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Second Chance Luna
Phoebe had been raised on stories of the magical moment when she would meet her fated mate, the one destined to be her partner forever. She grew up watching her parents’ great love and knew it wasn’t just wishful thinking. However dreams and reality prove to be very different when she meets her Graham, future Alpha of the Rimrock Pack. He rejects her and leaves her without a backward glance.
He rejected her because he thought she was weak, wolfless. Little does he know it is all a façade. Phoebe’s wolf is unlike any other. She is a silver wolf, the very incarnation of the Moon Goddess herself, and destined to change the world they know.
Living in the shadow of her former mate Phoebe remains with her pack making her own place among the others by taking care of their pups. If this is the life she was given she is determined to make the most of it despite the continued ridicule she receives as her wolf insists they must be discrete and refuses to come forward. Destiny; however, has not forgotten them and rears its head again when her second chance mate appears.
Jason, Alpha of the Blue Moon Pack, one of the six ancient and most powerful of all packs, has been searching in vain for his Luna for nearly a decade. He is on the verge of giving up when a security check has him setting foot on the Rimrock pack lands. Her scent tantalizes him. Her beauty and grace leave him speechless. His mate. His Luna. But first he has to convince her he wants only her.
Can this newly formed power couple truly change the world? Just what destiny awaits them when Phoebe’s wolf is revealed? When even the royal family stands against them is their love strong enough to overcome and bring the new dawn?
He rejected her because he thought she was weak, wolfless. Little does he know it is all a façade. Phoebe’s wolf is unlike any other. She is a silver wolf, the very incarnation of the Moon Goddess herself, and destined to change the world they know.
Living in the shadow of her former mate Phoebe remains with her pack making her own place among the others by taking care of their pups. If this is the life she was given she is determined to make the most of it despite the continued ridicule she receives as her wolf insists they must be discrete and refuses to come forward. Destiny; however, has not forgotten them and rears its head again when her second chance mate appears.
Jason, Alpha of the Blue Moon Pack, one of the six ancient and most powerful of all packs, has been searching in vain for his Luna for nearly a decade. He is on the verge of giving up when a security check has him setting foot on the Rimrock pack lands. Her scent tantalizes him. Her beauty and grace leave him speechless. His mate. His Luna. But first he has to convince her he wants only her.
Can this newly formed power couple truly change the world? Just what destiny awaits them when Phoebe’s wolf is revealed? When even the royal family stands against them is their love strong enough to overcome and bring the new dawn?
- GenresWerewolves
219 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 21, 2025
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February 28, 2026
Plot was interesting. The book needs serious editing though!
Not necessarily for grammar or typos like I usually find but for scene continuity. Character names were exchanged in so many scenes that I got totally confused and had to read sections again to try to find out who was really saying or experiencing what.
Example: Just now, at the closing scene of this book a character is walking into the dining room and smells his mate for the first time. The name given to her was our main character's name, who is already mated and claimed.
So I'm going, what? Read the scene again to see if I missunderstood, but no, I did not. Then I'm like so she has 2 mates now? And keep reading, only to find a paragraph or two bellow that clears up that the found mate's name is Lily, not our main character.
This is just one example of many scenes throughout the book. I kept getting so confused! Anyways, if an editor fixes these scenes the reading experience would be smoother. The plot is there and would be enjoyed better.
Not necessarily for grammar or typos like I usually find but for scene continuity. Character names were exchanged in so many scenes that I got totally confused and had to read sections again to try to find out who was really saying or experiencing what.
Example: Just now, at the closing scene of this book a character is walking into the dining room and smells his mate for the first time. The name given to her was our main character's name, who is already mated and claimed.
So I'm going, what? Read the scene again to see if I missunderstood, but no, I did not. Then I'm like so she has 2 mates now? And keep reading, only to find a paragraph or two bellow that clears up that the found mate's name is Lily, not our main character.
This is just one example of many scenes throughout the book. I kept getting so confused! Anyways, if an editor fixes these scenes the reading experience would be smoother. The plot is there and would be enjoyed better.
February 11, 2026
For an AI assisted written book story line is ok. Readability is lacking and inconsistent. The author has also left a paragraph from the Ai software at the end of chapter 34 (see below). So have obviously taken other books or "sources" to create this.
"This version preserves all story elements but improves readability, pacing, and characterization, while eliminating any phrasing that could be copied directly from another source."
