Irish Thoroughbred:
The book started corny & predictable. An exercise boy has been kicked by a horse who's said to be mean, but Adelia handles him as if she's the horse whisperer. Not a way to start a new job, by acting like you know more than the people already there,& pointing out what they're doing wrong. She says they don't understand the horse,& after talking to him he lets her ride him.
Then she has to show the vet up by finding out the foal is turned wrong.
It became repetitive & predictable the way Travis would always suddenly appear wherever Adelia was, if she went to the stables, if she was off by herself. I wasn't very far in, almost 80 pages,& it had already happened a handful of times.
The word love was thrown out too quickly. They didn't even know each other.
The customary near-rape of the heroine so the hero could come to her rescue that's found in older books was in here. It irritated me she didn't want to call the police. You're just letting him go free so he can do it to someone else.
Even though she'd only been on the horse farm a short time, Travis took her to the Kentucky Derby, and not one of the men who'd been there longer and deserve it. Because the horse responds the best to her. This heroine was a special snowflake.
It seemed unrealistic that the press would care who Travis was dating. When I watch the triple crown races, I don't see reporters delving into their personal lives, or wondering if they're in a relationship with one of their grooms. That might be because most owners seem to be married,& most grooms seem to be men, but still.
The book was going good until her uncle had a heart attack, asked Travis to take care of her,& Travis somehow interpreted that as marrying her. And then had the gall-the effing nerve-to say this to Adelia: "Doesn't he mean anything to you? Are you so selfish and hardheaded that you can't make a small sacrifice to help him? We'll stand in that room this afternoon, and we'll be married, and you'll make him believe it's what you want. When we know he's strong enough, you can get a divorce and end it."
Was I confused in thinking Padrick was simply wanting a priest to pray over him? How did that get twisted & misconstrued as him wanting Travis to MARRY his niece? He just wanted Travis to take care of her. Marrying is not taking care of. And I'm sorry, a 'small sacrifice?' Marriage isn't a small sacrifice, tis a bloody big one.
Every time he held her hands & wouldn't let her pull them away, any time he had a hold of her & wouldn't let her go, made me wanna punch him in the face.
He tells her to cry & she says she never cries. But Travis refuses to let her go and of course she cries. Because even though she apparently didn't cry when both her parents and her aunt died, she cries now. Why? Because Travis told her to. And this hero, like so many others, will not be denied. If the hero says cry, then you better produce some tears.
It sickened me when she said "I'll do whatever you think has to be done."
She already has a job and a home at Travis' farm, what more does he have to give her? Marriage, apparently. Paddy should have rested freaking easy.
She's trying to think of a way out of it,& I'm waiting for it too. She says she's Catholic & can't get a divorce. And of course the mighty hero has an answer for that. They can get an annulment as long as the marriage isn't consummated. Well, I could freaking guess what would happen there.
The fact that it was passed off as some great thing, some charitable act, incensed me further. As if Paddy would die if they didn't. What comfort is marrying a man who doesn't love you? Better to be on your own.
She actually asks Travis if she can call her uncle at the hospital. Of course the controlling hero has already done that, preventing her need to call.
She finds out they have a cook:
'"Don't look so stricken, Dee. Hannah will think I'm beating you already."'
Ex-fucking-cuse me? Beating you already? As in you're going to eventually beat your wife? Did that pass as humor back then?
The whole marrying to protect someone felt like the 1800s. Seriously, who does that?!
If Adelia was as independent as she claims, she wouldn't need a man's help anyway.
And surely there were friends or someone in Ireland to help her. The whole thing was very old-fashioned, better befitting of a historical novel.
Travis was 31, or going to turn 31. Adelia was described as young, & had young, firm breasts. Emphasis on that. And her going to her uncle as if she needed a guardian, & not saying her age just gave me dirty vibes, as if she was barely out of HS, or still a minor.
Travis was too suave & sophisticated, & it felt like he was toying w/ Adelia. Just messing around with her because she was there. Not very respectable to do when her uncle works for you.
Then not letting her go on a date with that reporter, claiming his workers' lives are his business. And of course he gets his way. She doesn't go on the date.
