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The Conquest Trilogy #1
The Quest for Freedom
Affer was once a peaceful planet, until a war broke out between its six inhabiting species. The humans, who were once the mightiest force on Affer, were massacred in droves, and the ones who survived the onslaught were reduced to mere slaves. The five other species divided the humans amongst themselves and returned to their respective kingdoms.
The years passed, turning into decades and centuries, without any change. Eventually, the humans had accepted their fate as slaves. All except one. Four hundred and seventy-three years later, Fletcher Rush starts his journey to free his kind...and conquer the planet.
The years passed, turning into decades and centuries, without any change. Eventually, the humans had accepted their fate as slaves. All except one. Four hundred and seventy-three years later, Fletcher Rush starts his journey to free his kind...and conquer the planet.
- GenresFantasyEpic Fantasy
418 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 5, 2025
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Matthew D. Devitt
1 book78 followersI've always had a love for fantasy, and to this day LOTR and The Inheritance Cycle remain some of my favorite books. There are limitless possibilities when you're writing, but with fantasy, it's different. You don't have to adhere to rules or logic; you can create whatever type of world you want. Characters can live in a dystopian society, a grand futuristic city, a picture-perfect world, or a medieval wasteland. Time, technology, and magic are all there for the taking, and as a writer, you get to choose what defines your story.
I truly enjoy writing, and I hope you enjoy reading my works just as much.
I truly enjoy writing, and I hope you enjoy reading my works just as much.
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December 5, 2025
FREEDOM COMES AT A COST, LOST FREEDOM COMES AT EVEN A GREATER COST. GIVE ME FREEDOM OR GIVE ME DEATH
☆☆☆☆☆
The Quest For Freedom (The Conquest Trilogy Book 1) by Matthew Devitt is intense action-packed story of a planet where six different species had coexisted up until four hundred seventy three years prior when five of the six species banded to gather to take out a growing species who they perceived them as a threat as they, the humans, were growing population, intelligent, and warfare.
Fletcher is a young man who was born into slavery just as the remaining human population on Affer since the great war that enslaved every human on the planet. Has Fletcher reaches the age of ten years old, he is forced into slave labor. At this time Fletcher decided that he would do everything in his power not only to obtain his freedom but the freedom of every human or die trying to. He trains hours everyday to build up his strength and his skill set when it comes to waging war on behalf of his fellow humans.
This story is very action packed, thrilling from the first page to the last with its original cast of characters that defines the word of heroes that are willing to place their lives on the line to correct the wrong that has been placed on them by every species on their homeworld who enslaved them and oppress them to the point that many believed their enslavement was their fate for all times. Of course, it only takes one strong and determined person with the fortitude to break the bonds, stand up to lead by example, and take back what everyone deserves, THEIR FREEDOM.
If you enjoy a book and series that the action drips off from each page, the interaction between the cast of characters are that are well written and will hook you into the storyline from the start and at more than a few times the interaction between Fletcher's army and friends is humorous, where the good guys take the battle to the bad guys, this first book in this series is for you. I really enjoyed reading this first installment and can't wait until the next book comes out.
Well done Matt. This book was great.
Quotes:
"Yee know what the sayy, a bottle of ale keeps the war at bay."
"Something's only impossible because no one's ever done it before."
☆☆☆☆☆
The Quest For Freedom (The Conquest Trilogy Book 1) by Matthew Devitt is intense action-packed story of a planet where six different species had coexisted up until four hundred seventy three years prior when five of the six species banded to gather to take out a growing species who they perceived them as a threat as they, the humans, were growing population, intelligent, and warfare.
Fletcher is a young man who was born into slavery just as the remaining human population on Affer since the great war that enslaved every human on the planet. Has Fletcher reaches the age of ten years old, he is forced into slave labor. At this time Fletcher decided that he would do everything in his power not only to obtain his freedom but the freedom of every human or die trying to. He trains hours everyday to build up his strength and his skill set when it comes to waging war on behalf of his fellow humans.
This story is very action packed, thrilling from the first page to the last with its original cast of characters that defines the word of heroes that are willing to place their lives on the line to correct the wrong that has been placed on them by every species on their homeworld who enslaved them and oppress them to the point that many believed their enslavement was their fate for all times. Of course, it only takes one strong and determined person with the fortitude to break the bonds, stand up to lead by example, and take back what everyone deserves, THEIR FREEDOM.
If you enjoy a book and series that the action drips off from each page, the interaction between the cast of characters are that are well written and will hook you into the storyline from the start and at more than a few times the interaction between Fletcher's army and friends is humorous, where the good guys take the battle to the bad guys, this first book in this series is for you. I really enjoyed reading this first installment and can't wait until the next book comes out.
Well done Matt. This book was great.
Quotes:
"Yee know what the sayy, a bottle of ale keeps the war at bay."
"Something's only impossible because no one's ever done it before."
November 29, 2025
Best book that I've read this year, fantastic writer
November 23, 2025
Hundreds of years before the events of this book, the six species of the world of Affer coexisted. The humans were once a strong and mighty race, so powerful that all the other five races decided to team up and attack them in their capital city. They cut them down one by one.
Fast forward to present day, we’re following Fletcher as he goes on a journey to free the human race from the resulting slavery, slowly gathering more companions over many months and forming a band of human renegades in a world that despises them and ultimately doesn’t want them to be free.
You can perfectly picture it as you read, the characters and the world are vivid. The writing is very easy to follow, the chapters are short — I want to say, maybe five pages long on average — so it reads quickly.
It’s a very dark fantasy, very bloody, not afraid to get graphic. Tons of battles (featuring the elves, the second weakest race, getting the living daylights beaten out of them), the fight scenes + training scenes were my favorite. So action packed. It’s the kind of fantasy that’s almost reminiscent of The Witcher.
Our main characters:
Crystal: She’s a former slave of the angels, prior to us being introduced to her she had no name which was customary for a slave. By the beginning of the book she’s around nineteen. Outspoken and fearless, she’s one tough woman, a match for any man on the battlefield (well, except for Fletcher) with her bow and arrow.
Ji: He’s our leader’s friend and right hand man, their relationship was definitely another highlight of the book. He becomes almost awkward when he’s with Crystal because of his increasing feelings for her, especially in the first half of the book. He also had some amusing lines that got a laugh out of me.
And Fletcher: He’s the main event. Devoted to his cause, he will stop at nothing to free his race from slavery. A fearless leader, far from the perfect hero, he will get his hands dirty. It’s interesting that even with him being the main character, he’s had little opportunity to actually practice sword fighting. He’s a blacksmith, and a former slave.
Bonus: there’s a bit of a Gimli & Legolas style rivalry/interaction when the group is counting their kills. So that’s always fun to read.
This was an amazing introduction to the Conquest Trilogy, I can’t wait to continue with the series (after that ending!) and see where the characters end up next. Long live freedom!
Thank you to Matthew Devitt for providing a free copy in exchange for my honest review.
Fast forward to present day, we’re following Fletcher as he goes on a journey to free the human race from the resulting slavery, slowly gathering more companions over many months and forming a band of human renegades in a world that despises them and ultimately doesn’t want them to be free.
You can perfectly picture it as you read, the characters and the world are vivid. The writing is very easy to follow, the chapters are short — I want to say, maybe five pages long on average — so it reads quickly.
It’s a very dark fantasy, very bloody, not afraid to get graphic. Tons of battles (featuring the elves, the second weakest race, getting the living daylights beaten out of them), the fight scenes + training scenes were my favorite. So action packed. It’s the kind of fantasy that’s almost reminiscent of The Witcher.
Our main characters:
Crystal: She’s a former slave of the angels, prior to us being introduced to her she had no name which was customary for a slave. By the beginning of the book she’s around nineteen. Outspoken and fearless, she’s one tough woman, a match for any man on the battlefield (well, except for Fletcher) with her bow and arrow.
Ji: He’s our leader’s friend and right hand man, their relationship was definitely another highlight of the book. He becomes almost awkward when he’s with Crystal because of his increasing feelings for her, especially in the first half of the book. He also had some amusing lines that got a laugh out of me.
And Fletcher: He’s the main event. Devoted to his cause, he will stop at nothing to free his race from slavery. A fearless leader, far from the perfect hero, he will get his hands dirty. It’s interesting that even with him being the main character, he’s had little opportunity to actually practice sword fighting. He’s a blacksmith, and a former slave.
Bonus: there’s a bit of a Gimli & Legolas style rivalry/interaction when the group is counting their kills. So that’s always fun to read.
This was an amazing introduction to the Conquest Trilogy, I can’t wait to continue with the series (after that ending!) and see where the characters end up next. Long live freedom!
Thank you to Matthew Devitt for providing a free copy in exchange for my honest review.
November 18, 2025
In the crowded landscape of fantasy literature, where chosen ones and prophecies dominate narratives, Matthew Devitt's "The Quest For Freedom" carves out its own brutal, uncompromising path. This is not a story about destiny or magic—it's a raw, visceral account of one man's calculated rebellion against centuries of oppression, told with the precision of a military campaign and the intensity of a powder keg finally igniting.
The novel opens with a premise that immediately hooks readers: four hundred and seventy-three years after humanity's catastrophic defeat in the Great War, the once-mighty human race has been reduced to slaves, divided among five dominant species on the planet Affer. Into this bleak reality steps Fletcher Rush, a blacksmith's apprentice turned revolutionary leader, who refuses to accept the fate his ancestors surrendered to generations ago. His declaration is simple yet chilling: he will free his people, no matter the cost in blood.
World-Building That Breathes With Complexity
Devitt constructs the planet Affer with remarkable attention to political and social dynamics. The six species—humans, demons, angels, elves, the dammed, and hybrids—each occupy their own kingdoms with distinct power hierarchies. What makes this world-building particularly effective is how Devitt shows the shifting power dynamics over centuries. The angels have risen to dominance, the demons hold second place, while the elves have stagnated into complacency. This isn't just background information; it directly informs Fletcher's strategic decisions about which kingdoms to target first.
The cities themselves feel lived-in and real, from the limestone grandeur of Admont's ruins to the cold, snow-covered streets of Yuun. Devitt pays attention to architectural details, climate variations, and geographical features that affect military strategy. The Yoxtoll Forest with its bioluminescent trees, the Zenton Sea, and the Arrgon Desert aren't mere set dressing—they're tactical considerations that Fletcher must navigate.
A Protagonist Forged in Determination
Fletcher Rush is not your typical fantasy hero. He possesses no magical abilities, no divine birthright, no prophesied greatness. What he has is an iron will, tactical brilliance, and a training regimen that borders on obsessive. Devitt portrays Fletcher as someone who understands that freedom requires sacrifice, and he's willing to pay that price repeatedly. His character development throughout the novel shows a leader who must balance his personal drive with the responsibility of commanding an army of former slaves who've never held weapons.
