Their Twisted Rules: Untouched Vol 2 of 6

by C.S. Berry

He was a ghost from her past–the one person she’d trusted most.

And now he’s back.

Nico isn’t the gentle soul who used to be her childhood best friend.

He’s just like them–the boys who have claimed her.

Now it’s Nico’s turn to decide where his alliances land in this twisted world of secrets and lies.

Become a horseman or declare war against them.

No one will be left without scars.

All that matters is who will be left to rule.


This is the continuation of Their Dangerous Games book 1 of Untouched. These books are meant to be read in order. This is a 6 book series. Each book ends on a cliffhanger.

Genres: Why Choose, Enemies To Lovers, Sports, Sports Romance

532 pages, Kindle Edition

Published February 11, 2026

Reviews

[BookishMarineMama03 · Rating 5 out of 5]

C.S. Berry, WHAT DO YOU PUT IN THESE BOOKS?!?! Literally and completely stopped adulting AGAIN and could not put it down! Their Twisted Rules by C.S. Berry is book two of the Untouched Volume 2 of 6, the serial that is now out as books and omg. If you love a HOT, dark, obsessed, why choose romance, with the now FIVE horsemen, I am telling you, GO READ THIS BOOK NOW!

This book starts right off where we left. Harper, in her senior year, she's always been the girl in the shadows. She chose on purpose to fade into the crowd so she never attracted the attention of the four horsemen; Luke is death, Caden is war, Jack is famine and Eli is pestilence. These men, each of them different in their own way. In the first book, they decided to claim her for the year, she is the last standing v@rgin in the school. They think they "own' her now and want to claim all her firsts, but truthfully that girl owns all four of those boys completely. And we were left at the end of book one with her first love and childhood best friend Nico walking in the door and unknown to her, he is ALSO a horseman! And it’s quickly apparent he is back to stay and equally wants her as well. I love Harper, she’s brave, she's strong, she stands up and fights. This book is her stepping out of the shadows without apology—claiming her power and becoming the Harper she was always meant to be. AND it’s these five boys, turning from the mean bullies to each of them slowly realizing they are falling for this amazing girl and let the protective and obsessive begin! I can't even describe the steam, the spice and heat of this book. It will burn you alive. It is so hot. It’s addicting, it's raw….. Ugh I can't even describe how good!

I loved this one just as much, maybe even more as we watched them all grow. We watch this sweet and loving girl show each an unconditional love they never have experienced. At times you want to scream at them all. And of course, there were so many twists and turns and every emotion and we are left at the end with more questions and so much more to come. I didn't want this to end and I cannot wait for the next one.

Rate: 5/5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice: 5/5🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

🏈 Why choose
🏈 Virgin FMC
🏈 Protective MMCs
🏈 All her firsts
🏈 Touch her and d*e

[Natasha · Rating 5 out of 5]

I was waiting for this for forever (I forgot to buy the whole serial before it went away) and it did not disappoint at all. I feel a little bad for Harper. She got turned every way but loose! She said she was sore and I was sitting there like.... girl you've got 5 boys and you didn't tap out once! of course you're sore! I say the same things with every CS Berry book which is... get off her! but also it was getting good, so like don't.
I know some people wish they could be in the fmc's shoes and I do not, 5 is well I'm not sure how many too many but I feel like a few too many for me. I mean i would have to try it out first 🤭 no I'm kidding.
I love how we're seeing Harper form a relationship with each guy. I was getting annoyed that she keeps saying, "its just till the end of the year" like these guys are not gonna give you up? its obvious? but i 100% see where she's coming from. I love the introduction of Nico and how he is with her cause its kind of like she has someone rooting for her within the guys. Jack is fun, I liked seeing a little more into his home life, he seems the most well adjusted and i hope there is sword crossing cause I want it. idk if it would add to the story, I just want it selfishly. Eli is still an enigma to me. I'm not sure how i feel about him cause I feel like i only see him in spicy scenes till the end and like I don't know much about him yet? the ending makes it seem as if his backstory is coming. Luke is something else. I don't know where to stand with him either cause he is so domineering and controlling but at the same time you know its cause his home life is bad and he just wants some love but he's going about it in an insane way? like you could be nicer, but that thought has never crossed his mind until its too late or he thinks of something that makes him mad and he goes with that emotion instead. finally like Harper, unfortunately I do have a favorite and it is Caden. Hearing his backstory and why he hates Tanner and seeing the other try to calm him down, plus all his interactions with Harper does have me rooting for them but I really don't think it could be just them at the end of the day, they need the others. with that being said, if he's doing more house tours... I am available
I'm excited to see whats next for this group cause that ending was scary and I hope Kenz is ok cause that was an insane chance

