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No One Leaves the Manor
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Expected 14 Jul 26A deliciously twisted, fast-paced YA horror, where debutante dreams become bloody nightmares—perfect for fans of House of Hollow and Their Vicious Games.
It’s 1921, and Mrs. Caroline Reginald Kane, the last surviving descendant of a family of oil barons, has invited four young debutantes to visit her at Greystone Manor. There, they'll compete for the ultimate to become heir to her unspeakably vast fortune. But only one girl can win. And the manor is watching. Dorothea is a thief, and the best liar in the American Northeast. Her mother vanished at Greystone years ago, and she’s determined to find out why—so long as no one uncovers her secrets first. Vaughn isn’t crazy. She was born for this life—and she won’t let anyone come between her and the fortune she deserves. Birdie doesn’t know why she’s been invited, but she believes everything happens for a reason…and that reason just might be divine. Elspeth is called “pretty as a peach, dim as a doorknob.” But she sees things that the others can' whispering birds, shifting doors, and a language that should never be spoken. And there’s something else hidden behind these walls. Something sinister. It doesn’t plan to let them leave alive.
It’s 1921, and Mrs. Caroline Reginald Kane, the last surviving descendant of a family of oil barons, has invited four young debutantes to visit her at Greystone Manor. There, they'll compete for the ultimate to become heir to her unspeakably vast fortune. But only one girl can win. And the manor is watching. Dorothea is a thief, and the best liar in the American Northeast. Her mother vanished at Greystone years ago, and she’s determined to find out why—so long as no one uncovers her secrets first. Vaughn isn’t crazy. She was born for this life—and she won’t let anyone come between her and the fortune she deserves. Birdie doesn’t know why she’s been invited, but she believes everything happens for a reason…and that reason just might be divine. Elspeth is called “pretty as a peach, dim as a doorknob.” But she sees things that the others can' whispering birds, shifting doors, and a language that should never be spoken. And there’s something else hidden behind these walls. Something sinister. It doesn’t plan to let them leave alive.
- GenresYoung AdultMystery
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Expected publication July 14, 2026
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Kelly McWilliams
7 books311 followersKelly is the mixed-race author of AGNES AT THE END OF THE WORLD (2020), MIRROR GIRLS (2022), and YOUR PLANTATION PROM IS NOT OKAY (2023). AGNES was a finalist for the Golden Kite Award. She's also written for Time, Publisher's Weekly, and Bustle, among other outlets. She lives in Seattle with her family.
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February 28, 2026Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for an advanced reader copy
No One Leaves the Manor by Kelly McWilliams is a third person multi-POV YA historical supernatural horror. When Dorthea, Vaughn, Elspeth and Birdie are invited to compete to become the heir to a great fortune, all four of them jump at the life-changing opportunity. But Greystone Manor is not all that it appears and the young women will soon learn just what they signed up for.
This is definitely a horror to me over any other genre. I can understand why mystery is being mentioned in the marketing, though as Dorthea’s brother Chester tries to figure out why the manor is how it is and there is an element of revealing twists and turns in that regard. But because of how it all comes together, it's more horror with some mystery elements rather than a mystery with a horror atmosphere.
Of all the POVs, I found Birdie’s to be the most interesting. There's poetry in most, if not all, of her chapters and it adds a very unique layer to her POV as it helps the reader get deep into her psyche. She and Elspeth end up falling for each other very quickly when they meet in the manor, but in order for them to be together, they'll have to find a way out, which involves Birdie confronting some difficult things about her past.
There is a decent amount of period accurate anti-Black racism and some mentions of anti-Semitism depicted within the story. Like most YA, those who have bigoted beliefs are punished by the narrative and it is explicitly shown that that kind of language is harmful. Some of the language is on the stronger side, particularly in the use of racial slurs. There is also a scene where Chester is pulled over by a cop and we are in his POV as he is painfully aware of the dangerous position that puts him in, especially with his white-passing sister in the car. I personally have a preference for art in historical settings to be honest about that setting, the good and the bad, so I do appreciate these depictions of history even if they are uncomfortable.
