Phoebe had been raised on stories of the magical moment when she would meet her fated mate, the one destined to be her partner forever. She grew up watching her parents’ great love and knew it wasn’t just wishful thinking. However dreams and reality prove to be very different when she meets her Graham, future Alpha of the Rimrock Pack. He rejects her and leaves her without a backward glance.
He rejected her because he thought she was weak, wolfless. Little does he know it is all a façade. Phoebe’s wolf is unlike any other. She is a silver wolf, the very incarnation of the Moon Goddess herself, and destined to change the world they know.
Living in the shadow of her former mate Phoebe remains with her pack making her own place among the others by taking care of their pups. If this is the life she was given she is determined to make the most of it despite the continued ridicule she receives as her wolf insists they must be discrete and refuses to come forward. Destiny; however, has not forgotten them and rears its head again when her second chance mate appears.
Jason, Alpha of the Blue Moon Pack, one of the six ancient and most powerful of all packs, has been searching in vain for his Luna for nearly a decade. He is on the verge of giving up when a security check has him setting foot on the Rimrock pack lands. Her scent tantalizes him. Her beauty and grace leave him speechless. His mate. His Luna. But first he has to convince her he wants only her.
Can this newly formed power couple truly change the world? Just what destiny awaits them when Phoebe’s wolf is revealed? When even the royal family stands against them is their love strong enough to overcome and bring the new dawn?
First, the story was actually pretty decent and somewhat original. Second, the FMC was feminine AND strong of character. She wasn't a Mary Sue who excelled at everything. She had talents and she had flaws and she was completely fine with not being the strongest fighter in the room. She had doubts about herself, pain, history, baggage. She also had some pretty healthy coping mechanisms and was able to use time and reflection to work through her issues. Overall, it was actually a very non-toxic, wholesome dynamic from the love interests (various couples) throughout the book and the only toxic drama came from the antagonists while the couples communicated, set boundaries, and worked together. That in itself put it a step above most of these stories.
The whole plot was a thinly veiled discussion on promiscuity vs waiting for the right person. In the context of the book, I think it worked. It also, obviously, tied into the story itself as a main theme and plot device.
It was missing a lot of the typical basic spelling and grammar issues you typically see in books like these. Overall, not bad. I'd go as high as a 3.5 for plot and originality, as well as the lack of love triangles or toxic dominance from the main couples.
The storyline was decent…but it felt incomplete. This felt like a segue to a bigger story. It left questions about the significance of her wolf along with Jason‘s. However, there were inconsistencies and mistakes that could have been avoided with more thorough editing. This includes the wrong names being put in, lack in necessary details, which makes things feel a little more like a puzzle trying to be put together as you’re figuring out the significance of something such as what the red label on the beer signifies, and changes in the POV or the timeline suddenly so you’re having to reread to figure out where you’re going or what just happened. It’s not a horrible read and I didn’t struggle to get to the end despite the mistakes, but I do wonder where the author is going now. I believe there’s another book coming out which may answer the questions.
Overall, the plot has potential, but I can’t figure out if the book is pirated from another pay to read site, Ai written , or needs more editing. The reason why I think this is this section at the end of a chapter: “This version preserves all story elements but improves readability, pacing, and characterization, while eliminating any phrasing that could be copied directly from another source.”
Sometimes, the flow is awkward and formatting makes it hard to tell if time had jumped to different scene; like one paragraph they are meeting in the alpha’s office having a conversation then the next paragraph, they are in the bedroom waking up… make it makes sense
I am a big fan of strong FLs and devoted MLs, so this book covered most of my checklist. However, there are a lot of errors, most of which happen during dialogue (names get switched/changed, people are responding to their own questions or I interrupting themselves, etc.), which makes for a very confusing read sometimes. I was already far along in the book so I just kept with it - but the story itself is great. There IS a section that might've been an editing note, mentioning how the story has been altered for pacing but words removed to avoid being copied from another source, so maybe that's where some of the errors come from ?
The first 3rd of the book was well organized with good continuity. Then is really began coming apart. Pronouns were randomly mixed. Incorrect names were placed as speakers or objects of sentences. Characters were added in with no context. The character Lilly was the worst. Many divergent ideas, plots and conflicts were added in and haphazardly brandadished about, without purpose or follow through. All but a few characters were wholly undefined and without structure or context.
There is great potential but extensive editing and clarity of continuity need to be addressed furst.