"This version preserves all story elements but improves readability, pacing, and characterization, while eliminating any phrasing that could be copied directly from another source."
January 22, 2026
For a trashy YA novel, this wasn't too bad.
First, the story was actually pretty decent and somewhat original. Second, the FMC was feminine AND strong of character. She wasn't a Mary Sue who excelled at everything. She had talents and she had flaws and she was completely fine with not being the strongest fighter in the room. She had doubts about herself, pain, history, baggage. She also had some pretty healthy coping mechanisms and was able to use time and reflection to work through her issues. Overall, it was actually a very non-toxic, wholesome dynamic from the love interests (various couples) throughout the book and the only toxic drama came from the antagonists while the couples communicated, set boundaries, and worked together. That in itself put it a step above most of these stories.
The whole plot was a thinly veiled discussion on promiscuity vs waiting for the right person. In the context of the book, I think it worked. It also, obviously, tied into the story itself as a main theme and plot device.
It was missing a lot of the typical basic spelling and grammar issues you typically see in books like these. Overall, not bad. I'd go as high as a 3.5 for plot and originality, as well as the lack of love triangles or toxic dominance from the main couples.
First, the story was actually pretty decent and somewhat original. Second, the FMC was feminine AND strong of character. She wasn't a Mary Sue who excelled at everything. She had talents and she had flaws and she was completely fine with not being the strongest fighter in the room. She had doubts about herself, pain, history, baggage. She also had some pretty healthy coping mechanisms and was able to use time and reflection to work through her issues. Overall, it was actually a very non-toxic, wholesome dynamic from the love interests (various couples) throughout the book and the only toxic drama came from the antagonists while the couples communicated, set boundaries, and worked together. That in itself put it a step above most of these stories.
The whole plot was a thinly veiled discussion on promiscuity vs waiting for the right person. In the context of the book, I think it worked. It also, obviously, tied into the story itself as a main theme and plot device.
It was missing a lot of the typical basic spelling and grammar issues you typically see in books like these. Overall, not bad. I'd go as high as a 3.5 for plot and originality, as well as the lack of love triangles or toxic dominance from the main couples.
January 25, 2026
Terrible
The story had enough potential that I borrowed it with Kindle Unlimited but it was a disaster. There was no editing. Names change, POV switches like crazy, and the wrong characters say things then reply to themselves. There was no end, it just stopped suddenly, and absolutely no rhyme or reason to the chapters. Don't waste your time.
The story had enough potential that I borrowed it with Kindle Unlimited but it was a disaster. There was no editing. Names change, POV switches like crazy, and the wrong characters say things then reply to themselves. There was no end, it just stopped suddenly, and absolutely no rhyme or reason to the chapters. Don't waste your time.
February 25, 2026
The story is good but needs editing. It's not just grammar but names mix up gets confusing
January 9, 2026
219 pages and no ending
Another lazy author. No ending to this book and the following not yet written. Story line is average, with some tension but little to no heat. Had I realised there was no ending in the book I would not have read it and I certainly will not bother with the next one.
Another lazy author. No ending to this book and the following not yet written. Story line is average, with some tension but little to no heat. Had I realised there was no ending in the book I would not have read it and I certainly will not bother with the next one.
February 10, 2026
Quite
Mild adult content, reader discretion advised. Mani is a cool wolf. I know Phoebe was the focus of this story of rejection and redemption. Mani is sassy and funny though, way more entertaining. Graham rejected Phoebe. Jason was quick to retrieve her and everyone she loved, including two orphan kids. Jason is leagues above Graham. The threats are not just from Graham and his pack, there are some nasty she-wolves that are swarming like sharks to blood. Whenever Mani shows herself, it's going to be memorable. Right now, the she-wolves think Phoebe is wolfless. Phoebe is putting them all in their places, regardless. This is infuriating and confounding to so many, and entertaining for you.
Of note is the many editing misses. It comes across almost like English is a second language to our author. If that is the case, kudos, for getting this book written. I would encourage all readers to be kind regardless. It takes courage to write and perseverance to publish.
Mild adult content, reader discretion advised. Mani is a cool wolf. I know Phoebe was the focus of this story of rejection and redemption. Mani is sassy and funny though, way more entertaining. Graham rejected Phoebe. Jason was quick to retrieve her and everyone she loved, including two orphan kids. Jason is leagues above Graham. The threats are not just from Graham and his pack, there are some nasty she-wolves that are swarming like sharks to blood. Whenever Mani shows herself, it's going to be memorable. Right now, the she-wolves think Phoebe is wolfless. Phoebe is putting them all in their places, regardless. This is infuriating and confounding to so many, and entertaining for you.
