters are talking about THEIR mom but keep saying “stepmother” by mistake. It’s just something annoying. When you write a short novella, there’s no excuse for mistakes like this.
I’m not saying you shouldn’t read it. I’m just saying JK has written much better than this.
I can see the love in her eyes when she looks at me, and I become an immortal warrior in that moment, seeding his woman. I become a confident and dominant version of who I was before, all because she looked at me and saw more.
Eric ‘Colossal’ Von Hagen (18, virgin, Colossal hockey star) feels more like an ogre than a regular guy. At 6’6”, he towers over all of his classmates and has to order custom size jeans. It’s a regular day at school until he finds a Fairy Tale sitting at his desk.
Marlow (18, virgin, artist) has been homeschooled during her teen years, but now she’s been let out of the attic where her evil stepmother keeps her and girlfriend is ready for the “D”.
The two lovebirds are insta, which is awesome, we learn Marlow is a self-diagnosed cum slut, then there’s some breeding, and a HEA.
“Come all over me, Daddy,” ….. I baby talk up at him, nipping at his chin. “I want to be such a bad girl for your cock.”
SEX: Our crazy virgins have some uncoordinated touching at 27%, some sloppy oral at 46%, and the final deed at 67%. I’m good with teen sex, it was just the Daddy thing + breeding that gave me pause. She’s calling him Daddy in a baby voice, and they actively try to get her pregnant during their first romp. He still lives with his mom and doesn’t have a job!!! In this situation, none of that made sense to me.
MISTAKES: Jessa’s books are notorious for having errors that could be fixed with just ONE proofread. The main thing in this one is Marlow’s stepsisters are talking about THEIR mom but keep saying “stepmother” by mistake. It’s just something annoying. When you write a short novella, there’s no excuse for mistakes like this.
I’m not saying you shouldn’t read it. I’m just saying JK has written much better than this.
October 25, 2025
DNF@ 27%. There were some cute moments like Eric nicknaming Marlow Fairy Tale but then there was also lines like this: “that's when I feel it. His hot, gluey come. As soon as it starts splashing and pooling on my belly, I know I've found my fixation. This fluid.. it represents his pleasure. His secrets. It's the sacred seed of life. And I'm the one who made it spurt out.”
October 22, 2025
“I think I’m a come slut.” 🌚
February 16, 2026
1,2 💫 | Encontré el equivalente masculino de «mirenme, soy tan petit», pero de forma opuesta (el vato mide casi 2m).
Y no me hagan hablar de la protagonista y su obsesión con el semen de él 😔🤚
Y no me hagan hablar de la protagonista y su obsesión con el semen de él 😔🤚
January 19, 2026
OMG.. O.O
Okay.. So this short 96 page novella is chock full of story.
A story that is equal parts heartbreaking and hot. I do not know how Ms. Kane puts full tales in such small boxes, but this is definitely her wheelhouse.
If there was such a genre, then this would be tagged as Raunchy YA Erotica. Apparently this is the ONLY type of YA (barely legal) stuff I'm down for reading.. Especially when the 18 years old MCs, are way more mature than their adult counterparts. I'm definitely loving that angle.
So, here is the sweet, erotically intense and down right heartbreaking tale of Marlow and Eric (aka Colossal) Don't worry they have an awesomely amazing HEA. But the abuse and neglect that Marlow has experienced at the hands of her stepmother and her coward a&& father, will have you seeing red. I wanted to beat them both bloody with a Morning Star Flail, then cut off their fingers and toes and put them in a blender and hit Puree.
But I loved the instant connection with Eric and Marlow. I love how protective he is with her and how loving and encouraging she is with him. Their story was great. I loved watching it unfold and spending time with them on their journey. These two are some dirty little birds though, let me tell ya!
They were making some very life altering choices here that normally I would not condone even for a seasoned adult. But given their set of circumstances in this story, and the connection they have, these choices felt organic and lasting. Their HEA proves that as well.. I do so love this story.
I wound up buying it after I completed it through KU.
At the time of this review this book was free on KU or $1.99 for purchase.
Would I recommend?=YES! YES! YES!