[Lemon · Rating 4 out of 5]

Plot: 4/5 • Spice: 5/5 ———-> Smut, smut, smut. Literally every other chapter is someone banging Harper. Spice > Plot. Which was totally okay. I was in the mood for this type of read.


Caden, sweet giant, Caden is the one to pop Harper’s cherry. Annnnnd then it’s a free for all. You can tell Caden, Nico and Luke harbor more feelings than Eli and Jack. In the last couple pages Eli and Jack say something that makes me think, yes they care about her, but she’s also just a hole to fill.


It is absolutely eating Harper alive that they could drop her at any minute. She’s lying to herself if she says she doesn’t want them more than she’s showing. Especially Nico Luke and Caden. But what does the future hold?


I can’t tell how much time has passed. It’s still football season. So i have to assume it’s still fall. None of them mention finals or anything. So they still have time for the school year. if they still intend to keep her that long.


This is only book 2 in the 6 book series. Now we wait… It ends on a cliffy. I’m sure there’s going to be some fall back on Luke after moving Harper like that and something happening with Kenz. We shall see.

[Nicole · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received an ARC from the author but all thoughts and reviews are my own.

This is book 2 in the Untouched series and it was so good! Harper is the virgin FMC and the 4 horseman who claimed her become 5 in this book. Nico, her best friend from childhood, moves back and happens to be the 5th horseman. There was so much going on in this book - but I flew through it! I loved the one on one interactions that Harper has with the guys - you can see that although they are tough and bullies, they truly care for her and want to keep her safe. Not sure which guy I like most - Caden or Luke or Jack or Eli or Nico. I know that I HATE Tanner - can't wait to see if he gets his own in book 3. I also don't love all the cheerleader bullies - but clearly they just want what they can't have. I can't wait for the next installment - it ended on kind of a cliff hanger - need to know what happens! This is a must read series and CS Berry is slowly becoming by auto buy/auto download author!

[Mindy · Rating 5 out of 5]

OMGosh! Clutching the pearls, ladies! Berry has found a way to write a sequel that is even more exciting and naughty than the first, and I couldn't stop reading it.

Plot Twist:
Nico was Harper's childhood best friend until he moved away. Now, he's back and ready to take Harper as his. Only the Horsemen stand in his way. How Nico ultimately decides to remedy the situation is both thrilling and surprising.

Character Development:
The guys are finding their way within the guidelines of this new relationship. Harper is learning to ask for and take what she wants, and she's learning to accept the guys as more than temporary owners. Each character has a story, and in the book, we get to hear some of them. In the words of Shrek, "The characters are like onions. They have layers, and you have to peel the layers away to learn about the character."

​The Danger:
​Besides the danger they each face to their hearts and sanity, they also face real danger in the form of Tanner and Harper's stalker. These elements add a level of forboding darkness that will keep you on the edge of your seat, clutching your throat, and making you gasp, praying that the characters emerge safe and unharmed. Though, given Harper's luck, that might not always be the case. The Horsemen and Harper have threats coming at them from every direction, some more surprising than others, and there doesn't seem to be an escape anywhere in sight yet.

My Feelings:
This is the part of the story where the men go from being Harper's tormentors to her protectors, the ones who give her everything and are willing to give up everything for her. It's funny to me, and flat-out frustrating at the same time, that they haven't all caught on to their own feelings for Harper. It's coming... I know it is, but it's nerve-racking to read the continuous blundering in their approach to their 'relationships'. More than once, I felt the need to junk punch the guys.
Caden has quickly become my favorite of the group, followed by Luke, Jack, Eli, and, yes, Nico comes in last. Nico may have known her first, but that doesn't mean he is the best for her, not right now, at least. His entitlement regarding Harper is more of a hindrance to their group dynamic than an advantage.
All of the guys, at one point, have made me want to love them and throttle them simultaneously. It is plain to see how the characters feel about one another, but outside forces are pushing the doubts back in, dragging down the characters and tainting their feelings, clouding their vision of what's right in front of them. Between the crappy home life for most of the Horsemen, Harper's abandonment issues, and high school politics, these characters are not in short supply of problems, but they are driving me crazy with their emotional mood swings.

