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Angels Warriors MC #3
UnBreak This heart
*WARNING - You MUST Read UnKiss Me AND UnTouch Me BEFORE UnBreak This Heart*
After she's betrayed by her husband, Hilary DeVaughn is done. She can't and won't stay in a town where so many bad memories haunt her. Years later, she gets a phone call to come back home for Eden, so she drops everything to return to the place where her heart was shattered. Deciding it's time to completely let go, she hands Mason divorce papers.
Mason "Reaper" Harris has always loved Hilary, but that love quickly fell apart when she slept with another man - or so he thinks. Then Hilary returns, along with her demands for a divorce again. He realizes that, even though he's still furious with her for ruining their relationship, he refuses to let her go.
In this conclusion to the Angels Warriors MC Trilogy - will Angel, Zippo, and Reaper get their women back and finally have their happily ever afters? Or will these couples be forever broken? They all had secrets, some more destructive than others, but will their love be enough to make things right? Or will those secrets tear their hearts - and lives - to shreds?
*All books in this trilogy are 50,000 words and will be combined into ONE paperback*
After she's betrayed by her husband, Hilary DeVaughn is done. She can't and won't stay in a town where so many bad memories haunt her. Years later, she gets a phone call to come back home for Eden, so she drops everything to return to the place where her heart was shattered. Deciding it's time to completely let go, she hands Mason divorce papers.
Mason "Reaper" Harris has always loved Hilary, but that love quickly fell apart when she slept with another man - or so he thinks. Then Hilary returns, along with her demands for a divorce again. He realizes that, even though he's still furious with her for ruining their relationship, he refuses to let her go.
In this conclusion to the Angels Warriors MC Trilogy - will Angel, Zippo, and Reaper get their women back and finally have their happily ever afters? Or will these couples be forever broken? They all had secrets, some more destructive than others, but will their love be enough to make things right? Or will those secrets tear their hearts - and lives - to shreds?
*All books in this trilogy are 50,000 words and will be combined into ONE paperback*
136 pages, ebook
First published July 6, 2015
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Dawn Martens
56 books2,034 followersDawn Martens is a young, spunky Canadian Author. Being a wife to Colin, a mother to three beautiful little girls (Sarah (2007), Grace (2010), and Ava (2014)) and of course best friend to fellow author Glenna Maynard, hasn't stopped this Canadian Firecracker from pursuing her dreams of becoming a writer!
Dawn's number one passion in life is the written word, and she's extremely thankful that she has the ability to share the ramblings from the characters inside of her head with the rest of the world!
She also may or may not have the hugest girl crush on Author Kristen Ashley, who is her personal idol and helped inspire Dawn in the beginning of her Indie career.
Dawn's number one passion in life is the written word, and she's extremely thankful that she has the ability to share the ramblings from the characters inside of her head with the rest of the world!
She also may or may not have the hugest girl crush on Author Kristen Ashley, who is her personal idol and helped inspire Dawn in the beginning of her Indie career.
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January 30, 2017
Well there is avante guard and edgy different and then there is just plain incompetence.
We are looking at the latter here - as the philosophy seems to be write yourself into a plot hole and just kill off the main character and call it edgy instead of actually figuring out a plot line and a redemption that works. Just to clarify, the H abuses and cheats on the h and then she gets shot trying to save his sorry ass. We get an epilogue where the h is dead and the H is happy with her intensive care nurse.
Hopefully the day job isn't writing, people may starve.
We are looking at the latter here - as the philosophy seems to be write yourself into a plot hole and just kill off the main character and call it edgy instead of actually figuring out a plot line and a redemption that works. Just to clarify, the H abuses and cheats on the h and then she gets shot trying to save his sorry ass. We get an epilogue where the h is dead and the H is happy with her intensive care nurse.
Hopefully the day job isn't writing, people may starve.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 6, 2015
**Spoilers, cussing, head explosions**
I haven't been impressed with the first 2 books in the series. Was hoping really that this 3rd was going to bring everything all together and make this whole story a wonderful happily ever after.
I know we were teased that someone might not make it at the end, but I figured it was going to be bad guys or some secondary character that we all fell in love with.
Okay, getting ahead of myself here, let's start at the beginning.
We haveEden Lilly Hilary! who has been in love with Mason since they were children. He bullied her even until he realized she was a hottie then slammed his mouth down on hers when she was talking about going on her first date with someone else and declared in caveman fashion "MINE" (cause yanno, that's so hawt). I strike through the names because they were all alike. All of them seemed to have this trashy bitchy attitude with no filter and everyone finds it absolutely ADORABLE or CUTE
But I'm finding a lot of Martens female leads and important secondary characters are exactly like this. I'm not knocking speaking up for yourself but really, you're in your 30s, it's time to be an adult.
So, they become a statistic and marry after high school (Hilary makes Mason wait a year so she has a year of law school under her belt) ... that's another little bit that I've found I'm having issues with in other stories with lawyer leads.. but it's not a huge issue here. Mason is already becoming embroiled in Satan's Law and being Vic's boy of choice for killing. Get it? It's why he's called "Reaper".
Here's where the story of Hil and Mas get messed up for me. Mason out of no where with no reason begins to believe and beat a horse to death with allegations of Hilary cheating on him. Hilary gets knocked up and Mason isn't pleased. Hilary then loses the baby and Mason is putting club before home so he doesn't come 'round to the hospital when she's there. She goes to Zippo's brother Bryce (who'd been there) to cry about the fact her husband is an ass and she lost her child and Mason confronts her.. and punches her.
He then feels sorry and wants to have sex with his woman who's telling him how she can't have sex yet.. but oh no, he's just so damn convincing (ripping her clothes off) she fakes it while he pummels her from behind on the couch.
This apparently goes on for a bit until an idiotic misconception of Hilary cheating with another male sets him off, he shoves her down a small set of stairs and goes to the clubhouse where he is caught by Hilary not only cheating with a hang around but also beating the shit out of the chicks ass to the point she's crying and screaming for him to stop.
At this point, I'm forcing myself to continue. I can take dark romances and such, but this was getting so over the top I was literally stating "What the fuck" nearly every other page.
So I push through. Could have done without the graphic rape scene. Was that added for a shock or something? I don't know, I just know it was not expected to be laid out in front of me.