Of note is the many editing misses. It comes across almost like English is a second language to our author. If that is the case, kudos, for getting this book written. I would encourage all readers to be kind regardless. It takes courage to write and perseverance to publish.
February 28, 2026
The Scorned Luna (Rejected Mates Series Book 1)
The Scorned Luna (Rejected Mates Series Book 1) ~~ This book pulled me in right from the start and did not let go. The emotional depth in The Scorned Luna is intense — rejection, heartbreak, strength, and growth are all woven together in a way that feels raw and real. Luna’s journey is painful at times, but it’s also empowering as she begins to find her own worth beyond the mate bond that failed her.
The world-building is strong, the characters are layered, and the tension between fate and choice keeps the story moving at a steady pace. I loved watching Luna evolve from someone defined by rejection into someone who starts reclaiming her power. The chemistry, the pack politics, and the emotional fallout all made this a compelling read.
This book sets up the series beautifully and leaves you absolutely wanting more. I recommend this book and the entire series.
The Scorned Luna (Rejected Mates Series Book 1) ~~ This book pulled me in right from the start and did not let go. The emotional depth in The Scorned Luna is intense — rejection, heartbreak, strength, and growth are all woven together in a way that feels raw and real. Luna’s journey is painful at times, but it’s also empowering as she begins to find her own worth beyond the mate bond that failed her.
The world-building is strong, the characters are layered, and the tension between fate and choice keeps the story moving at a steady pace. I loved watching Luna evolve from someone defined by rejection into someone who starts reclaiming her power. The chemistry, the pack politics, and the emotional fallout all made this a compelling read.
This book sets up the series beautifully and leaves you absolutely wanting more. I recommend this book and the entire series.
January 2, 2026
Ok…
The storyline was decent…but it felt incomplete. This felt like a segue to a bigger story. It left questions about the significance of her wolf along with Jason‘s.
However, there were inconsistencies and mistakes that could have been avoided with more thorough editing. This includes the wrong names being put in, lack in necessary details, which makes things feel a little more like a puzzle trying to be put together as you’re figuring out the significance of something such as what the red label on the beer signifies, and changes in the POV or the timeline suddenly so you’re having to reread to figure out where you’re going or what just happened. It’s not a horrible read and I didn’t struggle to get to the end despite the mistakes, but I do wonder where the author is going now. I believe there’s another book coming out which may answer the questions.
The storyline was decent…but it felt incomplete. This felt like a segue to a bigger story. It left questions about the significance of her wolf along with Jason‘s.
However, there were inconsistencies and mistakes that could have been avoided with more thorough editing. This includes the wrong names being put in, lack in necessary details, which makes things feel a little more like a puzzle trying to be put together as you’re figuring out the significance of something such as what the red label on the beer signifies, and changes in the POV or the timeline suddenly so you’re having to reread to figure out where you’re going or what just happened. It’s not a horrible read and I didn’t struggle to get to the end despite the mistakes, but I do wonder where the author is going now. I believe there’s another book coming out which may answer the questions.
January 10, 2026
plot has potential, but writing has issues
Overall, the plot has potential, but I can’t figure out if the book is pirated from another pay to read site, Ai written , or needs more editing.
The reason why I think this is this section at the end of a chapter: “This version preserves all story elements but improves readability, pacing, and characterization, while eliminating any phrasing that could be copied directly from another source.”
Sometimes, the flow is awkward and formatting makes it hard to tell if time had jumped to different scene; like one paragraph they are meeting in the alpha’s office having a conversation then the next paragraph, they are in the bedroom waking up… make it makes sense
Overall, the plot has potential, but I can’t figure out if the book is pirated from another pay to read site, Ai written , or needs more editing.
The reason why I think this is this section at the end of a chapter: “This version preserves all story elements but improves readability, pacing, and characterization, while eliminating any phrasing that could be copied directly from another source.”