​Final Thoughts:
This book is phenomenal and the perfect continuation of the story. It will take you on a rollercoaster ride of emotions. You will travel the 360 loop of doubt, traverse the hills of tension, tackle the hurdles of passion, try desperately to avoid the tunnel of danger, and fly through the raw emotions of teenage angst. I'm eager to see if the guys smarten up and pull their heads out of their behinds long enough to see the truth that is slapping them in the face. I'm also looking forward to the moment when Harper realizes that she is the one with the most power.

Recommendation:
This book to anyone who enjoys a story about a girl who transforms from a quiet, invisible person into the powerful, passionate Queen she was meant to be. This book is also for those who enjoy reading about guys who go from controlling a**hats drunk on power, to protective bears intent on keeping their woman safe. This is a 'why choose high school romance' with tons of passion, exploration, first times, and angst.

[Bridget · Rating 5 out of 5]

Two disclaimers: I received a complimentary copy of this book, and I am voluntarily leaving a review.

This review includes spoilers of a plot point that was revealed at the end of Volume 1, Their Dangerous Game.

Their Twisted Rules by C.S. Berry picks up the story right where Their Dangerous Game ended on a cliffhanger. The story returns to the party that was in progress at the end of Volume 1. The playing field for the game that Harper had just started to get used to (as much as any girl who has been claimed for all of Senior Year by the four most popular guys in school can) changes dramatically.

The stakes get even higher, and Harper navigates what the return of a ghost from her past means for her present. Even though it doesn’t make sense to her at first, Harper finds out that there’s actually a FIFTH horseman — Apocalypse — and that person is actually her childhood/adolescent best friend, Nico, who just moved back to town. Before she knows it, Harper suddenly has five guys (not four) who consider her a “perk,” five guys who “own her.” Confused, hurt, but also hopeful, Harper is upset that she didn’t know Nico was so close with the guys, but hopeful that they can grow their relationship and that she’ll have an ally in Nico.

Harper needs time to explore whether what she and Nico had is still there, but she also needs to figure out whether Nico can share her with the others… because she can’t be just his anymore. Harper may have started to explore her sexuality and flex her own limited power/control in her position, but she’s still figuring out what it means for her to be theirs and what it means for them to be hers. Will the guys be able to share her the deeper they get?

In addition to changing and growing group dynamics, Harper continues to face some threats and dangers. The Horsemen didn't earn the power to rule the school without pissing some people off along the way, and that has put a target on Harper’s back. The guys rally around Harper, though, and the problems they face definitely bring them closer together. As readers, we learn more about each of the guys alongside Harper, which is one of my favorite things about C.S. Berry’s RH stories - finding out how the guys usually aren’t what they seem like on the surface (especially a group of guys as intimidating as the Horsemen are described). Harper has to navigate letting go of her own misperceptions about them and also being careful not to expect a standard from them that she isn’t giving back in return.

Untouched is one of my absolute favorite RH stories. I’ve already read and re-read the story and its parts multiple times. I’m so glad that the original story is being released as books. This story and all of its characters are under my skin. I can’t recommend it enough if you like strong FMCs, bad boys who win over hearts, RH/why-choose plots, found family vibes, mystery and intrigue, swoon-worthy moments, and lots of spice. Their Twisted Rules has all of that in spades — just mind the cliffhanger at the end. The story will continue with the next installment, Their Cruel Play.

