She was meant to be hidden. He was never meant to find her.
All her life, Sophie has lived behind high walls — a protected omega in a secret compound designed to keep her kind safe from the alphas who would claim them. But safety has a price, and Sophie is tired of paying it. She wants freedom. Adventure. More.
When one of the most ruthless alpha packs discovers their sanctuary, her quiet life is destroyed in a single night. The omegas are captured. Controlled. Claimed.
Kaine — the pack’s cold, dominant leader — chooses Sophie for himself. But Sophie isn’t like the others. She fights him, defies him, and burns with a spirit he can’t seem to break.
Kaine wants her submission. Sophie wants her freedom. What neither expects is the fire that ignites between them — a dangerous bond that blurs the line between hate and hunger, pain and passion, captivity and connection.
He will take everything she has to give. And she will make him bleed for every piece of her he tries to own.
This is the first book in a dark omegaverse series but can be read as a standalone. No cliffhanger. HEA guaranteed. This is a new edition of the previously published "The Alpha's Capture" by Mary Magdalyn. It has been remastered and book two is almost finished!
This is a dark romance with themes of dub-con, power exchange, and violence. Reader discretion strongly advised.
All authors need to practice first. This was a bit too rapey and lacked a story. Almost hard to see that this is the same author as Tormented Omega.
Before reading:
Now that I am completely and utterly—ridiculously—lost in Tormented Omega, and while I’m waiting for the final part, I will read something else this author has written. Yay for being the first to write a review on this one!
He kidnapped, rapes her, beats her and treats her like crap and then can’t understand why she runs away. Then all his forgiven because he feeds her and takes some time off work…
The initial world building a backdrop was great, but the vibrant/defiant/strong FLC was brutally demolished, and did all the give. The only true sex scene was punishment sex and hateful. Emotional dev was reduced to biology/bond. MMC had maybe 1% emotional growth, and 1% regret for his actions. For dark romances, i prefer a bit of character dev to see then earn the love of each other. So much potential here, that was capped off, likely for word-limit requirements.
DNF 12%. The fact that this is the same author as Tormented Omega does not compute. This is very amateur: all show, no tell, stilted conversation laced with exposition, longing for the world beyond with all the subtly of The Little Mermaid.
I’m honestly surprised she didn’t start singing.
The writing style is off as well.
It’s a different omegaverse. Different author, as far as I’m concerned.
It’s just not good and I am genuinely disappointed.
After finishing Tormented Omega, I was excited to find something else by this author. I was disappointed. I'm all for dark omegaverse but this was too dark. I understand A/O/B instincts but outright rape and abuse leaving her screaming and in pain? Nah. That was too far. Kaine says he likes her fire, but then breaks her. That's not mates.
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I love it when I can become a character in h the book. Another success in keepin me reading until the book is finished. I can’t seem to put the books down that this author writes. Highly satisfied and can’t wait for more of her books to read.
I’m not sure if I would classify this as a romance. Told from the FMC’s POV only. It’s an interesting take on omegaverse with a very violent tone. Definitely check the triggers.