Fuyumi Ono (小野 不由美, Ono Fuyumi) is a Japanese novelist who is best known for writing the Twelve Kingdoms (十二国記, Juuni Kokuki) series, on which a popular anime is based. Her name after marriage is Fuyumi Uchida (内田不由美, Uchida Fuyumi), but she writes under her maiden name.
Ono was born in Nakatsu, Ōita, Kyūshū in 1960. She graduated from Ōtani University in Kyōto with a degree in Buddhist Studies, and in 1988 was employed by the publisher Kōdansha. Her debut story is titled Sleepless on Birthday Eve.
Ono is married to Naoyuki Uchida (内田直行, Uchida Naoyuki), a mystery novelist who writes under the pseudonym Yukito Ayatsuji (綾辻行人 , Ayatsuji Yukito).
Before she started work on Twelve Kingdoms, Fuyumi Ono wrote The Demonic Child (魔性の子), a horror novel about a boy from another world. She later worked certain events from this novel into the Twelve Kingdoms series. Short stories set in the various kingdoms include: Kasho, Toei, Shokan, Kizan and Jogetsu. In February, 2008, the first new Twelve Kingdoms short story, Hisho no Tori (丕緒の鳥) was published in Shinchosha's Yomyom magazine.
According to an interview at the Anime News Network, she is "currently rewriting a girls' horror series (she) wrote long ago."
This review was for the Tokyopop edition and will be update once I've reread the Sevenseas version
If a story has no romance whatsoever and I rate it four stars or above, you can be sure it means I think it's pretty fantastic. Skies of Dawn picks up after the first instalment of the series and actually consists of three volumes (resulting in a 650-page chunk of a book for its English release). I thought I'd be working my way through this one for quite a while due to heavy world-building, yet this book was near impossible to put down.
The first instalment of The Twelve Kingdoms was fantastic for character development, the following two were great for political intrigue and all of them had wonderful world-building. Skies of Dawn, however, excels at all three. Although the world-building can at times be a little heavy-handed (we spend a good few pages learning about this world's measuring conventions...), it is one of the most fleshed-out fictional worlds I have come across and in that respect alone would I even compare it to the likes of Tolkien.
While I absolutely appreciate this vivid world, I have always been one to prefer character-driven stories and this book takes you on a journey with not only one but three great characters: we finally get to follow Yoko from the first instalment who is now struggling with her new role as the King of Kei (this world does not differentiate between male and female rules, they are always referred to as king). Then we have Suzu, another girl from Japan who has been whisked off to the Twelve Kingdoms, who has no true place of her own and feels that no one is helping her in this strange new land. And third, we have Shoukei, a princess of the Hou kingdom who is stripped of her title after her father the King has been dethroned and murdered.
We follow the story of each of these three main characters from completely different ends of the kingdom. All three of them have their own share of problems and initially start out from very different circumstances - eventually, their storylines lead together and they turn out to have more in common than what first meets the eye. I adore stories that have multiple point of views that eventually flow into one. Finding out how these three characters would eventually meet was one of the biggest page-turners.
These three girls aren't only out on an actual journey but also on one of self-discovery - although Yoko is the only one who is truly aware of it. Yoko doesn't know how to run her kingdom and is dissatisfied with her ministers and how her voice is never heard. Determined to learn more about her kingdom, she sets out to live among her people as a commoner only to discover that there is a lot more wrong in the kingdom of Kei than she could ever have hoped to learn whilst in her palace. The fact that she needed to keep her identity a secret was one of the more thrilling elements of this story and the multiple point of view narration allows the reader to smirk on Yoko's behalf whenever people complain to her about the incompetence of the king.