What makes Fletcher compelling is his complexity. He can be ruthless in battle, executing enemies without hesitation, yet he shows genuine care for his team. He's confident to the point of arrogance, yet he acknowledges his dependence on his companions. This duality—the capacity for both brutal efficiency and human connection—makes him a protagonist readers can invest in without necessarily always agreeing with his methods.
The Brotherhood of the Broken
The supporting cast elevates this novel from a simple revenge tale to a story about camaraderie forged in the crucible of war. Ji, Fletcher's best friend and second-in-command, serves as both moral compass and trusted confidant. Their friendship, established before the rebellion began, provides emotional grounding for the more intense action sequences. The banter between them feels authentic, the kind that develops between people who've survived hardship together.
Crystal brings mystery and skill to the team. An escaped slave from the angels' kingdom, her past remains deliberately shadowy, adding intrigue to her character. Her proficiency with a bow and her determination to perfect her aim through relentless practice mirrors Fletcher's own obsessive training. Tor, the gentle giant with a devastating hammer, provides both muscle and unexpected wisdom. Ryan, Archer, and the other team members each contribute distinct personalities and combat styles.
Even antagonists like Dean Horn, the drug-addicted elf, transcend simple villainy. His backstory as a captured soldier who succumbed to addiction adds layers to what could have been a one-dimensional character. Miller Cent's tragic transformation from victim to vengeance-seeker promises compelling conflict in future installments.
Combat That Demands Attention
Devitt writes battle sequences with kinetic energy and tactical awareness. These aren't abstract skirmishes—they're carefully choreographed conflicts where terrain matters, fatigue sets in, and victory requires both skill and strategy. The taking of IItu, the brutal siege of Ronann, and the climactic assault on Lilthral each present unique challenges that Fletcher and his team must overcome.
The author doesn't shy away from the brutality of warfare. Bodies fall, blood flows, and characters suffer realistic injuries that don't magically heal between chapters. This grounded approach to combat makes victories feel earned and losses meaningful. When Fletcher passes out from blood loss after being tortured, it's a reminder that even the strongest protagonist has human limitations.
Strategic Warfare Beyond the Battlefield
One of the novel's strongest elements is its focus on strategy that extends beyond direct combat. Fletcher doesn't simply gather an army and charge at his enemies. He studies intelligence reports, manipulates enemy kingdoms into attacking each other, uses captured transmitters to spread misinformation, and carefully times his assaults for maximum strategic advantage. The political maneuvering, particularly involving King Yinny of the hybrids and the various elven overseers, adds intellectual depth to the military campaign.
The use of technology—transmitters for communication, vehicles for transportation, and practical considerations like managing food supplies—grounds the fantasy elements in a more believable framework. This isn't a medieval fantasy world with swords alone; it's a more developed civilization where tactical advantages come from multiple sources.
Pacing That Refuses to Slow
Devitt maintains relentless momentum throughout the narrative. Short, punchy chapters keep the story moving forward, and even quieter moments between battles serve to develop characters or advance strategic planning. The author employs a technique of cutting between different perspectives and locations, creating tension and revealing how Fletcher's actions ripple across the entire planet.
The dialogue-heavy approach works particularly well, allowing character personalities to emerge naturally through conversation rather than lengthy exposition. Fletcher's motivational speeches to his troops effectively convey his leadership style without becoming repetitive, and the back-and-forth banter between team members provides levity without undercutting the story's serious stakes.
Themes of Freedom and Sacrifice
At its core, this is a novel about the price of freedom. Devitt doesn't romanticize rebellion—he shows it as bloody, exhausting, and requiring constant sacrifice. The former slaves who join Fletcher's cause must transform from workers who've never held weapons into soldiers willing to die for liberation. This transformation isn't instantaneous or easy, and the novel acknowledges the casualties along the way.
The concept of leadership under impossible circumstances permeates the narrative. Fletcher must make difficult decisions about which cities to attack, who to trust, and when to risk everything on a single gambit. His burden as leader—knowing that his strategic choices determine who lives and dies—adds weight to every tactical decision.
A Foundation for Epic Conflict
As the opening book in The Conquest Trilogy, "The Quest For Freedom" accomplishes the crucial task of establishing characters, world, and stakes while delivering a complete and satisfying arc. The conquest of the elven kingdom serves as both culmination and prologue—a significant victory that's merely the first step toward Fletcher's ultimate goal of freeing all humanity and conquering Affer.
The novel's conclusion sets up fascinating possibilities for future installments. With the elves defeated and other kingdoms now aware of humanity's resurgence, the conflicts ahead will only escalate in scope and complexity. The mysterious Jixxes, barely explored creatures that haunt the northeast caves, hint at additional threats beyond political conflicts.
For Readers Who Crave Action-Driven Fantasy
This book will particularly resonate with readers who appreciate:
Similar Titles to Consider:
"Red Rising" by Pierce Brown: Another tale of oppressed underclass rising against their masters
"The Poppy War" by R.F. Kuang: Military fantasy with unflinching brutality
"The Rage of Dragons" by Evan Winter: Revenge-driven protagonist in an unforgiving world
"The Traitor Baru Cormorant" by Seth Dickinson: Strategic warfare and political manipulation
"Kings of the Wyld" by Nicholas Eames: Camaraderie and epic battles
Final Verdict
"The Quest For Freedom" announces Matthew Devitt as an author willing to commit fully to his premise. This is uncompromising fantasy that trades magical systems for military strategy, prophecies for determination, and chosen destiny for chosen purpose. Fletcher Rush's rebellion against centuries of enslavement provides thrilling action while raising meaningful questions about leadership, sacrifice, and the true cost of freedom.
The novel isn't without its ambitious scope, occasionally moving so quickly that some secondary characters blur together. However, the core team remains vividly distinct, and the relentless pacing ensures readers stay engaged throughout Fletcher's campaign. Devitt writes with confidence and clarity, never allowing the story to become bogged down in unnecessary details while still providing sufficient depth to make Affer feel real.
For readers seeking fantasy that emphasizes strategic warfare, determined protagonists, and action that carries real consequences, "The Quest For Freedom" delivers an impressive opening salvo. The Conquest Trilogy has begun with strength and purpose, promising an epic journey toward liberation that will test Fletcher Rush and his companions in ways they cannot yet imagine.
The novel opens with a premise that immediately hooks readers: four hundred and seventy-three years after humanity's catastrophic defeat in the Great War, the once-mighty human race has been reduced to slaves, divided among five dominant species on the planet Affer. Into this bleak reality steps Fletcher Rush, a blacksmith's apprentice turned revolutionary leader, who refuses to accept the fate his ancestors surrendered to generations ago. His declaration is simple yet chilling: he will free his people, no matter the cost in blood.
World-Building That Breathes With Complexity
Devitt constructs the planet Affer with remarkable attention to political and social dynamics. The six species—humans, demons, angels, elves, the dammed, and hybrids—each occupy their own kingdoms with distinct power hierarchies. What makes this world-building particularly effective is how Devitt shows the shifting power dynamics over centuries. The angels have risen to dominance, the demons hold second place, while the elves have stagnated into complacency. This isn't just background information; it directly informs Fletcher's strategic decisions about which kingdoms to target first.
The cities themselves feel lived-in and real, from the limestone grandeur of Admont's ruins to the cold, snow-covered streets of Yuun. Devitt pays attention to architectural details, climate variations, and geographical features that affect military strategy. The Yoxtoll Forest with its bioluminescent trees, the Zenton Sea, and the Arrgon Desert aren't mere set dressing—they're tactical considerations that Fletcher must navigate.
A Protagonist Forged in Determination
Fletcher Rush is not your typical fantasy hero. He possesses no magical abilities, no divine birthright, no prophesied greatness. What he has is an iron will, tactical brilliance, and a training regimen that borders on obsessive. Devitt portrays Fletcher as someone who understands that freedom requires sacrifice, and he's willing to pay that price repeatedly. His character development throughout the novel shows a leader who must balance his personal drive with the responsibility of commanding an army of former slaves who've never held weapons.
What makes Fletcher compelling is his complexity. He can be ruthless in battle, executing enemies without hesitation, yet he shows genuine care for his team. He's confident to the point of arrogance, yet he acknowledges his dependence on his companions. This duality—the capacity for both brutal efficiency and human connection—makes him a protagonist readers can invest in without necessarily always agreeing with his methods.
The Brotherhood of the Broken
The supporting cast elevates this novel from a simple revenge tale to a story about camaraderie forged in the crucible of war. Ji, Fletcher's best friend and second-in-command, serves as both moral compass and trusted confidant. Their friendship, established before the rebellion began, provides emotional grounding for the more intense action sequences. The banter between them feels authentic, the kind that develops between people who've survived hardship together.
Crystal brings mystery and skill to the team. An escaped slave from the angels' kingdom, her past remains deliberately shadowy, adding intrigue to her character. Her proficiency with a bow and her determination to perfect her aim through relentless practice mirrors Fletcher's own obsessive training. Tor, the gentle giant with a devastating hammer, provides both muscle and unexpected wisdom. Ryan, Archer, and the other team members each contribute distinct personalities and combat styles.
Even antagonists like Dean Horn, the drug-addicted elf, transcend simple villainy. His backstory as a captured soldier who succumbed to addiction adds layers to what could have been a one-dimensional character. Miller Cent's tragic transformation from victim to vengeance-seeker promises compelling conflict in future installments.
Combat That Demands Attention
Devitt writes battle sequences with kinetic energy and tactical awareness. These aren't abstract skirmishes—they're carefully choreographed conflicts where terrain matters, fatigue sets in, and victory requires both skill and strategy. The taking of IItu, the brutal siege of Ronann, and the climactic assault on Lilthral each present unique challenges that Fletcher and his team must overcome.
The author doesn't shy away from the brutality of warfare. Bodies fall, blood flows, and characters suffer realistic injuries that don't magically heal between chapters. This grounded approach to combat makes victories feel earned and losses meaningful. When Fletcher passes out from blood loss after being tortured, it's a reminder that even the strongest protagonist has human limitations.
Strategic Warfare Beyond the Battlefield
One of the novel's strongest elements is its focus on strategy that extends beyond direct combat. Fletcher doesn't simply gather an army and charge at his enemies. He studies intelligence reports, manipulates enemy kingdoms into attacking each other, uses captured transmitters to spread misinformation, and carefully times his assaults for maximum strategic advantage. The political maneuvering, particularly involving King Yinny of the hybrids and the various elven overseers, adds intellectual depth to the military campaign.
The use of technology—transmitters for communication, vehicles for transportation, and practical considerations like managing food supplies—grounds the fantasy elements in a more believable framework. This isn't a medieval fantasy world with swords alone; it's a more developed civilization where tactical advantages come from multiple sources.