We get near the end, the HEA, the moment where all the men realize what assholes they've been, and the women realize what a bunch of screaming bitches they've acted like......
AND THE WRONG PERSON IS KILLED. Yes, I had to put that in caps because are you fucking kidding me?!
And that "wrap up" with viewing down from the clouds and how it all worked out because it was going to be nothing but the same BS for the rest of their lives and blah blah blah blah
That to me personally felt like a cheap out. I'm done. I'm walking away now and it is going to be so hard to continue reading anymore by the author. I don't know, this series left me with a bad taste and headache so for now
I haven't been impressed with the first 2 books in the series. Was hoping really that this 3rd was going to bring everything all together and make this whole story a wonderful happily ever after.
I know we were teased that someone might not make it at the end, but I figured it was going to be bad guys or some secondary character that we all fell in love with.
Okay, getting ahead of myself here, let's start at the beginning.
We have
But I'm finding a lot of Martens female leads and important secondary characters are exactly like this. I'm not knocking speaking up for yourself but really, you're in your 30s, it's time to be an adult.
So, they become a statistic and marry after high school (Hilary makes Mason wait a year so she has a year of law school under her belt) ... that's another little bit that I've found I'm having issues with in other stories with lawyer leads.. but it's not a huge issue here. Mason is already becoming embroiled in Satan's Law and being Vic's boy of choice for killing. Get it? It's why he's called "Reaper".
Here's where the story of Hil and Mas get messed up for me. Mason out of no where with no reason begins to believe and beat a horse to death with allegations of Hilary cheating on him. Hilary gets knocked up and Mason isn't pleased. Hilary then loses the baby and Mason is putting club before home so he doesn't come 'round to the hospital when she's there. She goes to Zippo's brother Bryce (who'd been there) to cry about the fact her husband is an ass and she lost her child and Mason confronts her.. and punches her.
He then feels sorry and wants to have sex with his woman who's telling him how she can't have sex yet.. but oh no, he's just so damn convincing (ripping her clothes off) she fakes it while he pummels her from behind on the couch.
This apparently goes on for a bit until an idiotic misconception of Hilary cheating with another male sets him off, he shoves her down a small set of stairs and goes to the clubhouse where he is caught by Hilary not only cheating with a hang around but also beating the shit out of the chicks ass to the point she's crying and screaming for him to stop.
At this point, I'm forcing myself to continue. I can take dark romances and such, but this was getting so over the top I was literally stating "What the fuck" nearly every other page.
So I push through. Could have done without the graphic rape scene. Was that added for a shock or something? I don't know, I just know it was not expected to be laid out in front of me.
We get near the end, the HEA, the moment where all the men realize what assholes they've been, and the women realize what a bunch of screaming bitches they've acted like......
AND THE WRONG PERSON IS KILLED. Yes, I had to put that in caps because are you fucking kidding me?!
And that "wrap up" with viewing down from the clouds and how it all worked out because it was going to be nothing but the same BS for the rest of their lives and blah blah blah blah
That to me personally felt like a cheap out. I'm done. I'm walking away now and it is going to be so hard to continue reading anymore by the author. I don't know, this series left me with a bad taste and headache so for now
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 6, 2015
What to say about this book/series. I was looking forward to reading this last book in this series. REALLY REALLY hoping the guys would be redeemed but none of them really were. All the guys were basically cheaters, who slept with another woman (or women) to get over (Evie, Lilly or Hilary). Meanwhile, the women deal with life and OF COURSE, they're abstinent. God forbid they actually MOVE ON and find decent and loving men. I really hated the ending of this book. This series was definitely a HUGE disappointment for me.
October 30, 2015
This was just little children playing grown ups.
And what the fuck was up with Eden's dumb ass?
“I sit up in bed instantly. “What’s going on? Is it the kids?”
“No, but I just found out my dad has another kid. She’s only ten months old. I need to go back. I need to make sure she’s safe from him,” she answers hurriedly.
“Eden, maybe you should go to Jasper. He could help you,” I tell her. She doesn’t know about the turnaround in the club, or that Jasper’s the president of it. This is his thing; he protects kids. She should go to him. Lilly’s kept me in the loop about everything going on back home. I’m so damn happy with what the guys have done to the club, changing it from the hellhole it once was to doing something so amazing for others.
“No, no, I can’t. This is where you come in. I need someone I can trust with my kids. I don’t want my father to know about them. I need them safe and away from him. Please, tell me you can take care of them?” she pleads with me.
“You know I will, but are you sure you’ll be able to do that? Can you be away from your kids?”
“It’s what’s best right now. God only knows what my father will do to that baby if I’m not there. I need to do this. Please. I’ll come to you the minute I can with this baby, I promise. I’ll do whatever I can to help you out money wise for child care. ”
“A month passes, then another, and before long it’s been a year. I take a look at the kids playing together in the living room, and I sigh. As much as I love these two, I’m worried about Eden.”
THE SADDEST FUCKING EXCUSE OF A MOTHER AS I MENTIONED IN BOOK 1 AND 2!!!
And... Mason beats Hilary, she forgives him.. her daddy is a lying cheating crook of a priest.. Mason confesses his sins, and daddy priest apologizes to him for having a brat of a daughter!! Hello??? He just told you he beat on your kid not once, but several times!!! Is everyone high in this book?
THE ENDING WAS LUDACRIS AND IT MADE ME VERT ANGRY! WHY did it have to be Hilary, why not Mason? He was an asshole!
And what the fuck was up with Eden's dumb ass?
“I sit up in bed instantly. “What’s going on? Is it the kids?”
“No, but I just found out my dad has another kid. She’s only ten months old. I need to go back. I need to make sure she’s safe from him,” she answers hurriedly.
“Eden, maybe you should go to Jasper. He could help you,” I tell her. She doesn’t know about the turnaround in the club, or that Jasper’s the president of it. This is his thing; he protects kids. She should go to him. Lilly’s kept me in the loop about everything going on back home. I’m so damn happy with what the guys have done to the club, changing it from the hellhole it once was to doing something so amazing for others.
“No, no, I can’t. This is where you come in. I need someone I can trust with my kids. I don’t want my father to know about them. I need them safe and away from him. Please, tell me you can take care of them?” she pleads with me.