[Persephone Roze · Rating 5 out of 5]

Listen... if ever a book left me rocking the fetal position, this one might be it. First and foremost, this is book two in a series, so if you haven't read their twisted game, maybe pick that one up first. It is also so worth the read.
Second, this book is mostly spice, maybe 80-90%, so if that is not your jam, be wary. I melted for all of it and needed a cooldown 🥵
Third, C.S. Berry is just incredible and I'm so grateful that I get to eat up all her amazing stories. She never disappoints and I think some of her books might just be emotional support books now.
Now, to the story. This book was the air I needed to breathe and I devoured it like I had been living underwater for centuries. I could not put it down and I am so beside myself over that cliffhanger and what to do with myself until book three. I really hope that is soon, because holy cow, I need it like it is my next fix or something. Harper and the boys are just delicious and despite it being mostly spice in book 2, it was not overdone or redundant. I still felt like we had different scenes, experiences, and couplings. It was mind blowing and I was all here for it. We added a new horseman to the mix and he is an interesting addition. I was full team Nico in the beginning and toward the end I was questioning, so I'm super interested in what he's going to do next. There are a lot of characters I hate in this book, characters meant to be hated of course, but Tanner is so terrible and I hope he gets what is coming to him. I am soo here for Harper because I feel like the boys all confuse me too. One moment I'm swooning for one and the next, I'm angry at him. This is heightened for Luke, of course, but I also can't help how much they all send shivers down my spine! Poor Harper, I have no idea what is coming and how it will all play out, but again, I need it so much.
This book was a beast, which is crazy because the time span is only like a week! Despite that, the pacing didn't feel rushed or like it dragged. It was easy to devour and still want more. Also, even though it was mostly spice, there was still enough plot to keep it all flowing especially from book one. This book was just everything and I wish I could read it for the first time again. Our mmc devils are so enticing and so frustrating, but I'm so in love with them and have so much hope about their story/relationship development. So much swoon for Caden 😍❤️
Highly highly recommend, don't sleep on this one. I need more yesterday and I will be impatiently waiting and thinking about these guys constantly!

[Rachel · Rating 5 out of 5]

I am still reeling from Their Twisted Rules! C.S. Berry has managed to make this sequel even more explosive than the first, and I couldn't turn the pages fast enough.

​The Dynamics
​The introduction of Nico—Harper’s childhood best friend—into the Horsemen’s circle (Luke, Eli, Caden, and Jack) adds such a fascinating layer of tension. Knowing that he already had a connection to the guys, and watching him join them in their pursuit of Harper, made the exclusivity of their "arrangement" feel so much more intense and personal.

​The Emotional Tug-of-War
​The character development in this book gave me serious emotional whiplash. There were times I felt like reaching into the pages just to slap the guys for their sheer stupidity and the way they handle things. But then, Berry peels back the layers of their backstories, and suddenly you want to cuddle them instead. Seeing their softer sides start to peek through made the "future" Harper imagines for them feel so clear and possible.

​Harper’s Journey
​I love Harper’s feistiness, but my heart broke for her throughout this book. Even as the chemistry goes off the charts and she finally decides to trust them, those insecurities about the "bet" and her status as the last senior girl kept crashing back in. What she thought would be a one-time encounter evolves into hidden closets and secret moments that are as intense as they are complicated.

​The Lingering Threat
​Just when you think you can catch your breath, Tanner is there to weird everyone out. His presence adds a dark, unsettling vibe that kept me on edge, proving that the Horsemen aren't the only ones Harper has to worry about.

​Final Verdict: This book is a wild ride of tension, doubt, and raw emotion. I’m desperate to see if the guys can finally get out of their own way in the next book. If you like high-stakes romance with a heroine who stands her ground against five complicated men, you need to read this!

[Jessica Partin · Rating 5 out of 5]

📖🔥 Their Twisted Rules by C.S. Berry 🔥📖

If toxic obsession, morally gray men, power plays, and tension so thick you could choke on it is your thing… buckle up. 😮‍💨🖤

Their Twisted Rules is dark romance done RIGHT. This isn’t soft angst. This is possessive, calculated, “touch her and you’re done” energy with layers of manipulation and emotional warfare that had me flipping pages like my life depended on it. 📚💀

From the first chapter, the vibe is:
✨ Elite power
✨ Dangerous secrets
✨ Twisted loyalty
✨ Chemistry that burns instead of sparks

The tension??? IMMACULATE. The banter?? Sharp enough to draw blood. The men?? Walking red flags but somehow I’m colorblind. 🚩😌

C.S. Berry does this thing where she slowly tightens the leash around your heart and you don’t even realize you’re trapped until you’re fully invested and emotionally compromised. The push and pull had me stressed, obsessed, and questioning my morals in the best way.