Pacing That Refuses to Slow
Devitt maintains relentless momentum throughout the narrative. Short, punchy chapters keep the story moving forward, and even quieter moments between battles serve to develop characters or advance strategic planning. The author employs a technique of cutting between different perspectives and locations, creating tension and revealing how Fletcher's actions ripple across the entire planet.
The dialogue-heavy approach works particularly well, allowing character personalities to emerge naturally through conversation rather than lengthy exposition. Fletcher's motivational speeches to his troops effectively convey his leadership style without becoming repetitive, and the back-and-forth banter between team members provides levity without undercutting the story's serious stakes.
Themes of Freedom and Sacrifice
At its core, this is a novel about the price of freedom. Devitt doesn't romanticize rebellion—he shows it as bloody, exhausting, and requiring constant sacrifice. The former slaves who join Fletcher's cause must transform from workers who've never held weapons into soldiers willing to die for liberation. This transformation isn't instantaneous or easy, and the novel acknowledges the casualties along the way.
The concept of leadership under impossible circumstances permeates the narrative. Fletcher must make difficult decisions about which cities to attack, who to trust, and when to risk everything on a single gambit. His burden as leader—knowing that his strategic choices determine who lives and dies—adds weight to every tactical decision.
A Foundation for Epic Conflict
As the opening book in The Conquest Trilogy, "The Quest For Freedom" accomplishes the crucial task of establishing characters, world, and stakes while delivering a complete and satisfying arc. The conquest of the elven kingdom serves as both culmination and prologue—a significant victory that's merely the first step toward Fletcher's ultimate goal of freeing all humanity and conquering Affer.
The novel's conclusion sets up fascinating possibilities for future installments. With the elves defeated and other kingdoms now aware of humanity's resurgence, the conflicts ahead will only escalate in scope and complexity. The mysterious Jixxes, barely explored creatures that haunt the northeast caves, hint at additional threats beyond political conflicts.
For Readers Who Crave Action-Driven Fantasy
This book will particularly resonate with readers who appreciate:
Similar Titles to Consider:
"Red Rising" by Pierce Brown: Another tale of oppressed underclass rising against their masters
"The Poppy War" by R.F. Kuang: Military fantasy with unflinching brutality
"The Rage of Dragons" by Evan Winter: Revenge-driven protagonist in an unforgiving world
"The Traitor Baru Cormorant" by Seth Dickinson: Strategic warfare and political manipulation
"Kings of the Wyld" by Nicholas Eames: Camaraderie and epic battles
Final Verdict
"The Quest For Freedom" announces Matthew Devitt as an author willing to commit fully to his premise. This is uncompromising fantasy that trades magical systems for military strategy, prophecies for determination, and chosen destiny for chosen purpose. Fletcher Rush's rebellion against centuries of enslavement provides thrilling action while raising meaningful questions about leadership, sacrifice, and the true cost of freedom.
The novel isn't without its ambitious scope, occasionally moving so quickly that some secondary characters blur together. However, the core team remains vividly distinct, and the relentless pacing ensures readers stay engaged throughout Fletcher's campaign. Devitt writes with confidence and clarity, never allowing the story to become bogged down in unnecessary details while still providing sufficient depth to make Affer feel real.
For readers seeking fantasy that emphasizes strategic warfare, determined protagonists, and action that carries real consequences, "The Quest For Freedom" delivers an impressive opening salvo. The Conquest Trilogy has begun with strength and purpose, promising an epic journey toward liberation that will test Fletcher Rush and his companions in ways they cannot yet imagine.
November 18, 2025
Affer is a world scarred by centuries of bloodshed, where six species once coexisted until war shattered the balance. The humans, once powerful, are now enslaved and broken. Mere shadows of the conquerors they once were.
But among the broken and the bound, one man refuses to kneel. Fletcher Rush carries within him a dangerous vision: to reclaim the freedom his people lost and to challenge the balance of power that has ruled Affer for nearly five centuries.
Unlike other fantasy reads, this one was quite an easy one to finish for me. It turned out to be addictive. The world-building is drenched in cruelty and hope. The storytelling is worth every ounce of attention. It's full of tension and introspection. This fantasy novel is immersive and profound. The Quest for Freedom by Matthew Devitt is a thrilling, ambitious epic that delivers everything fans of classic fantasy crave.
But among the broken and the bound, one man refuses to kneel. Fletcher Rush carries within him a dangerous vision: to reclaim the freedom his people lost and to challenge the balance of power that has ruled Affer for nearly five centuries.
Unlike other fantasy reads, this one was quite an easy one to finish for me. It turned out to be addictive. The world-building is drenched in cruelty and hope. The storytelling is worth every ounce of attention. It's full of tension and introspection. This fantasy novel is immersive and profound. The Quest for Freedom by Matthew Devitt is a thrilling, ambitious epic that delivers everything fans of classic fantasy crave.
August 10, 2025
I don't normally leave reviews, but I had to with this book. I'm not super big into fantasy, but this one caught my eye, and man, am I glad it did! The only fantasy I enjoyed as much as this one was LOTR. Don't get me wrong, LOTR is still my favorite, but this comes in at a very well deserved second place. I can't wait for the next two books to come out.
December 20, 2025
This was a wild ride of fantasy sci-fi. Fletcher was not who I thought he was going to be and was a bit more unhinged than expected, in a great way. I am hooked and can’t wait to read more.
November 14, 2025
The Quest for Freedom by Matthew Devitt is book one in The Conquest Trilogy. This is a dystopian world where humans are not really free and are constantly fighting for their lives. Our MC is named Fletcher Rush who is tired of being slaved by the other groups/races of beings. Fletcher is a blacksmith during his day job and starts going one by one after the races of other beings. The world is a well written fantasy worlds where there the characters fight using weapons and swords and not guns or anything modern weapons. I love a good medieval based story and this is like a mix between present day and medieval times. I love the character of Fletcher, he is so relatable with problems and so very human when he realizes that you can lose hope when things happen in your life no matter what. I love the emotional trip that this book takes the readers on, there is so much violence, brutality, and more that happens in this book that you can not help but be drawn into the world of Affer and want to finish the book. I can not wait to read the next book in the series!
November 10, 2025
In the quest for Freedom, where humans are enslaved for hundreds of years, one man Fletcher stands up. Affar is a modern planet with fantasy characters as elves, angels, demons, hybrids and the damned.
Matthew has created a modern dystopian world where human kind has almost lost all hope. But once the fire is lit by Fletcher, hope is far from gone.
This story is like a Lord of the Rings meets Braveheart, it’s raw and emotional and it crawls under your skin. It’s the first part of the series and i think the next books will be even more intense.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Matthew has created a modern dystopian world where human kind has almost lost all hope. But once the fire is lit by Fletcher, hope is far from gone.
This story is like a Lord of the Rings meets Braveheart, it’s raw and emotional and it crawls under your skin. It’s the first part of the series and i think the next books will be even more intense.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 28, 2025
Matthew Devitt’s fantasy novel The Quest for Freedom is the first novel in The Conquest Trilogy and is an adventure through a dystopian world where humanity must fight for their freedom. Nearly five centuries before the novel’s opening, human beings were conquered and enslaved by five other groups: the angels, the demons, the dammed, the hybrids, and the elves.
On the planet Affer, Fletcher Rush literally breaks the bonds of slavery and, with his friend Ji, escapes from the demon-controlled city where Rush has been held. A blacksmith by trade, Fletcher has reached his breaking point and is determined to lift humanity from the chains enslaving them. After a valorous fight against his captors, Fletcher and Ji flee the city and head south into the elf territory. Given that the elves are considered the weakest of the conquering races, Fletcher concentrates on usurping control from them first with the intent of steadily moving across the continent, freeing people along the way.
Devitt’s Affer is a modern world infused with fantasy elements. Although Fletcher and Ji drive a car out of the demon territory, their primary weapons are swords and knives. In many battle sequences, armor-wearing combatants are embroiled in hand-to-hand combat or wield weapons reminiscent of the Middle Ages. Gunpowder and cannons are used, adding to the feel of a hybrid modern-fantasy world. Affer is no Harry Potter type of world, with magicians and wands. It is reminiscent of our present-day world, when characters use “transmitters” to communicate with one another. At times, the world-building feels disjointed, but the novel’s swift pace and massive battle sequences kept the pages turning.
The Quest for Freedom by Matthew Devitt has elements of The Lord of the Rings mixed with Braveheart. Fletcher’s epic quest has many moments when he gives rousing speeches, encouraging his followers to embrace the life and death battle they wage so they can finally be free. Fletcher’s speeches reminded me of Henry V’s St. Crispin’s Day speech when he calls his fellow soldiers his “band of brothers” and how they will live, fight, and fall together.
On the planet Affer, Fletcher Rush literally breaks the bonds of slavery and, with his friend Ji, escapes from the demon-controlled city where Rush has been held. A blacksmith by trade, Fletcher has reached his breaking point and is determined to lift humanity from the chains enslaving them. After a valorous fight against his captors, Fletcher and Ji flee the city and head south into the elf territory. Given that the elves are considered the weakest of the conquering races, Fletcher concentrates on usurping control from them first with the intent of steadily moving across the continent, freeing people along the way.
Devitt’s Affer is a modern world infused with fantasy elements. Although Fletcher and Ji drive a car out of the demon territory, their primary weapons are swords and knives. In many battle sequences, armor-wearing combatants are embroiled in hand-to-hand combat or wield weapons reminiscent of the Middle Ages. Gunpowder and cannons are used, adding to the feel of a hybrid modern-fantasy world. Affer is no Harry Potter type of world, with magicians and wands. It is reminiscent of our present-day world, when characters use “transmitters” to communicate with one another. At times, the world-building feels disjointed, but the novel’s swift pace and massive battle sequences kept the pages turning.
The Quest for Freedom by Matthew Devitt has elements of The Lord of the Rings mixed with Braveheart. Fletcher’s epic quest has many moments when he gives rousing speeches, encouraging his followers to embrace the life and death battle they wage so they can finally be free. Fletcher’s speeches reminded me of Henry V’s St. Crispin’s Day speech when he calls his fellow soldiers his “band of brothers” and how they will live, fight, and fall together.
October 25, 2025
the quest for freedom honestly hit differently. this isn’t just another “chosen one” story, it’s brutal, layered, and full of emotion. set on a planet torn apart by war, where humans have been enslaved for centuries, the story follows fletcher rush as he dares to do the impossible, rise up against an entire world. the way matthew devitt writes his journey makes it feel raw and real, like you can sense every ounce of fear and fire pushing him forward.
i loved how this story doesn’t just focus on battles or rebellion, but on what freedom actually means. fletcher isn’t perfect, he’s angry, flawed, and stubborn, but that’s what makes him so human. the world building is massive, but it never feels confusing; it feels alive. every species, every kingdom, every fight scene has a purpose. i found myself thinking about how easy it is to lose hope when everything seems impossible, and how sometimes, it takes just one person to remind everyone what courage looks like.
this book is gritty, intense, and filled with heart. if you love epic fantasies that mix action, emotion, and rebellion, you’ll absolutely want to add this to your tbr. the quest for freedom is only the beginning of the conquest trilogy, and if this first book is anything to go by, the next ones are going to be wild.