“You know I will, but are you sure you’ll be able to do that? Can you be away from your kids?”
“It’s what’s best right now. God only knows what my father will do to that baby if I’m not there. I need to do this. Please. I’ll come to you the minute I can with this baby, I promise. I’ll do whatever I can to help you out money wise for child care. ”
“A month passes, then another, and before long it’s been a year. I take a look at the kids playing together in the living room, and I sigh. As much as I love these two, I’m worried about Eden.”
THE SADDEST FUCKING EXCUSE OF A MOTHER AS I MENTIONED IN BOOK 1 AND 2!!!
And... Mason beats Hilary, she forgives him.. her daddy is a lying cheating crook of a priest.. Mason confesses his sins, and daddy priest apologizes to him for having a brat of a daughter!! Hello??? He just told you he beat on your kid not once, but several times!!! Is everyone high in this book?
THE ENDING WAS LUDACRIS AND IT MADE ME VERT ANGRY! WHY did it have to be Hilary, why not Mason? He was an asshole!
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July 16, 2015NO NO NO
That is the ending? After reading everything up to that point - I think this was the worse ending ever. Mason never paid for the things he did and ended up happily? He was abusive, a cheater, a killer and worse.
I'm done.
Sorry - I can't rate this - I feel like all the time I invested in this series is just wasted now.
UGH
That is the ending? After reading everything up to that point - I think this was the worse ending ever. Mason never paid for the things he did and ended up happily? He was abusive, a cheater, a killer and worse.
I'm done.
Sorry - I can't rate this - I feel like all the time I invested in this series is just wasted now.
UGH
July 7, 2015
What a horrible way to end this series. The plot was awful what she put the poor heroine through was ridiculous. Spoilers:...................
Heroine is abused mentally and verbally by Male Lead. He cheated , murdered children and his own mother and to top it off the author murders the heroine but does her humiliation end there oh no my friends. The male lead has her kept on life support to deliver his son. Then in the epilogue he rides off in the sunset with the NICU nurse. I kid you not! I can't recommend and wish I had never read.
Heroine is abused mentally and verbally by Male Lead. He cheated , murdered children and his own mother and to top it off the author murders the heroine but does her humiliation end there oh no my friends. The male lead has her kept on life support to deliver his son. Then in the epilogue he rides off in the sunset with the NICU nurse. I kid you not! I can't recommend and wish I had never read.
July 6, 2015
Seriously!!!
Ugh! I can't believe I waited for this mess! This is not why I read Romance. All six mc's were ridiculous. And that ending?? Wish I could give a minus rating. Please if you want some bootable characters with a HEA this is not the book to read. Hated the character, the plot,and the simplistic writing.
Ugh! I can't believe I waited for this mess! This is not why I read Romance. All six mc's were ridiculous. And that ending?? Wish I could give a minus rating. Please if you want some bootable characters with a HEA this is not the book to read. Hated the character, the plot,and the simplistic writing.
July 7, 2015
Absolutely hated this book. Ladies, you can try, but you can't make a Hero out of an as#%ole, at least not ones these big! And girlfriend, you ever make enough excuses to stay with these guys, you almost deserve what you get. Just sayin'.
The ridiculousness of the plot line, completely lost my interest. Hating ALL the main characters doesn't recommend it.
I have to wonder if author is truly a mysoginist or is simply trying way to hard to pull at the heartstrings. Either way, I really couldn't handle reading this trilogy and ended up skimming through. I started cheering the 'bad guys', kill them all and let this stinker end!
The ridiculousness of the plot line, completely lost my interest. Hating ALL the main characters doesn't recommend it.
I have to wonder if author is truly a mysoginist or is simply trying way to hard to pull at the heartstrings. Either way, I really couldn't handle reading this trilogy and ended up skimming through. I started cheering the 'bad guys', kill them all and let this stinker end!
July 7, 2015
All of that and Hilary just dies? AND TO TOP IT OFF SHE SEES HER FUTURE AND HE CHEATED ON HER AGAIN?! No. no. I don't and won't accept this. If anyone deserved a shitty ending it was Jasper, Eden or Zippo or Reaper. NOT HILARY. Not goddamned Hilary. I cant give this book more than two stars because I'm angry. I'm so damn angry at the whole book I can barely breathe right now.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 29, 2023
3 ⭐⭐⭐ - OK or decent reads.
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I liked this second reading better. The author always delivers the revenge that I love so much and exes and club whores have bloody and grotesque deaths, which makes my heart warm!
I reread and felt the loss of Hilary again and all the sadness came back with a vengeance.
But their relationship was on the rocks from the first moment he physically assaulted her and repeatedly cheated on her. Their relationship was doomed to failure. But her dying made me sad, because I haven't accepted her death until today.
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==> 2015 <==
A Hilary era meu personagem favorito ao longo da série... mas o "suposto" herói deixou muito a desejar.
Ele agride Hilary física e verbalmente, faz ela saco de pancadas e acusa ela de traição.
Ele não escuta as explicações dela e já chega dando soco na cara dela e depois de uma briga vai transar com as vadias do clube.
Credo!!!!!
A mulher ainda ama o cara depois dele fazer o que fez... Lei Maria da Penha é pouco para ele. Mas num momento de lucidez ela se manda... ainda bem. Mas ela fica celibatária o tempo todo e ele se afunda com as vagabundas do clube.
Em nenhum momento eu torci para os dois ficarem juntos... ele é simplesmente uma bomba relógio prestes a explodir e a arrasar tudo em volta.
Os caras do clube são tão babacas que eles tem que pedir ajuda para outro MC para salvar as mulheres quando elas são sequestradas. Bando de maricas! Nem um é badass suficiente!
E agora vem o pior....
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.
.
.
.
.
SPOILLER
..
Meu personagem preferido de toda série é morto... isso mesmo a Hilary morre e o FDP do herói arruma outra e vive feliz pra sempre!
Muita raiva nesta hora!!!!
Que ódio!!!!
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Hilary was my favorite character throughout the series, but the supposed hero left much to be desired.
Hilary is assaulted by the hero both physically and verbally, makes her punching bag and accuses her of cheating.
He doesn't listen to her explanations and give punch to her face and after a fight going to sleep with the bitches at the Club.
OMG!!!!!
