Written in first-person, dual POV, Annika Martin’s Ms. Renfield and the Inheritance Trap: A Vampire Mystery Romance is about Harriet Morgan, whose inheritance from her father Renfield is taking over as centuries-old vampire Alexandru Miramonte’s servant. Harriet discovers that through her father she’s a Renfield-part of a despicable family line cursed to serve Alexandru. Alexandria follows Harriet back home after she says that she’s uninterested in becoming his live-in, obedient servant, threatening to kill her family, friends, and fellow townspeople for their blood. To protect them, she agrees to become his servant and manage his vampire affairs if he feeds only on serial killers and people deserving of it. They join forces, using her spreadsheet and organizational data tracking skills and his hunting scales to catch murderers before Alexander loses control of his hunger. Harriet also must fight Alexander’s magnetism that draws her to him despite his monstrous nature and his callous view of humans as livestock.
Intelligent, stubborn, idealistic, and sarcastic, Harriet lives with her mother and grandmother, Granabelle, above their failing family antique store that she’s trying to keep afloat. Harriet is an organizational whiz who sees patterns inside data devoted to data organization. A workaholic, Harriet creates coherent systems from her boss Serena’s ideas at a data tech firm. Harriet is burdened by a painful loss as a teen that drives her interest in criminal investigation. She’s been tracking a serial killer in town. I love her character. She’s a likable, fascinating, relatable character with a fierce spirit and attitude. Empathetic and fearless, Harriet stands up for others and what’s right. I love that she doesn’t just let Alexandru walk all over her or talk to her any old way, and she tries to keep him from doing it to others as well. Her friends, family, and the citizens of the town are fascinating and funny and I love her interactions with them. Harriet’s interactions and conversations with Alexandru are strangely hilarious, awkward, and terrifying all at the same time.
Pushy, arrogant, controlling, cruel, and cold, Alexandru demands that Harriet replace her father Renfield as his new Renfield to manage his business affairs and real estate holdings for the rest of her life. As far as he’s concerned, Harriet doesn’t have a choice in the matter of whether she accepts her “inheritance.” Graceful, magnetic, handsome, and large, with a British accent, Alexandru’s appearance and demeanor don’t match who and what he is inside. Despite Alexandru’s humorous interactions with Harriet, her friends, family, and the townspeople, it’s difficult to call him the hero, morally grey, or even the antihero of this story because he is a predator who sees humans as nothing more than food. Martin does a great job of developing Alexandru as the cold, ancient vampire who only drinks humans. That is the only purpose they have in his life. Renfields are a different class of humans, spared from death only while serving their debt to him. He hates Renfields, views them as beneath him, and Martin taunts us but never tells us why he feels this way.
Ms. Renfield and the Inheritance Trap reads more like a mystery/thriller and horror novel than a slow-burn romance. The mystery/thriller and horror parts of the novel work better. Alexandru doesn’t change or grow as a character outside of being a deadly vampire who wants to master and control Harriet and is driven to kill humans without regard for their lives or humanity. So, despite attempts to develop/show attraction on Harriet’s part despite her revulsion for who and what Alexandru is and Alexandru’s protectiveness and jealousy over Harriet, the romantic relationship development between them isn’t there by the novel’s end. I didn’t like the ending because where the novel ends, the story feels unfinished. They’re still enemies and not yet lovers. Though I will say that Martin nails the enemies aspect better than most novels that claim to be enemies-to-lovers romances, but not so much the lover’s part.
Ms. Renfield and the Inheritance Trap: A Vampire Mystery Romance is a hilarious, emotional, suspenseful read with horror, and mystery, recommended for forced proximity, modern retellings, mystery/thrillers, and horror fans.
3.25
Thanks to Annika Martin and The Author Agency for the ARC.