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Grey is going to watch. And Logan is going to like it.

Logan has a great life. Women and men fall into bed with him at the snap of his fingers. He's wealthy, runs a very successful business with his best friend, Grey, and wants for nothing. But something is missing.

One night, Grey casually watches him in bed.

After that, his life is forever changed.


Watching is a voyeurism novella with a happily ever after.

115 pages, Kindle Edition

Published December 5, 2025

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423 reviews
July 17, 2026
For an intrusive thought come to light this basically worked for me.

I’m not sure I would describe this as cozy, but this was short, spicy and surprisingly heartfelt.

Love a novella that gets straight to the point. At 109 pages, I read this in less than 2 hours and I had all the emotions. I could’ve used like 50 more pages to flesh out some stuff more. Like listen - the content warnings told me how these men would act towards women and it’s, I guess it’s nice these boys are only soft for each other and yet still, don’t be kicking them out like that.

I fully bought their friends to lovers deal, the angst over going at Grey’s pace because of his trauma, how Logan was submissive to Grey and helped him heal from it. I liked reading about the switch that happens and you realize what you’ve been missing/going after what you want.

I also wanted to read about their first time together! It’s like Grey got past the trauma and then boom Epilogue and they’ve been married a year and still treating women as a hole (crass but TRUE).

Also - Justice for Chantal, the admin assistant who deserves better even though she knows the deal.

I wanna read an extended version of this, but with the women treated better, lol. Also - why does Grey own this corporate president business AND a restaurant? Tell me more. The bones (wink wink) are there and I want more. @Victoria Timms

‘The sex is always good, yet I crave something more. Something I have no idea how to name or ask for.’

“Well, Jade,” he says calmly, dragging over the chair that doesn’t have my clothes on it. He pulls the chair up to the bed, giving himself about five feet of space. He sits down, his legs spread wide, arms casually resting on the armrests. “I’m the man who’s going to watch you get f*cked by my best friend.”

“Are you seriously going to sit there while I f*ck her?” I ask. I haven’t moved since he walked in, and the need to roll my hips is killing me. “No,” he replies calmly, crossing one leg over the other. “I’m going to watch you f*ck her. Big difference.”

Chantal struggles to catch her breath while I stand up. “Are you going to f*ck me now, sir?” Her eyes dart over to Grey, just as mine do. When he gives me another nod, I answer her by undoing my pants and letting them drop to the floor. I grab a condom from the drawer, roll it on, and then finally reply. “Of course I’m going to f*ck you. Mr. Fletcher is going to watch. Now be a good girl and bend over for me.”

He licks his lips. “I want to give you some . . . instructions.”

I have power over her, but Grey has power over me. The dynamic is a little f*cked up, but I f*cking love it.

He moves his hand slowly, but it feels better than anything ever has. I’m dizzy from him. Drunk off this moment.

“Come for me, Logan. We both need it,” he growls.

He’s ruined me. He’s ruined me beyond belief and I couldn’t be happier about it.

“You’re going to kill me, Grey. F*cking kill me with that tongue.”

I moan at his words. “Will you make yourself come? For me? I really want to see it.” I sound desperate, but I don’t care. I am desperate.

“Lick it,” he says. “I like when you clean me up.”

I groan. “Whatever you want.” I step closer to him, so there’s only a slight gap between our bodies. “What do you want right now?” “I need to know you’re mine,” he growls. “I need to feel you. Know that you belong to me.” “How do I show you?” I ask, practically panting. He holds my stare for a beat. “I need to feel you…”

I don’t hesitate. I take him into my mouth, and moan. At his taste. At the weight of him. At the pleasure of knowing he doesn’t let anyone else do this.

I look down at him. His eyes are huge. His hands are still on my thighs. “You have the power to reduce me to nothing. Everything I am is in your control. Watch yourself as you unravel me. See the power you have. Watch me because I am yours, Grey.”
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81 reviews9 followers
February 22, 2026
Excuse me??? The author who usually writes cozy contemporary said, "let me have intrusive thoughts for 106 pages" and absolutely DELIVERED!!!

This novella gets straight to the point - fast, filthy, and zero wasted time. From the first chapter it knows exactly what it is and commits fully to the voyeur dynamic.

Grey and Logan together? Sweetest, filthiest chaos. The tension builds quickly, but what really worked for me was the balance between heat and emotional pull. For such a short book, it somehow manages to hit multiple beats without feeling rushed.