October 31, 2025
great story telling
I’m currently reading this book, and it’s completely pulled me in. The world building is rich, the tension is constant, and Fletcher Rush is such a compelling character. I love the mix of rebellion, fantasy, and hope. Can’t wait to see how his fight for freedom unfolds.
I’m currently reading this book, and it’s completely pulled me in. The world building is rich, the tension is constant, and Fletcher Rush is such a compelling character. I love the mix of rebellion, fantasy, and hope. Can’t wait to see how his fight for freedom unfolds.
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November 17, 2025Affer was once their home, now it is their prison. That is the tension at the heart of The Quest for Freedom, a dark, battle heavy sci fi fantasy where humans have been reduced to chattel and one stubborn soldier decides that is no longer acceptable. Fletcher Rush is the human who refuses to bend, and Matthew Devitt follows his mission to free his people and reclaim a planet that has forgotten them as anything but property.
What hooked me first was the premise. Affer is divided between six species, and the humans, formerly the dominant force, are now scattered, broken and owned. Centuries have passed since the war that put them in chains, so this is not a fresh wound, it is a brutal status quo that most humans have stopped questioning. All except Fletcher. That long historical arc makes the story feel bigger than one rebellion, and the book leans hard into that sense of generational injustice and rage.
Devitt’s writing is very easy to get through and extremely propulsive. The book is action packed from the first chapters and rarely lets up. Fight scenes are where this story really shines. The battles are vivid, kinetic and cinematic, full of cataclysmic violence, desperate gambits and those little tactical details that make you feel like you are right there on the ground. It has a definite Witcher energy, but in a world where tech and alien species sit alongside the fantasy elements. If you enjoy military fantasy, relentless campaigns and a high body count, this will scratch that itch.
At the same time, there is more here than just grimdark spectacle. Devitt is generous with unflinching friendships and flashes of heartbreaking vulnerability. The story leans into the absurdity of trying to start a revolution when you are quite literally owned, and that absurdity is often played for dark humor in the best way. Fletcher and Ji’s adventures walk a tightrope between bleak and ridiculous, and that contrast brings much needed warmth to a world that is otherwise harsh, brutal and deeply unjust. There are moments where I laughed out loud right in the middle of blood and chaos, which makes the emotional beats land harder.
Character wise, Fletcher is very much a man on a mission against the world, and that archetype always works for me. He is stubborn, reckless, often outmatched but never out of the fight, and that makes him a great anchor for this kind of story. His dynamic with Ji is a highlight. Their banter, grudging trust and increasingly ride or die partnership give the book its emotional spine. I also loved Allica. She is chaotic in the best way and a promise of some truly hilarious scenes. There is one moment where she is talking about becoming queen of the elves and a rat shows up and absolutely destroys her intimidating pose, and it is so perfectly timed.
Where the book is a little weaker, for me, is in deeper character work. Beyond Fletcher and Ji especially, some of the cast can feel a bit one dimensional. This is not unique to this book, it is something I often find with very action driven science fiction and fantasy. When the plot is sprinting from battle to battle, there is less space for slower introspection and layered development, and you can feel that trade off here. I still enjoyed following the cast, but if you are looking for complex internal arcs and very nuanced character growth, that is not the primary focus.
The world building, on the other hand, is expansive and morally fraught in a way I really liked. Affer’s six species, the history of the war and the hierarchy that emerges afterward all feel thought through. This is a world where every victory is hard fought and costly, and every tragedy has weight because you understand the wider system it is pushing against. The moral lines are blurry, and the book is not shy about showing what revolution actually costs in blood and compromise.
Overall, The Quest for Freedom is an underdog rebellion story that leans into grit, momentum and spectacle. It is dark, violent and intense, but threaded with humor, loyalty and a stubborn hope that refuses to die. If you like your sci fi fantasy full of battles, rebellions and stubborn humans taking swings at impossible odds, and if a Witcher like vibe with tech and alien species sounds appealing, this is one to put on your radar.
I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
What hooked me first was the premise. Affer is divided between six species, and the humans, formerly the dominant force, are now scattered, broken and owned. Centuries have passed since the war that put them in chains, so this is not a fresh wound, it is a brutal status quo that most humans have stopped questioning. All except Fletcher. That long historical arc makes the story feel bigger than one rebellion, and the book leans hard into that sense of generational injustice and rage.
Devitt’s writing is very easy to get through and extremely propulsive. The book is action packed from the first chapters and rarely lets up. Fight scenes are where this story really shines. The battles are vivid, kinetic and cinematic, full of cataclysmic violence, desperate gambits and those little tactical details that make you feel like you are right there on the ground. It has a definite Witcher energy, but in a world where tech and alien species sit alongside the fantasy elements. If you enjoy military fantasy, relentless campaigns and a high body count, this will scratch that itch.
At the same time, there is more here than just grimdark spectacle. Devitt is generous with unflinching friendships and flashes of heartbreaking vulnerability. The story leans into the absurdity of trying to start a revolution when you are quite literally owned, and that absurdity is often played for dark humor in the best way. Fletcher and Ji’s adventures walk a tightrope between bleak and ridiculous, and that contrast brings much needed warmth to a world that is otherwise harsh, brutal and deeply unjust. There are moments where I laughed out loud right in the middle of blood and chaos, which makes the emotional beats land harder.
Character wise, Fletcher is very much a man on a mission against the world, and that archetype always works for me. He is stubborn, reckless, often outmatched but never out of the fight, and that makes him a great anchor for this kind of story. His dynamic with Ji is a highlight. Their banter, grudging trust and increasingly ride or die partnership give the book its emotional spine. I also loved Allica. She is chaotic in the best way and a promise of some truly hilarious scenes. There is one moment where she is talking about becoming queen of the elves and a rat shows up and absolutely destroys her intimidating pose, and it is so perfectly timed.
Where the book is a little weaker, for me, is in deeper character work. Beyond Fletcher and Ji especially, some of the cast can feel a bit one dimensional. This is not unique to this book, it is something I often find with very action driven science fiction and fantasy. When the plot is sprinting from battle to battle, there is less space for slower introspection and layered development, and you can feel that trade off here. I still enjoyed following the cast, but if you are looking for complex internal arcs and very nuanced character growth, that is not the primary focus.
The world building, on the other hand, is expansive and morally fraught in a way I really liked. Affer’s six species, the history of the war and the hierarchy that emerges afterward all feel thought through. This is a world where every victory is hard fought and costly, and every tragedy has weight because you understand the wider system it is pushing against. The moral lines are blurry, and the book is not shy about showing what revolution actually costs in blood and compromise.
Overall, The Quest for Freedom is an underdog rebellion story that leans into grit, momentum and spectacle. It is dark, violent and intense, but threaded with humor, loyalty and a stubborn hope that refuses to die. If you like your sci fi fantasy full of battles, rebellions and stubborn humans taking swings at impossible odds, and if a Witcher like vibe with tech and alien species sounds appealing, this is one to put on your radar.
I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
December 19, 2025
The Quest for Freedom is an action-packed fantasy book with a creative plot. There is never a dull moment in the story, and I wanted to keep reading to find out what would happen next. The characters are interesting and intriguing, and the dialogue is humorous with witty banter throughout. I thoroughly enjoyed the first book in the series, and I can't wait for book two to see how the conquest continues and to see what fate the characters shall face.
December 21, 2025
I’m sorry Matthew, this was horrible. This really needs to be edited. I have no idea why people are giving five stars to this!
Four hundred and seventy three years humans have been slaves under 5 other species: demons, angels, elves, the dammed, and hybrids on planet Affer. One human, Fletcher Rush was not going to give up his freedom and vowed to right the wrongs on his species. He trained day after day for the sole purpose of escaping enslavement and going to war with the rest of Affer.
LACKS SO MUCH DETAIL!
Main character does not get described until around page 120. His friend Ji is never described and no back story of how they became friends.
Areas and places are just barely described.
No exact details/back story of human slavery and Fletcher was born and raised on slavery, how should he know anything about freedom?
NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT except a tiny bit for Fletcher who is very arrogant at first. All other characters are like stick figures. No backgrounds or inner thoughts. Just barely any emotion.
NO WORLD BUILDING except a map on first page.
ONE FIGHT AFTER ANOTHER! (I like action, but I want a story) Constant repetition of rivals getting heads bashed in or chopped off. Amazing how many times I see the words Mother Fucker and Human scum.
Said to be fantasy and sci-fi. But basically just fantasy, hardly any sci-fi except it takes place on a planet and vehicles are used for transportation and transmitters are used to send messages just like cell phones. And there are oil bombs, but nothing sci-fi other than that. Very disappointed. It would have been cooler if the other species were different alien species rather than fantasy creatures (also no details on any of the other species, I know what elves look like in general, but I thought they were smaller than humans, Fletcher is said to look up at an elf more than once).
Human slavery does not even appear to be that bad. A large group was kept in a building that seemed unlocked and unguarded. Tor, who joins Fletchers rebellion is found under slavery moving bricks from one end of a city to another and acts pretty much the same way as a teenager who’s being told to take out the trash.
What disturbes me the most is in the first war battle (whole book is about war) Fletcher gets so mad and crazy with power that he very much resembles Donald Trump. Killing men, women and children, basically anyone who is not human. Same as Trump, getting rid of any one who is not white.
Even if you like action, I’d say this is not worth it.
Thanks to the author for supplying me a copy of his work.
Four hundred and seventy three years humans have been slaves under 5 other species: demons, angels, elves, the dammed, and hybrids on planet Affer. One human, Fletcher Rush was not going to give up his freedom and vowed to right the wrongs on his species. He trained day after day for the sole purpose of escaping enslavement and going to war with the rest of Affer.
LACKS SO MUCH DETAIL!
Main character does not get described until around page 120. His friend Ji is never described and no back story of how they became friends.
Areas and places are just barely described.
No exact details/back story of human slavery and Fletcher was born and raised on slavery, how should he know anything about freedom?
NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT except a tiny bit for Fletcher who is very arrogant at first. All other characters are like stick figures. No backgrounds or inner thoughts. Just barely any emotion.
NO WORLD BUILDING except a map on first page.
ONE FIGHT AFTER ANOTHER! (I like action, but I want a story) Constant repetition of rivals getting heads bashed in or chopped off. Amazing how many times I see the words Mother Fucker and Human scum.
Said to be fantasy and sci-fi. But basically just fantasy, hardly any sci-fi except it takes place on a planet and vehicles are used for transportation and transmitters are used to send messages just like cell phones. And there are oil bombs, but nothing sci-fi other than that. Very disappointed. It would have been cooler if the other species were different alien species rather than fantasy creatures (also no details on any of the other species, I know what elves look like in general, but I thought they were smaller than humans, Fletcher is said to look up at an elf more than once).
