An ✨UNPUTDOWNABLE✨ suspense novel from the bestselling author of MISSING, perfect for fans of K.L. Slater, J D Kirk and Freida McFadden ⚡️Lightning never strikes twice… does it?⚡️
I never thought I’d have to tell my daughter, Emily, her sister was gone. It was the hardest thing I’ve ever had to do. But now, somehow, I have to do it again – because her father is missing.
As soon as I saw the police on my doorstep, I just knew that tragedy had befallen our family a second time.
After everything we’ve been through – the crushing grief, the endless guilt – I can understand the need to run. But days have passed and still there’s no trace of Max.
He wouldn’t leave our daughter. Not like this. Not after everything.
Unless he couldn’t help it. Unless something happened.
I can’t help but is there someone else involved? Someone who knows exactly how to break a family already on the edge?
I thought I’d lost everything once. I can’t survive it happening again…
A heartbroken mother, a missing father, a whole host of secrets buried within a seemingly normal family. Don't miss this tense and twisty psychological suspense novel.
Previously published as Every Little Secret
Praise for Ruby ‘Secrets, lies and betrayal, this book has the lot! It kept me up way later than I intended racing through to the end and what an ending it was!’ Rona Halsall
'immensely readable and hugely entertaining - so compelling that I read it in a matter of hours' Fiona Mitchell
'A very tense situational thriller that had me guessing right up to the end. I loved it!' Dawn Goodwin
'A page-turning thriller with a shocking and original conclusion. Mesmerising.' Catherine Cooper
'A great take on the missing child narrative and a total page turner - I simply HAD to know what had happened.' S E Lynes
'A twisty page-turner of a novel that kept me guessing until the very end!' Mandy Byatt
'A brilliant read. Such an anxiety-inducing, suspenseful domestic thriller!' Alice Hunter
'A compelling and original page-turner!' Roz Watkins
'A talent to watch' Sam Blake
'...any parents' worst nightmare, a twisty domestic thriller with an ending that will take your breath away' S. A. Harris
‘A fantastic, fast-paced novel with at its heart the strained relationship between a loving mother and her wayward teenage son. Unpredictable and unputdownable.’ Diane Jeffrey
This was going to get 3 stars because at least it's better written than similar books I've been reading, but the ending was absolutely bizarre so I docked a star. It's more like 1.5 stars. I generously did not dock more after the editing got progressively worse, with the final few chapters missing some paragraph breaks so that it wasn't clear who was speaking the dialogue.
The timeline jumps between present day and 8 years ago when the main couple Max and Maddy met, the flashbacks being in Max's POV. We learn that he was previously known as Adam, fell in love with 18-year-old Alison, and didn't know she had his son because Alison's brother beat him up and her dad made him leave with a new identity.
He marries Maddy and they have two daughters. Then two years ago, he and Alison meet up again, he doesn't tell her he's married, he learns about the son Jamie, and in order to provide for Jamie he makes the incomprehensible decision to live with both women a few days at a time, the typical "married man has two families" story where the guy is usually a commercial pilot, which explains his long absences from each family. Adam/Max is a builder.
Max's ridiculous set-up is motivated by the idea his wife will throw him out if she learns he had a son BEFORE THEY MET. This is entirely unbelievable. Any mature person understands that the person you fall in love with has a history. Conclusion: Max is hideously immature, or believes that his wife is. Because we see the backstory from his perspective, we're encouraged to sympathize with the fine mess he's gotten himself into. This barely works, and then entirely falls apart when he learns both women are pregnant, he can't decide between them or come clean, so he fakes his own death to escape his predicament.
Thus any sympathy for Max is gone (especially since his beloved younger daughter just died, although that's ultimately an irrelevant plot point).
Maddy the wife thinks Max is probably dead (he was seen jumping off a bridge) but because Max didn't clean up ANYTHING before leaving, she finds clues leading to Alison's home, where she discovers Max's secret double life. This happens at 13% and from that point forward there are no more twists to the story. The entire book is just the characters discovering things the reader already knows.
Instead of going to the police about her husband's double life (which could be a valuable clue in solving his disappearance), or telling her best friend, or asking Alison what's going on, Maddy instead turns into a psychopath. Because her dad cheated on her mom, she has license to channel her mom's humiliation and rage. She uses Max's key to repeatedly let herself into Alison's house to tidy up, open the mail, leave things on the stove, replace Alison's underwear, put moths in her drawer and itching powder in her clothes (hello, is she nine years old?), loosen all the cabinet and shelf screws, deliver a freezer and funeral wreath (wut???), rig a tripwire to injure Alison, steal her dog, and eventually kidnap her newborn.
Jumping ahead to the end, Maddy gets 5 months in a psych ward for her sins, then returns home to her old life with zero consequences. Yes, 5 months in hospital for trespass, attempting grievous bodily harm on a pregnant woman, and KIDNAP. We're supposed to forgive her because (as we find out) she miscarried right after Max left for a work trip then vanished. She couldn't tell anyone, you see, because she had to tell her husband first and he was missing. That was the "twist" at the end, except it's not a twist, it's an attempt to give her a motivation. Losing her daughter then her pregnancy caused her to spiral until she was hearing her mother's voice in her head telling her to do those awful things.
Anyway. Alison endures this torture because she thinks it's Adam messing with her head, but also because she thinks Adam wants to leave her due to the accidental pregnancy. Makes no sense. Nothing makes sense, and towards the end it only gets more stupid. Alison would be the only sympathetic character here, but she's so stupid and passive it's hard to like her.