And listen…
“I want to give you some instructions”
“Good girl”… AND good boy energy??
“CRAWL TO ME”
I was unwell...

The praise elements were absolutely the standout for me (shocking no one), and the dynamic between the two MMCs felt playful, intense, and oddly soft underneath the heat - which made the whole thing land even better.

Content note: brief mention of past childhood SA in backstory (not on page, no graphic detail).

For a 106-page novella, the emotional and physical tension packed into this was honestly impressive. I was fully kicking my feet and making hehehe faces at this book more times than I care to admit.

If you like:
- voyeurism
- fast, high-heat novellas
- MM tension with soft edges
…this one is absolutely worth the hour it takes to devour.

Perfect palate cleanser energy. And yes... I NEED this author to keep letting the intrusive thoughts win!!!! *Chants* MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!
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10 reviews
December 4, 2025
If you’re looking for a novella that grabs you by the collar and whispers oh, we’re doing this now, this little firecracker delivers. Logan and Grey have clearly been orbiting each other for years - weekly dinners and drinks - but all it takes one accidental, pulse-spiking moment for everything to detonate.

When Grey walks in on Logan with a woman, the scene isn’t just awkward—it’s the emotional equivalent of an earthquake. That split second where Grey freezes, Logan locks eyes with him, and something unnamed but undeniable surges between them? That is the moment this novella sinks its hooks in. It’s not about the voyeurism itself—it’s about the sudden, blinding clarity. You can practically hear the crack of their professional facade in real time.

Victoria does an incredible job balancing heat with heart. The chemistry between Logan and Grey simmers in every look, every half-finished sentence, every moment they try (and fail) to go back to normal. Their dynamic is messy in the best way—charged, vulnerable, and threaded with years of unspoken…something. When they finally confront what that moment revealed, it’s deeply satisfying. We also get a heartbreaking glimpse into Grey’s traumatic upbringing.

Short, sharp, and sexy, this novella is perfect for readers who love:

• Best friends-to-lovers
• Slow-burn tension that ignites instantly
• Voyeuristic sparks that flip everything upside down
• Characters who feel too much and try to hide all of it

If you enjoy your romances with emotional ache, razor-edge tension, and a whole lot of heat just beneath the surface, Logan and Grey’s story is absolutely worth every single star.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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1,205 reviews25 followers
December 9, 2025
Watching is a quick read that packs a seriously spicy punch. It’s intensely hot while still holding emotional depth, and Victoria Timms nails the balance between explicit kink and a genuine healing journey. This book is unapologetically sexual in powerful ways, and I was blown away by how well it works.

Grey and Logan? Yes. YES. 🥵
Their dynamic is addictive, angsty, and impossible to put down. The voyeurism is written so well that you’re right there with them — Grey is going to watch, Logan is going to like it… and so will you.

It’s short, fast, spicy, and ends with a satisfying HEA. If you love MM romance with heavy kink and emotional payoff, I absolutely recommend Watching.

*Please check TW/CWs before reading — your wellbeing matters. Some elements won’t be for everyone.
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32 reviews
July 16, 2026
This book was exactly what I needed to change up my reading for the week. An amazing little story about your best friend watching you 🥵.
This book comes out swinging with the spice first, and a whole lot of 👀. While fast paced due to size, this book didn’t feel like it was missing anything or that there were gaps. It delivered a whole story and feels in its 106 pages.
I will say, I’m probably never looking at a bedroom chair the same way again!

I picked this book up at Pages and Pleasures, and had a lovely chat with Victoria herself. This book delivered exactly as advertised!
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87 reviews1 follower
December 2, 2025
I received a free copy of this publication for the purpose of review.

TW
*Sexual assault and rape (not on page, described by character)

Logan has sex with people, men and women, but he does not care about them. They are a means to an end. That is, until his best friend Grey walks in on him with his newest conquest and...stays? For some reason that gets him off, and it seems to get Grey off too. Logan isn't sure yet what that means for their relationship, but he's sure he wants it to happen again.

Watching is definitely an MM erotica/romance (I waffle between the two for this one because the sex scenes are a big driver). There are scenes that involve women but they are never the focus, either in the narrative or by Logan and Grey. I really liked seeing voyeurism used as a way to explore intimacy without involving physical contact. I've never read a book with voyeurism so that was a really interesting perspective that I'd never really experienced before. Grey seemed to enjoy the watching for watching's sake, but it was also a way to experience closeness without touching.

