The planet Nivalis turns so slowly that only a narrow band of land is ever warmed by its sun. This moving zone—called the Bright Spot—is the last refuge for life. Everything outside it has frozen into desolation. Centuries ago, civilization thrived in both light and shadow—until the darkness turned deadly. No one knows why. Few dare to ask.
Caelius marches with The Brightest, a caravan devoted to following the light’s path around the world. Faithful. Fearful. Unyielding. But when the caravan suddenly stops moving, they find uneasy refuge in the shadow of the ancient city of Solace. When one friend disappears, Caelius begins to see the cracks in their beliefs—and in himself. Violence follows. So does doubt.
With humanity unraveling around him, Caelius must face a terrible choice: cling to who he was, become what he’s feared, or rise as something entirely new.
This debut novel takes a unique planetary environment and zooms in to show that even in the most impossible of circumstances, life endures. The Bright Spot blends genres seamlessly, combining sci-fi that crosses the border into fantasy, all within a post-apocalyptic setting. The sardonic narrative creates lighthearted moments to brighten a grim, dismal tone. The names, religions, and power dynamics all speak of a cohesive culture formed over decades of wandering. And the naming of the beloved cat of the story reflects Raben's personal creativity in naming his real-life pets (I believe he mentions in his newsletters than he has a cat named Ceiling Fan). Looking forward to seeing more from Raben.
A very intriguing idea of a planet. It had a gripping start and the characters have distinct personalities and most of them are fun and mysterious. It also surprised me with some reveals and I love the focus on friendship. It seems like there will be sequels, judging by the epilogues? Anyway, it's an intriguing story but I wish some peculiarities were added since this story takes place in another planet. From how it is now, it doesn't seem very different from a fantasy story taking place on Earth. But it was successful in holding my attention.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
This is a haunting and atmospheric science-fiction story with a powerful emotional core. The concept of a world surviving only in a moving band of light is brilliantly imagined, and Caelius’s journey through faith, fear, and self-discovery is gripping from start to finish. Tense, thought-provoking, and deeply human, this book explores belief, survival, and transformation in a way that lingers long after the final page. A compelling and unforgettable read.
I liked the book and the story had an interesting premise. I found myself confused at times by the characters and their motivations, there also seemed to be things happening that did not seem to fit into the timeline as I saw it. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Really looking forward to reading the final draft and release of The Bright Spot! Had the opportunity to read a 3rd draft of the book, sit down and discuss the future of the book and narrative with the author, and now it’s almost time for the release of the book! Excited to see this here on Goodreads and hope you all take the opportunity to read this book. The Bright Spot is a fun read that introduces/immerses you into a new world, ecosystem, and lifestyle.
Thank you to BookSirens, the publisher, and the author for providing me with an ARC of The Bright Spot. The following is my honest review!
The Bright Spot is a post-apocalyptic sci-fi novel set on the planet Nivalis. Following the freezing of the planet, its inhabitants are only able to rebuild at all thanks to the extremely slow rotation of the planet. So long as they remain nomadic, following the bright spot as they circumnavigate the globe, the conditions of the world are habitable for them.
The main character Caelius lives amongst a religious group known as The Brightest that worship the Light as they travel nearly at the front edge of the Bright Spot. We follow Caelius as he navigates interpersonal relationships, his role within the group, his relationship and belief in the Light, and trying to understand the nature of the world he is certain could be different.
The book is ambitious in that it tackles not only the micro-plot and conflicts amongst individuals, but establishes some themes and questions (to be further explored in subsequent books I imagine) to do with politics, religion, anthropology, and “human” psychology. I found the unfolding narrative around the freezing and the people who lived at that time to be super interesting and honestly not where I expected things to go. I think the author clearly has a well-thought-out plan in mind for the trajectory of this story and that’s super evident in the way events and bits of knowledge tie together in the first book.
I’m under the impression that this is not intended to be a YA novel and so I did find the writing to be a bit juvenile. Despite the main characters being described as in their late 20s, they act and speak far more like teenagers. It’s possible this was a stylistic choice by the author but that isn’t made especially clear. As a result it feels like there is a disconnect between who the characters are described as being and how they interact with each other, how they speak and what they choose to say, and how they handle emotions. I could be mistaken and this could be intended for a more YA audience, or perhaps I’m just not the right audience period.
I do enjoy the concept, it kind of reminded me of Kim Stanley Robinson’s creation of Terminator on Mercury in 2312, I’m a sucker for a “chosen one” trope, and I also enjoy when a character’s actions actually have meaning and cause challenges in their future.
If I were to give a rating on overall plot, including how well-thought-out it is, it would be a solid 4/5. Factoring in the general writing style and the depictions of the characters (dialogue, actions, reactions, etc)., it’s more of a 2.5/5 for me (though perhaps more of a 3/5 if I imagine the audience slightly younger. Plus, I also acknowledge that perhaps I’m just not the audience meant for this book and that’s totally fine, so of course, take everything I say with a grain of salt – preferences are subjective!
Therefore, overall, I’d give the book a 3.5/5. Currently, I've marked the number of stars by rounding down and saying 3/5, however there's always the possibility that a review can change in light of new information. I say this in part because as only the first book in a series, there’s lot of potential for improvement and there’s clearly a plan. A book as a standalone and a book as a part of a series can ultimately hit differently – so I’ll certainly revisit this when the second book comes out!
The Bright Spot is a haunting, atmospheric sci-fi novel about survival, belief, and transformation at the edge of extinction. Set on a slowly rotating planet where life clings to a narrow band of warmth, the story follows Caelius as faith, fear, and tradition begin to fracture.
With sharp worldbuilding and a strong emotional core, Shawn Raben explores what happens when certainty collapses and movement—the very thing that keeps people alive—comes to a halt. Thoughtful, tense, and introspective, this is a story about questioning inherited truths and choosing who you become when the light starts to fail.
I've been following the backer kit and had access to the drafts from the very first to the current version ready for publishing and I am thoroughly impressed by this book and the growth of the author! The Bright Spot scratches my itch for sci-fi / fantasy with an intriguing "magic system," for lack of a better term, and very compelling characters. I cannot wait to read the next books in this series to see how the story finishes. I hope you pick up a copy when it becomes available and join us as we ride with the sun!
I had a difficult time following some of the scenes. There is a dictionary at the end of the book to help, but that isn't quite my jam.
The story itself is awesome and unique. I think that the book could be condensed into a couple (maybe three) since there is so much that happens and it can be difficult to follow along.
I enjoyed the moments when I was not frustrated trying to keep up.