Plain The Awakening Book One of the Soul Lineage Trilogy
Jane Agatha Fontenot has never felt like she fit in—not with her curvy frame, her neurodivergent mind, or the flickers of magic that have sparked throughout her life without ever fully taking hold. Her grandma Agatha still calls her “Janey” with love, and her best friend just calls her “J,” but the rest of the world? They’ve mostly written her off.
They have no idea who she really is.
Born under a blood moon that took her mother’s life, Jane carries the reincarnated soul of a powerful witch who lived centuries ago—a soul that, when paired with her bloodline, unlocks a magic not seen in generations. And now, as Jane approaches her thirtieth birthday—the first blood moon since her birth—that dormant power is waking.
Along with it come the memories…
The magic…
And him.
Lurking just beyond the veil of the ordinary world is the man her soul has loved across lifetimes—finally drawn back to her after centuries apart. But not everyone welcomes her return. As old enemies stir and long-buried secrets rise, Jane must embrace who she was to survive who she is becoming.
I listened to Plain Jane: The Awakening, narrated by Dahlia Summers!
This was a shorter listen for me, taking about two hours at 2.0x speed, but it was a great introduction to the series!
Jane is a very relatable FMC, and give me a witchy vibe set in the New Orleans area any day! That is ALWAYS a selling point for me. We have witches, werewolves, vampires, and ancient magic stirring up its usual trouble, along with some spicy moments to keep things interesting!
Jane has multiple love interests, but this is NOT a why-choose romance. I will say that the romantic side of things left me with a few questions, but I have a feeling we'll get more answers in book two. Since this was a shorter first book, I'm curious to see how those relationships develop as the series continues.
One thing I really enjoyed was that this story wasn't entirely predictable! There were definitely a few things I didn't see coming, and I LOVE when a book manages to surprise me.
The narration by Dahlia Summers was also very well done and made this a great listening experience!
Overall, this was a solid start to the series. I'm intrigued, I have questions, and I definitely want to see what happens next!
Pros: I loved the photos for each chapter. They were beautiful and added to the feel of the story. I think the language used throughout was truly poetic and graceful. It made for vivid descriptions and scenes I could see/smell/feel myself. Some of the figurative language made me stop and say, “ooh!”
I think the main character is incredibly relatable. Just a normal girl not into being anything she’s not, with a touch of crippling anxiety. She is all of us.
Cons: I feel like this book was fast-paced, which some people probably really like. I myself found myself needing more. I wanted more background and character building in the beginning. The characters in her friend group all had differences, but they seemed to all approach Jane with the same “I’m super supportive, always here, be yourself,” attitude which made it a little bit difficult to really feel like they were different people. I also wanted more buildup to the spice. I felt like it came too soon and then again much too soon after the first encounter.
Questions: When the group set out from the shop to the cemetery, it said their 6 shadows moved together (or something like that). I couldn’t figure out who the 6th person was or if that was meant to reference a sort of hidden character alongside or within Jane?
Overall a good story and one that keeps you interested. I think I’d have liked this book to be triple the length so that I could swim in that beautiful language more and get to know each friend relationship more distinctly.
I really wish Goodreads allowed half stars, this was a 3.5⭐️ read for me.
I’ll be honest… this one and I didn’t completely click. I wanted to love it more than I actually did and there were definitely moments where I found myself struggling to stay invested in the story. BUT, I did an immersive read for this one and Dahlia’s narration made the experience so much more enjoyable than it would’ve been for me reading the book on its own. Her pacing and character differentiation kept me engaged when my attention was starting to wander. So, narrator appreciation because she was absolutely putting in the work.
Let’s talk about the characters, we have Jane, she was probably the part I connected with the most. I liked that she felt like an actual person rather than a perfectly polished FMC. She has insecurities, anxiety, moments of confidence and plenty of moments where she’s still trying to figure herself out. Her journey toward understanding herself and her awakening was interesting, even if I didn’t always feel fully connected to the overall story.
The supernatural cast definitely had potential. Witches, werewolves, vampires, New Orleans… basically the ingredients were sitting there ready to make something delicious. But for me, the execution didn’t always land the way I hoped it would. My biggest issue was that I wanted more development. More time with the friendships, more character depth, more buildup around the romance and more explanation surrounding the magic. Some things moved so quickly that I didn’t always have enough time to become emotionally invested before we were already onto the next thing.