Shoukei is on a similar path but for very different reasons: her father was murdered due to his harsh reign over his people. Shoukei is also punished, but rather than execution, she is stripped of her titles (including her immortality) and is brought to live in an orphanage where she is treated like a slave. Hers was the story that moved me the most, mainly because I thought the treatment she received was utterly unfair. Throughout the story, Shoukei is blamed for all the wrongs her father has done, even to the extent of people wanting her dead and even Shoukei herself eventually thinking she is as much to blame. While I will agree that Shoukei could have done more from her position as a princess, she genuinely did not know about her father's crimes. While other characters say she should have known, I do wonder, how should she have known? She spent her entire life in the castle, she wasn't allowed out and she had no way of knowing what was happening to the people. I don't mind that she lost her title and was sent to live as a commoner, but I do think that the other characters were much to harsh on her. Despite the what I consider ill-treatment, Shouki undergoes a great character development from an unknowing princess to one with lots of compassion and will to make a difference.
Suzu's journey is a little like Yoko's from the first book: she is stranded in a fantastical land with no place to go, no money and no ability to speak to the locals. She feels isolated and ultimately becomes a servant to an immortal which in turn also grants her immortality but, more importantly, the ability to understand other people even without knowing the language. Nonetheless, she is also ill-treated as a servant and often bemoans her cruel fate. Much like Shouki, I find that the other characters are too harsh on her: yes, she complains a lot about her lot rather than doing anything about it, but I also agree with Suzu that she is in a tough spot. Other characters belittle her saying she should grow some backbone because everyone has a hard life. That may be true, but it doesn't make Suzu's situation any less difficult. Much like Shoukei, she finds herself on a journey where she ends up meeting and caring for people and ultimately stands in the middle of a rebellion.
All three characters are courageous but flawed making them wonderful characters. But another strong factor of Skies of Dawn was the political intrigue. There is so much going on and the multiple point of views actually raise more questions than answer them. You're left guessing and wondering until the very near end when things finally start to fall into place. It's a perfectly written story of how people rise up to tyranny and how a young king leaves her mark on steering the kingdom to a brighter future.
I often see complaints about the poor translation and I am not entirely sure what people are referring to. There are minor typos - of course, these shouldn't be there, but I find similar typos in the likes of popular books such as Rick Riordan's works. Some phrases could have perhaps been written a bit more elegantly but it by no means gets in the way of reading. Apparently, there is a whole chapter missing from the hardcover edition, though - I have read the paperback and haven't had any issues whatsoever.
I am very grateful to the friend who recommended The Twelve Kingdoms to me as I would otherwise have ignored this epic series due to not being fully translated. The sad news for me at this point is that Skies of Dawn is the last that's been translated. While each instalment is a complete story and could be considered the end, I've enjoyed this series so much that I desperately want to read the sequels. One way or another, I will find a way to read the next books. Highly recommended to those who enjoy world-building and character-driven stories - albeit the English editions are a pain to get a copy of.
Three young women are suddenly (and for one rather brutally) thrown into a new life completely unlike their old one and with no way to go back. Each react differently, but all three go on a journey -voluntarily or otherwise- to truly learn to deal with their new circumstances. One of these three is the MC from book 1 and 2, the other two are new.
As previous books the story shine with its characters, who while not all likeable, are understandable. Nobody is truly in control of things around them, but how you react to those changes certainly impact how you end up. Their stories and growth certainly did have me hooked by the end of the book. The three will meet and I wonder how they react because none are correct in their expectations.
The world building is a bit odd at times, but that is nothing new, and it has me intrigued for the most part, especially the hints that more might be going on than meets the eye.
What I struggled with is the relatively common switch in point of view, after all, it is a story about three main characters. That is very much a me thing, although at the start it was a bit more confusing due me struggling with remembering who is who. There is also a bit of a lack of plot beyond character growth except for a few hints in the later part. The names just don't stick. The ending is a bit of a cliff hanger, nothing too big, but the arc is clearly not finished, and just when I got really invested in the characters and their story.
Still, it was a solid read that did get me really invested in all three characters by the end despite the rough start for some. Things are happening in the background and I am really curious about what is to come next...
although part 2 concludes this magnificent story in the most satisfying way possible, part 1 is altogether enjoyable, with quite a bittersweet ending.
we follow the journey of three girls: a ruler, a drifter and a slave (pretty much) who will soon enough meet one another. but before that, each of them must follow her own path toward self-discovery.
both suzu and shoukei, especially, are initially unlikable, blaming others for their own misery while being unwilling to change their lives. through meeting new companions who help knock some sense into them, their mindset finally starts to align with their needs.
much like the other two girls, youko finds herself trapped by her own circumstances. she faces the adversities that come with being a queen in a foreign world, and struggles to find reliable allies amidst a corrupt political court. eventually, these three will cross paths, rewriting not only their own futures, but also that of Kei itself.