Hillary still loves the guy after him do what he did. Maria da Penha Law is little to him. (it is a law that we have in Brazil to protect battered women by her husband). But in a moment of lucidity she leaves home and moves ... thank God. But she is celibate all the time and he sinks with the whores of the Club.
I really did not want the two to be together ... He is just a time bomb ready to explode and killing all around.
The guys at the Club are so assholes that they have to ask for help to another MC to save their women when they are kidnapped. Bunch of pussies! Neither one is badass enough!
And now comes the worst. ...
.
.
.
.
.
.
SPOILLER
..
My favorite character is murdered. Hilary dies and our hero motherfucker get another woman and lives happily forever!
I was very angry at this time!!
I hate it happened!!
Shit, shit, shit!!!!!
Too dumb to live!
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I liked this second reading better. The author always delivers the revenge that I love so much and exes and club whores have bloody and grotesque deaths, which makes my heart warm!
I reread and felt the loss of Hilary again and all the sadness came back with a vengeance.
But their relationship was on the rocks from the first moment he physically assaulted her and repeatedly cheated on her. Their relationship was doomed to failure. But her dying made me sad, because I haven't accepted her death until today.
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==> 2015 <==
A Hilary era meu personagem favorito ao longo da série... mas o "suposto" herói deixou muito a desejar.
Ele agride Hilary física e verbalmente, faz ela saco de pancadas e acusa ela de traição.
Ele não escuta as explicações dela e já chega dando soco na cara dela e depois de uma briga vai transar com as vadias do clube.
Credo!!!!!
A mulher ainda ama o cara depois dele fazer o que fez... Lei Maria da Penha é pouco para ele. Mas num momento de lucidez ela se manda... ainda bem. Mas ela fica celibatária o tempo todo e ele se afunda com as vagabundas do clube.
Em nenhum momento eu torci para os dois ficarem juntos... ele é simplesmente uma bomba relógio prestes a explodir e a arrasar tudo em volta.
Os caras do clube são tão babacas que eles tem que pedir ajuda para outro MC para salvar as mulheres quando elas são sequestradas. Bando de maricas! Nem um é badass suficiente!
E agora vem o pior....
.
.
.
.
.
.
SPOILLER
..
Meu personagem preferido de toda série é morto... isso mesmo a Hilary morre e o FDP do herói arruma outra e vive feliz pra sempre!
Muita raiva nesta hora!!!!
Que ódio!!!!
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Hilary was my favorite character throughout the series, but the supposed hero left much to be desired.
Hilary is assaulted by the hero both physically and verbally, makes her punching bag and accuses her of cheating.
He doesn't listen to her explanations and give punch to her face and after a fight going to sleep with the bitches at the Club.
OMG!!!!!
Hillary still loves the guy after him do what he did. Maria da Penha Law is little to him. (it is a law that we have in Brazil to protect battered women by her husband). But in a moment of lucidity she leaves home and moves ... thank God. But she is celibate all the time and he sinks with the whores of the Club.
I really did not want the two to be together ... He is just a time bomb ready to explode and killing all around.
The guys at the Club are so assholes that they have to ask for help to another MC to save their women when they are kidnapped. Bunch of pussies! Neither one is badass enough!
And now comes the worst. ...
.
.
.
.
.
.
SPOILLER
..
My favorite character is murdered. Hilary dies and our hero motherfucker get another woman and lives happily forever!
I was very angry at this time!!
I hate it happened!!
Shit, shit, shit!!!!!
Too dumb to live!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 17, 2015
this ending to the series really sucked I can't believe the ending I mean really all these men are cheaters and put their girlfriends/wife through so much shit and its like all is forgotten.
June 19, 2015
I have been sitting on my review for month's - as Dawn's alpha reader I got to experience the trilogy as she was writing it. I have to say this trilogy is Dawn's greatest work to date and she continues to grow with each new story she weaves.
Mason, what can I say about my favorite anti-hero alpha asshole, except that you can't help but feel a connection to him despite his hangups. Hillary is strong and she is fierce- she is a kick ass bitch that doesn't take anyone's shit lying down. The story takes you back into the past as the other books do, but you gain an even deeper understanding of the choices and consequences all the couples have faced.
All the questions you have had leading up to the end of book 2 are answered in this installment. Be prepared for an ugly snot cry and make sure you have a free day to dedicate to reading this, you won't be able to put it down.
Mason, what can I say about my favorite anti-hero alpha asshole, except that you can't help but feel a connection to him despite his hangups. Hillary is strong and she is fierce- she is a kick ass bitch that doesn't take anyone's shit lying down. The story takes you back into the past as the other books do, but you gain an even deeper understanding of the choices and consequences all the couples have faced.
All the questions you have had leading up to the end of book 2 are answered in this installment. Be prepared for an ugly snot cry and make sure you have a free day to dedicate to reading this, you won't be able to put it down.
July 7, 2015
I'm sorry but the end just pissed me off!!! Mason should have been the one who died, the guy was a fucking asshole! And then he becomes the perfect husband for his new wife? That just suck ass!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 14, 2016
Mason was a low life psychopath with no redeemable qualities who caused misery and death for every life he encountered. His character never seemed truly repentant about the way he treated his wife, other characters or his life choices. Unfortunately, he was in good company with Jasper the Junkie and Ziplock or whatever his nickname is.
These are the guys that you pay off to stop seeing your daughter, sister, niece, cousin, mother and grandmother.
These miscreants are not anti-heroes, they are misogynistic, conceited, idiotic males (can't bring myself refer to these characters as men) who were utterly useless to the heroines when the stuff hits the fan. This whole series was a case study for the type of males and friendships to avoid.
These are the guys that you pay off to stop seeing your daughter, sister, niece, cousin, mother and grandmother.
These miscreants are not anti-heroes, they are misogynistic, conceited, idiotic males (can't bring myself refer to these characters as men) who were utterly useless to the heroines when the stuff hits the fan. This whole series was a case study for the type of males and friendships to avoid.
January 13, 2018
This is the third book in this series. Make sure you read Unkiss Me and Untouch Me before you start on this book.
This is Mason and Hilary's story although with a whoop of joy we do get to read about the other couples we met in previous books.