The romantic situation also left me with more questions than feelings. I could see the potential for some delicious tension there, but I wanted more buildup and chemistry before certain things happened. Give me the yearning! Give me the awkward tension! Let me suffer a little! I did enjoy the found family aspect and the chapter artwork was such a cute touch. Those little visuals added to the atmosphere and honestly made me want a physical copy even though my feelings about the actual story were very much “we’re still figuring things out.”
Final thoughts: this wasn’t a bad read for me, it just wasn’t one I connected with as much as I wanted to. I think there are some really interesting ideas here and I can definitely see the potential in the world and characters. I just needed more depth and more time for everything to develop naturally. So while this wasn’t a personal favorite, I’m still curious enough about where Jane’s story goes next to keep an eye on the series.
I was hooked to this right away. Every word is like a painting and you know exactly what is happening and how it’s happening and it sucks you in. With a few twists and turns that I didn’t expect would happen. If you love dark fantasy mixed with some spicy romance then check out this book. I’m not just saying all this because I’m friends with the author btw.
ARC review... This book is a perfect mix of the vampire, witch, werewolf shows/movies in all the good ways possible, plus some spice! I loved every character and the relationships within this group is truly beautiful. Chosen family, love triangle, ancient magic....just a few of the things you have to look forward to when reading this book!! I absolutely loved this book and can't wait for it to be on my bookshelf!
Plain Jane: The Awakening by Jaclyn Bales is a delightful surprise, a perfect blend of Twilight and Practical Magic that brings together witches, vampires, and werewolves in a captivating world. I really enjoyed how the story explored how these supernatural beings live and interact, giving a fresh and believable twist to a familiar theme.The romance element was handled beautifully. It’s present and meaningful without being overdone or explicit, something I truly appreciated. The love scenes feel purposeful, adding depth to the characters and story rather than distracting from them.If I had one small wish, it’s that the book could’ve gone on a few more chapters, I wasn’t ready to leave this world yet! Even so, I loved how the story wrapped up, leaving me both satisfied and eager for more. Plain Jane: The Awakening is a strong start to what I hope becomes a larger series.
What worked: ✅️Witches ✅️Werewolves ✅️ Broody, sexy vampire ✅️Found family (seriously loved their friendship, and B. is a total baddie) ✅️A relatable, curvy and neurodivergent FMC ✅️an FMC getting ready to turn 30 (need more grown FMCs, let's be honest) ✅️ dormant magic that awakens ✅️ love... triangle? (Definitely need more explanation of this in book two) ✅️ hidden secrets ✅️ loved the fast pacing, its fantasy, but there wasnt heavy world building. It was easy to get into the story. ✅️ the spice was short and didnt overpower the story. It does happen quickly so I can see where this might create a pause, but it wasnt gross spice. She's 29, young, and feels this pull towards this person. Remember what that was like... ✅️ plot twist! ✅️ an ending that left me wanting book two IMMEDIATELY ✅️ the writing was poetic and not overly literary, super easy to follow along. ✅️ the pictures in between each chapter! These added to the vibes beautifully, now I want a physical copy
Areas of 'Opportunity' ✍️ wanted a little bit more of the supporting characters. We get some, and maybe more is coming in later books...? ✍️ there was a hint early on about a potential love triangle, could have had a little bit more of that push/pull between the first two characters to make it more realistic (trying not to spoil anything)
Narration Narration Performance: Dahlia Summers Immersive read this story and Dahlia did a great job with the pacing, accent consistency, and differentiation of the various characters. Audio Production Quality: Volume levels were even. No background noise, distortion, or unnatural pauses between chapters. The Story and Flow: I think the audio enhanced this story
Favorite quotes: "She sees me. Because of her, I’ve faced things about myself I used to bury under politeness and people- pleasing. She’s the reason I stopped apologizing for taking up space and started learning how to be. Neurodivergence, anxiety, magical quirks and all. She’s taught me that I don’t have to earn love by shrinking. I’m allowed to just be loved."
"His voice is low and warm, like honey poured over a record scratch. And that smile… God, that smile."
"But for me, intimacy has always felt… vulnerable. Like something that required safety, trust, and some kind of connection before I could even think about opening up in that way."
"Take whatever time you need in thought— and never apologize for taking up space or being you.”