Suzu: the danger of courage deferred and the ripples left in the wake of learned helplessness. Shoukei: the perils of unearned pride and the whims of an aging, restless ego. Youko, Queen Kei: the exhaustion witnessed upon fighting off the suffocating indignations of a crudely manifest, inherited ignorance.
THE TWELVE KINGDOMS v5 again courts themes at the heart of the novel series' first volume: loneliness, powerlessness, immature curiosity, and the fragility of adolescent arrogance. But the difference in the current volume is that the characters' circumstances are profoundly more complex, and the author's understanding of how to balance narrative tension with character development is decidedly more advanced.
The novel weaves together the life stories of a child of poverty (Suzu) and a child of privilege (Shoukei), and readers are guided toward oscillating bouts of sympathy and outright frustration with each young woman's pitiable attempt at striking out on her own. As is the habit of most characters in this light novel series, neither Suzu nor Shoukei can see their own faults, much less correct them. Brought low by dirty work in dissolute farmland? Scrubbing floors? Begging for scraps? Yearning for a betrayal of a betrayal? It's up to a handful of new and recurring secondary characters, in colorful and curious new contexts, to enlighten these two young women of their own humanity.
Suzu is a kaikayku who was sold into slavery, then found herself begging her way into the service of an emotionally arrested sage; Suzu lived in brutal servitude for 100 bitter years. She has trained herself to feel sorry for herself. Even more fascinating is how readers are primed to root for the girl, only to encounter the harsh reality that pity, on its own, is irresponsible and bears no true benefits.
As Seishuu, a raggedy young traveler, opines: "There's no point saying one person has it worse than the other. Everyone goes through rough times. And when you go through a rough time, it feels just as bad as anyone else's rough time. If there's anyone out there who's never had a bad day in their life, I'd love to see 'em" (page 253).
Shoukei is the exiled princess of King Hou, who himself was overthrown and executed following three decades of increasingly vicious, autocratic rule (e.g., Chuutatsu killed one-fifth of his population). Shoukei pleads ignorance, having had nothing to worry about beyond silks, jewelry, and dancing. And yet, the people do not forgive her, the administrators and soldiers do not forgive her, and every learned citizen of every other nation, rebukes her. Shoukei fiercely defends her ignorance if for no other reason than to avoid blaming herself for it. It takes a random encounter with a kind hanjyuu (the novel series' greatest character) to turn her headspace around.
The delta that represents Suzu's gradual effort to crawl back toward self-discernment, Shoukei's accidental awakening toward humility, and Queen Kei's (Youko's) emergent grasp of her divine responsibilities converges in a rural province that foretells grave goings-on. THE TWELVE KINGDOMS: BOOK FIVE — A THOUSAND MILES OF WIND, THE SKY AT DAWN: PART 1 is a fun volume because it dispenses with all of the formal, courtly affairs and gets straight to the conversation at hand: Rebellion is constantly afoot, sometimes understandably so and sometimes under the auspices of the infinitely greedy. Youko is keen to investigate the matter, but does she have enough strength to put out the fires she's only now discovering?
Youko may have learned to stop feeling sorry for herself, but obtaining the knowledge she needs to rule her country will demand more of her than she initially thought necessary. She studies, fights off her administrators, acquiesces to others, and resolves to quit running around in circles. Her story converges with those of Suzu and Shoukei because like these other two women, Youko's knowledge of herself and of the world she now inhabits surely inhibits her capacity to do well by herself and the people she cares about.
THE TWELVE KINGDOMS v5 is about taking possession of one's self, and wresting certainty, however small, from the vague authorities of a corrupted heart. The novel offers precipitating queries of much larger consequence: Of what value is hierarchy when the people are constantly held under foot? If multiple kingdoms are torn asunder, is it truly by accident? Cruelty comes easy in times of difficulty, but what of kindness, earnestness, and pathos?