And let’s talk about the spice 🌶️🔥
It’s not just physical — it’s psychological. It’s dominance in whispers. It’s control in eye contact. It’s “we make the rules” energy.

The FMC? Not weak. Not naive. She adapts. She survives. She learns the game… even when the rules are twisted beyond recognition.

The pacing builds and builds and then — BAM. That ending.

Her cliffhanger was EVIL 😭 but I was an original Untouched reader so I’m not completely feral… just mildly unhinged and impatiently waiting for the next book. 🖤📚

Everyone wants to be Harper right?!

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
If you love dark romance that makes you uncomfortable in the best way and leaves you staring at the wall after the last page… this one’s for you.

[Sumi · Rating 5 out of 5]

And four horsemen become - FIVE? How???

Minor spoiler alert: Harper's childhood bestie Nico moved back to town. That's how.

In volume 2, we see Harper slowly come to terms with her agreement with the guys. She is now on everyone's radar: the Cheermonsters, the clingers, the classmates who call her derogatory things, the classmates who think it's just a bet for their entertainment only. However, Harper has not been hiding in plain sight all those years without learning a trick or two. She stays out of the drama as much as possible, despite all the PDA the guys are determined to shower upon her every day. Is it all a ploy? Is it a game for the guys? How is one girl supposed to be locked into an exclusive relationship with five very different guys?

Feelings are starting to emerge through everyone's masks. Everyone wants a little bit of alone time with Harper and talks of their post-graduation plans are thrown around. Harper does not realize how important she has become to each of them. She is determined to stay the same independent spirit she has been in the past, but new threats emerge with connections to her horsemen, and they are determined to see that Harper remains as untouched as possible. Only they can break her, but she's breaking them first.

This is a novelization of the Untouched serial in the now-defunct Kindle Vella platform. The storyline has not been changed much, but the pacing and narrative have been adjusted.

[Jamie Kendall · Rating 5 out of 5]

f you’re starting this book without reading Their Twisted Game first — don’t. This is very much a continuation, and the emotional impact depends on already knowing the characters and their dynamic.

Book two shifts everything. Harper can’t hide anymore, and being claimed by the Horsemen puts her directly in the spotlight — socially and emotionally. The return of Nico especially complicates things, because it forces past relationships and present loyalties to collide. What starts as an arrangement clearly isn’t staying one, and watching feelings develop underneath the rules is what really drives the story.

Yes, the book is heavy on spice, but it never feels repetitive or thrown in just to fill pages. Each interaction actually changes the relationships, and the tension between the guys themselves becomes just as interesting as their connection with Harper. One minute you’re swooning, the next you’re frustrated, and then somehow right back to invested again.

The pacing works surprisingly well considering the short timeline — it’s easy to binge in one sitting and still feel like a lot happened. And that ending? Absolutely cruel in the best way because now I immediately need the next book.

If you like darker high-school romance, possessive characters, messy emotions, and relationship dynamics that keep evolving instead of staying static, this series keeps getting stronger.

[readingwithkt · Rating 5 out of 5]

Unbiased review (ARC) - 4.5 rounded up to 5

CS Berry delivers again with a super spicy book with more than enough plot to keep it interesting. The book is not a standalone; it’s a continuation of Their Dangerous Games, so unless you’re only here for the spice I recommend reading that first.

While the book is slow paced (the 600 pages cover a week in the life of our MCs) and roughly 70% spice, it’s super engaging and I breezed through it in two days. The spice is quite hot and the scenes are creative without feeling repetitive.

This book explores more of the 1:1 dynamics between the FMC and each of the MMCs, laying a solid foundation for their individual relationships outside the group dynamic. Each of them have interesting personalities and we get hints of each MCs backstory as context for their actions and motivations. Jack and Caden are my favorite MMCs, and I do like the headstrong FMC Harper as well.

The FMC explores her sexuality but grapples with self-doubt and what it means to be owned by the MMCs (The horsemen). She slowly builds an emotional connection with each of them, but refuses to believe the guys feel or want more with her than just a physical connection. That part was certainly frustrating as a reader because it’s quite obvious the arrangement means more to the guys and you see it in their behavior/actions, but I guess teenagers’ hormones-riddled brains work differently! I am hoping this changes in the future books. Can’t wait for the next book to come out!