Human slavery does not even appear to be that bad. A large group was kept in a building that seemed unlocked and unguarded. Tor, who joins Fletchers rebellion is found under slavery moving bricks from one end of a city to another and acts pretty much the same way as a teenager who’s being told to take out the trash.
What disturbes me the most is in the first war battle (whole book is about war) Fletcher gets so mad and crazy with power that he very much resembles Donald Trump. Killing men, women and children, basically anyone who is not human. Same as Trump, getting rid of any one who is not white.
Even if you like action, I’d say this is not worth it.
Thanks to the author for supplying me a copy of his work.
November 16, 2025
Book Review: The Quest for Freedom (The Conquest Trilogy, Book 1) by Matthew Devitt
The Quest for Freedom is a gripping, high-stakes sci-fi adventure that plunges readers into a world shaped by war, oppression, and the unbreakable spirit of rebellion. Matthew Devitt crafts a bold and immersive opening to The Conquest Trilogy, delivering a story that is both thrilling in scope and deeply rooted in the timeless fight for dignity and freedom.
The planet Affer—once home to a thriving human civilization—has long fallen into ruin. After a devastating war among its six species, humans were nearly wiped out and the survivors enslaved by the five remaining races. Centuries pass, and humanity’s identity, pride, and history fade into memory. All except for one person: Fletcher Rush.
Four hundred and seventy-three years after humanity’s downfall, Fletcher refuses to accept the chains placed on his people. His journey is one of courage, conviction, and relentless determination as he sets out not just to free the enslaved humans, but to reclaim Affer itself. Devitt paints Fletcher as a powerful yet relatable protagonist—flawed, driven, and carrying the hopes of an entire species on his shoulders.
The worldbuilding is rich and imaginative, introducing readers to a planet shaped by diverse cultures, hostile kingdoms, and long-held animosities. Devitt skillfully balances action, strategy, political tension, and character development, creating a narrative that feels sweeping yet personal.
By the final page, it’s clear that The Quest for Freedom is only the beginning of something much larger—a rebellion, a reckoning, and a confrontation with the cycle of conquest itself.
The Quest for Freedom is a gripping, high-stakes sci-fi adventure that plunges readers into a world shaped by war, oppression, and the unbreakable spirit of rebellion. Matthew Devitt crafts a bold and immersive opening to The Conquest Trilogy, delivering a story that is both thrilling in scope and deeply rooted in the timeless fight for dignity and freedom.
The planet Affer—once home to a thriving human civilization—has long fallen into ruin. After a devastating war among its six species, humans were nearly wiped out and the survivors enslaved by the five remaining races. Centuries pass, and humanity’s identity, pride, and history fade into memory. All except for one person: Fletcher Rush.
Four hundred and seventy-three years after humanity’s downfall, Fletcher refuses to accept the chains placed on his people. His journey is one of courage, conviction, and relentless determination as he sets out not just to free the enslaved humans, but to reclaim Affer itself. Devitt paints Fletcher as a powerful yet relatable protagonist—flawed, driven, and carrying the hopes of an entire species on his shoulders.
The worldbuilding is rich and imaginative, introducing readers to a planet shaped by diverse cultures, hostile kingdoms, and long-held animosities. Devitt skillfully balances action, strategy, political tension, and character development, creating a narrative that feels sweeping yet personal.
By the final page, it’s clear that The Quest for Freedom is only the beginning of something much larger—a rebellion, a reckoning, and a confrontation with the cycle of conquest itself.
October 30, 2025
as a fan of epic fantasies about rebellion and hope, the quest for freedom by matthew devitt instantly pulled me in. set in a world where humans have lived as slaves for centuries, this story follows fletcher rush as he rises to reclaim freedom for his kind. what i loved most is how devitt balances intense action with emotional depth—it’s thrilling, heartfelt, and powerful. if you love stories about courage, uprising, and the fight to take back what was lost, this one’s for you. ⚔️🔥
November 27, 2025
Devitt builds an intriguing world: Affer is divided by racial territories, with a map showing locations like the elven capital Lilthral and hybrid stronghold Arkanon. The lore touches on historical wars that led to human subjugation, gods like Thylphion, and magical elements (though magic is understated here). The plot moves at a brisk pace, jumping from escapes and skirmishes to large-scale sieges. I appreciated the escalating tension, early chapters focus on survival, while later ones (like the assault on Lilthral) deliver epic confrontations. However, the story feels uneven. Some plot points rely on convenient coincidences (e.g., enemies making dumb decisions), and the ending sets up sequels without fully resolving emotional arcs. It's ambitious for a debut, but the 90 chapter length could have been trimmed, repetitive fight scenes drag in places.
Fletcher is a compelling protagonist: ruthless yet principled, driven by a quest for freedom. His growth from slave to leader is inspiring, and his speeches rally the troops effectively. Supporting cast like Ji (loyal friend), Tor (brute with heart), Crystal (strategic mind), and Leon (hot-headed veteran) add variety, though some feel archetypal. Villains like elven Queen Rinn and hybrid King Yinny are suitably menacing, with Yinny's scheming in the epilogue hinting at bigger threats. Fletcher & Ji have enjoyable banter, when they joke, the dialogue feels natural. Their friendship is the heart of the book, and the reader will probably like them together more than as individuals. But by Chapter 5, Fletcher has already performed feats that feel unrealistic in-world. Let Fletcher fail sometimes. Give him weaknesses, losses, injuries that truly matter. Deepen emotional interiority. Show Fletcher’s fear, anger, grief, hope. Develop stakes beyond physical combat. Political tension, resource scarcity, moral dilemmas, alliances. All of these would enrich the narrative.
Female characters like Crystal and Princess Allica (a cunning elf antagonist) show agency, but they're often defined by relationships to men or plot devices. Dialogue is functional but clunky, lots of "HA HA HA!" laughs and exposition dumps. Still, the camaraderie among Fletcher's team shines through, making their losses hit hard (e.g., a key death in battle feels earned).
Devitt's prose is straightforward and action-oriented, which suits the genre but lacks polish. Sentences are often short and repetitive ("Not even a second later" appears frequently), and there are grammatical hiccups (e.g., "fifthly hybrids" likely means "filthy"). Fights are vivid and brutal, gore, strategy, and tension are well-handled, but they dominate, sometimes at the expense of deeper world-building or character introspection. Does have extremely repetitive fight structure, these scenes are long, visceral, and repeated many times without variation in choreography, emotion, tactics, or consequences. Humans regularly beat elite demons in hand-to-hand combat even while injured, exhausted, and untrained. Fletcher takes wounds that would kill anyone, yet he keeps fighting like nothing happened. This lowers tension because the reader stops believing he is in danger. He’s described as a normal human who trained physically for years, but he kills quickly.
Pacing is fast, with 428 pages flying by thanks to constant conflict. Illustrations (cover by Alejandro Colucci, map by Saumya Singh) enhance the immersion, the map especially helps visualize Affer's geography. As a self-published work, it's raw but passionate. Themes of freedom, revenge, and resilience resonate, especially in a post-2020 world. There are many moments where the writing tells instead of shows, repeats information, or uses simple sentence structures: He was strong” ,“He trained every day ”, “He vowed to free his people.” The prologue dumps centuries of history rather than letting the world be revealed through scenes, culture, dialogue, or lived experiences. It feels like a lore manual rather than a story introduction. But angels at the top, demons below them, hybrids vs elves, these ideas can develop into a very interesting political fantasy world.
The premise” humanity enslaved”, a single man determined to free them, is classic and universally engaging. Devitt clearly poured heart into it, the underdog spirit is infectious. But editing for flow, dialogue, and plot holes would elevate it. If you're into epic battles and world-conquering heroes, pick it up. Fans of LitRPG / cultivation / progression fantasy / young readers (ages 13-18) who enjoy fast-paced action, simple moral conflict, and power fantasies this book will appeal most to.
Looking forward to Book 2. Fletcher's quest has me hooked!
Fletcher is a compelling protagonist: ruthless yet principled, driven by a quest for freedom. His growth from slave to leader is inspiring, and his speeches rally the troops effectively. Supporting cast like Ji (loyal friend), Tor (brute with heart), Crystal (strategic mind), and Leon (hot-headed veteran) add variety, though some feel archetypal. Villains like elven Queen Rinn and hybrid King Yinny are suitably menacing, with Yinny's scheming in the epilogue hinting at bigger threats. Fletcher & Ji have enjoyable banter, when they joke, the dialogue feels natural. Their friendship is the heart of the book, and the reader will probably like them together more than as individuals. But by Chapter 5, Fletcher has already performed feats that feel unrealistic in-world. Let Fletcher fail sometimes. Give him weaknesses, losses, injuries that truly matter. Deepen emotional interiority. Show Fletcher’s fear, anger, grief, hope. Develop stakes beyond physical combat. Political tension, resource scarcity, moral dilemmas, alliances. All of these would enrich the narrative.
Female characters like Crystal and Princess Allica (a cunning elf antagonist) show agency, but they're often defined by relationships to men or plot devices. Dialogue is functional but clunky, lots of "HA HA HA!" laughs and exposition dumps. Still, the camaraderie among Fletcher's team shines through, making their losses hit hard (e.g., a key death in battle feels earned).
Devitt's prose is straightforward and action-oriented, which suits the genre but lacks polish. Sentences are often short and repetitive ("Not even a second later" appears frequently), and there are grammatical hiccups (e.g., "fifthly hybrids" likely means "filthy"). Fights are vivid and brutal, gore, strategy, and tension are well-handled, but they dominate, sometimes at the expense of deeper world-building or character introspection. Does have extremely repetitive fight structure, these scenes are long, visceral, and repeated many times without variation in choreography, emotion, tactics, or consequences. Humans regularly beat elite demons in hand-to-hand combat even while injured, exhausted, and untrained. Fletcher takes wounds that would kill anyone, yet he keeps fighting like nothing happened. This lowers tension because the reader stops believing he is in danger. He’s described as a normal human who trained physically for years, but he kills quickly.
Pacing is fast, with 428 pages flying by thanks to constant conflict. Illustrations (cover by Alejandro Colucci, map by Saumya Singh) enhance the immersion, the map especially helps visualize Affer's geography. As a self-published work, it's raw but passionate. Themes of freedom, revenge, and resilience resonate, especially in a post-2020 world. There are many moments where the writing tells instead of shows, repeats information, or uses simple sentence structures: He was strong” ,“He trained every day ”, “He vowed to free his people.” The prologue dumps centuries of history rather than letting the world be revealed through scenes, culture, dialogue, or lived experiences. It feels like a lore manual rather than a story introduction. But angels at the top, demons below them, hybrids vs elves, these ideas can develop into a very interesting political fantasy world.