I'm not gonna go into the storyline as I don't wanna spoil it. I will say I read this in one sitting. It's an unputdownable book and my favourite of the series. Saved the best til last. Great roller coaster of emotions the author took me on. Loved it.
If your looking for an MC series then I highly recommend this series. Ill definitely be keeping these on my kindle for a re- read.
This is Mason and Hilary's story although with a whoop of joy we do get to read about the other couples we met in previous books.
I'm not gonna go into the storyline as I don't wanna spoil it. I will say I read this in one sitting. It's an unputdownable book and my favourite of the series. Saved the best til last. Great roller coaster of emotions the author took me on. Loved it.
If your looking for an MC series then I highly recommend this series. Ill definitely be keeping these on my kindle for a re- read.
January 11, 2016
i want to say that this was a book i wanted because of couple, mason and Hillary. so many misunderstandings..and it just seemed like it was going to be a great story, and also the conclusion to this series..and it was a good book and the story line was great...but I'm not happy about the ending...im not happy about mason and Hillary story....this was not the way to end it..i know i have to be realistic its an MC book..but i didn't see that coming..and im done with this series, and the spin-offs that come with it.
July 10, 2015
After all the shit she's been thru u kill her off??? really!!! it would've gotten a 3 stars if it wasn't for that. Seriously one of the guys should've died for being Sooo freaking stupid but Hilary out of all of them deserved her happy ever after. I'm totally done!
July 7, 2015
at first I loved this series I really did but this last book didn't sit well with me. I hate writing negative reviews and I tried to love this book I really did but I just couldn't
July 7, 2015
DNF after the first time MASON punched her....cheater, asshole, abuser, rapist, murderer...need i go on?
I WISH I COULD UNREAD THESE BOOKS
I WISH I COULD UNREAD THESE BOOKS
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 11, 2015
*** Gifted for an honest Review as part of the release tour ***
Warning... over 18+, if you are not a lover of books containing Rape, sodomy and violence against women then this book is not for you.
The series needs to be read in order.
I give the book 2 stars - I hate giving low rates but I have to be fair, since I rated Book 1 and 2 with a 3 star and this book - well it did not deliver what I wanted in an ending of a series. And to be perfectly honest, by the end I was quitepissed off disappointed in the end.
So to my thoughts on the third book overall: I would probably given up with this book if I didn't have the curiosity of a cat, having had lots of questions still unanswered after books 1 UnKiss Me and 2 UnLove Me and I also hate to not finish a book, as I realise that the authors have given blood sweat and tears to deliver their finished books.
This 3 part Novella series started of with a good premise, yes there was violence in the book but it was balanced with the determination of the main character to save her sister and stand up to the brute of a father they had, and the friendship between the 3 girls from childhood, growing in a rough poor town was a great start.
But I am sad to say for me it has ended in my feeling vaguely cheated. Now I don't do spoiler reviews so I can't and won't say why, but I am very unsure with the ending of this book... After a book being extremely no holds barred, crude, violent - it ended up where I thought I had mistakenly started to read a fantasy book!
The Characters: By the end of this series I have come to the conclusion that the men were all shallow hypocritical violent morons, and the girls well - they obviously had low self esteem and were both naive and selfish in their actions.
These childhood friends who are now meeting the repercussions of mistrust, Secrets and lies are now dealing with failed relationships and yet more secrets. But this book is just one horrid scene to the next, I don't remember one nice thing about it.
I have gone from thinking in Book 1 that the girls were strong and loyal to each other, to at the end realising that they were blind in their loyalty to keeping Eden's secret... that Eden was above all very selfish to expect her friends to keep her confidence above their relationships with their men.
And the men... well really did any of them deserve the devotion these girls gave them - Not really! They were in an MC and I am sorry but that life - does it really promote love & faithfulness - NO. They were all quite happy to be dipping their wicks in what ever skirt bent over!
Now out of the 3 girls - I thought Hilary had the most brains, after all she went to College and gained a Law Degree? But after reading this book, I am not so sure.
I can't see the logic in keeping the secrets she kept... OK for a while but for as long as she did?
Hilary put up with a lot of crap from Reaper, and even though they were so in love, at the first sign of trouble Reaper turned into a suspicious, cold hearted asshole, mentioning him, I didn't like him much in any of the books and in the end he was the most dis-likable character out of the 3 male main characters to me. There was no excuse for hitting a woman! And why the author decided he deserved the ending he got I don't know.
No OK I know MC books are not all hearts and flowers, but this one came over so crude, the language is course, sex... too much sex! these characters are supposed to 'Love' these girls but the sex is just fucking, the women all there to be used for the guys pleasure, I didn't feel any love in these scenes.
The characters did not evolve, in fact they felt very one dimensional. By the end I had a hard time liking any of the characters.
The blurb said that Reaper always loved Hilary, BUT I am sorry I never saw any love, I saw possessiveness, domination and arrogance. And why the heck the 'Pastor' would bless his daughter dating him was beyond me... although in the end the pastors morals are quite questionable!
In this conclusion the 'Unknown' threat is finally revealed, one of 'Unknowns' shows his true psychotic colours, and that scene for me was too much...
I will commend the author for one thing, When she reveals one of the 'Unknowns' I was so surprised, and I can normally pick out the twists. BUT what that character did in the end... Mmmm NOT NICE! that's when I had enough, and the ending just went into the twilight zone for me... and ended it being a 2 star rating.
If you like Asshole men and women who obviously like being treated like trash then you may want to read the series. Take a good measure of the reviews and make your own decision as after all some loved it others hated it.
Warning... over 18+, if you are not a lover of books containing Rape, sodomy and violence against women then this book is not for you.
The series needs to be read in order.
I give the book 2 stars - I hate giving low rates but I have to be fair, since I rated Book 1 and 2 with a 3 star and this book - well it did not deliver what I wanted in an ending of a series. And to be perfectly honest, by the end I was quite
So to my thoughts on the third book overall: I would probably given up with this book if I didn't have the curiosity of a cat, having had lots of questions still unanswered after books 1 UnKiss Me and 2 UnLove Me and I also hate to not finish a book, as I realise that the authors have given blood sweat and tears to deliver their finished books.
This 3 part Novella series started of with a good premise, yes there was violence in the book but it was balanced with the determination of the main character to save her sister and stand up to the brute of a father they had, and the friendship between the 3 girls from childhood, growing in a rough poor town was a great start.
