The basic premise of Crosscut is a pretty good one. Evan Delaney returns to China Lake for her 15 year high school reunion. When she goes there she realizes that many of her classmates have died under unusual circumstances. It all ties back to an explosion at the naval base where secret operations were being held during a class trip. Now, some of her classmates are being murdered pretty horrifically, and it all ties back to Coyote, a CIA operative that was exposed to the same thing that is harming Evan’s classmates.
Although the concept was pretty good, the execution in this novel is very flawed. My biggest issues was that it has massive believability and logic gaps about the size of a Mars crater. There were too many things, especially related to Coyote, that made me cringe as I read them because they were so utterly unrealistic. The character Coyote was also a poor one that lacked any shred of realism in terms of resembling an actual human being. Furthermore, the novel was riddled with clichés, especially the evil government entity that is so far off the books that nobody can even acknowledge that it exists, and the associated evil government characters that go along with these organizations. Ultimately, this is a novel I would skip.
Carl Alves – author of Blood Street