The premise” humanity enslaved”, a single man determined to free them, is classic and universally engaging. Devitt clearly poured heart into it, the underdog spirit is infectious. But editing for flow, dialogue, and plot holes would elevate it. If you're into epic battles and world-conquering heroes, pick it up. Fans of LitRPG / cultivation / progression fantasy / young readers (ages 13-18) who enjoy fast-paced action, simple moral conflict, and power fantasies this book will appeal most to.
Looking forward to Book 2. Fletcher's quest has me hooked!
November 18, 2025
The Quest for Freedom by Mathew Devitt is an action-packed fantasy fiction novel. The planet Affer is inhabited by five intelligent species: angels, humans, elves, demons, the damned, hybrids, and of course, your everyday humans. However, humans grew too many in number (of course we did) and thus were defeated and turned into slaves by the other species four hundred and seventy-three years ago.
Our story, as the title of the book would suggest, is about the quest for freedom. This quest was pioneered by Fletcher. The twenty-one-year-old man has been planning for it ever since he was a boy of ten. He has trained for it and has apparently developed a Henry Cavill body. And now he starts bringing that plan into execution. Not only does he want to free himself but also humanity — and then go on to rule them.
This novel is full of action, with lots of battles and fights — perhaps too many for my taste. I don’t mind battle scenes, but only up to an extent. Another issue for me was that many battles just seemed too easy. I understand that Fletcher and his companions needed to have something on their side to achieve success against such odds, but still. Another issue for me was that I honestly didn’t like Fletcher much for some reason. Maybe because he was more vengeance than justice and was looking forward to being king. He somehow comes across as a bit obnoxious at times, maybe this was intentional? Crystal, one of the very first female characters that we come across in this male-dominated world, seemed to share my suspicions.
I also felt that the character development as well as the world-building was lacking. It is difficult for me to imagine what those species other than humans may have looked like. Also, what other differences exist? There aren’t many fantasy elements here for a fantasy novel. Generally speaking, I would have preferred learning a lot more about the world than I actually did. The story does come with a map and a list of cities, but that is about it. There needs to be more to a story than people fighting each other. There is a bit of politics as the story progresses, but that too was inadequate. Prose was good when describing wars but not otherwise.
Also, there were times I didn’t enjoy the dialogues too much. A conversation between the elf queen and king, as they talk about the ways they like to torture human slaves, for example, should horrify one — but it didn’t make me feel anything. Generally speaking, there aren’t many details about the lives of humans as slaves.
I don’t wish to sound too critical, though. The story has its good points and might appeal more to audiences who like action-driven stories. For me too, there were a few good moments — one such moment that had me smiling was when Fletcher says that he intentionally makes flawed plans so that Crystal can find faults with them and present her own (far superior) plan.
Recommended to those who prefer fantasy war books.
Our story, as the title of the book would suggest, is about the quest for freedom. This quest was pioneered by Fletcher. The twenty-one-year-old man has been planning for it ever since he was a boy of ten. He has trained for it and has apparently developed a Henry Cavill body. And now he starts bringing that plan into execution. Not only does he want to free himself but also humanity — and then go on to rule them.
This novel is full of action, with lots of battles and fights — perhaps too many for my taste. I don’t mind battle scenes, but only up to an extent. Another issue for me was that many battles just seemed too easy. I understand that Fletcher and his companions needed to have something on their side to achieve success against such odds, but still. Another issue for me was that I honestly didn’t like Fletcher much for some reason. Maybe because he was more vengeance than justice and was looking forward to being king. He somehow comes across as a bit obnoxious at times, maybe this was intentional? Crystal, one of the very first female characters that we come across in this male-dominated world, seemed to share my suspicions.
I also felt that the character development as well as the world-building was lacking. It is difficult for me to imagine what those species other than humans may have looked like. Also, what other differences exist? There aren’t many fantasy elements here for a fantasy novel. Generally speaking, I would have preferred learning a lot more about the world than I actually did. The story does come with a map and a list of cities, but that is about it. There needs to be more to a story than people fighting each other. There is a bit of politics as the story progresses, but that too was inadequate. Prose was good when describing wars but not otherwise.
Also, there were times I didn’t enjoy the dialogues too much. A conversation between the elf queen and king, as they talk about the ways they like to torture human slaves, for example, should horrify one — but it didn’t make me feel anything. Generally speaking, there aren’t many details about the lives of humans as slaves.
I don’t wish to sound too critical, though. The story has its good points and might appeal more to audiences who like action-driven stories. For me too, there were a few good moments — one such moment that had me smiling was when Fletcher says that he intentionally makes flawed plans so that Crystal can find faults with them and present her own (far superior) plan.
Recommended to those who prefer fantasy war books.
December 20, 2025
1/5 Stars
Format: E Book
Spoilers: No
Thank you to the author for providing me an e-book for an honest review. While I had a lot of hope for this and thought there was a potentially interesting story, it unfortunately really missed for me.
The premise of the story is that humans have been subjugated in slavery to multiple other races, including elves, demons, and other fantastical creatures. Unfortunately for a book that is advertised as an epic fantasy, the fact that these fantasy creatures existed and had dominion over the world was really the extent of the fantasy elements.
The world building was really lacking, as was character development. We get a bit of back story about our main character, but most of that back story was that he trained a lot until he got really tired, then he would train some more. He meets another character early on and we get no real explanation as to how they know each other, what their connection is, or other important backstory details. The chapters are rushed, and basically jump from fight to fight, with a lot of fights being surprisingly easy for people who have been enslaved their entire lives by creatures who are supposed to be very superior.
The main issue here is the writing, and the dialogue in particular. The writing is extremely choppy, repetitive, and with limited descriptors. While I do not mind something being simply written, this goes kind of beyond that. Even for a dark action novel, I expect some variety in descriptors, and some range of sentence structure. The dialogue was also really tough, and I found myself at multiple points thinking that people just do not talk like this. On my e-reader, there would be entire pages where the dialogue was simple sentences in all caps. Despite that, the characters come off like an 80's action star - just really there for the violence, lacking depth, and quick to spit out a one liner that leaves you rolling your eyes. This really could have used some professional editing, both from the technical editing side as well as structural/developmental.
If you want a quick action driven book and you're not one for much dialogue and world building, then you may enjoy this - I see a number of people have given it 5 stars. I think experienced epic fantasy readers will find the world building, depth of character, and overall story arc quite lacking.
Format: E Book
Spoilers: No
Thank you to the author for providing me an e-book for an honest review. While I had a lot of hope for this and thought there was a potentially interesting story, it unfortunately really missed for me.
The premise of the story is that humans have been subjugated in slavery to multiple other races, including elves, demons, and other fantastical creatures. Unfortunately for a book that is advertised as an epic fantasy, the fact that these fantasy creatures existed and had dominion over the world was really the extent of the fantasy elements.
The world building was really lacking, as was character development. We get a bit of back story about our main character, but most of that back story was that he trained a lot until he got really tired, then he would train some more. He meets another character early on and we get no real explanation as to how they know each other, what their connection is, or other important backstory details. The chapters are rushed, and basically jump from fight to fight, with a lot of fights being surprisingly easy for people who have been enslaved their entire lives by creatures who are supposed to be very superior.
The main issue here is the writing, and the dialogue in particular. The writing is extremely choppy, repetitive, and with limited descriptors. While I do not mind something being simply written, this goes kind of beyond that. Even for a dark action novel, I expect some variety in descriptors, and some range of sentence structure. The dialogue was also really tough, and I found myself at multiple points thinking that people just do not talk like this. On my e-reader, there would be entire pages where the dialogue was simple sentences in all caps. Despite that, the characters come off like an 80's action star - just really there for the violence, lacking depth, and quick to spit out a one liner that leaves you rolling your eyes. This really could have used some professional editing, both from the technical editing side as well as structural/developmental.
If you want a quick action driven book and you're not one for much dialogue and world building, then you may enjoy this - I see a number of people have given it 5 stars. I think experienced epic fantasy readers will find the world building, depth of character, and overall story arc quite lacking.
December 15, 2025
Matthew Devitt's "The Quest For Freedom" functions as both revenge narrative and liberation epic, examining how oppressed populations reclaim agency through organized resistance. The novel's premise—humanity enslaved for 473 years following the Great War—establishes a power structure that the protagonist Fletcher Rush systematically dismantles through calculated military campaigns.
Devitt employs a structural framework that mirrors actual guerrilla warfare tactics. Fletcher targets the weakest adversary first (the elves), beginning with their smallest city (IItu) before progressing to larger strategic objectives. This escalating pattern creates narrative momentum while demonstrating how revolutionary movements build capacity through incremental victories.
The author's treatment of leadership proves particularly nuanced. Fletcher's character arc explores the psychological burden of command—his training regimen borders on compulsive, suggesting that his external quest for freedom masks an internal struggle with the weight of responsibility. His relationships with Ji, Crystal, and Tor provide necessary humanization, preventing the protagonist from becoming a mere tactical instrument.
Thematically, the novel interrogates what freedom costs. Devitt avoids romanticizing rebellion; instead, he presents warfare's brutal arithmetic—casualties accepted as necessary sacrifices toward a larger goal. This moral complexity elevates the narrative beyond simple good-versus-evil dichotomies.
The prose style favors clarity and momentum over lyrical flourishes, appropriate for military fiction but occasionally sacrificing atmospheric depth. Short chapters and dialogue-heavy sequences maintain pacing while revealing character through action rather than introspection.
As series opener, the novel successfully establishes stakes and world while delivering satisfying narrative closure. Fletcher's conquest of the elven kingdom represents both achievement and beginning—a completed campaign that merely inaugurates a larger war.
Devitt employs a structural framework that mirrors actual guerrilla warfare tactics. Fletcher targets the weakest adversary first (the elves), beginning with their smallest city (IItu) before progressing to larger strategic objectives. This escalating pattern creates narrative momentum while demonstrating how revolutionary movements build capacity through incremental victories.
The author's treatment of leadership proves particularly nuanced. Fletcher's character arc explores the psychological burden of command—his training regimen borders on compulsive, suggesting that his external quest for freedom masks an internal struggle with the weight of responsibility. His relationships with Ji, Crystal, and Tor provide necessary humanization, preventing the protagonist from becoming a mere tactical instrument.
Thematically, the novel interrogates what freedom costs. Devitt avoids romanticizing rebellion; instead, he presents warfare's brutal arithmetic—casualties accepted as necessary sacrifices toward a larger goal. This moral complexity elevates the narrative beyond simple good-versus-evil dichotomies.
The prose style favors clarity and momentum over lyrical flourishes, appropriate for military fiction but occasionally sacrificing atmospheric depth. Short chapters and dialogue-heavy sequences maintain pacing while revealing character through action rather than introspection.
As series opener, the novel successfully establishes stakes and world while delivering satisfying narrative closure. Fletcher's conquest of the elven kingdom represents both achievement and beginning—a completed campaign that merely inaugurates a larger war.