In typical romance author fashion, the guy is rich & buys things for the heroine, taking her to fancy restaurants, sending her on shopping sprees with his money, to buy her a new wardrobe to befit his lifestyle. It's sickening. Idk why they even have the heroine protest. They might as well have their hand out, cause they're not gonna turn it down.
This heroine was a bit like a disney character, with her glorious hair & a smile compared to the radiance of the sun. I've never seen someone have so much trouble w/ their hair as heroines in novels do. Like it's this huge mass that's always hanging in their face and they have to push at it like it can't be tamed. She has magical eyes, that convince people to do anything she wants, & can tame any animal.
We aren't told her age until pg 175 of a 196-page story. She's 23 which is better than I was thinking.
Here's some lovely thoughts:
'He never raised his voice or criticized, and he never touched her in any way unless strictly necessary. She wished fervently that he would yell at her or shake her, or do something to lose his cool, composed manner.'
'"I had thought to give her to you next month for your birthday, but I thought your spirits needed a lift, so she's yours a bit early."
"But after the way I've been acting, you should have been beating me instead of buying me a present."
"The thought entered my mind last night, but this seemed a better solution."'
I was so annoyed when she goes to the airport intending to go back to Ireland only to have him stop her before she even gets a ticket. I wanted him to chase her to Ireland.
His declaration of love was too little too late. And if that's his way of showing love, idk what the hell his hatred would look like. He's been cold & indifferent towards her.
Surely he could see that Dee loved him from the beginning, so why the need to wear her down? Why not confess your feelings & propose?
"I had no intention of divorcing a wife I loved, now, or any time within the next thousand years."
When she says he should have told her he loved her & it would have saved them a lot of trouble, he says how could he when she was raging at him? She means before the fight, before Margot came.
It was very predictable Margot would show up, btw.
It was sweet when he confesses he took her to the horse races not just for Majesty, but because he didn't want to let her out of his sight, because someone would snatch her away.
"I decided to wear you down slowly. I thought I was making some headway, but Paddy's heart attack changed everything. I felt the best way to help him was to assure him of your welfare, so I railroaded you into marriage with the promise of an annulment. Of course I never intended to give you one."
This makes no sense & is the opposite of romantic. If you're trying too woo her then why not do it? Why treat her like a friend, or cousin, as she said?
'"You seemed so far away. All those weeks you never even touched me. You never even said you loved me last night."
"I didn't dare touch you. I wanted you so much it was driving me mad. If I had told you I loved you last night-and how I wanted to!-you might have thought I said it just to keep you in bed."'
Why would she think that? If you were sweet & declared your feelings from the start she would have married you when you asked!
I'm wondering how this could be a standalone when it's only 196 pages.
This wasn't romantic. The forced marriage was awful, the hero wasn't likable w/ his mood changes. The HEA was rushed. It became annoying & stayed that way til the end.
It would have been so much better if Adelia had left for Ireland & he had to chase her. But he got his way in all things.& that's freaking annoying to me.
Adelia was supposedly strong & independent but ultimately was just a doormat for the hero. She let him push her around, tell her what to do,& always gave in to his word.
At one point she says she wants to do something for him,& asks what he needs from her. He responds with "the best thing you can do for me is to accept what's given and not question it."
"All right, Travis, if it pleasures you."'
My god, how truly sickening. I'd die before I uttered those words to a man. Spitfire, she isn't.
I resented that he changed her wardrobe to fit his life. He told her to be herself, & that means him accepting her as she is, & however she dresses.
I wish it had been in the heroes POV, but then we wouldn't have the surprise of his 'love' for her at the end.
Special snowflake heroine, deplorable hero, annoying instalove & repetition. Everything was going pretty good until the totally random, stupid wedding.
2 stars.
Irish Rose:
This takes place 7 years later.
The characters are too similar. Adelia was 23, Erin is 25, Travis was 31, Burke is 32. The heroines were practically the same character, down to their rough hands. They both even have red hair. Both are inexperienced, both love storms. As w/ the first book, the hero is always suddenly appearing & startling the heroine. Burke is rich too; it would be nice if heroes weren't always rich. Burke had an even nicer house than Travis.
