Grumpy X sunshine, he falls first, broken boy hockey romance with found family
4.25⭐️ 2.5🌶️ ARC REVIEW: SCORING THE PUCKING GOAL by Tracy Lorraine. This is a slow burn done right. 🫶🏻 This is book 3 in the LA Vipers hockey 🏒 series. Tracy knows how to write slow-burn tension with solid character development and delicious spice. 👏🏻 It’s a bit lengthy but trust me - the payoff is worth it in the end. 🤌🏻 If you’re looking for a hockey romance with a grumpy broken boy that’s soft only for her, he’s obsessed/falls first vibes, found family, and an FMC getting back her groove, then you will love this.
Freya Price just got hired as a personal chef 👩🏻🍳 for Cole Hansley, the broody goalie for the LA Vipers. He calls her ‘Whirlwind’ - she comes into his life like a whirlwind, she overthinks everything, and blurts out whatever she’s thinking (which he finds endearing). He likes peace and quiet, likes his own company (which Freya thinks is lonely), doesn’t give girls his number, and no girl has ever been in his apartment except for Freya but he’s softer and more approachable with Freya. Going from foster home to foster home, he’s guarded and cynical because he’s been burned and thinks everyone always leaves. 😢 He keeps people at arm’s length/on the periphery (even his teammates) because it’s safer. My heart just aches for him as a lost little boy without a home and family. He’s never had anyone come to his games 🥺 but Freya tells him she will come to every home game and he will have ‘family’ there. 💚
She’s self-conscious since her last painful breakup/heartbreak - she wants to be like the old Freya - strong and independent. While she’s attracted to him, she’s trying to gain back some confidence (which this job is helping her to do) and she wants to maintain professional boundaries. He’s never been on a date/no serious relationship (just casual hookups), and he usually likes to go home alone after hockey practice but now finds himself happy to see Freya and eat meals with her. He doesn’t confide in anyone about his childhood but he slowly starts trusting Freya and telling her that he didn’t have parents or a family like her growing up, and that nobody has ever loved him. He’s terrified of being abandoned because he’s not enough. Yet still he’s a good guy, a gentleman (always insists on opening her car door), and when they do give into their attraction, he doesn’t push or rush her, and he lets her set the pace.
❤️ His teammates’ nickname for him is Handsy
❤️ gray sweatpants 🚨 and backwards hat 🧢
❤️ The slow-burn tension…the touches, grazes, his hand on the small of her back, his hand on her thigh in the car 🤌🏻
❤️ Jersey moment 🫶🏻
❤️ Slow burn but when the spice hits…dang. All at once we get: he talks 😮💨 her through it, ‘good girl’, ‘eyes on me’ 👀, he 💦 in his pants 👖, licks his fingers clean 👅, kitchen fun 🐱
Favorite quotes:
“For the first time, possibly ever, I want to tell you. I want you to know me. The real me. All the ugly bits that make me the person I am today."
"There's nothing ugly about you," I assure
him.
‘Freya is too good for the likes of me. To the world, I might put on a good show, but underneath it all, I'm just a lost, broken, lonely little boy desperate to find love.’
“I wanted to make my girl breakfast. I can rest later."
"Your girl?"
"Uh...I'd like you to be, if that's okay with you."
How is this giant of a man so freaking soft
and cute?
"I know you're looking.”
"You're wearing gray sweatpants. Of course I'm looking."
"Knowing that you're watching me while wearing my name across your shoulders like you own me does things to me."
"Like I own you? I'm pretty sure most players see it the other way around.”
"I'm not most players. No matter what happens here, I'll never own you. You're your own woman who is free to do as you please. Me, however? I'm yours. Pretty sure I have been for weeks now."
"Thank you, Freya. Thank you for taking a chance on me. Thank you for being there, for supporting me, for becoming my family." 🥹
Read this if you like:
*Hockey romance
*Grumpy X sunshine
*Goalie MMC
*Chef FMC
*Boss X employee
*Slow burn
*He falls first
*Opposites attract
*Secret past/hidden trauma
*Broken boy
*Found family
Content warning: parental abandonment, foster care
Next up is book 4 - Faking the Pucking Shot - Rett’s story
Thank you to Tracy Lorraine and Deviant Hearts PR for the chance to read this early.