I was really looking forward to this book as I follow this author on social media and it seemed to be a really good concept but the story fell incredibly flat and was just sadly not what it was advertised to be.
The Story: 1 star
The plot itself is touted as having “political intrigue and court secrets” and if that’s really the case I could not find it anywhere. The entire first two thirds of the book was Aelia walking around random places and having honestly some pretty disturbing conversations with her twin brother. I don’t know where the author thought that siblings speak with each other in this manner but I’ve never told my brother that he was so handsome that I was distracted by him. We didn’t even meet the MMC until well past the 50% mark and when this is being described as “slow burn romance with tension” I again say where? The conversations were stilted like a teenager trying hard to seem nonchalant.
Characters: 1 star
There was no personality in any of these characters. Aelia had the *start* of a personality near the middle but again, the author went no where with it. The brothers were all stereotypical character archetypes - the soldier, the king, the diplomat, the goof ball and there was nothing in the prose that built on those archetypes.
The Romance: 0 stars
It didn’t even exist and you can’t tell me otherwise. I’m sorry but the surprise “omg we can touch each other even though we can’t touch anyone else without hurting them” is not a romance. It’s the start of an idea of a concept of romance.
The Writing: 1
When it comes to the writing itself, this book needs a good formatting and a better editor. Typos are abound which normally doesn’t bother me - but coupled with the other issues and the fact that the book is under 200 pages I couldn’t get past it. None of the paragraphs are indented, there’s dialogue from different characters all within the same paragraph, the spacing of the paragraphs are way off, and the pacing is all off. We spend 2/3 of the book doing absolutely nothing then suddenly the character is engaged, married, kidnapped, and thrown into an archaic game where she’s hunted down by people in the court she’s married into so they can kill her unless the MMC finds her first, (all this happening over the course of about 2 days) then the book ends.