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On Her Knees 2
She dated a monster. He married another woman. Fed up, she left. Now Chicago will burn.
In Chicago's underworld, loyalty is currency and betrayal is a death sentence.
With Lashan on the run, Tony feels he has nothing to lose. He did not expect she would go this far. He had other women before. He did whatever he wanted. But Lashan is not having it and wants out for more reasons than one.
But will things come to a head...
Tony is relentless. She is in love...
And something has to give!
Read along in the conclusion of this page-turning, hard hitting drama, set in a big city where power and money reign and love is a winner-takes-all game!
*Trigger Warning
In Chicago's underworld, loyalty is currency and betrayal is a death sentence.
With Lashan on the run, Tony feels he has nothing to lose. He did not expect she would go this far. He had other women before. He did whatever he wanted. But Lashan is not having it and wants out for more reasons than one.
But will things come to a head...
Tony is relentless. She is in love...
And something has to give!
Read along in the conclusion of this page-turning, hard hitting drama, set in a big city where power and money reign and love is a winner-takes-all game!
*Trigger Warning
433 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 28, 2025
About the author
Smokey Moment
126 books84 followersIt all started one day in March of 2018. I was bored. There was nothing to watch on television. And the moment of silence prompted a memory. A flashback to a time I wrote movies in a notebook. Small scenes jotted down for no particular reason. Something compelled me to make a move. I jumped up and ran to my computer, anxious to tell a story of which I could see clearly. The scenes of my cleverly crafted idea so wildly vivid. A face. A name. And twisted plots that would rival any movie.
I began typing. The keystrokes were fervent. Soon one sentence gave way to twenty. One hundred words grew to seventeen thousand. And before I knew it, I had a short story. Proof that anything is possible. So, you might ask if I always wanted to be a writer? Was it somewhere in the back of my mind? No! It wasn’t. But I knew I was creative. And I knew I could tell a story. The rest is history. Now I can say I wrote a book that became a best seller. Downloaded for many book lovers to read and enjoy. And the journey is still fresh. There is so much more to write. I am just getting started!
I began typing. The keystrokes were fervent. Soon one sentence gave way to twenty. One hundred words grew to seventeen thousand. And before I knew it, I had a short story. Proof that anything is possible. So, you might ask if I always wanted to be a writer? Was it somewhere in the back of my mind? No! It wasn’t. But I knew I was creative. And I knew I could tell a story. The rest is history. Now I can say I wrote a book that became a best seller. Downloaded for many book lovers to read and enjoy. And the journey is still fresh. There is so much more to write. I am just getting started!
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February 13, 2026
A Conclusion.
Book two was a decent conclusion overall. Tony was definitely a true villain, and I wanted his downfall to feel epic, but it honestly felt rushed and a bit anticlimactic. I expected more from Hawk, especially since it was mentioned how he was so respected in the streets. I felt like his “plan” only came together when he essentially had his back against the wall. But why wasn’t he planning all along? I had hoped for a real storyline showing him building a plan to help Lashan escape and free himself from Tony’s grip.
Lashan made several poor decisions that ultimately got her caught up and back with Tony. The fact that she never truly left Chicago played a big role in her downfall. Her best friend was mentioned throughout the book but then completely disappeared by the end, which felt strange and unfinished or at least during her darker times she should have been mentioned.
Deon, while trying to help his mother Shalene, also made questionable choices. However, he at least confided in his friend, which ended up helping him in the long run.
Overall, I felt there were a few plot holes, and I expected a stronger conclusion — especially considering how much terror Tony caused. His ending deserved a more impactful scene. Still, it was a decent read.
Book two was a decent conclusion overall. Tony was definitely a true villain, and I wanted his downfall to feel epic, but it honestly felt rushed and a bit anticlimactic. I expected more from Hawk, especially since it was mentioned how he was so respected in the streets. I felt like his “plan” only came together when he essentially had his back against the wall. But why wasn’t he planning all along? I had hoped for a real storyline showing him building a plan to help Lashan escape and free himself from Tony’s grip.
Lashan made several poor decisions that ultimately got her caught up and back with Tony. The fact that she never truly left Chicago played a big role in her downfall. Her best friend was mentioned throughout the book but then completely disappeared by the end, which felt strange and unfinished or at least during her darker times she should have been mentioned.
Deon, while trying to help his mother Shalene, also made questionable choices. However, he at least confided in his friend, which ended up helping him in the long run.
Overall, I felt there were a few plot holes, and I expected a stronger conclusion — especially considering how much terror Tony caused. His ending deserved a more impactful scene. Still, it was a decent read.
February 28, 2026
Ms Smokey!!!