Sometimes, the flow is awkward and formatting makes it hard to tell if time had jumped to different scene; like one paragraph they are meeting in the alpha’s office having a conversation then the next paragraph, they are in the bedroom waking up… make it makes sense
January 25, 2026
Great story but with errors
I am a big fan of strong FLs and devoted MLs, so this book covered most of my checklist. However, there are a lot of errors, most of which happen during dialogue (names get switched/changed, people are responding to their own questions or I interrupting themselves, etc.), which makes for a very confusing read sometimes. I was already far along in the book so I just kept with it - but the story itself is great. There IS a section that might've been an editing note, mentioning how the story has been altered for pacing but words removed to avoid being copied from another source, so maybe that's where some of the errors come from ?
I am a big fan of strong FLs and devoted MLs, so this book covered most of my checklist. However, there are a lot of errors, most of which happen during dialogue (names get switched/changed, people are responding to their own questions or I interrupting themselves, etc.), which makes for a very confusing read sometimes. I was already far along in the book so I just kept with it - but the story itself is great. There IS a section that might've been an editing note, mentioning how the story has been altered for pacing but words removed to avoid being copied from another source, so maybe that's where some of the errors come from ?
February 6, 2026
Great Story HORRIBLE Editing
The first 3rd of the book was well organized with good continuity. Then is really began coming apart. Pronouns were randomly mixed. Incorrect names were placed as speakers or objects of sentences. Characters were added in with no context. The character Lilly was the worst. Many divergent ideas, plots and conflicts were added in and haphazardly brandadished about, without purpose or follow through. All but a few characters were wholly undefined and without structure or context.
There is great potential but extensive editing and clarity of continuity need to be addressed furst.
The first 3rd of the book was well organized with good continuity. Then is really began coming apart. Pronouns were randomly mixed. Incorrect names were placed as speakers or objects of sentences. Characters were added in with no context. The character Lilly was the worst. Many divergent ideas, plots and conflicts were added in and haphazardly brandadished about, without purpose or follow through. All but a few characters were wholly undefined and without structure or context.
There is great potential but extensive editing and clarity of continuity need to be addressed furst.
March 4, 2026
Really good and attention pulling.
I loved this book as a 'so far.' It feels incomplete, though. There seems to be some pronoun and name mistakes. (We all make mistakes...) When people are talking, it would be nice to know who each time. Maybe add a little extra detail. When they're mind linking each other, use italics with the quotes. When they're talking with their wolf or just the wolf is talking, use italics.
Adding the Luna ceremony in and a few more details of what is happening around them during each period, i.e. the room they're in, what's around them, etc. Pull me into that place. Make me feel like I'm right there with the characters.
I loved this book as a 'so far.' It feels incomplete, though. There seems to be some pronoun and name mistakes. (We all make mistakes...) When people are talking, it would be nice to know who each time. Maybe add a little extra detail. When they're mind linking each other, use italics with the quotes. When they're talking with their wolf or just the wolf is talking, use italics.
Adding the Luna ceremony in and a few more details of what is happening around them during each period, i.e. the room they're in, what's around them, etc. Pull me into that place. Make me feel like I'm right there with the characters.
February 20, 2026
a good story marred by poor editing.
The story is wonderful, sweet, and engaging. And for that I give it three stars. But this book is in desperate need of polish. It is riddled with issues like spelling and basic subject verb agreement, in addition to places where the dialogue just doesn’t line up and you have to deduce who is the actual speaker. There is one section where there is an actual editor note that wasn’t removed.
However, I think with another round or two of edits, this book could really shine!
The story is wonderful, sweet, and engaging. And for that I give it three stars. But this book is in desperate need of polish. It is riddled with issues like spelling and basic subject verb agreement, in addition to places where the dialogue just doesn’t line up and you have to deduce who is the actual speaker. There is one section where there is an actual editor note that wasn’t removed.
However, I think with another round or two of edits, this book could really shine!
February 22, 2026
untapped potential
I think this book has some real potential with it’s characters and storylines, but it’s clearly unfinished and unedited. New characters come out of nowhere like the reader is supposed to know who they are, there are mistakes about who is speaking in numerous places, and it ends unbelievably abruptly…with earlier storylines just hanging unresolved. Also… the “steamy” in the title is very misleading…this is very closed door and while enjoyable, not remotely what I would call steamy.
I think this book has some real potential with it’s characters and storylines, but it’s clearly unfinished and unedited. New characters come out of nowhere like the reader is supposed to know who they are, there are mistakes about who is speaking in numerous places, and it ends unbelievably abruptly…with earlier storylines just hanging unresolved. Also… the “steamy” in the title is very misleading…this is very closed door and while enjoyable, not remotely what I would call steamy.