The story line is good and the characters enticing. I would recommend more editing as there are many spots where the character name is incorrect and as well as the pronouns for characters. The author appears to switch between 1st person and narrator, which is okay but the transition is not smooth. Many times I would have to go back and reread a section because of it.
This is a very well written book. I couldn't put it down until the end. I found myself completely enraptured by the characters. Pheobe in particular. What a perfect heroine. Her quiet strength and her kindness help the reader become invested. You want to keep turning pages to see how she manages the next situation. I'm quite impressed with "Luna Ogley" this is the first of her books I've read. I can't wait to get the next in the series!!
This story is such a good read. It has a little bit of drama, great coming together and Characters are fun and so easy to fall in love with. Two things stop it from being five stars. 1. Grammatical and spelling errors. There are enough that a few times I had to reread to make the sentence work. 2. The ending felt incomplete. It seems to stop at a point that is in the middle of the story.
The editor either died or gave up around chapter 28. It's a good story but the last few chapters were very difficult to read. The grammar was terrible, there were huge plot holes and some of it just didn't make sense at all. It was almost like the author had a bunch of ideas for the book and she randomly included them without actually flushing them out and making them part off the story. Also the book just ended, there was no conclusion.
Another lazy author. No ending to this book and the following not yet written. Story line is average, with some tension but little to no heat. Had I realised there was no ending in the book I would not have read it and I certainly will not bother with the next one.
decent story but riddled with typos and inconsistencies.
The story itself could be decent, but inconsistencies (which character is speaking, incorrect names assigned to characters) and a paragraph that appears to be inadvertently included that read “This version preserves all story elements but improves readability, pacing, and characterization, while eliminating any phrasing that could be copied…” makes me question if it wasn’t written by AI, which is disappointing.
Has a good story line, but bad writing. Lots of misspelled words, confusing paragraphs where characters are muddled up, and weird timeline jumps. I did enjoy the actual story, but I had to read between the lines to work out what was happening a lot of the time.
The story had enough potential that I borrowed it with Kindle Unlimited but it was a disaster. There was no editing. Names change, POV switches like crazy, and the wrong characters say things then reply to themselves. There was no end, it just stopped suddenly, and absolutely no rhyme or reason to the chapters. Don't waste your time.
The story had potential and it lost it. Spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the book could have been glossed over but the constant mixing up of characters is not as passable. Last chapter cut off and book ended without an ending or a cliffhanger Two stars was a gift
There are a lot of grammar errors such as spelling, wrong names used, or wrong words used. Ex: shoe-wolf for she-wolf.
Some of the time flashes were confusing because it didn’t transition well. Also the chapters kinda just ended in the middle of a paragraph and picked right back up, so there really wasn’t a reason for the chapter to end.
This book is a good story and I am glad there is a second edition coming as I felt a lot of things were left unfinished. This book needs some serious editing because it is at times hard to follow the story line as names are switched and even parts of sentences are gone.
Discovered this read on Facebook! Most time you can’t find because they want you to subscribe to sites you pay per chapter but found on kindle and glad I checked…. Awesome
The book has not been reviewed by an editor. There are many grammatical errors. The story does not flow and switches point of view and the reader has to figure out whats happening.
There is also no conclusion to the book, no cliff hanger, just an abrupt ending.
The story and writing aren't bad, there are errors in the book that throw the reader off names and jumps in the storyline it makes the read choppy, not a smooth read.
The quiet strength of a True Luna can not be denide nor hidden to those that have eyes to see. Surface dwellers are clearly superficial and will always get what they deserve.
Too many errors in this book. Changing of names, sentences that don’t make sense, and more. The ending was not really an ending, it just left me saying “what?” A waste of time. So very disappointing!
I really enjoyed this story. However, it got confusing at times. It kept switching POV’s, the names were mixed up, and there were lots of grammatical errors. I really think that with a thorough edit, this could be great.
This is not the complete story. Only 40 chapters here, no conclusion. Completed book has over 115 chapters on Dreame-Read I believe. It's by E.T. Watson, not Luna Ogley. Same person or a plagiarist??
This was a great werewolf romance. It does need a proofread on the last few chapters - the names were a bit mixed up. I can't wait for the next book! I want to see when Phoebe lets Mani show herself.
Started interesting. The further into the book, the more errors. Names mixed up, details missing. Then it just ends. Not even a real cliffhanger. Just stops and says book 2 is coming. It has potential but it needs a lot of editing and rewrites.
So many spelling mistakes. And paragraphs I have to go back and re read as the character names have been mixed up, which is mildly annoying. Will I be reading the next one? most likely. It's an easy read to curl up with.