Frustratingly mediocre?
The story is….
- not good
- poorly plotted
- long fights that bore you
- battle crazed mc
- author hamhanded the Mc talking with a mentor and actually getting more information on where he is, and getting his mentors understanding because ‘we don’t share secrets’.
- other characters? Why would we have personal connections when you can have typical royal road schlock story telling.
- uses a leveling system that is pointless.
The big issue here is that anytime the Mc fights against anything higher level than him, he gains multiple levels. The MC enters the world with only rudimentary weapon skills, admitting in the beginning of the story that he only used the axe to execute people. So level 1 executioner Chus gets 2 levels for killing a level 4, and 3 levels for killing a level 7.
Nearly every battle is explosive leveling. The author gives a hand wave retraction on this trying to explain that this is extremely uncommon, but that’s it.
The MC also talks about how he didn’t really fight except to spar and prove his supremacy.
But somehow, after only being in the new world, he is somehow more dangerous than legendary warriors who led entire nations.
His axe skills are lauded, the author uses purple prose to describe how the hero, who really is about as interesting as a pair of used socks, will not bend or break, and has an indomitable will! He is uber! None can stand before him!
This is the problem with LitRPG novels, and this author didn’t even attempt to work though the issue, just slaps the reader in the face with the fact that effort, discipline, and learning are defunct within the LitRPG dynamic, only skill and numbers matter.
This is just a power leveling jerk off fantasy, and lacks anything more interesting than that. Story drags.
I’m sure to the average LitRPG fan this book will be perfect.