[Cindy · Rating 5 out of 5]

The rules are simple: try to stay one step ahead of the Horsemen, and always pay attention to the fine print in any deal you make with Death.

This book picks up right where Their Dangerous Games left us — on a cliffhanger, with Harper absolutely speechless.

Four men were already a lot… but five? Things only get more interesting, more intense, and just a tiny bit messy.

What I love about this story is how each character has layers that interlock with the others. Luke, Caden, Jack, and Eli are a tight unit, but there was always one missing Horseman who completed their group. Nico is back, and as a Horseman, he gets to join the game they all started with Harper.

Harper is still in control of most of her firsts, but the Horsemen are quickly tearing down her walls with every touch.

The slow burn starts to shift, and it’s getting heated. It’s intoxicating to watch Harper’s development and desires bloom.

This book ends on a cliffhanger — but it’s worth the wait. Everything gets more intense, more chaotic, and a whole lot spicier.

Tropes
• Bullies-to-Protectors
• Touch Her and Die vibes
• Reverse Harem
• Forced Proximity
• Last Virgin
• All Her Firsts

Trigger Warnings
• Bullying
• Stalking
• Dubious consent
• Spanking/bondage
• Group scenes (No swords crossing) All characters are of age

Spice 🌶🌶🌶🌶

[Breanne · Rating 5 out of 5]

Their Twisted Rules starts off where Their Dangerous Game left off. Harper basically has 4 (5 after Nico re-enters the picture) popular football players wanting her as part of a game. Harper has spent her high school years hiding from the Horsemen, but ends up catching their attention regardless. Luke, Caden, Eli, and Jack are popular football players that most girls chase after trying to get their attention to have bragging rights about being with one or more of the Horsemen.

Their Dangerous Games is a game of cat and mouse between the characters. I loved reading how the dynamics between the characters changed in Their Twisted Rules. Real feelings start developing and the characters evolve and change.

I remember reading this series on Kindle Vella, and I absolutely fell in love with the characters ❤️ I am having the best time getting to be with the characters again!! I am so stoked for the rest of the series to be published!!

Their Twisted Rules is book 2 of 6, trust me when I say you do not want to miss out on this amazing series!!

If you love Why Choose Romance, dive into this fabulous series that will keep you on the edge of your seat!


**I received an ARC of Their Twisted Rules in exchange for a honest review**

[Merilu Keenum · Rating 5 out of 5]

5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ 🌶️! Gorgeous cover!!!!
I’m still waiting for my reader to cool off enough to pick it up again!!! Very spicy, angsty, addictive, and now that Nico is back the horsemen have even more control over their girl! Harper is convinced that she’ll be dropped as soon as they get all of her firsts, but the emotional attachment with Caden, Nico, and even Eli are causing her moments of hopeful thinking. Luke is difficult to read: he’s intense, loves to punish her, but seems to want more. Jack’s attention wavers at times, but his actions are focused on Harper.

I love their protectiveness, their obsession, and their ‘restraint’ while following her rules!! It’s twisted at times: kinky games, jealous mean girls, and suspense watching for stalkers. C S Berry packs so much into this story and I love every page! Harper is becoming their center while each of these guys figure out how much she means to them! I’m so grateful for the advance reader copy from this author and am leaving a honest review.

[Chandera · Rating 5 out of 5]

The next book in the Untouched series was just as great as the first. I could not put it down, I pulled an all nighter like i did in college because of this book, "Their Twisted Rules." You must read the first book before this one but you won't be disappointed. In "Their Twisted Rules" Nico is back. Now there are 5 horseman instead of the 4. Nico was hoping to rekindle what he had with Harper, to come home to the horsemen and to with the girl who felt like home. This book to me has it all, it's so pact full of goodness and full of spice. One of the things I find interesting is the dynamic between the horsemen and the cheerleader girls. With the mean girl mentality and wanting to sleep with the popular boys. I find it fascinating. CS Berry is a wonderful writer, she did it again in this book. A wonderful next book in the series. I cannot wait for the 3rd. I highly recommend this to anyone.