I don't typically read novellas, and I think almost all of my gripes (admittedly very small gripes) are features not bugs. There's a lot of ground to cover in only 100 pages so things have to move fast! I do like that there's an established history between Grey and Logan, so it doesn't feel like insta-love even though I would have liked to see more of their relationship before the start of the novella.

Like I mentioned before, the sex scenes sometimes include women but they aren't very important to the scenes they're in. The more descriptive sex scenes are the ones with just Logan and Grey. It's not quite what I'd call D/s, but Grey does like taking control and telling Logan what to do. If you're a fan of men telling each other to please themselves this is gonna be right up your alley.

Ended up not being my typical type of read, but I quite enjoyed it! Being novella length it was a very quick read (it took me roughly 1.5 hours from start to finish), so perfect for a long lunch break if you can handle the heat while you eat. Thank you very much to Victoria for a chance to read and review this early.
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150 reviews13 followers
November 19, 2025
Watching is a quick read that packs a spicy punch. 

It is incredibly hot while also holding some emotional depth to it. Victoria Timms has done a remarkable job at balancing explicit scenes with a healing journey. This book is packed with kink and sexuality in a very powerful way. 

I am blown away. I would absolutely recommend Watching!

*please pay attention to TWs and CWs - your wellbeing and comfort is the most important thing. Some details of this book are not for everyone*
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163 reviews1 follower
March 11, 2026
This is a little, kinky, smutty, best-friends to lovers, MM romance. It drags you right in and you’ll read this in one sitting. But it’s not only smutty, it has some depth to it including one MMC on his healing journey.
This has the potential to be a full length romance book in my opinion.
Check TW!
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Author 5 books32 followers
November 24, 2025
Read this in a few hours and I’m going back not read it again! Because why am I done! 😭! I absolutely loved Grey and Logon and the 🥵yes please🤭.
Totally recommending this book if you love a good mm included romance, very short too! Spicy. Alwats check the triggers my love 🙂‍↕️
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161 reviews
December 27, 2025
HOTTT!!! Love this sexier darker tale by Timms! Yum. Gobbled it up in one sitting.
I love that, on top of the sexy, Timms takes care to REALLY work through consent and past trauma. Loved these little assholes too :)
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11 reviews
March 17, 2026
Wow...

This is pure spice. 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Story line... 🌟
But for a novella just perfect.
Very easy to read in one go.
There is an off page child SA mentioned, so be kind to your mental health if this is a trigger for you.
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28 reviews3 followers
December 7, 2025
Grey is going to watch, and Logan is going to like it. And so are you.
This story was H-O-T! I couldn't put it down. Jam packed with angsty anticipation with a HEA. Perfection!
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Author 5 books15 followers
December 7, 2025
Beyond expectations

This book has a whole heaping pile of steaming heat, but also ... A very generous amount of heart. Well worth reading.
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20 reviews
February 22, 2026
A great spicy read!!

I met the author today and knew I had to read this book when I got home. Let’s just say I started it and I was done in an hour!

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142 reviews9 followers
March 11, 2026
A fine enough short story, just not really for me and some themes are kinda forced out. An unnatural progression. But a sweet ending though.
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600 reviews8 followers
April 4, 2026
Wow!!

This book was so spicy 🥵 for such an amazing quick novella!!! I would definitely recommend this to my book girlies!!
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597 reviews3 followers
June 3, 2026
It's quick, it's dirty. Yet, still has a good plot. Definitely set aside your feminist views tho lol.
Do check CW
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16 reviews1 follower
July 21, 2026
Watching was such a quick read and definitely delivered on the spice and all the intrusive thoughts. I ended up giving it ⭐⭐⭐⭐. I went into this one completely blind after pulling it out of my TBR jar, and honestly, I think that's the best way to read it. My only complaint is that I would have loved to see more of Grey's first experience once they were finally together after everything they'd been through. If you enjoy MM romance, I'd definitely recommend giving this one a try. Just make sure you check the trigger warnings before going in if you're sensitive to certain topics.
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671 reviews4 followers
December 12, 2025
4.5⭐️ 3🌶

This was a fun high heat novella. I loved that it captured my attention from the start. Grey and Logan have some delicious tension, sizzling chemistry and an emotional pull that had me. I enjoyed their dynamic and the development and growth of their relationship. Logan and Grey start out as friends so their growth as a couple it felt like a more natural dynamic to fall into.

Victoria's delivery of this hot but emotional story has me excited to see her growth as an author. The balance of this story was done

Thank you to Victoria Timms fornthis ARC. These are my honest opinions and feelings.
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