There are too many plot holes to list them all, but here are a few: - Nobody notices Maddy isn't pregnant anymore (though she makes no effort to fake a pregnancy) and even her family doctor doesn't know she miscarried months ago. - Maddy is trying to keep her existence a secret from Alison (for unstated reasons) yet introduces Alison's son to his half-sister and doesn't consider the boy will tell anyone. (He does tell, and his mother dismisses it, but Maddy didn't know that would happen.) - Maddy plans to steal Ali's baby but instead of waiting for her to go home after the birth so she can steal the baby from the house FOR WHICH SHE HAS A KEY, she visits her in the hospital surrounded by CCTV, planning to take the baby from Ali's bedside, where Ali is fortuitously asleep. (Ali wakes up so Maddy leaves after, as I said, plastering her face all over CCTV, and does end up taking the baby from the house where Ali is again fortuitously asleep.) - When Max finally comes home to Maddy, he notices they now have 3 dogs but doesn't comment on the fact that THE NEW DOG IS HIS OWN DOG FROM HIS SECRET LIFE. He never queries why his wife now has his girlfriend's dog?!?? - This book does the thing I hate where the main character doesn't reveal a secret, even though we're in her head. This is such lazy writing.
The stupidest part of all this is that the entire premise, Max's decision to vanish, makes no sense. If he truly didn't want his wife to know about his double life, all he had to do was dump Alison (whom he was tiring of anyway) and stay with his wife. Instead he dumps BOTH women and lets them believe he died. In what way does that benefit anyone?
"Do you want an apple or an orange?" "Well, I do like both, but for no apparent reason I'll take neither."
The last 20% is where I docked the star. Alison and her brother (who suddenly shows up and is irrelevant except to tell her Adam was always a bad guy) discuss for PAGES the possibilities of what's going on, who stole her baby etc. This is all so pointless because the reader already knows exactly who stole her baby. WE WERE THERE.
Then Maddy gets her final confrontation with Max but we get NOTHING from inside her head even though we're in her POV. It's bizarre. By now she's deluded that the baby she kidnapped is her own baby, and after Max takes it back to Alison, he LETS MADDY THE PSYCHOTIC KIDNAPPER COME INTO THE HOUSE AS WELL BECAUSE IT'S RAINING!!! What is wrong with these people? Everyone has stopped talking, thinking, or acting like real human beings at this point. The finale consists of everyone screaming and lunging at each other.
And then Maddie goes to a psych ward for 5 months and comes home. Max has decided to stay with his wife and daughter, and everything's lovely. We never return to Maddy's (supposedly now sane) POV to see how she feels about the horrible things she did to Alison. She's a horrible person.
Would you trust this woman with your daughter?
Max is the most pathetic loser of a man I can imagine. His wife set up a tripwire for a pregnant woman, put itching powder in her clothes, kidnapped her baby and more. This evil bitch is the woman he chooses?
Speaking of the daughter, the book is called THE DAUGHTER YOU LEFT which refers to Max leaving his daughter. The book actually has nothing to do with the daughter. She, like her recently deceased sister, has no impact on the plot because Maddy's psychotic behavior is linked to her miscarriage and her mother's humiliation, NOT to her daughters. The story would be exactly the same without those girls.
Overall the story suffers from a severe lack of believable motivation in the main characters.
So a family guy goes missing presumed dead, police leave a key piece of evidence with his wife, when notifying her that he is believed dead. This within the first few pages had my back up.
Then the plot thickens, said family guy is leading a double life with his second family, living in a house identically decorated to his wife’s house, even the dog has the same name, the man however does not.
Then it just gets more irksome as when wife finds out about the second family, rather than going to the police, like any sensible person, no, she starts to terrorise the second woman.
Daddy issues are to blame for this! I cannot accept the grief card of losing a daughter prior to Mr Bigamist going missing is the cause of said stupid behaviour. Just go to the police.
Characters are poorly crafted, I should feel sorry for Maddy, but I can’t. Her vendetta against a woman that was as completely in the dark about her situation is infuriating. That she will spend hours driving to and from the other families house just seems pointless. Just go to the police and everything is sorted in over a week. But of course that doesn’t sell books does it.
Of course her husband is a stranger to her we knew that pretty much from the start, but no I have to trawl through near in 400 pages, for something that within the first chapter I saw coming.
This was a book club choice which is why I read it and finished it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
This was a novel of secrets, lies and plot twists. The plot and characters are reasonably well crafted and the characters seem realistic. It is an okay escape read for those readers living normal, generally happy and fulfilling lives and will make those readers feel content that their own lives are not so difficult, unfulfilling or weird. This isn’t the type of novel that I would recommend to people who are experiencing uncertainty about their life, especially their relationship with their significant others.
I didn’t enjoy this book as much as the first Ruby Speechley book that I read, it was a story full of lies, heartbreak and deceit, to start with I felt sorry for Maddie when I found out that max had disappeared but towards the end I started to hate her for the way she treated Max’s other family, either way max shouldn’t have treated either woman the way that he did.
Wow!!!! There were so many secrets in this one. As each chapter passed you found out what the secrets were and boy were they juicy. They will knock your socks off. I was like OMG!!!! I really enjoyed this one and I know you will too. The characters were great, the plot was awesome and that ending was mind blowing. What didn’t I like about this one is the real question. It had everything I look for in a thriller. I’ve read this authors books before and she never disappoints. I can’t wait for her next one.