But I am sad to say for me it has ended in my feeling vaguely cheated. Now I don't do spoiler reviews so I can't and won't say why, but I am very unsure with the ending of this book... After a book being extremely no holds barred, crude, violent - it ended up where I thought I had mistakenly started to read a fantasy book!
The Characters: By the end of this series I have come to the conclusion that the men were all shallow hypocritical violent morons, and the girls well - they obviously had low self esteem and were both naive and selfish in their actions.
These childhood friends who are now meeting the repercussions of mistrust, Secrets and lies are now dealing with failed relationships and yet more secrets. But this book is just one horrid scene to the next, I don't remember one nice thing about it.
I have gone from thinking in Book 1 that the girls were strong and loyal to each other, to at the end realising that they were blind in their loyalty to keeping Eden's secret... that Eden was above all very selfish to expect her friends to keep her confidence above their relationships with their men.
And the men... well really did any of them deserve the devotion these girls gave them - Not really! They were in an MC and I am sorry but that life - does it really promote love & faithfulness - NO. They were all quite happy to be dipping their wicks in what ever skirt bent over!
Now out of the 3 girls - I thought Hilary had the most brains, after all she went to College and gained a Law Degree? But after reading this book, I am not so sure.
I can't see the logic in keeping the secrets she kept... OK for a while but for as long as she did?
Hilary put up with a lot of crap from Reaper, and even though they were so in love, at the first sign of trouble Reaper turned into a suspicious, cold hearted asshole, mentioning him, I didn't like him much in any of the books and in the end he was the most dis-likable character out of the 3 male main characters to me. There was no excuse for hitting a woman! And why the author decided he deserved the ending he got I don't know.
No OK I know MC books are not all hearts and flowers, but this one came over so crude, the language is course, sex... too much sex! these characters are supposed to 'Love' these girls but the sex is just fucking, the women all there to be used for the guys pleasure, I didn't feel any love in these scenes.
The characters did not evolve, in fact they felt very one dimensional. By the end I had a hard time liking any of the characters.
The blurb said that Reaper always loved Hilary, BUT I am sorry I never saw any love, I saw possessiveness, domination and arrogance. And why the heck the 'Pastor' would bless his daughter dating him was beyond me... although in the end the pastors morals are quite questionable!
In this conclusion the 'Unknown' threat is finally revealed, one of 'Unknowns' shows his true psychotic colours, and that scene for me was too much...
I will commend the author for one thing, When she reveals one of the 'Unknowns' I was so surprised, and I can normally pick out the twists. BUT what that character did in the end... Mmmm NOT NICE! that's when I had enough, and the ending just went into the twilight zone for me... and ended it being a 2 star rating.
If you like Asshole men and women who obviously like being treated like trash then you may want to read the series. Take a good measure of the reviews and make your own decision as after all some loved it others hated it.
January 3, 2016
What a book AMAZING
Hilary an Mason have been through a very rocky road they r both very strong an stubborn they have been together since they were in high school they both luv each other so much but Mason get to deep in the club an it starts takin over his life an things start turnin shit for them he accused Hilary of cheating when she would never do that she luvs him so much but she is hidin so many things that the secrets get to much for her there is just so many things goin against them Mason is just so hard on Hilary the things he does to her really kills me she doesn't deserve what he does to her I know he is in a dark place but she stood by him this is where I couldn't stand Mason I would of punch him so hard Hilary could do so much better but I still like them together I know that sounds weird
This book had my in tears the last 20% was so hard I couldn't believe what happened I really didn't see it happening I was angry an sad I didn't want that to happen but I was delighted with the way every thing else worked out I was a lil worried after read the first book with way it ended but I have to say every book just got better an better it's a really good series these were the first books I 've read by this author but it won't b the last it was so good like the rest of the books in this series they r super hot the sexy time was steamy there so hot together al 3 of these couples now how to turn up the heat there's nothing like a sexy biker showin his moves in the bedroom or wherever he wants to ;) i can't wait for more of the book that the author mentioned I m lookin forward to them I highly recommend this book an series but u really need to read the other books first an in order or it will just not make sense god I m goin to miss this series an characters I 've enjoyed them so much xxx
Hilary an Mason have been through a very rocky road they r both very strong an stubborn they have been together since they were in high school they both luv each other so much but Mason get to deep in the club an it starts takin over his life an things start turnin shit for them he accused Hilary of cheating when she would never do that she luvs him so much but she is hidin so many things that the secrets get to much for her there is just so many things goin against them Mason is just so hard on Hilary the things he does to her really kills me she doesn't deserve what he does to her I know he is in a dark place but she stood by him this is where I couldn't stand Mason I would of punch him so hard Hilary could do so much better but I still like them together I know that sounds weird
This book had my in tears the last 20% was so hard I couldn't believe what happened I really didn't see it happening I was angry an sad I didn't want that to happen but I was delighted with the way every thing else worked out I was a lil worried after read the first book with way it ended but I have to say every book just got better an better it's a really good series these were the first books I 've read by this author but it won't b the last it was so good like the rest of the books in this series they r super hot the sexy time was steamy there so hot together al 3 of these couples now how to turn up the heat there's nothing like a sexy biker showin his moves in the bedroom or wherever he wants to ;) i can't wait for more of the book that the author mentioned I m lookin forward to them I highly recommend this book an series but u really need to read the other books first an in order or it will just not make sense god I m goin to miss this series an characters I 've enjoyed them so much xxx
July 9, 2015
Bloody hell woman, what have you done to me....tut tut Dawn I'm soon upset, just why? Nope don't answer that because I know why, I just don't have to like it. Don't get me wrong I absolutely love this book and my friends should defiantly read this series if they haven't already. As a whole the series is intricately done, weaving from different characters POV's all written roughly about the same time as each couple are introduced within each book.
So much lost time between Hilary & Reaper and I really felt the ups & downs in their relationship, you know I thought reaper was just a complete arsehole until a certain point and then it changes. This had me in tears so be warned have a tissue ready.....
So much lost time between Hilary & Reaper and I really felt the ups & downs in their relationship, you know I thought reaper was just a complete arsehole until a certain point and then it changes. This had me in tears so be warned have a tissue ready.....