I was given an advance reader copy of this book for my honest review.

[Shaquitta Morton · Rating 5 out of 5]

Their Twisted Rule is a continuation of the story, and it delivers in a spectacular way. I honestly did not think it could get somuch better. I read most of it when it was on Velle, and I loved it. The additional elements, the details, make it better in every sense. I have been waiting for Nico to enter the story. I was not ready. The chemistry was already high, but with Nico added it just exploded. Honestly, I don't know what to say. I could not put the book down. I need more. If there is any flaw, it's that the books are coming out in parts and not all at once. But honestly, I don't think I could handle one book. Harper is relatable even if in a situation that might not happen in real life. The tension from the threat that looms over adds the perfect amount of suspense. The emotions it evokes are real and pull you in. This is going to be an epic ride, and I am so ready for it.

[Tia · Rating 5 out of 5]

Book 2 in this series did not disappoint. I could not put it down! Harper's 4 horseman become 5 and wow I won't lie this book was 95% smut but I wasn't mad about it. Each guy has their own dynamic with Harper but I definitely do think Caden is my fave <3 he is like this big muscly protective teddy bear and I just love him so much.

I definitely go back and forth with who I love the most and that's how you know a why choose is written well when you love all the MMC's.

Harper takes her sexuality into her own hands in this book and I love how she just took what she wanted without feeling bad about it.

I think everyone who reads this can agree Tanner is a knob and we all hate him and I cannot wait for the next book after that cliffhanger because WOW.

[Elizabeth · Rating 5 out of 5]

The Horseman and Harper are back! With all the drama and spice you could need!

I loved the addition of Nico into the group. He created a slightly different dynamic that I really enjoyed throughout the book.

Their Twisted Rules was spicy, spicy, spicy! I was all here for it! I loved getting to know each of the guys and what they liked in the relationship and what they liked about Harper. I couldn't tell you who I liked best because why choose! But I really did like getting into Luke's head a little and I was always excited to see how he would respond to things happening.
I really like how Harper's character is developing and how she sticks up for herself.
I absolutely can't wait for the next books in the series!

Thank you to the author C.S. Berry and team for the eARC!

[Amanda Milne · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another masterpiece by C.S. Berry!! This is a continuation of the first book in the series - Untouched which is about the 4 horseman, now 5 (Luke, Jack, Caden, Eli and Nico) who decide that Harper is theirs and theirs only.
This book is the most hottest book that I have read of C.S. Berry's and I couldn't stop reading it! The emotions of the characteres came out a lot more in this book compared to the first book. It is a fantastic storyline with very strong characters in the why choose / touch her and die storyline type. The book is left on a cliff hanger but I am sure it will be all revealed in the final book of the series which comes out in April 2026.
Run, don't walk to this book!!!!

[Susan Pezza · Rating 4 out of 5]

Book 2 picks up right where book 1 left off. Harper is a HS the last untouched senior and horsemen have claimed her and now her best friend is back in town and is part of the horsemen and she never knew. She know needs to figure out what's going on and where she and Nico stands in this group.

Of course there are outside forces working against her and her men, she has the cheermonsters, some hangers ons, Tanner Lewis, Grant Perkins and some other odd balls that could come back to bite her and cause her some trouble over the course of the remaining four books.

This is a very smutty book, but what I love about CS Berry's books is she does such a great job balancing smut and plot!

This book was provided by the author for my honest review.

[Bookish_Carisa · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved the one-on-one interactions that Harper has with the guys - you can see that although they are tough and bullies, they truly care for her and want to keep her safe.  C.S. Berry is incredible and I'm so glad that I found her when Kindle Vella was still a thing. She never disappoints and I think some of her books might just be emotional support books now. I cannot wait until the next installment of this series. I love Caden and Eli, but I also love Nico. Please check your TW warnings before reading this book. C.S. Berry is an automatic buy for me no matter what she writes though. This book has a ton of spice, but also plot. But if spice isn't your thing then this might not be the book for you. When I say spice like 80 % or more of spice (my favorite thing).

[Chrissy · Rating 4 out of 5]

4⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
4🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

Do you want spice, and I mean heavy spice? This is it. Look no further (you must read the first book in the series as this is a 6 book series).