June 18, 2026
I really liked that this book had a storyline focused more on the characters than on sex like many werewolf stories, but oh making me go to a second book to get the rest of the story! I felt like I had a perfect picture of what Phoebe looked like and who she was. Phoebe feels like a Luna that is all her own and unlike most others we read about, as if the author looked at the Luna mold and said no thank you. Phoebe is kind, wise, and full of surprises. I can't wait to continue her story with Jason in the next book.
January 7, 2026
Good story line
The story line is good and the characters enticing. I would recommend more editing as there are many spots where the character name is incorrect and as well as the pronouns for characters. The author appears to switch between 1st person and narrator, which is okay but the transition is not smooth. Many times I would have to go back and reread a section because of it.
The story line is good and the characters enticing. I would recommend more editing as there are many spots where the character name is incorrect and as well as the pronouns for characters. The author appears to switch between 1st person and narrator, which is okay but the transition is not smooth. Many times I would have to go back and reread a section because of it.
January 19, 2026
excellent writing
This is a very well written book. I couldn't put it down until the end. I found myself completely enraptured by the characters. Pheobe in particular. What a perfect heroine. Her quiet strength and her kindness help the reader become invested. You want to keep turning pages to see how she manages the next situation. I'm quite impressed with "Luna Ogley" this is the first of her books I've read. I can't wait to get the next in the series!!
This is a very well written book. I couldn't put it down until the end. I found myself completely enraptured by the characters. Pheobe in particular. What a perfect heroine. Her quiet strength and her kindness help the reader become invested. You want to keep turning pages to see how she manages the next situation. I'm quite impressed with "Luna Ogley" this is the first of her books I've read. I can't wait to get the next in the series!!
January 21, 2026
Really really good!
This story is such a good read. It has a little bit of drama, great coming together and Characters are fun and so easy to fall in love with. Two things stop it from being five stars. 1. Grammatical and spelling errors. There are enough that a few times I had to reread to make the sentence work. 2. The ending felt incomplete. It seems to stop at a point that is in the middle of the story.
This story is such a good read. It has a little bit of drama, great coming together and Characters are fun and so easy to fall in love with. Two things stop it from being five stars. 1. Grammatical and spelling errors. There are enough that a few times I had to reread to make the sentence work. 2. The ending felt incomplete. It seems to stop at a point that is in the middle of the story.
January 23, 2026
Good story but needs editing
The editor either died or gave up around chapter 28. It's a good story but the last few chapters were very difficult to read. The grammar was terrible, there were huge plot holes and some of it just didn't make sense at all. It was almost like the author had a bunch of ideas for the book and she randomly included them without actually flushing them out and making them part off the story. Also the book just ended, there was no conclusion.
The editor either died or gave up around chapter 28. It's a good story but the last few chapters were very difficult to read. The grammar was terrible, there were huge plot holes and some of it just didn't make sense at all. It was almost like the author had a bunch of ideas for the book and she randomly included them without actually flushing them out and making them part off the story. Also the book just ended, there was no conclusion.
February 9, 2026
Desperately needs editing
While the overall story is alright, if a bit cliche, it desperately needs editing. There are multiple times throughout where the wrong names are used, making for some strange situations and confusing reads. The story also likes to jump around in a few places, abruptly ending a scene and skipping ahead out of nowhere. For example wolves are attending a party and suddenly they warp to a bedroom, leaving you wondering what was left out.
While the overall story is alright, if a bit cliche, it desperately needs editing. There are multiple times throughout where the wrong names are used, making for some strange situations and confusing reads. The story also likes to jump around in a few places, abruptly ending a scene and skipping ahead out of nowhere. For example wolves are attending a party and suddenly they warp to a bedroom, leaving you wondering what was left out.
February 11, 2026
terrible grammar with multiple errors
A very amateur novel with many errors, making it hard to follow. Really needs an editor to check it over. Incorrect pronouns used and wrong character names in places making some parts confusing, forcing the reader to constantly backtrack to try and sort out who the author meant. Decent enough story once you unravel what was meant, the only thing stooping me from giving 1 star.
A very amateur novel with many errors, making it hard to follow. Really needs an editor to check it over. Incorrect pronouns used and wrong character names in places making some parts confusing, forcing the reader to constantly backtrack to try and sort out who the author meant. Decent enough story once you unravel what was meant, the only thing stooping me from giving 1 star.