July 20, 2015
An ending I will not forget...
This is the third in the Angels Warriors MC series and highlights the final couple which have been included in the continuous stories so far. Definitely read up on the first installments, if you haven't already, as this story builds on the previous ones.
Hilary DeVaughn has been in love with Mason "Reaper" Harris for a long time. Enough to have married him at the first opportunity. Once again though, secrets on both sides have their relationship heading for disaster as the lies mount up until the inevitable breakup. Ending in unsigned divorce papers, things between them couldn't be more up in the air.
With their friends trying to reconcile their issues, it seems Hilary and Mason will have an opportunity to do the same as they are also reunited after a long separation. Hilary is still a strong woman, an accomplished lawyer, and is determined to find closure in their relationship, one way or another. Once again, the first half of the book is providing a fresh perspective on events in the past, forming the building blocks of Hilary and Mason's current situation as well as those of their friends and family.
While I thought the drama threshold had been reached a long time ago, the ceiling is blown off the roof in this emotional climax to all three relationship stories. While focusing on Hilary and Mason, Eden and Angel, as well as Lilly and Zippo, are given their moment of closure.
I found this the most dark and disturbing of all the installments with an ending that answered most questions but some in a very surprising way. And the surprises were not all welcome. The twists and turns continued here with some violent scenes that, while not out of place in an MC book, were certainly some of the most brutal.
The whole series was well-written and, while some of the plot lines were not to my taste, the author certainly knew how to keep me glued to the page until the unsettling end. ~ Diane, 3.5 stars
This is the third in the Angels Warriors MC series and highlights the final couple which have been included in the continuous stories so far. Definitely read up on the first installments, if you haven't already, as this story builds on the previous ones.
Hilary DeVaughn has been in love with Mason "Reaper" Harris for a long time. Enough to have married him at the first opportunity. Once again though, secrets on both sides have their relationship heading for disaster as the lies mount up until the inevitable breakup. Ending in unsigned divorce papers, things between them couldn't be more up in the air.
With their friends trying to reconcile their issues, it seems Hilary and Mason will have an opportunity to do the same as they are also reunited after a long separation. Hilary is still a strong woman, an accomplished lawyer, and is determined to find closure in their relationship, one way or another. Once again, the first half of the book is providing a fresh perspective on events in the past, forming the building blocks of Hilary and Mason's current situation as well as those of their friends and family.
While I thought the drama threshold had been reached a long time ago, the ceiling is blown off the roof in this emotional climax to all three relationship stories. While focusing on Hilary and Mason, Eden and Angel, as well as Lilly and Zippo, are given their moment of closure.
I found this the most dark and disturbing of all the installments with an ending that answered most questions but some in a very surprising way. And the surprises were not all welcome. The twists and turns continued here with some violent scenes that, while not out of place in an MC book, were certainly some of the most brutal.
The whole series was well-written and, while some of the plot lines were not to my taste, the author certainly knew how to keep me glued to the page until the unsettling end. ~ Diane, 3.5 stars
January 29, 2025
Suuuuuuuuuper soapy final full-length installment of the Angel’s Warriors series. This book landed the plane on some dangling story lines and 2 of the 3 h’s in this series found HEAs. This book was harder for me to read because of the H’s physical abuse of the h…never a good sign of a healthy match.
This book scratched an angst-lite itch. I pretty much committed by picking up the first in the series. But now I’ve had my fill of soapy MC cheating tales for a bit and will turn my attention back to my ridiculous TBR!
This book scratched an angst-lite itch. I pretty much committed by picking up the first in the series. But now I’ve had my fill of soapy MC cheating tales for a bit and will turn my attention back to my ridiculous TBR!
July 14, 2015
Omg!! To much going on!!!
Stupid me bought all three books without reading the first one first, never again!! There was so much going on and cheating out the ass!! Wow!! Don't get these if you don't like cheating and flat out gore killing!! Sorry but they sucked for me.
Stupid me bought all three books without reading the first one first, never again!! There was so much going on and cheating out the ass!! Wow!! Don't get these if you don't like cheating and flat out gore killing!! Sorry but they sucked for me.
August 13, 2015
Royally pissed off...what kind of ending was that?? If anything Mason shouldve died since he was the biggest prick!! && Hillary should have had Masons ending! He ends up being the best of the best...bleh
June 1, 2015
Review for series to come...
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October 4, 2024The conclusion to the Angel’s Warrior’s storyline. I skipped the first book because I disliked Eden and wasn’t really interested in Hilary and Mason/Reaper’s story (because I heard it was a nightmare), so I really just skipped past the flashback to get the current timeline. (where we left off with the kidnapping)
Bottom Line- This was a skim read to finish the series. If you’ve invested into all three books… you might be PISSED cuz I HATE it when author’s do this and knew going in, so I just skipped to the end which was ridiculous. Hangman was like a villain caricature, so so so silly. But 5 out of 6 got their HEA’s and the author cleaned house with the OW. I do kind of like how she just kills them all off, nice and tidy.
Bottom Line- This was a skim read to finish the series. If you’ve invested into all three books… you might be PISSED cuz I HATE it when author’s do this and knew going in, so I just skipped to the end which was ridiculous. Hangman was like a villain caricature, so so so silly. But 5 out of 6 got their HEA’s and the author cleaned house with the OW. I do kind of like how she just kills them all off, nice and tidy.
July 7, 2015
~*~Obsessed by books arc given in exchange for an honest review~*~
"Eden has given up so much. It can't end like this for her, for any of us. We have been through hell and back. We will get out of this; I just wish I knew how."
The final perspective in the Angel MC series we relive the chain of events from Hilary's POV as she tells her side to this heart breaking gut wrenchingcrollercoaster ride of teenage love, high school romance and adult tragedy. Six individuals brought together as friends, bonded through experience and hurt, strengthened in love and pain are finally ready to face their pasts and deal with their ghosts.
Mason and Hilary fall in love as children, marry young and doubts force them apart as they take a wrong turn in their relationship. Personal loss causes a rift and Mason dives in to club life quickly earning his club name of Reaper. Hilary wants to persue her career working long hours to qualify as a lawyer and Mason finds himself immersed in the darker side of the MC. Secrets and poor judgements lead to ten years apart, during which neither of them can move on, constantly haunted by the should haves/would haves.