Spice?=🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Plot/Plight?=4
MCs?=Yin & Yang 🔥
Ending/Epilogue?=5
Okay.. So this short 96 page novella is chock full of story.
A story that is equal parts heartbreaking and hot. I do not know how Ms. Kane puts full tales in such small boxes, but this is definitely her wheelhouse.
If there was such a genre, then this would be tagged as Raunchy YA Erotica. Apparently this is the ONLY type of YA (barely legal) stuff I'm down for reading.. Especially when the 18 years old MCs, are way more mature than their adult counterparts. I'm definitely loving that angle.
So, here is the sweet, erotically intense and down right heartbreaking tale of Marlow and Eric (aka Colossal) Don't worry they have an awesomely amazing HEA. But the abuse and neglect that Marlow has experienced at the hands of her stepmother and her coward a&& father, will have you seeing red. I wanted to beat them both bloody with a Morning Star Flail, then cut off their fingers and toes and put them in a blender and hit Puree.
But I loved the instant connection with Eric and Marlow. I love how protective he is with her and how loving and encouraging she is with him. Their story was great. I loved watching it unfold and spending time with them on their journey. These two are some dirty little birds though, let me tell ya!
They were making some very life altering choices here that normally I would not condone even for a seasoned adult. But given their set of circumstances in this story, and the connection they have, these choices felt organic and lasting. Their HEA proves that as well.. I do so love this story.
I wound up buying it after I completed it through KU.
At the time of this review this book was free on KU or $1.99 for purchase.
Would I recommend?=YES! YES! YES!
Spice?=🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Plot/Plight?=4
MCs?=Yin & Yang 🔥
Ending/Epilogue?=5
November 7, 2025
tbh i missed Jessa Kane unhinged stories
July 14, 2026
⭐️ 2.5 stars ⭐️
This was so dumb and ridiculous, with the ‘Cinderella-esque’ plot and the cringey dirty talk. But, I love a gentle bigboi and Eric was just huge and sweet and lovable.
I didn’t care for Marlow, but the way Eric adored her and his brain fried whenever she was near? Oh yeah, that was fun.
CW and NSFW info (spoilers):
- Parental abuse
- Mention of parental death & parental abandonment
- Virgin MCs
- Size difference
- Semi-public sex
- Insta-love
- Daddy kink
- Cum kink
- Breeding kink
“Did I come from a fairy tale?” She reaches over and traces the back of my hand with her index finger. “I was wondering the same thing about you.”
This was so dumb and ridiculous, with the ‘Cinderella-esque’ plot and the cringey dirty talk. But, I love a gentle bigboi and Eric was just huge and sweet and lovable.
I feel his sex stiffening against my butt until it’s nearly vertical. Holy moly. Is it supposed to be that massive?
I didn’t care for Marlow, but the way Eric adored her and his brain fried whenever she was near? Oh yeah, that was fun.
“Define normal force. What is its relationship to friction?” “I don’t even know what year it is right now, Fairy Tale.”
CW and NSFW info (spoilers):
- Parental abuse
- Mention of parental death & parental abandonment
- Virgin MCs
- Size difference
- Semi-public sex
- Insta-love
- Daddy kink
- Cum kink
- Breeding kink
December 16, 2025
Could've been 10 times hotter if they hadn't been high school students 😕
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October 16, 2025
“Colossal” is the story of Marlow and Eric.
Soooo…
I love the adoration for big boy heroes and the body positivity this book had- we had a good group of friends and even the stepsisters weren’t bad.
However , HOWEVER the story.. was meh. The heroines backstory and their very teenage lust gave me a bit of ick and I’ve realized these young romances aren’t for me. I don’t know what to say but I skimmed it..
Safe
2.5/5
Soooo…
I love the adoration for big boy heroes and the body positivity this book had- we had a good group of friends and even the stepsisters weren’t bad.
However , HOWEVER the story.. was meh. The heroines backstory and their very teenage lust gave me a bit of ick and I’ve realized these young romances aren’t for me. I don’t know what to say but I skimmed it..
Safe
2.5/5
January 15, 2026
Short, way over the top, but fun, and dirty. HEA.
October 21, 2025
This reminded me of Hefty (the best book Jessa Kane has ever delivered imho) and it was gooooood. Yes, gimme more of this trope, woman!