December 15, 2025
Matthew Devitt's "The Quest For Freedom" positions itself firmly within the military fantasy subgenre while incorporating elements of grimdark and revenge narratives. The novel demonstrates a clear understanding of what makes tactical fantasy compelling: detailed strategy, realistic combat consequences, and characters whose victories come from preparation rather than destiny.
The worldbuilding follows established fantasy conventions—multiple sentient species, distinct kingdoms, ancient wars—but Devitt inverts the typical power structure. Rather than humans as dominant species, they're the enslaved underclass, creating immediate sympathy and justification for the protagonist's violent campaign. This inversion recalls Pierce Brown's "Red Rising" series, though Devitt's approach is more grounded, eschewing advanced technology for straightforward medieval warfare.
Fletcher Rush fits the "competence protagonist" archetype popularized in recent fantasy. Like Kaladin from Sanderson's "Stormlight Archive" or Darrow from "Red Rising," Fletcher's effectiveness stems from obsessive training and tactical thinking rather than supernatural abilities. This grounds the narrative in achievable excellence rather than magical solutions.
The team-based structure mirrors military fiction conventions effectively. Each member serves distinct tactical purposes—Crystal as archer/scout, Tor as heavy combat specialist, Ji as lieutenant—while maintaining individual personalities. The dialogue-heavy approach keeps exposition manageable while developing character relationships organically.
Pacing follows the serial conquest model, with each city presenting escalating challenges. IItu establishes capability, Ronann demonstrates ambition, and Lilthral confirms dominance. This structure provides satisfying micro-arcs within the larger series framework.
For readers seeking action-focused fantasy with strategic depth, "The Quest For Freedom" delivers genre conventions executed with confidence and clarity. The series foundation promises escalating conflicts worthy of investment.
The worldbuilding follows established fantasy conventions—multiple sentient species, distinct kingdoms, ancient wars—but Devitt inverts the typical power structure. Rather than humans as dominant species, they're the enslaved underclass, creating immediate sympathy and justification for the protagonist's violent campaign. This inversion recalls Pierce Brown's "Red Rising" series, though Devitt's approach is more grounded, eschewing advanced technology for straightforward medieval warfare.
Fletcher Rush fits the "competence protagonist" archetype popularized in recent fantasy. Like Kaladin from Sanderson's "Stormlight Archive" or Darrow from "Red Rising," Fletcher's effectiveness stems from obsessive training and tactical thinking rather than supernatural abilities. This grounds the narrative in achievable excellence rather than magical solutions.
The team-based structure mirrors military fiction conventions effectively. Each member serves distinct tactical purposes—Crystal as archer/scout, Tor as heavy combat specialist, Ji as lieutenant—while maintaining individual personalities. The dialogue-heavy approach keeps exposition manageable while developing character relationships organically.
Pacing follows the serial conquest model, with each city presenting escalating challenges. IItu establishes capability, Ronann demonstrates ambition, and Lilthral confirms dominance. This structure provides satisfying micro-arcs within the larger series framework.
For readers seeking action-focused fantasy with strategic depth, "The Quest For Freedom" delivers genre conventions executed with confidence and clarity. The series foundation promises escalating conflicts worthy of investment.
November 3, 2025
The Conquest Trilogy, Book One: The Quest for Freedom by Matthew D. Devitt is a powerful and engaging fantasy story set on the planet Affer, where humans have been enslaved by five other species for centuries. The story follows Fletcher Rush, a blacksmith who refuses to accept this life anymore. His decision to fight back and free his people begins a journey filled with danger, courage, and hope. From the very first chapter, the story keeps you hooked with its strong emotions and fast pace.
Fletcher’s character is one of the best parts of this book. He isn’t born a hero he becomes one through his choices. His anger, pain, and determination feel real. You can understand why he wants to fight back after years of seeing his kind suffer. His journey isn’t just about breaking chains; it’s about showing that change starts with one person’s courage. His friendship with Ji also adds warmth and balance to the story.
The world-building in this book is detailed and creative. The planet Affer is divided between powerful species like demons, elves, angels, and hybrids. The mix of modern and ancient elements from cars to swords gives the story a fresh touch. The action scenes are strong, and the writing makes it easy to imagine every fight and escape. The pace is perfect, with a good mix of emotion, action, and reflection.
Overall, The Quest for Freedom is a must-read for anyone who enjoys fantasy stories about rebellion, strength, and hope. It teaches that freedom always comes with sacrifice and that even one person can make a difference. I would highly recommend this book to fans of epic fantasy and stories about courage and survival. It’s a great start to The Conquest Trilogy, and I’m excited to see where the next part of Fletcher’s journey will lead.
Fletcher’s character is one of the best parts of this book. He isn’t born a hero he becomes one through his choices. His anger, pain, and determination feel real. You can understand why he wants to fight back after years of seeing his kind suffer. His journey isn’t just about breaking chains; it’s about showing that change starts with one person’s courage. His friendship with Ji also adds warmth and balance to the story.
The world-building in this book is detailed and creative. The planet Affer is divided between powerful species like demons, elves, angels, and hybrids. The mix of modern and ancient elements from cars to swords gives the story a fresh touch. The action scenes are strong, and the writing makes it easy to imagine every fight and escape. The pace is perfect, with a good mix of emotion, action, and reflection.
Overall, The Quest for Freedom is a must-read for anyone who enjoys fantasy stories about rebellion, strength, and hope. It teaches that freedom always comes with sacrifice and that even one person can make a difference. I would highly recommend this book to fans of epic fantasy and stories about courage and survival. It’s a great start to The Conquest Trilogy, and I’m excited to see where the next part of Fletcher’s journey will lead.
November 19, 2025
Reading The Quest for Freedom felt like being dropped into a world where every breath is a reminder of what’s been taken away. Set on the planet Affer, the story follows Fletcher Rush — a blacksmith turned reluctant rebel — as he rises from a life of chains to challenge five powerful species that have enslaved humanity. I was hooked right from the opening chapter because the tension isn’t just physical, it’s emotional. You can feel the weight of centuries of oppression pressing down on every human character.
As I moved through the story, what struck me most was how raw and grounded the struggle for freedom feels. Nothing comes easy. Fletcher isn’t a perfect hero; he’s angry, impulsive, compassionate and flawed — which makes his journey incredibly human. Every setback, every small victory, and every sacrifice pushes the narrative forward with real purpose.
The worldbuilding is a fascinating blend of sword-and-shield fantasy mixed with modern-day elements like vehicles and recognizable technology. That contrast gives the book a fresh texture, making Affer feel both ancient and futuristic at the same time. And the author doesn’t shy away from showing the brutality of colonialism and domination, which makes Fletcher’s rebellion feel genuinely earned.
The pacing is sharp, the battles are vivid without being overwhelming, and the emotional beats land exactly where they should. By the end, I found myself rooting hard not just for Fletcher, but for the entire fractured human race he represents.
If you enjoy rebellion stories, gritty underdog heroes, hybrid worlds, and narratives about reclaiming identity, this book is absolutely worth picking up. I already know I’ll be diving into the next part of the trilogy soon.
As I moved through the story, what struck me most was how raw and grounded the struggle for freedom feels. Nothing comes easy. Fletcher isn’t a perfect hero; he’s angry, impulsive, compassionate and flawed — which makes his journey incredibly human. Every setback, every small victory, and every sacrifice pushes the narrative forward with real purpose.
The worldbuilding is a fascinating blend of sword-and-shield fantasy mixed with modern-day elements like vehicles and recognizable technology. That contrast gives the book a fresh texture, making Affer feel both ancient and futuristic at the same time. And the author doesn’t shy away from showing the brutality of colonialism and domination, which makes Fletcher’s rebellion feel genuinely earned.
The pacing is sharp, the battles are vivid without being overwhelming, and the emotional beats land exactly where they should. By the end, I found myself rooting hard not just for Fletcher, but for the entire fractured human race he represents.
If you enjoy rebellion stories, gritty underdog heroes, hybrid worlds, and narratives about reclaiming identity, this book is absolutely worth picking up. I already know I’ll be diving into the next part of the trilogy soon.
December 15, 2025
Picture this: you're enslaved for over four centuries, and one day you just decide—nope, not today. That's Fletcher Rush in a nutshell, and holy hell, what a ride Matthew Devitt takes us on.
"The Quest For Freedom" grabbed me by the throat from page one and didn't let go. Fletcher isn't some chosen one with magic powers—he's just a guy who trains obsessively, thinks strategically, and refuses to accept the world as it is. Watching him escape Titanan with Ji, recruit Crystal from Admont's ruins, and systematically dismantle the elven kingdom city by city is absolutely exhilarating.
What I loved most was the team dynamic. Ji and Fletcher's friendship feels genuine, born from shared suffering rather than plot convenience. Crystal's mysterious past with the angels adds intrigue, while Tor brings heart and humor despite wielding a war hammer that could crush skulls. The banter during fights—literally arguing while surrounded by enemies—made me laugh out loud.
Devitt doesn't pull punches with the violence. This is war, brutal and bloody, where people actually die and injuries matter. When Fletcher passes out from blood loss after being tortured, it reminded me these are humans fighting impossible odds, not invincible heroes.
The strategic elements impressed me too. Fletcher manipulating the elves into attacking the hybrids, using captured transmitters to spread misinformation, timing assaults for maximum advantage—this is thinking man's warfare, not just sword-swinging chaos.
By the time Fletcher stands victorious in Lilthral's palace, having conquered an entire species, I was pumped for books two and three. This trilogy is going places, and I'm absolutely here for it.
"The Quest For Freedom" grabbed me by the throat from page one and didn't let go. Fletcher isn't some chosen one with magic powers—he's just a guy who trains obsessively, thinks strategically, and refuses to accept the world as it is. Watching him escape Titanan with Ji, recruit Crystal from Admont's ruins, and systematically dismantle the elven kingdom city by city is absolutely exhilarating.
What I loved most was the team dynamic. Ji and Fletcher's friendship feels genuine, born from shared suffering rather than plot convenience. Crystal's mysterious past with the angels adds intrigue, while Tor brings heart and humor despite wielding a war hammer that could crush skulls. The banter during fights—literally arguing while surrounded by enemies—made me laugh out loud.
Devitt doesn't pull punches with the violence. This is war, brutal and bloody, where people actually die and injuries matter. When Fletcher passes out from blood loss after being tortured, it reminded me these are humans fighting impossible odds, not invincible heroes.
The strategic elements impressed me too. Fletcher manipulating the elves into attacking the hybrids, using captured transmitters to spread misinformation, timing assaults for maximum advantage—this is thinking man's warfare, not just sword-swinging chaos.
By the time Fletcher stands victorious in Lilthral's palace, having conquered an entire species, I was pumped for books two and three. This trilogy is going places, and I'm absolutely here for it.