The actions of all three couples are viewed through Hilary's eyes and we gain a better understanding of the impact of choices, decisions, secrets and promises kept. The bonds of friendship are tested to their limits pushing the boundaries of love to the edge of endurance. This is the gripping finale of the servicees. Will Hilary and Reaper overcome their trust issues, can they forgive the secrets of the past? Can they accept the people they have become and learn to love one another for who they now are? Can Angel move past the years of hurt and accept Edens reasoning, understand her motives and see through the loss to embrace the love of his life? Will Lilly and Zippo ever manage to deal with the living proof of his double life, a lasting reminder of his infidelity?
Not everyone is who they appear to be and as we found out in book two there is a hidden agenda for some. Can our favourite members of Angel MC figure things out in time to save the day and get their girl? The plot thickens and the thirst for power and revenge is unquenchable, pushing people to extreme measures. This book had big fat ugly tears roll down my cheeks, the writing was emotive and tender. It touches that what if? nerve and makes us realise that it's never too late and to live each day as if it's your last. The truth may have set them all free but hindsight is a wonderful thing. Can our sassy strong ladies get their guys? Can our alpha males see past their hurts to embrace and win back the women they love? This is a story of love, friendship and forgiveness.
A five star cry ugly read.
"Eden has given up so much. It can't end like this for her, for any of us. We have been through hell and back. We will get out of this; I just wish I knew how."
The final perspective in the Angel MC series we relive the chain of events from Hilary's POV as she tells her side to this heart breaking gut wrenchingcrollercoaster ride of teenage love, high school romance and adult tragedy. Six individuals brought together as friends, bonded through experience and hurt, strengthened in love and pain are finally ready to face their pasts and deal with their ghosts.
Mason and Hilary fall in love as children, marry young and doubts force them apart as they take a wrong turn in their relationship. Personal loss causes a rift and Mason dives in to club life quickly earning his club name of Reaper. Hilary wants to persue her career working long hours to qualify as a lawyer and Mason finds himself immersed in the darker side of the MC. Secrets and poor judgements lead to ten years apart, during which neither of them can move on, constantly haunted by the should haves/would haves.
The actions of all three couples are viewed through Hilary's eyes and we gain a better understanding of the impact of choices, decisions, secrets and promises kept. The bonds of friendship are tested to their limits pushing the boundaries of love to the edge of endurance. This is the gripping finale of the servicees. Will Hilary and Reaper overcome their trust issues, can they forgive the secrets of the past? Can they accept the people they have become and learn to love one another for who they now are? Can Angel move past the years of hurt and accept Edens reasoning, understand her motives and see through the loss to embrace the love of his life? Will Lilly and Zippo ever manage to deal with the living proof of his double life, a lasting reminder of his infidelity?
Not everyone is who they appear to be and as we found out in book two there is a hidden agenda for some. Can our favourite members of Angel MC figure things out in time to save the day and get their girl? The plot thickens and the thirst for power and revenge is unquenchable, pushing people to extreme measures. This book had big fat ugly tears roll down my cheeks, the writing was emotive and tender. It touches that what if? nerve and makes us realise that it's never too late and to live each day as if it's your last. The truth may have set them all free but hindsight is a wonderful thing. Can our sassy strong ladies get their guys? Can our alpha males see past their hurts to embrace and win back the women they love? This is a story of love, friendship and forgiveness.
A five star cry ugly read.
July 7, 2015
3.5 Stars
UnBreak This Heart is Mason and Hilary's story, however we are still involved with all other couples and doings of the MC. Dawn Martens once again takes us to the past, then back to the present to catch up with book two.
I was a fan of Mason (Reaper) in the previous books, sure he was a bit of a moody a-hole at times, but in his own book he's a real piece of work that didn't deserve any woman. Hilary and Mason were high school sweethearts, married after she graduated and now trying to make things work while he's in the MC and she's getting through law school.
Before the MC was turned around it was pretty rough and with the nickname Reaper, you can only guess what Mason's job was. Having a hard time dealing with the after effects of it, Mason would come home and take his frustrations out on Hilary. He was a possessive, abusive jerk. Not the type of alpha I find attractive. Sure there is a jerk that can redeem himself, however Mason was bad and only got worse. I was shocked that after all he's done, Hilary even thought about taking him back. Irritating.
So while we are learning all about Mason and Hilary, there is still Jasper (Angel) and Eden to keep track of as well as Vinny (Zippo) and Lily. Of course they are both a mess with Eden's big secret and Vinny's cheating ways. The story starts to get a bit convoluted and takes a turn that I found a little ridiculous, especially with the timeline in which it happened.
The first two books of this series really kept my attention, but this third book seemed a bit scattered and didn't make much sense at some points. I disliked the way things ended up for all of the couples in their individual epilogues.
Reviewed for Renee Entress's Blog.
UnBreak This Heart is Mason and Hilary's story, however we are still involved with all other couples and doings of the MC. Dawn Martens once again takes us to the past, then back to the present to catch up with book two.
I was a fan of Mason (Reaper) in the previous books, sure he was a bit of a moody a-hole at times, but in his own book he's a real piece of work that didn't deserve any woman. Hilary and Mason were high school sweethearts, married after she graduated and now trying to make things work while he's in the MC and she's getting through law school.
Before the MC was turned around it was pretty rough and with the nickname Reaper, you can only guess what Mason's job was. Having a hard time dealing with the after effects of it, Mason would come home and take his frustrations out on Hilary. He was a possessive, abusive jerk. Not the type of alpha I find attractive. Sure there is a jerk that can redeem himself, however Mason was bad and only got worse. I was shocked that after all he's done, Hilary even thought about taking him back. Irritating.
So while we are learning all about Mason and Hilary, there is still Jasper (Angel) and Eden to keep track of as well as Vinny (Zippo) and Lily. Of course they are both a mess with Eden's big secret and Vinny's cheating ways. The story starts to get a bit convoluted and takes a turn that I found a little ridiculous, especially with the timeline in which it happened.
The first two books of this series really kept my attention, but this third book seemed a bit scattered and didn't make much sense at some points. I disliked the way things ended up for all of the couples in their individual epilogues.
Reviewed for Renee Entress's Blog.
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