"I understand now that my mind isn’t broken. It’s wired differently— vibrating at a higher frequency. It means I feel more, notice more, carry more. And sometimes it hurts. But it’s also beautiful. Because I’ve learned how to survive my own storm. I’ve learned that this brain of mine— the one that spins and spirals and sees connections others miss— comes with gifts that can’t be taught. Empathy. Creativity. Resilience. Strength. The kind you build in silence, in struggle, in waiting, in solitude, and therapy offices and late- night breakdowns where you choose to keep going anyway."
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I love the fact that she seems real with real insecurities and issues. Jane is both insecure and secure in herself. It’s a blend that I think a lot of people will connect with.
The best friends group gives all the very best that you could want in a best friend group. They support each other 💯, and it’s wonderful to read about.
The love 🔺 (could be a reverse harem 🤞🏻) is really giving love 🔺 in the best “I want to throw something way”. It leaves you wanting answers, but not such a cliffhanger that I want to throw something.
wish there was a 4.5 star rating. we'll written and immersing without being long winded. the story of Jane, B, and other characters dives into a culture in New Orleans that tv shows, books, and movies have shown us for years but it feels new and fresh. a different take on the witchcraft and magic that flourishes there. excited to read book 2 once it's available. I gotta know if Alexander knows or if hes going to be blindsided too!
As a Neurodivergent person, I have often found that a few chapters into the book I am reading, I can guess the ending or whatever the plot twist is supposed to be. Plain Jane kept me guessing. There were unexpected twists and turns that kept me turning the pages until I had consumed its entirety. It made me want to know more about Jane’s story, and the stories of the other characters. Jaclyn’s writing is poetic and beautiful and descriptive in a way that makes you feel as if you are experiencing all the little nooks and crannies of the world she has created first-hand. Having never been to New Orleans, it makes me want to go so badly! The characters’ personalities reminded me of some people I know in my personal life, as well as people friends of mine know. It was very relatable.
This is the debut of this author, and it is a lovely book! It read smooth, storyline flowed nice, nit too many inner dialogues (which I like), no side distractions on the story flow. It was really well paced!
The characters felt like a tight knit group, found family, being there for each other through thick and thin. Plain Jane is such a sweet person, has her head steady on her shoulders. Her chemistry with Alexander and Maurice is like a push and pull. Who will she choose? Maybe no need to choose?🤣🫣 The 🌶️ is very nicely written, no nonsense, straight to the point, not OtT, which made the 🌶️ part reads fun🥰
Overall really enjoyed this book Great debut! 5/5⭐️
Loved this book. Such a fast pace book. If you love supernatural elements and all things witchy this book is for you. I definitely got some twilight Edward and Jacob vibes when reading this book which I was living for. Definitely gets you hooked and want to know what’s going to happen next. The ending definitely hooks you. Has some spice to it to so if that’s not what you like I would read another book. I loved it.
I found this book on TikTok and devoured all 154 pages in under 12 hours. This was my first read with an almost-30 FMC, and the relatability hit hard—so many moments felt deeply personal. The vibes are The Originals meets A Discovery of Witches with cozy Practical Magic energy and a hint of Twilight nostalgia. Short, immersive, and incredibly addictive.
The narrator’s voice draws the reader in; almost as if a spell has been cast to keep the reader’s attention. The past and the future collide. Power rises within Jane on the night of the Blood Moon. An ancient love and a newly discovered mate bond leave Jane confused and desiring two men. A captivating read that leaves the reader hungry for the next book in the series.
Plain Jane: The Awakening was such a pleasant surprise. I really connected with Jane and loved watching her come into her own. The writing is warm and engaging, and the story feels honest and relatable without trying too hard. It's the kind of book that quietly sticks with you and makes you reflect on your own journey. A great read if you enjoy character driven stories about growth and self discovery. This 100% deserves a place on your tbr!!
“I didn’t cry when I was rejected from Rupaul’s Drag Race and I won’t cry now” This book is romantic (🌶️: 10/10), funny, and mournful at all the right moments. It almost reminds me of an adult version of Shadow Falls by C. C. Hunter, in the best way. I’m also a sucker for when novels reference other forms of media that I love; whoever wrote this has great taste. My only complaint is there isn’t more of it! #TeamAlexander
Plain Jane The Awakening by Jaclyn Biles is a captivating fantasy read that takes place in New Orleans. Jaclyn has clearly done her research on New Orleans and accurately describes locations used in the story. This book is a short read and a great for around Halloween. If you enjoy fantasy, and reading about witches, werewolves, and vampires, then I would recommend giving this book a read.
