A mysterious “System” transports millions of humans to an Evaluation planet while it reforms the Earth. The humans are given a very short time to select a combat Class or a non-combat Profession for the evaluation period. Magic has replaced technology, and humanity will have to adapt or perish. Only about 1% of humans will survive.
Unfortunately for Ivor Kemble, there was an error and he was sent to a harder Evaluation planet… a much, much harder one. However, he isn’t some orphan boy with no skills and resources or a clueless frat bro that has never been in danger. He spent his entire career as a contractor for various government agencies operating in some of the most dangerous places on Earth. He’s the man they send to do the dirtiest of dirty jobs the government wants no one to know about. He is very good at his job.
Ivor intends to survive and return to the reformed Earth to find his daughter. He may be alone and in danger, but, well… thats just an average Tuesday. In the Evaluation, survival is the only metric.
This book has game-like stats, skills, spells and level progression. No AI was used in the creation of this book’s content.
starts off promising, with a solid setup and some genuinely exciting fight scenes. The action sequences are well-paced definitely one of the stronger aspects of the book.
Unfortunately, the dialogue holds the story back in a noticeable way. Much of the conversation feels stiff and unnatural, like the characters are reciting lines rather than actually talking to each other. This awkwardness becomes especially glaring around the 46% mark during an extended conversation between the protagonist the smith.
The biggest issue for me was the protagonist’s sudden shift in behavior during that scene. For most of the book, hes portrayed as a secretive former agent/contractor type who's own daughter does not know what he does, but he abruptly unloads most of his entire life story to someone he has talked to less then 5 minutes. DNF
I think so much more could have been done with this. I don't mind that he's like supposed to be this super awesome soldier. That's actually what drove me to the book. The fact that we spend so much time with him communicating with either the AI of the trial planet or the merchant and his daughter and his friend or his own daughter actually takes away from the book. I was expecting Way more single scenario type stuff. Too much time was spent on the training and the learning of rune crafting. I wasn't in this story For him to be Going to school basically. I actually skimmed entire sections because of that. I wanted more single combat less of everything else. Plus I was highly disappointed when he didn't take the weapons because Of whatever dumb reason he had Loot is loot you take it regardless There were also Some editing issues but not a whole lot that I found like 6 or 7Yes I know a bunch of you are giggling in the background doing your hands up and down.
A good start to the series with a Mc who is actually likable. Not some clueless fool or nerd who should know stuff but for some reason doesn't. A great story of someone who's already deadly getting placed in a System ran universe.
Perhaps I'm just tired of the whole 'I've read LITRPG boos,, I know what's going on' then proceed to know nothing. Like don't even know what subclasses are or what attributes do. Doesn't know about dungeons and blah blah. Hate it when the MC is supposed to have read the genre but besides knowing to say 'Status' ...nothing else. Ever.
While this character isn't a know it all, he at least has reference to such ideas. Can think of what typically happens in books and what things might be. That is refreshing. Then the story itself is quite enjoyable without getting bland. Good pacing. I look forward to the next one.
The story is not perfect, but it comes pretty darn close to being so.
I usually loath books with multiple main characters. On Royal Road, I even filter books with that tag out of my search results.
For this book, I will make an exception to my rule against such.
I also like the characters, but their Righteous, Boy Scout like natures are a bit of a turn off. Dudley Do Right, is NOT a believable character type. Also, there seems to be a bit of an age discrepancy thing going on between the former SEAL commander and the contractor. How can they be BUD/S contemporaries if one is in their 60's and the other is in their 40's?
Update: I may have misunderstood the author's descriptions of the characters relative ages...
if you like, sensible pragmatic OP characters like Derek Hunt in system universe, you will enjoy this book
An excellent book, bravo, a well-rounded OP character who’s not suffering from loads of anxiety, bravo. if you like Derrick Hunt or the character loosen, you will enjoy this book. Good world building pragmatic character story well developed. Like any independent book and in the author there are a few errors, but it’s not worth mentioning. We’ll definitely go on and read the next book and hope this story continues. Very well done
Really enjoyed this one. Felt like it found that sweet spot with a total bad ass over powered MC who still has to struggle a little bit. Not everything falls in his lap, just a lot of it does. Some cool world building and character development, a couple side characters that I hope we see much more of in the nest book. Yeah, great combo read to the litrpg scene- highly recommend!
Outstanding book. Very much holds your interest all the way thru. The only negative in the book was brief but still a small negative. The idea that a man of his age and logic focused behavior would include pronouns and gender ideology were a bit immersion killing. Outside of that everything from pacing to character development was very well done and easily one of my favorite reads of this genre.
Great concept. Unusual start in that the MC doesn't appear until chapter 2. I love the MC though I'll admit others may not. Lots of material for philosophical brooding. Lots of depth and detail without to much repetitive statistic boilerplate.
Great way to start the New Year with a New Author.
Best recommendation I can make is that I started the series late yesterday and was so engaged I pulled an all-nighter not going to be until after 9am.
The premise is not new. System converts earth, one guy alone fighting to get home. But the acceptance that the world will be changed and there is no fighting it. That the majority of the population will be gone if you survive was great . Too many fighting to the end to change fate always felt unrealistic.
This story is mostly about the OP MC but still manages some excellent side characters. Well written and very good story. The world building was amazing and the emotions and characters were so well done. On to the next book immediately and can’t wait for more from this author.
This is a rare book that has almost no flaws. Extremely strong writing, characters, story, and idea for very well executed version of the system storyline! I will most definitely be reading the rest of the series and will be looking for more books by Brad Botz. I highly recommend you do the same.
It’s a good book and I am eager to continue the journey. I was expecting a sci-fi book from the way it started and then I expected to follow an adventuring party throughout the story but it turned into an OP slog that I wasn’t expecting. It needed more of the 4 party adventures or more drama as it just became the usual boring OP slog.
I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. It is one of the best I have read here on Unlimited.
The combination of intelligent and interesting MC along with an interesting world and well defined characters made this a pleasure to read. I plan to start the next book in the series immediately.
Can’t recommend this enough. I look forward to more from this author
I read about eight books a week, if this was a published series I would read them in one go. I have already recommended this to my brothers, and am looking forward to December for book 2.
I have just finished reading this book and I was disappointed that the second one wasn't immediately available. A great story and a person of practical morality that has you admiring his character.
Excellent - different enough take to have new ideas
Liked the way the.main character was introduced. Ivor was a dying 'trouble shooter' with a loving daughter. Good interplay between the system helper and Ivor. Looking forward to book two.
This was a good read, I like the MC, would have liked a couple more chapters on the other group’s challenges to balance out the perspective a little more. Looking forward to how the integration resolves when they meet up. Hopefully in the next book.
Evaluation excellent . Loved the twist on the system taking over earth and that the MC was older man. The system took in the experience of the MC which of course was OP.
Excellent story , the MC Ivor is thrown into an extreme tutorial when the system arrives to integrate earth , his extreme life and circumstances set him up with a best impossible situation in which he thrives. Great book one small point is that ch33 is repeated.
Interesting Isekai. I enjoyed the suspense/thriller vibe at the beginning. I'll read on because I want to see Ivor back on Earth and to see him team up with his daughter.