You did it again. Whew the ride on this one!! I never want to delve into specifics when reviewing so new readers don’t see what’s written where they aren’t experiencing it first themselves, BUT these 2 books 🔥🔥
The title seemed suggestive of something else but trust it dove into that and so much deeper as the pages turned! A superb read👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 and I thank you.
You did it again. Whew the ride on this one!! I never want to delve into specifics when reviewing so new readers don’t see what’s written where they aren’t experiencing it first themselves, BUT these 2 books 🔥🔥
The title seemed suggestive of something else but trust it dove into that and so much deeper as the pages turned! A superb read👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 and I thank you.
December 3, 2025
Great Read
I loved both books. It’s a true example of, Never Judge A Book By Its Cover. These books had me all over the place on a roller coaster ride.
The power of love is, Priceless.
Great Read again.
I loved both books. It’s a true example of, Never Judge A Book By Its Cover. These books had me all over the place on a roller coaster ride.
The power of love is, Priceless.
Great Read again.
December 14, 2025
an amazing Book
Suspense and thrilling. Love and Loyalty all wrapped up into one. I couldn’t finish Book 1 until I had Book 2 on deck.
Awesome Book looking forward to many more from this author
Suspense and thrilling. Love and Loyalty all wrapped up into one. I couldn’t finish Book 1 until I had Book 2 on deck.
Awesome Book looking forward to many more from this author
January 3, 2026
Good Storyline
Truly enjoyed this book series. It held all the drama and plot twist that will keep you on the edge of your seat flipping pages madly. LaShan got on everybody nerves.
Truly enjoyed this book series. It held all the drama and plot twist that will keep you on the edge of your seat flipping pages madly. LaShan got on everybody nerves.
January 15, 2026
stressful book but worth it
This book was so good that I hated one of the main characters and happily finished it through to see what happens to him. Because all the breaks and anger I got from this book. It was worth the read.
This book was so good that I hated one of the main characters and happily finished it through to see what happens to him. Because all the breaks and anger I got from this book. It was worth the read.
January 25, 2026
Good read
I must say you did with these series. It is page turning there wasnt any thing wrong the story on e was crazy Tony got what he desired we treat women so bad he had no l look be in him.
I must say you did with these series. It is page turning there wasnt any thing wrong the story on e was crazy Tony got what he desired we treat women so bad he had no l look be in him.
March 7, 2026
Confusing
I enjoyed reading the series but the spelling errors were horrible. Then on one page, they were married and on the next page, they were getting married in 4 months. It was difficult to keep up with the flow of things.
I enjoyed reading the series but the spelling errors were horrible. Then on one page, they were married and on the next page, they were getting married in 4 months. It was difficult to keep up with the flow of things.
November 14, 2025
Such a great read
Had me hooked since book 1, such a great read. I’m so happy everything came together at the end, Bravo
Had me hooked since book 1, such a great read. I’m so happy everything came together at the end, Bravo
November 15, 2025
Great book!!! Loved the happy ending !!! True love always wins .
February 7, 2026
Page turner
Great development all around. Characters that are relate able. You can see yourself in each page, as if you were there.
Great development all around. Characters that are relate able. You can see yourself in each page, as if you were there.
March 26, 2026
Great read
I love how the book continued from book 1 and how it wasn’t too long and dragging. Enjoyed the two books.
I love how the book continued from book 1 and how it wasn’t too long and dragging. Enjoyed the two books.
April 14, 2026
whew
I thought I was gonna jump in this book and handle Tony Carter myself he had gotten on my last nerve great book. Great read I love it.
I thought I was gonna jump in this book and handle Tony Carter myself he had gotten on my last nerve great book. Great read I love it.
May 24, 2026
After the debacle in book one were back with Tony and his search for lashaun. The way Tony tries to cause so much chaos needed to be studied. I enjoyed the plot twist and the ending was perfect.
September 22, 2026
GREAT READS!
It was a very, very great read! Amazing job! Editing was a little off but a great read none the less. Im glad Tony got what he deserved or did he ?!
It was a very, very great read! Amazing job! Editing was a little off but a great read none the less. Im glad Tony got what he deserved or did he ?!
March 16, 2026
I loved this series
This was a really good series, I loved everything about this book, it made me happy, sad, mad, and angry. Tony was pure evil and he go exactly what was coming to him. He hurt so many people power tripping,
I’m happy Shay and her sons survived.
And omg Rashid is the man, I’m so happy things turned out so differently and him L got married and had a baby,
Great read and I will definitely recommend this book.
This was a really good series, I loved everything about this book, it made me happy, sad, mad, and angry. Tony was pure evil and he go exactly what was coming to him. He hurt so many people power tripping,
I’m happy Shay and her sons survived.
And omg Rashid is the man, I’m so happy things turned out so differently and him L got married and had a baby,
Great read and I will definitely recommend this book.
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