2012 Review:
This was a stupid book. I mean, I kinda knew the likelihood of this when going in, but damn.
It just felt naïve, like a personal fantasy. As though the author is projecting her opinions, likes and dislikes, using the chars as a soap box. Oh and wish fulfilment. Be it some fancy car or the detailed menu in some amazing restaurant.
Character motivations made little sense either, especially with Frankie who came off as a stereotypical and outdated, mercurial heroine, jerking the hero around with no rhyme or reason, teasing and pushing him away in the same breath, &c. Altogether, this was simply very immature and amateurish.
The plot itself did not fare any better than the execution. It’s full of aborted ideas and opportunities. Also, why even have vampires? They were not at all, well, vampiry. Just for longevity, dietary needs and some enhanced physical abilities? Well and the destined mate thing, I guess. I am sure that sounds like a lot, but in this case it really wasn’t.
Man, this was bad. I just hope it’s not supposed to be the start to a series. There are side characters who’d no doubt work well as future protagonists but with this writing? I hope not.
I’ve been willing to give this author some leeway since she has that “just starting out” feel to her and I know perfectly well that some authors need to burn through their first ten or even more books before they start delivering decent quality, but for now I am all out of patience with this one. It’s just not enjoyable.