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Not Picking Up Another Emily McIntire
I think after this, I am not picking up another Emily McIntire book again. It just doesn’t cut it for me.
The plot is underwhelming, the twists obvious, and the downfalls handmade by the MCs’ idiotic decisions.
This series had so much potential, especially with the “villain gets an HEA” concept, but it fell flat. Same problems in book 1 and 6. Which tells me: not much improvement has been made.
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Flat Origins & Missed Potential
While the plot tries to give the “villain” their HEA, and I actually liked that the villain remains a villain but more nuanced, the execution just isn’t there.
Instead of truly delving into origin stories, we only get a couple of mentions and that one convenient story that somehow ties everything together. But even then, those elements aren’t used to their full emotional potential.
And listen: this is not a short book. It had the space. It just didn’t use it.🤷🏻♀️
Enzo’s background? Explored, but too lightly. Aside from one tiny mention near the climax, it barely mattered.
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Smut for “Fuck’s” Sake
I’m a smut girlie. I love spice. But I like it to make sense.
Here? It was mostly cringe.
• Enzo having sex with Aria while thinking of Venesa.
• V having a sex dream.
• The brewing tension between them wasted except for one scene.
There was substance to build on. But instead we got five (?) sex scenes back-to-back, which was just exhausting.
And don’t even get me started on the male narrator in the audiobook. 😬 He made the cringe ten times worse.
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Dumb Decisions on Repeat
The MCs constantly act like fools.
Venesa does the exact same reckless thing multiple times, gets in trouble each time, and still repeats it, until the final pinnacle moment where, honestly, she deserved what happened.
Enzo wasn’t much better.
For a mafia world, these characters had zero street smarts.
Yes, you can be trusting, but not blind.
Yes, you can be relaxed, but not when your life literally depends on anticipating threats.
The lack of basic logic? Maddening.🤡
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Rushed & Box-Checking
I do appreciate the attempt at authenticity by pulling in as many elements from the original fairytales as possible. But here, it felt rushed, like a checklist being ticked off rather than integrated meaningfully.
Some resolutions happened way too fast, losing all their impact.
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Audiobook Ick Factor
I’m no expert on US accents, but the drift was so obvious. Whatever tilt the narrator started with, it quickly faded, only popping back on certain words like “sugar” and “sweetheart.”
And again: the male narrator gave me the absolute biggest icks, especially in the smut scenes.
Trust me, even at 2x speed, it wasn’t fast enough to escape the cringe.
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Goodbye
Flat. Underwhelming. Predictable. Not actually fun.
This series could’ve been so much more… but it wasn’t.
Thank you Makayla for choosing this for my 25 books from 25 friends for 2025.
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Pre-read:
I might as well throw myself to the sharks and see if I survive this...🧜♀️