November 6, 2025
The Quest for Freedom by Matthew D. Devitt is an intense and engaging beginning to The Conquest Trilogy. From the very first chapter, the author immerses readers in a world where humans have lived under the chains of slavery for centuries, ruled by five powerful species. The story follows Fletcher Rush, a brave and determined man who refuses to accept this cruel fate and decides to rise against it. His courage and persistence make him a strong and relatable hero that readers can easily root for.
The pacing of the book is quick, filled with action, tension, and moments of hope that keep you turning the pages. The author does a wonderful job mixing serious, emotional scenes with lighter moments of humor especially through Fletcher’s friendship with Ji, who adds warmth and balance to the story. The fight sequences are vivid and exciting, while the emotional depth gives the story real weight.
Matthew D. Devitt’s world-building stands out with its rich details and creative mix of species, each with their own history and purpose. It never feels overwhelming; instead, it makes Affer feel alive and believable. Fletcher’s mission to reclaim freedom for humanity carries both personal and universal meaning, making the story not just about war, but about hope and resilience.
Since this is only the first book in the trilogy, the larger conflict is far from over but the ending feels satisfying and sets the stage perfectly for what’s to come. I’d highly recommend The Quest for Freedom to anyone who enjoys action-packed fantasy stories filled with rebellion, courage, and heart. It’s a strong and promising start to an epic series.
December 15, 2025
There's something devastating about reading a story where an entire species has forgotten what it means to be free. Matthew Devitt's "The Quest For Freedom" broke my heart before it started rebuilding it, piece by bloody piece.
Fletcher Rush carries the weight of centuries on his shoulders—generations of humans who died in chains, never knowing liberation. When he escapes Titanan with Ji, it's not just two slaves fleeing; it's hope being reborn after 473 years of darkness. I felt that hope in every page.
The friendships in this book gutted me in the best way. Fletcher and Ji's bond, forged in shared suffering, reminded me that sometimes the people who save us aren't heroes—they're just friends who refuse to leave us behind. Crystal's reluctance to share her past with the angels made my chest ache. What did she endure that she can't speak of even among fellow survivors?
Devitt writes battle scenes that left my hands shaking. Not because of the violence itself, but because of what's at stake. Every human who falls fought for a future they might never see. When Fletcher gives his speeches about freedom, I wanted to stand up and cheer. His words carry the rage and hope of everyone who's ever been powerless.
By the time Lilthral falls and Fletcher hoists the overseer's severed head, declaring humanity's return to power, I was crying. Not sad tears—triumphant ones. This is a story about refusing to accept injustice, about fighting even when victory seems impossible.
This book reminded me why we read fantasy: to see the powerless become powerful, the enslaved become free.
Fletcher Rush carries the weight of centuries on his shoulders—generations of humans who died in chains, never knowing liberation. When he escapes Titanan with Ji, it's not just two slaves fleeing; it's hope being reborn after 473 years of darkness. I felt that hope in every page.
The friendships in this book gutted me in the best way. Fletcher and Ji's bond, forged in shared suffering, reminded me that sometimes the people who save us aren't heroes—they're just friends who refuse to leave us behind. Crystal's reluctance to share her past with the angels made my chest ache. What did she endure that she can't speak of even among fellow survivors?
Devitt writes battle scenes that left my hands shaking. Not because of the violence itself, but because of what's at stake. Every human who falls fought for a future they might never see. When Fletcher gives his speeches about freedom, I wanted to stand up and cheer. His words carry the rage and hope of everyone who's ever been powerless.
By the time Lilthral falls and Fletcher hoists the overseer's severed head, declaring humanity's return to power, I was crying. Not sad tears—triumphant ones. This is a story about refusing to accept injustice, about fighting even when victory seems impossible.
This book reminded me why we read fantasy: to see the powerless become powerful, the enslaved become free.
October 23, 2025
What an unexpected ride this turned out to be!
Honestly, I went into The Quest for Freedom thinking it would be your standard “chosen one fights back” fantasy… but oh no, this was darker, grittier, and so much more layered than I expected.
We’re on Affer, a planet torn apart by war between six species. Humans, once the dominant force, have been enslaved for centuries.
And everyone’s just… accepted it. Everyone except Fletcher Rush.
And wow, I loved Fletcher as a main character. He’s not some shiny hero with a destiny handed to him, he’s a blacksmith, scarred by years of oppression, and he’s simply had enough.
That quiet fury, that resolve to free his people, made him such a compelling and human (pun intended) MMC.
When he literally breaks his chains and escapes alongside Ji, I was rooting for them the whole time.
There’s this brilliant balance between brutal realism and hope throughout the book, that tiny flicker of “maybe we can change this” that keeps both Fletcher and the reader going.
The world building is incredible! Every species and kingdom feels unique, and you can feel the history that’s built up over those 473 years. It’s got that epic, old school fantasy tone, but still feels fresh and emotional.
By the end, I was fully invested in Fletcher’s mission and this rising rebellion. It’s one of those books that leaves you thinking about it even when finished.
A solid start to what feels like it’s going to be a sweeping, powerful trilogy.
Bring on book two, I’m so ready to see Fletcher rise. 🔥
Honestly, I went into The Quest for Freedom thinking it would be your standard “chosen one fights back” fantasy… but oh no, this was darker, grittier, and so much more layered than I expected.
We’re on Affer, a planet torn apart by war between six species. Humans, once the dominant force, have been enslaved for centuries.
And everyone’s just… accepted it. Everyone except Fletcher Rush.
And wow, I loved Fletcher as a main character. He’s not some shiny hero with a destiny handed to him, he’s a blacksmith, scarred by years of oppression, and he’s simply had enough.
That quiet fury, that resolve to free his people, made him such a compelling and human (pun intended) MMC.
When he literally breaks his chains and escapes alongside Ji, I was rooting for them the whole time.
There’s this brilliant balance between brutal realism and hope throughout the book, that tiny flicker of “maybe we can change this” that keeps both Fletcher and the reader going.
The world building is incredible! Every species and kingdom feels unique, and you can feel the history that’s built up over those 473 years. It’s got that epic, old school fantasy tone, but still feels fresh and emotional.
By the end, I was fully invested in Fletcher’s mission and this rising rebellion. It’s one of those books that leaves you thinking about it even when finished.
A solid start to what feels like it’s going to be a sweeping, powerful trilogy.
Bring on book two, I’m so ready to see Fletcher rise. 🔥
October 23, 2025
Matthew Devitt’s The Quest for Freedom launches readers into an unforgiving, battle-scarred world where humanity has been crushed under centuries of enslavement. Once rulers of Affer, humans are now divided, oppressed, and nearly erased—until one man, Fletcher Rush, dares to defy the order of things. His mission: free his kind and reclaim the planet. It’s an audacious premise that drives this dark, action-heavy fantasy from start to finish.
Devitt excels at building atmosphere and tension. The scenes of combat are visceral, cinematic, and immersive—you can practically hear the clash of steel and smell the smoke of war. Yet what truly gives the story its edge is Fletcher himself: flawed, determined, and haunted by the ghosts of a broken world. He isn’t a clean-cut hero but a survivor with grit and purpose, which makes his journey all the more compelling.
The pacing leans toward relentless, with little downtime between battles or betrayals. For some readers, the intensity might feel unrelenting, but for fans of grim, high-stakes fantasy, it hits exactly the right note. Devitt’s dialogue and worldbuilding both shine brightest when he dives into the moral gray areas—what freedom really costs and who deserves to lead once it’s won.
Affer feels alive, dangerous, and steeped in history, even if the world’s many species and centuries-long conflict sometimes require a second read to fully absorb. But that complexity pays off, creating an epic feel reminiscent of The Witcher or Mistborn.
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Devitt excels at building atmosphere and tension. The scenes of combat are visceral, cinematic, and immersive—you can practically hear the clash of steel and smell the smoke of war. Yet what truly gives the story its edge is Fletcher himself: flawed, determined, and haunted by the ghosts of a broken world. He isn’t a clean-cut hero but a survivor with grit and purpose, which makes his journey all the more compelling.
The pacing leans toward relentless, with little downtime between battles or betrayals. For some readers, the intensity might feel unrelenting, but for fans of grim, high-stakes fantasy, it hits exactly the right note. Devitt’s dialogue and worldbuilding both shine brightest when he dives into the moral gray areas—what freedom really costs and who deserves to lead once it’s won.
Affer feels alive, dangerous, and steeped in history, even if the world’s many species and centuries-long conflict sometimes require a second read to fully absorb. But that complexity pays off, creating an epic feel reminiscent of The Witcher or Mistborn.
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November 5, 2025
The Conquest Trilogy, Book One: The Quest for Freedom by Matthew D. Devitt is a powerful fantasy story set on the planet Affer, where humans have been enslaved for centuries by five other species. The story follows Fletcher Rush, a blacksmith who finally decides to rise against oppression and reclaim freedom for his people. His journey is full of challenges, battles, and moments of deep emotion that keep you turning the pages.
What I really liked about this book is Fletcher’s character. He isn’t a perfect hero or someone born with special powers he’s an ordinary man with extraordinary courage. His anger, pain, and determination make him real and relatable. The friendship between Fletcher and Ji adds warmth to the story, showing how loyalty and belief can keep hope alive even in the darkest times. The author’s writing makes you feel every emotion Fletcher goes through from fear to strength.
The world of Affer is beautifully imagined. The mix of modern and ancient elements, like transmitters, cars, swords, and armor, makes it unique and interesting. The battle scenes are intense and written in a way that feels real, not overdone. The pacing is perfect, and the story keeps building excitement as Fletcher moves forward in his mission.
I would definitely recommend The Quest for Freedom to readers who enjoy fantasy stories about rebellion, courage, and hope. It’s not just about fighting enemies; it’s about fighting for what’s right and believing that one person can make a difference. This book is a strong start to The Conquest Trilogy and a must-read for anyone who loves action-filled, meaningful stories with heart.
What I really liked about this book is Fletcher’s character. He isn’t a perfect hero or someone born with special powers he’s an ordinary man with extraordinary courage. His anger, pain, and determination make him real and relatable. The friendship between Fletcher and Ji adds warmth to the story, showing how loyalty and belief can keep hope alive even in the darkest times. The author’s writing makes you feel every emotion Fletcher goes through from fear to strength.
The world of Affer is beautifully imagined. The mix of modern and ancient elements, like transmitters, cars, swords, and armor, makes it unique and interesting. The battle scenes are intense and written in a way that feels real, not overdone. The pacing is perfect, and the story keeps building excitement as Fletcher moves forward in his mission.
I would definitely recommend The Quest for Freedom to readers who enjoy fantasy stories about rebellion, courage, and hope. It’s not just about fighting enemies; it’s about fighting for what’s right and believing that one person can make a difference. This book is a strong start to The Conquest Trilogy and a must-read for anyone who loves action-filled, meaningful stories with heart.
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