Content warning for depictions of anti-Black racism and anti-Semitism
I would recommend this to fans of YA horror looking for a historical book and readers who love books about competitions for an inheritance
No One Leaves the Manor by Kelly McWilliams is a third person multi-POV YA historical supernatural horror. When Dorthea, Vaughn, Elspeth and Birdie are invited to compete to become the heir to a great fortune, all four of them jump at the life-changing opportunity. But Greystone Manor is not all that it appears and the young women will soon learn just what they signed up for.
This is definitely a horror to me over any other genre. I can understand why mystery is being mentioned in the marketing, though as Dorthea’s brother Chester tries to figure out why the manor is how it is and there is an element of revealing twists and turns in that regard. But because of how it all comes together, it's more horror with some mystery elements rather than a mystery with a horror atmosphere.
Of all the POVs, I found Birdie’s to be the most interesting. There's poetry in most, if not all, of her chapters and it adds a very unique layer to her POV as it helps the reader get deep into her psyche. She and Elspeth end up falling for each other very quickly when they meet in the manor, but in order for them to be together, they'll have to find a way out, which involves Birdie confronting some difficult things about her past.
There is a decent amount of period accurate anti-Black racism and some mentions of anti-Semitism depicted within the story. Like most YA, those who have bigoted beliefs are punished by the narrative and it is explicitly shown that that kind of language is harmful. Some of the language is on the stronger side, particularly in the use of racial slurs. There is also a scene where Chester is pulled over by a cop and we are in his POV as he is painfully aware of the dangerous position that puts him in, especially with his white-passing sister in the car. I personally have a preference for art in historical settings to be honest about that setting, the good and the bad, so I do appreciate these depictions of history even if they are uncomfortable.
Content warning for depictions of anti-Black racism and anti-Semitism
I would recommend this to fans of YA horror looking for a historical book and readers who love books about competitions for an inheritance
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March 17, 2026Thank you NetGalley for the eARC!
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
digital arc courtesy of little, brown books for young readers (thank you!).
3.25*
this book checked all my boxes when i read the synopsis—an infamous home/dwelling that may or not have supernatural entities at play, an unlikely group of young women, and a historical backdrop. (bonus: mixed media!).
the most important part of the story was how it touched on the consequences of power and greed, and what that means for our community/society. it doesn't shy away from the racism and prejudices of its time period, and even corruption within religion. of course, this isn't to say these topics are of the past, rather a good way to address current events, especially since they all center on the issue of structure/authority and the way it divides us. community is intrinsic to survival.
all that aside, while i did enjoy how twisty the plot became, it started to feel over-the-top and surface level. i wish there was more context about the manor and v/the architects since they felt more like a device to push the characters into making decisions versus an over-looming puppeteer; more depth would probably save the story from feeling like "wouldn't it be crazy if xyz happened?" multiple times over. add, some perspectives felt stronger and more interesting than others that it made me wonder if a few more pages could've balanced the characters out.
3.25*
this book checked all my boxes when i read the synopsis—an infamous home/dwelling that may or not have supernatural entities at play, an unlikely group of young women, and a historical backdrop. (bonus: mixed media!).
the most important part of the story was how it touched on the consequences of power and greed, and what that means for our community/society. it doesn't shy away from the racism and prejudices of its time period, and even corruption within religion. of course, this isn't to say these topics are of the past, rather a good way to address current events, especially since they all center on the issue of structure/authority and the way it divides us. community is intrinsic to survival.
all that aside, while i did enjoy how twisty the plot became, it started to feel over-the-top and surface level. i wish there was more context about the manor and v/the architects since they felt more like a device to push the characters into making decisions versus an over-looming puppeteer; more depth would probably save the story from feeling like "wouldn't it be crazy if xyz happened?" multiple times over. add, some perspectives felt stronger and more interesting than others that it made me wonder if a few more pages could've balanced the characters out.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Thank you to NetGalley and Little, Brown, and Company Books for the opportunity to read this eARC - all thoughts and opinions are my own!
If you are looking for a fresh take on historical YA horror, then look no further than No One Leaves The Manor! I devoured this book almost in one sitting because it had everything I love about horror in one book: an old and somewhat haunted house (you can’t trust your own eyes), the promise of a vast fortune with a few strings attached, and a supernatural evil that just might eat us all before the end. The old-fashioned advertisement illustrations and the mixed media were also really fun and added to the 1920s historical and somewhat sinister atmosphere!