February 13, 2026
Good story but needs editing
Enjoyed the basis of the story but sooooo many mistakes... Wrong words used, wrong names used and also a fated mate meeting where one party hasn't even been introduced to readers (later learn the Alpha who has just been introduced to MFC brought his sister with him but there was no mention of her as another Alpha walked up and said "Mate?")... Has real promise but needs decent editing...
Enjoyed the basis of the story but sooooo many mistakes... Wrong words used, wrong names used and also a fated mate meeting where one party hasn't even been introduced to readers (later learn the Alpha who has just been introduced to MFC brought his sister with him but there was no mention of her as another Alpha walked up and said "Mate?")... Has real promise but needs decent editing...
February 15, 2026
Just okay
The characters in the book are excellent and well developed. However, the plot is rather lacking. There is no real protagonist and very little engaging plot development. The events are all fairly mundane and not compelling in the least. I was not excited to see what would happen next because nothing really happened through the entirety of the book. It was a disappointing read.
The characters in the book are excellent and well developed. However, the plot is rather lacking. There is no real protagonist and very little engaging plot development. The events are all fairly mundane and not compelling in the least. I was not excited to see what would happen next because nothing really happened through the entirety of the book. It was a disappointing read.
February 21, 2026
Intriguing story with good character development
Enjoyable story. Really liked the characters. Only drawback is there are a lot of editing errors where the incorrect name is inserted or noticeable spelling and wording mistakes that distract from how the story flows. Entertaining enough to read straight through and will read the sequel to see how this concludes.
Hopefully corrections can be made and that will improve quality of reading experience.
Enjoyable story. Really liked the characters. Only drawback is there are a lot of editing errors where the incorrect name is inserted or noticeable spelling and wording mistakes that distract from how the story flows. Entertaining enough to read straight through and will read the sequel to see how this concludes.
Hopefully corrections can be made and that will improve quality of reading experience.
February 25, 2026
Interesting story
This is editor's review, not simply an interested readers review. There are many places where incorrect words are used, making me wonder if a spell checker was used and if this was an AI produced. Also the characters are flipped back and forth between the actions making. Who said what incorrect and who did what incorrect? It would be great to see this good work have a real editor and if this was an AI produced work then that AI should be shot
This is editor's review, not simply an interested readers review. There are many places where incorrect words are used, making me wonder if a spell checker was used and if this was an AI produced. Also the characters are flipped back and forth between the actions making. Who said what incorrect and who did what incorrect? It would be great to see this good work have a real editor and if this was an AI produced work then that AI should be shot
January 24, 2026
Good story, but bad writing
Has a good story line, but bad writing. Lots of misspelled words, confusing paragraphs where characters are muddled up, and weird timeline jumps. I did enjoy the actual story, but I had to read between the lines to work out what was happening a lot of the time.
Has a good story line, but bad writing. Lots of misspelled words, confusing paragraphs where characters are muddled up, and weird timeline jumps. I did enjoy the actual story, but I had to read between the lines to work out what was happening a lot of the time.
January 28, 2026
The story had potential
The story had potential and it lost it. Spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the book could have been glossed over but the constant mixing up of characters is not as passable. Last chapter cut off and book ended without an ending or a cliffhanger
Two stars was a gift
The story had potential and it lost it. Spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the book could have been glossed over but the constant mixing up of characters is not as passable. Last chapter cut off and book ended without an ending or a cliffhanger
Two stars was a gift
February 1, 2026
Good story…but…
There are a lot of grammar errors such as spelling, wrong names used, or wrong words used. Ex: shoe-wolf for she-wolf.
Some of the time flashes were confusing because it didn’t transition well. Also the chapters kinda just ended in the middle of a paragraph and picked right back up, so there really wasn’t a reason for the chapter to end.
There are a lot of grammar errors such as spelling, wrong names used, or wrong words used. Ex: shoe-wolf for she-wolf.
Some of the time flashes were confusing because it didn’t transition well. Also the chapters kinda just ended in the middle of a paragraph and picked right back up, so there really wasn’t a reason for the chapter to end.
February 5, 2026
Needs Editing
This book is a good story and I am glad there is a second edition coming as I felt a lot of things were left unfinished. This book needs some serious editing because it is at times hard to follow the story line as names are switched and even parts of sentences are gone.
This book is a good story and I am glad there is a second edition coming as I felt a lot of things were left unfinished. This book needs some serious editing because it is at times hard to follow the story line as names are switched and even parts of sentences are gone.
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