A quick read, but it was very good. I couldn’t put it down. It really gives a vampire diaries/original’s vibe mixed in with Crescent City!! I really loved how the book gave visual art of each character so you can kind of envision it in your head. I can’t wait for the next one!!
I don’t know if i like how old the main character is…. Thats a lot of power to get control of and use properly in that amount of time. I did enjoy the magic system that was built. The visuals are great. Wonderful, descriptive writing style! It was greatly appreciated and i loved being able to have a movie going in my head while reading this.
I really liked this whirl wind of a story. I thought it was to the point, the writing was enjoyable, and the setting was one of my favorites. I liked the contrast of MMCs as well. I think my only complaint is that it appears to use AI images (atleast in the ARC I received)
This was a fun and fast read! Goodreads really needs to add 1/2 stars, because I'd give one. I loved the blend of witches, werewolves, and vampires, and the New Orleans setting really elevated the story. The magic felt vibrant and alive, especially with the sense that something ancient and powerful is being reawakened.
The bonds between the characters—and that growing chosen family feeling—gave the story emotional weight beyond the romance. Jane’s relationships with a unique group of friends helped me quickly invest in her journey.
The love triangle is just getting started, but in the best way. It’s set up with enough tension and intrigue that I’m already itching to see where Jane ends up in the next installment. The slow-burn energy and romantic uncertainty worked really well here.
If I had one wish, it would be more. The book felt too short for how much potential this world and these relationships have. A few times I felt I had to 'catch up' to how quickly things progressed. I wanted more time with the friendships, more depth in the chosen-family bond, and more of the spicy romance and tension between the FMC and her possible love interests. I also would have loved more descriptive detail around the magic system and how it’s awakening—it’s such an exciting concept.
I’m not usually a “spicy romance” reader, but I genuinely enjoyed this one. This was a strong debut and I’ll definitely be picking up the next book to see what happens next.
A powerful journey of self-discovery that resonates through its honest portrayal of personal transformation. The novel centers on a FMC who, at first glance, might seem unremarkable, but quickly draws readers in with her authentic voice and relatable struggles. It blends emotional vulnerability with moments of unexpected strength, allowing the main character’s awakening to feel both poignant and inspiring. The relationships woven throughout the story add further depth, providing insight into the FMC evolving sense of self and the challenges she faces. The author’s careful attention to character growth ensures that every triumph and setback is felt deeply, making the journey even more rewarding for readers. Fans of contemporary fiction that explores inner change and emotional resilience will find much to appreciate in Plain Jane: The Awakening. A story that is both touching and uplifting, promising a memorable reading experience for anyone seeking inspiration and genuine character development.
I jumped into this not really knowing what to expect, but I enjoyed it and thought that it is a great start to the series. If you like witches, werewolves, and vampires then this one might be for you!
I listened to the audio for this one. It is single narration with Dahlia Summers, and I thought she did a great job. This was my first time listening to her and she did great with all of the different characters and just really bringing the story to life.
This one is short and quick, but I didn't feel like things were rushed. The worldbuilding was easy to follow, the pacing was good, and I really liked all the characters. Our FMC was totally relatable! I don't want to say too much and spoil things since it is on the shorter side, but the ending definitely made me want the next book!
Huge thank you to the author for the copy to listen to! I can't wait to see what happens in the rest of the series!
❣️In this captivating narrative, a powerful journey of self-discovery unfolds with profound intimacy and emotional resonance. ❣️At its core is a protagonist who, despite appearing unassuming, reveals a depth of character that is both captivating and relatable. ❣️Through her eyes, readers experience a poignant exploration of personal growth, marked by moments of vulnerability and unexpected strength. ❣️ The author's nuanced handling of character development ensures that every triumph and setback is deeply felt, rendering the protagonist's journey both inspiring and memorable. ❣️The relationships woven throughout the story add layers of depth, illuminating the protagonist's path towards self-realization and empowerment. ❣️For readers who appreciate stories of inner transformation and emotional resilience, this novel offers a compelling and uplifting experience.