This book had my pulse pounding and racing to find out what happens next. Like many horror books, this one was very good at giving me a sense of dread and while some parts of the plot may have been a little more vague, I thoroughly enjoyed my time with this speculative horror! If you are looking for something that will make you question reality, dives into issues like race, greed, and power, and ultimately leaves you feeling perhaps even a bit unsettled as you ponder the future, then you need to add this to your TBR ASAP!
If you are looking for a fresh take on historical YA horror, then look no further than No One Leaves The Manor! I devoured this book almost in one sitting because it had everything I love about horror in one book: an old and somewhat haunted house (you can’t trust your own eyes), the promise of a vast fortune with a few strings attached, and a supernatural evil that just might eat us all before the end. The old-fashioned advertisement illustrations and the mixed media were also really fun and added to the 1920s historical and somewhat sinister atmosphere!
This book had my pulse pounding and racing to find out what happens next. Like many horror books, this one was very good at giving me a sense of dread and while some parts of the plot may have been a little more vague, I thoroughly enjoyed my time with this speculative horror! If you are looking for something that will make you question reality, dives into issues like race, greed, and power, and ultimately leaves you feeling perhaps even a bit unsettled as you ponder the future, then you need to add this to your TBR ASAP!
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Thank you so much for the ARC!
This novel opens incredibly strong. The first chapters are gripping, technically polished, and confidently written. The prose feels deliberate and controlled, and I especially enjoyed the use of multiple POVs as it added texture and kept the pacing engaging.
That said, I did expect a bit more depth in certain areas of the overall plot. While the premise had strong potential, I found myself wanting more when it came to the backstory of the manor and V. Those elements felt somewhat one-dimensional at times, and I would have loved to see them explored with greater complexity.
I also found myself unsure how to classify this book. It doesn’t fully commit to mystery, nor does it lean far enough into horror. If anything, I would describe it as historical mystery fiction, though even then, it feels slightly genre-ambiguous.
One element I did appreciate was the inclusion of accurate (to the period) anti-Black racism and also anti-Semitism. These aspects may be uncomfortable for some readers, but they reflect historical realities and felt honest rather than gratuitous.
This novel opens incredibly strong. The first chapters are gripping, technically polished, and confidently written. The prose feels deliberate and controlled, and I especially enjoyed the use of multiple POVs as it added texture and kept the pacing engaging.
That said, I did expect a bit more depth in certain areas of the overall plot. While the premise had strong potential, I found myself wanting more when it came to the backstory of the manor and V. Those elements felt somewhat one-dimensional at times, and I would have loved to see them explored with greater complexity.
I also found myself unsure how to classify this book. It doesn’t fully commit to mystery, nor does it lean far enough into horror. If anything, I would describe it as historical mystery fiction, though even then, it feels slightly genre-ambiguous.
One element I did appreciate was the inclusion of accurate (to the period) anti-Black racism and also anti-Semitism. These aspects may be uncomfortable for some readers, but they reflect historical realities and felt honest rather than gratuitous.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
2.75/5 rounded up.
I really liked the idea of this book, but I didn't love the execution.
This is a dramatic historical mystery with an ensemble cast of characters set in the 1920's.
I think my biggest problem with this book is that the writing really threw me off. It was so choppy and awkward at times. It felt like the author was trying too hard to make if sound of the time, but it just came across as really young and unpolished. It also took me out of the story instead of immersing me more (the way I think it was intended). Maybe it would've worked better as an audiobook, with people going full-out with the accents?
Thanks to NetGalley for the e-ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review!
I really liked the idea of this book, but I didn't love the execution.
This is a dramatic historical mystery with an ensemble cast of characters set in the 1920's.
I think my biggest problem with this book is that the writing really threw me off. It was so choppy and awkward at times. It felt like the author was trying too hard to make if sound of the time, but it just came across as really young and unpolished. It also took me out of the story instead of immersing me more (the way I think it was intended). Maybe it would've worked better as an audiobook, with people going full-out with the accents?
Thanks to NetGalley for the e-ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review!
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