2.75 ⭐
This story is set in a dystopian America that’s been in ruins for years, and we follow two resilient women who cross paths at the exact moment they both need someone. Makyala (Mak) is on her way back to Aurora after two years fighting in the war disguised as a man, when she finds Talon injured on the road. Talon is a commander from a neighboring enclave called Raptare, and the closer they travel together, the harder it becomes to ignore the connection forming between them… but will they let themselves have it?
Mak is a character who’s survived so much: losing her family, witnessing the cruelty of the world, and basically learning to fend for herself. I loved how fiercely she loves Talon and how she refuses to give up on them. She’s determined, sometimes stubborn, and she’s willing to fight for what she feels. However, I would’ve liked more personal depth from her outside of the romance. Since she spends most of the book chasing Talon, we don’t get much time to see her grow on her own. And even though she eventually becomes a co-commander, I never truly felt she developed the skills to fill that role. By the end, instead of seeing her vulnerability, she came across a bit too fragile for my personal taste.
Talon was also a little hard for me to connect with, even after learning her sad backstory. When she finally stops resisting her feelings for Mak, I felt more relief than excitement that the “will-they-won’t-they” tension was finally over. Still, it was nice watching her soften and make room for her personal life after being defined only by duty for so long. That shift really worked for her character.
As for the romance, it leans more toward insta-love than slow burn, so some moments didn’t feel fully believable to me. But I did enjoy the longing, the emotional vulnerability, and the little glimpses of intimacy they eventually share. Their connection had depth at times—it just wasn’t quite enough to convince me completely.
What I was most excited about, though, was the worldbuilding… and sadly, this part left me wanting more. For a dystopian setting, I didn’t get a strong sense of danger or survival urgency. The world often felt almost normal, and the lack of real action made the pacing drag in places.
Something that truly stood out to me was the "unkindness” of ravens as companions! I don’t think I’ve ever seen it portrayed quite like this, and it gave the story such a fun twist. Their moments with Mak were lovely and unexpectedly tender. And Betty (Talon’s cat) was just the cutest!
Overall, It's a sapphic dystopian romance with emotional moments and a lot of potential, I just wished for deeper development in both the world and the characters.
If you enjoy post-apocalyptic settings, vulnerable heroines, and romances where characters have to earn each other’s trust, this might be one to check out!
I received an eARC from NetGalley and the publisher in exchange for my honest thoughts, thank you for the opportunity.