This was a largely frustrating read for me. Whilst I enjoyed the story, there was an aspect of the writing which is my absolute pet peeve in a book which I will explain further below. In order to do so, I will give an example from the book and, whilst this will not be a spoiler, you may not want to read if you don't want to know anything about the book before you read.
The New Neighbours tells the story of Lena who lives with her son, 17 year old Rufus and who welcomes her new neighbours who have recently moved in next door. One night whilst helping Rufus recording sounds for his school work, Lena accidentally records a conversation between her new neighbours which suggests they are up to no good. Lena doesn't quite believe it - the couple are elderly and retired and, at first, Lena thinks she has it all wrong. Until strange things happen around her house and the neighbourhood which force her to confront her initial feelings...
All good so far? Yeah, it was for me.
However, what I really disliked about the book was just how overwritten it was and how much unnecessary exposition it contained.
For example, and this reveals a very small part of the story, there is a scene where Lena sees one of her neighbours talking to a client of hers from her job at the Citizens Advice Bureau. She then writes about how this 'surely can't be a coincidence', 'couldn't they have spoken on the phone?' 'why did they meet in person for 15 minutes?' - as the reader, when these two people met, it gave an element of surprise (much like Lena felt) and you knew that it couldn't be a coincidence - I don't think we needed to be told that it couldn't be a coincidence or that it was strange they met for so long.
I get that she is trying to convey Lena's thoughts but I think the reader could have understood what Lena's feelings would have been at that point without the unnecessary rhetorical questions.
There is a similar part when she catches the neighbour out in a lie. Again, we hear from Lena 'does this mean I can't trust her?' 'Is everything she told me a lie?' - I just felt we were being told unnecessarily every thought in Lena's head when the reader would have gotten there anyway.
I probably haven't explained that too well but it is a pet peeve of mine when the reader is told what everyone is thinking and feeling rather than telling the story and letting the reader get there themselves.
It wasn't a bad book and many seem to love it but it just wasn't really for me