Everything felt like been there done that. We watch Erin go to her first race & bet, just like Adelia did, while they have similar reactions to everything. Travis' horse always won & Burke's did too. The couples kiss after they win. It'd be easier to point out the ways the books were different. Erin was scared of horses. There.
Also a case of instalove. The heroine loves him & doesn't know how he feels. Again, it's not enough the heroine is working for him, they have to be married too. Just like in the 1st book, after they marry the husbands tell the wives they don't have to work, & the heroines say they prefer to work. Erin ends up in the paper & questioned by reporters, like Adelia. The hero's horses always win w/ a lead which doesn't always happen in races.
POVs changed from one line to the next, which idl, but I'm glad it was in the heroes POV.
Idl Burke's reputation w/ women:
'"Idk much about women." At Travis's slow smile, Burke corrected himself. "Wives. But I'd say yours is happy, whether she's here or in the States. The fact is, Travis, if she loved you less I might have made a play for her myself."
'"I've heard murmurs that a man not only has to watch his daughters but his wife when you're about."
"If I was interested in another man's wife, you'd be the first to know."'
Burke could be so rude. He called Erin a fool & an idiot.
Burke just happens to need a clerk which she just happens to be. When she's at his house, he tells her hopefully she won't have to ask him a bunch of annoying questions.
When she faints by the horse he calls her a nitwit and says "if you'd had the brains to tell me, you wouldn't have shaved ten years off my life."
"I feel...You'll think I'm foolish."
"Probably."
The dynamic of employer/employee made me uncomfortable, again, just like book one.
He was taking advantage of the situation, admitted to hiring her to sleep w/ her, not just for work, using his power to control her.
"When I find a woman who attracts me, I find a way to have her. Fair means or foul, it doesn't mean a damn to me."
-"Tell me, did you bring me to America to sleep with you or to fix your books?"
"Both," he said simply, "but we'll deal with business first."
"Business is all we'll deal with. Now I'd like to begin."
"Fine." But instead of leaving, he ran his hands up her arms. Erin stiffened, but didn't back away. She wouldn't play the fool and struggle.'
How is struggling playing a fool? It's an instance where the heroine is protesting, yet the hero knows she desires him & won't take no for an answer.
"An employee has rights in this country." Indeed. & it's not to have their employer hit on them.
"The skinny blonde's still pouting after you. It must be rewarding to walk into a room and have six females trip over themselves to get to you."
"It has its compensations."
At her own party, where she's making him jealous with other men, he yanks her out.
"We're leaving. Where's your coat?"
"I'm not going anywhere, and I--"
He merely stripped off his jacket and tossed it over her shoulders before he yanked her outside. "Get in the car."
"Go to hell."
He grabbed her then, hard and fast. "There'll be little doubt of that after tonight."' And what does the heroine do? Gets in the car, like a good little girl. And claims it's of her own choice.
'Burke braked at the base of the steps and without sparing her a glance, slammed the door and got out of the car.' This is a man who's intending to sleep w/ her.
This gem of a scene:
"Now take your hands off me. I'm going home."
"No, you're not."
Her eyes narrowed. "You'll not keep me here."
"Whatever it takes." Then she twisted under him. Before he realized her intent, her teeth were sunk into his hand. He swore, and they rolled from one end of the bed to the other before he managed to pin her again.
"I'll draw blood next time, I swear it. Now let me go."
"Shut up, you crazy Irish hothead."'
His solution to them wanting each other & her not wanting to live with him & be his lover is marriage. What does this remind me of? Oh yeah, the quick marriage solution of book one.
'He was the only man she'd ever known. Now he'd done his best to be certain he was the only one she ever would. Selfish, yes, but a desperate man takes desperate measures.'
'She saw his hand close into a fist & angled her chin. "Go ahead, pop me one. You've been wanting to for days."
"Don't tempt me."
The HEA was rushed. I liked the transformation in Burke though it took too long to get there.
The fact that the stories were too similar ruined it. This had sweet moments/good lines. Though Burke's was internal; he didn't share the thoughts out loud. Good stuff mixed in, but problematic heroes.
A fitting St. Patrick's Day read.
Fav quote: 'He'd played too many hands to give away the most important cards he'd ever held.' (Of marriage).
2.5 stars