October 27, 2025
i would like to spend a day in jessa kane’s head and eliminate her knowledge of a daddy kink 🙏🏼
October 23, 2025
they're CUTE!!!! jessa writes for me i've said it before i'll say it again HER BOOKS ARE ME CODED
October 16, 2025
Marlow: “I did some research and now identify as a Cum Slut. I need it like a baby bottle. Do you hate me?”
Eric: “Whoopie!”
Me: Uh oh.
Eric: “Whoopie!”
Me: Uh oh.
April 22, 2026
I looooooooove this series so much.
"Give me 15 more of em right now"
"Give me 15 more of em right now"
February 13, 2026
It’s Cuffing Season!! I need a big boy !!
Why does Jessa know how to tempt us this way??! I loved this book like I’ve loved all the big boy books!! Yes, gimme more!
Why does Jessa know how to tempt us this way??! I loved this book like I’ve loved all the big boy books!! Yes, gimme more!
October 17, 2025
oh how i love thic and bulky men
December 15, 2025
lol this was ridiculous but I’m trying to meet my reading goal… okay.
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May 27, 2026How hot and fun was this??
I read it all in one sitting! I'm such a sucker for these novellas!😍
I read it all in one sitting! I'm such a sucker for these novellas!😍
October 21, 2025
hola, soy Kelly y soy adicta a este tipo de libros 🥴
le doy 4 ⭐ solo porque me hizo reír de lo ridículo que fue la mayoría de veces. pero también debo de decir que en cierto sentido me gustó.
le doy 4 ⭐ solo porque me hizo reír de lo ridículo que fue la mayoría de veces. pero también debo de decir que en cierto sentido me gustó.
October 22, 2025
3.8✨’s
Ms. Kane, please whatever you do keep this series going. Gahlee, these low self-esteem kings are better than these m&m minis I’ve been munching all week since lil red showed up.
I loooove these novellas man, I will sit and giggle and smh for a whole 45 minutes nonstop.
A man that’s down bad for his girl is cool, but a couple down bad for eachother?!?! GAHLEE, I can read these all day everyday.
🩷’d:
•MARLOW!!! 💕
Eric: “…you’re really easy to talk to.” This girl: “I can’t imagine why. I don’t really talk to anyone but the voices in my head.” 🤣
•ERIC❤️❤️❤️
•coffee shop scene
⚠️ + Info:
— Dual POV
— Instalove
— OTT HS Romance
— Dual Virgins🍒
— No: OW/OMD, sharing, cheating, push/pull, separation or 3rd act break up
— HEA: Happily married w 3 little boys & currently trying for another. 🩷
Ms. Kane, please whatever you do keep this series going. Gahlee, these low self-esteem kings are better than these m&m minis I’ve been munching all week since lil red showed up.
I loooove these novellas man, I will sit and giggle and smh for a whole 45 minutes nonstop.
A man that’s down bad for his girl is cool, but a couple down bad for eachother?!?! GAHLEE, I can read these all day everyday.
🩷’d:
•MARLOW!!! 💕
Eric: “…you’re really easy to talk to.” This girl: “I can’t imagine why. I don’t really talk to anyone but the voices in my head.” 🤣
•ERIC❤️❤️❤️
•coffee shop scene
⚠️ + Info:
— Dual POV
— Instalove
— OTT HS Romance
— Dual Virgins🍒
— No: OW/OMD, sharing, cheating, push/pull, separation or 3rd act break up
— HEA: Happily married w 3 little boys & currently trying for another. 🩷
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November 10, 2025
jessa es la reina de este tipo de libros
March 19, 2026
Holy hot damn. The cover almost deterred me from reading this but I’m so glad it didn’t.
It’s a quick novella that is non-stop spice but the plot is kinda sweet too. I won’t lie, I ate it up and have zero regrets👌🏼
4⭐️|5🌶️
It’s a quick novella that is non-stop spice but the plot is kinda sweet too. I won’t lie, I ate it up and have zero regrets👌🏼
4⭐️|5🌶️
October 17, 2025
This is a classic Jessa good time! You know what to expect- crazy insane instalove and spice. As always- amazing and give me more!!
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