1 ⭐️ So what, if he abandoned his daughter ⭐️
The mmc abandons his 3 year old daughter when HER MOTHER DIES. He gives her to his friend. Not a relative for 6 months.😂 in her hour of need.
If you can move on from this little tidbit, you might enjoy this more than me. Buckle up, this is going to be long.
I could spend hours shredding this book apart because there is so much wrong with it, and so much to talk about. Luckily for this author I don’t have time to go over all of it. And I dnf’ed at 50%.
First the premise: Camille finds a love letter, Jack wrote to his now dead wife.
The love he had for her, is dialed all the way up to a 1000, and it bothered me. It was a love of the ages, enough to abandon their daughter out of grief. THAT IS WHAT A WIMP WOULD DO. She lost her mother too! 🤦♀️
I am not fragile with the dead wife trope, but his yearning and the love letters to her were too much. Any future romance seemed dulled and unrealistic at the 50% mark.
Back to Camille, she is mistaken for a job applicant for a nanny position, and she takes the job without hesitation 🤦♀️ How that all went down, was all in all, very unbelievably.
As of page 20 ish, she is openly lusting for him, and her lust is more of a priority, than the daughter is. She writes hims letters begging him to teach her the ropes! (pun intended) My friend CB would have sentenced her to a life sentence in horny jail. And she would have deserved to be there.
They have a bondage session with the daughter down the hall with an open door. Wtf! Parent fail. Which brings me to one of the biggest problems with this story, why bring a child into a BDSM story? As a key plot device!
It will have to be done very carefully, right? It was not. Everything in this book screamed neglect, and it was hard to enjoy the steam because the daughter was literally down the hall😂
His bondage room is open, because Camille walked right in by accident, so the daughter could as well.
Also he doesn’t speak to his now 5 year old child. Like at all. What purpose does that serve to the story, besides showing me he is a man child who can’t prioritize.
I am so over the tormented man, who has cart Blanche to do anything because he hurts. Get it together like the rest of the world has to.
Another major problem is the readers are being told that Camille is so curious and wild, really? because all I see is a girl who works as a nanny and is tied up at night and then writing love letters to him. I did not see her at all as wild and untamed 😂 Jack doesn’t like Camille’s voice, so she isn’t allowed to talk him. Yeah well that’s nice.
She sounds like his deceased wife, okay now he is just a freaking crazy person. She puts up with it😂 yeah she is a wild one!
She is dumb. He is a wimp. They are terrible at parenting, but good at spice.
The steam is steaming! If only they were other people. This book would have greatly benefited, from not using a child as a key character.
Her dead father used to call her little bird, and now he uses that nickname when they 🍆🍆. That’s weird and kind of a turn off. 🤮
All ln all, the writing was actually good and the steam was good. But the story sucked. It could’ve been good, but the characters were written as terrible people. How can I look at Jack and think, wow he is hot? Is that what the writer thought would happen. Abandoning your toddler is the most anticlimactic, wet towel of a man. And I can’t unsee that. I judge!
Should you read it? No, it’s shallow and catered to a certain demographic that doesn’t get distracted by a father who abandons his child in her hour of need because he hurts.
Ps. Insta lust and children DO NOT MIX. Love and children do ❤️ just my opinion.