Thank you Reedsy and RK Benton for providing me with an advanced copy of the novel in exchange for an honest review.
The main story follows Callum Walker, a detective who returns to a small town called Marion in Washington state after a prolonged absence due to a mysterious event. This event joins a series of lingering side plots throughout the story that may have harmed its pace rather than enhances it - but more on this later.
Its central mystery revolves around the murder of a notorious tycoon who is heavily disliked by the community, and being in such a small town, creates an opportunity for everybody to be a suspect in his murder. I LOVE how this mystery unravel - where it started off as a seemingly unsuspicious death, which led to the death being tied to multiple different events in the novel. I think the way these events are threaded is ingenious and I applaud the author for the way she plots these. I think the strength of this novel roots in its slow-paced investigation, where we are guided through the meticulous clue-finding and unraveling suspicious testimonies through the eyes of Cal’s partner, Inga - a rookie cop who is hoping to become a detective through the mentorship of Cal. The purpose of Igna is again, ingenious, where we are given a sounding board for Cal to lay out his thinking process behind his investigation. The author definitely does not jump the shark, where clues are not always readily available at every turn. We see our protagonists fail and the clues that they uncover go nowhere, so they have to go back to square one to rethink their process again. I LOVE this aspect of the investigation, because just like real-life, it is not always linear.
But I think in doing so, in heeding to the realism of it all, the author unfortunately strays in the moments where there is narrative breathing room and thus she is forced to pepper in some unrelated subplots. For one, we are pulled into this side-quest, where the founder of the town reveals the mystery of his enormous wealth and Cal is unwittingly dragged into a scheme to help him uncover a certain thief who is trying to steal the source of his wealth. I’m not going to lie, I question the purpose of this subplot and find its resolution less than satisfying. Whenever we stray from the main mystery to go on these tangents, I find myself looking forward to going back to our central mystery. There is also a subplot about our protagonist finding love which is meant to be a red herring? because the lover is actually the murdered victim’s daughter, but that sort of resolves itself fairly quickly so the tension of whether she is or isn’t a suspect was not present for long.
I think it is a very interestingly plotted murder mystery that may be a few pages too long - padded with subplots that are unfortunately less interesting to read than the main mystery itself. I think if we trim it down to just the central mystery, it will be a winning novel. Unfortunately, in its current form, it’s a mixed bag for me.