Another book down and I'm sad I've caught up with these releases because now I have to wait for book 6. This book, like the ones before it, was an easy, enjoyable read that made me want to keep going even though I already had an idea of what was going to happen having watched the anime.
It also seems like the next book will still be covered by the anime at least in part. This didn't quite reach the end of it although I think we're close now.
Slight spoilers for those who haven't seen the anime: This, again, seems to have been faithfully followed by the anime. Not a lot of major changes from my recollection. The biggest change would be the eyesight of Seishuu and it's made far more clear in the book how his body deteriorated over time vs just eyesight.
I gotta say, Seishuu also pisses me off. I get calling out Suzu for her self-pitying, but the girl really HAS had it fucking rough. She's allowed to feel bad about it. No, she shouldn't be competing in the oppression Olympics, but Seishuu actually defends her worst bully and victim blames her in the process. Fuck off Seishuu.
"Oh wah wah do something about it instead of complaining" he says
She IS doing something about it, jackass! She's literally traveling across the ENTIRE WORLD (which is completely foreign to her as a kaikyaku) to go somewhere she can have a prayer of being happy. She can complain along the way sometimes, man, she's earned the right.
Even Rakushun (whom I adore) seems too harsh on Shoukei. Yes, she was oblivious to the world around her and obviously a spoiled little brat, but she was raised to be that way and I don't see how she could have turned out any differently when she was so sequestered and only fed information from her parents who were intent on keeping her ignorant. Shoukei is annoying and her hatred towards Youko misplaced, but, again, what do you expect with her upbringing?
It's good she's getting a life lesson, but the one she's getting is severely harsh with people blaming her for something she was completely ignorant of. Blaming her for her father's behavior is not ok and, again, the book seems to try to foist the abuser's responsibility onto one of its victims. Yes yes family honor whatever. Not ok.
The victim blaming in both narratives knocks off a star for me.
Despite that I still greatly enjoyed reading the book and getting more and more information about this world and how it works. I look forward to book 6!
A Thousand Miles of Wind, the Sky at Dawn Part 1 is the first part (obviously) of a new The Twelve Kingdoms arc. Much like Book 1 and 2, here you get all the characterization (a ton of it) and some plot going forward but all the action is probably reserved for book 2.
I don't want to say for sure that this volume had more new characters introduced than previous ones, but it really felt like it. On top of that, we have 3 different POVs (one of them being Youko, but she goes on to do a whole thing on her own so her POV also introduces a bunch of new names). I already have a hard time remembering the kings, the queens and kirins so it wasn't a surprise that juggling so many new names was a bit hard for me.
Shoukei was the most annoying to follow and I'm glad she eventually gets put in her place because I hated whenever we had to be in her head. Suzu wasn't that much better but I could understand her frustrations. I felt like I didn't see enough of Youko...
I love nothing more than flawed characters struggling through their character growth. Youko needs to learn about the world she lives in in order to rule it and struggles with being a doormat. Suzu thinks she has had the worst life possible. Shoukei is a brat learning that she knows nothing about the world she was born in because she was a spoiled princess (literally). Suzu and Shoukei irk me so much but I LOVE their story! And I can't wait for Youko to be the strong queen I know she is.
Loved every single book of this series. It's the kind of book that when you put it down at the very end you feel a mix of great satisfaction (because the story was packed with greatness), unbelievable anger (angry because it's over), frustration (because there's still so many unanswered questions in your mind), sadness and joy at the same time. Now the French edition is the only one that has translated the full series from Japanese (as of yet) and since it's my mother language I bought them in French (lucky me) but I suggest waiting for all the books to be out because.....you won't be able to put it down.
Pas mal. On apprend plus de choses sur les 12 royaumes, on découvre plus de royaumes, de reines, et le fait que l'on passe d'un personnage à l'autre comme cela rend le récit plus vivant.
Le hic c'est que je n'aime vraiment pas le personnage de Suzu, qui est tout de même l'une des trois héroines de ce volume.
Autre point ennuyeux: toutes les leçons de calcul de la taille d'un terrain, était-ce vraiment nécessaire?