Back again with the Horsemen who have now added to their ranks with Harper’s childhood friend, Nico. The boy that always wanted Harper, finally could have an in to get her, but will he agree with the Horsemen’s tactics?

This book is extremely spice heavy and in fairness is about 85/90% spice with a dash of continuing plot.

I did still like the dynamics and I especially like Caden, hopefully the next book will be a little more plot heavy.

[Tanya · Rating 5 out of 5]

Okay can we say plot twist. Not only do we have four horsemen we have five red to find out who the fifth one is. The spice level kicked it up two notches in this book from the last one. Can we say pants drop off thank you very much. Don't read this if you ain't ready. Also kudos to bury for writing Harper having some self-respect and sticking up for herself as best she can finally. We are seeing her come out of her shell can't wait for more. But damn it the endings of these book and right at the point where you want so much more and just got to wait. I'm still trying to figure out how the heck she comes up with these characters and these plots everything is spot on.

[Rebecca Billman · Rating 5 out of 5]

I was so excited to continue this amazing series. It picks up exactly where Their Dangerous Game picks up at the party.

Harper has been claimed by the Four Horsemen, but in walks Nico, the boy from her past. Little does Harper know, Nico is a Horseman as well. She never knew that she knew Caden, Luke, Jack, and Eli because of football camps.

The guys are still very protective over Harper and don’t want anyone using her for the wrong reasons. They still have their moments when you will not like them, but they truly care for Harper.

We left on an amazing cliffhanger and I’m waiting for book 3 to come out so I know what happens!!

[Samantha Hickey · Rating 5 out of 5]

The way I am so in love with this world!!!

Their Twisted Rules is book 2 of the Untouched series. This is a dark why choose romance.

I swear, CS Berry writes 5 star bangers every single time!!!

We pick up where we left off in Their Dangerous Game and what a ride we go on!!! Harper and the horsemen, Luke, Caden, Jack, Eli and Nico are getting closer, feelings are getting involved and things get SPICY!!! I couldn't get enough!!!

Then that ending!!!????!!! AHHHHHH!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT SOOOOO BAD!!!

if you haven't read this author yet, you are really missing out!!!!

[Tasha Anderson · Rating 5 out of 5]

Absolutely love Harper and her horsemen. the crazy ups and downs, the shock she has in the beginning of the second book cracks me up. She over thinks it all like a typical female (okay well like I do 😆) I cant wait to continue this adventure. Though I read most of this series on Vella (not available anymore) I waited for these to come out. I cant wait to buy. You wont be disappointed but understand there is smutt and triggers (if your like me the more the merrier 😊) . Have fun and check this series out (The Dangerous Game is the first book!) You wont be sorry!!!!

[Rachel Stephens · Rating 5 out of 5]

Harper's story continues and I love every bit of it!
While this book is full of spice(which i love). It focuses a lot on the growing relationships between Haper and the guys. Can Harper keep herself from falling for them?.
We learn a little more about each of the guys. We also see Harper become more confident and see her making some decisions for herself.
As I said before, it is filled with spice, but there were also emotional moments, some humor, OW drama, and a bit of mystery in the end.
I think this was a great continuation to the series! I can't wait for book 3!!

[Dot F · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved Book 2 as much as Book 1; What a cliffhanger…

Well written and very very spicy. Turning the heat up between the guys and Harper was “chef’s kiss” perfection. I can feel her doubts and insecurities as we moved thru the chapters. I can also feel what the guys are feeling. The possessiveness that each one possesses is very unique to each of their characters.
I usually hate series books with cliffhangers but CS Berry has me all wrapped into this series and waiting anxiously for the next one.
Enjoy. I know I did and am!

[Fiona Wilson · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book was amazing!!! I loved the ending so much and now I'm hanging out to find out who it was that was in the room I hope Luke finds out who it was!!! Sheesh talk about cliffhanger... This book while it was amazing it was also sooooo intense and I'm all here for it. I do enjoy how each of the guys all make her feel so different and how she is draw to each of the guys differently. I am a bit gutted that she doesn't get to have more time with Kenz but it so good that when they are back to hanging out its like no time has passed. This is a must read for anyone who loves reverse harems