I have finished reading of the second book "The Sword of the North" and I would like to comment bellow, but please be aware that It may INCLUDE some light SPOILERS. Readers Beware.
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Pantheonic Literature is perhaps as old as humanity`s firs epic i.e. The Gilgamesh - If not older, making it one of the oldest tropes in collective imagination.Humans have always included Gods as a pivotal part of the narrative, often being the cause or the effect of mayor events. Heroes may be tested, rewarded or punished according to divine providence.
In the Epic of Gilgamesh the goddess Ishtar turns against the inhabitants of Uruk after the hero, declines her romantic advances. In the Illiad the god Apollo sends a deadly plague against the Agamenon`s army for sullying both his temple and his priestess, Chryses. Finally in Tolkiens Silmarrileon, the free races suffer for ages the wrath of evil deity Melkor while other vala ignore the pleads of help.
But what if humanity said enough of the despotic rule of the Divine? What if humans turned against their creators and forged a new destiny free from any theocratic tyranny ? Luke Scull has asked himself this question and has decided to situate “The Grim Company” and “The Sword Of The North” in the aftermath of the Deicide that wrought forth the death of the gods.
But as it tuns out, killing ones creator might not have been such good idea after all. 500 years after humans stormed the heavens, the world finds itself in a post apocalyptic state, know as “the age of ruin” gods might be dead, but all-powerful Magelords rule with iron fist the the few settlements were human life is possible. The world is dying slowly, nature refuses to renovate itself, abominations roam the countryside, while toxic magic plagues the land.
Luke Scull`s world is a grim one, devoid of hope and certainty. His iconoclastic approach breaks every imaginable archetype in the genera, making his characters as flawed as the world they inhabit to some very humanizing extents:
There is the old barbarian, haunted by the past and limited by his aging body, there is the magic-weapon-wielding-youth, highly narcissistic and too foolish for his own good , there is the well-meaning thief with a drug addiction and perhaps the biggest antihero of all, the unremarkable wheelchair-bound magician whom unconsciously inspires the constant betraya. Seriously, the poor guy don`t seem to catch a break, but if anything can be said about Luke Scull is that he is not willing to do anything to his female characters that he is not willing to do to his male ones. No one is safe here, and every one is destined to suffer in one way or the other.
The author writes beautifully, and these books are filled with dark humor and plenty of eyebrow racing situations, but the more you read the harder it is to ignore the parallelisms with other mayor titles in fantasy fiction. Luke Scull seems to draw heavily upon “ Dark Sun” for his world building, while simultaneously drinking from Joe Abercrombie`s “Fist law” and at times, shamelessly paraphrasing Martin`s “A Game of Thrones”. Bellow are the excerpt for comparison:
“Let them see that their words can cut you and you’ll never be free of the mockery. If they want to give you a name take it make it your own. Then they can’t hurt you with it anymore.” - Tyrion Lanister to Jon Snow
“Seems to me that you can keep your fear closer than anyone. Turn it in to your sword and your shield and your armor. Make it a thing nothing is able to pierce” -Brodar Keyne tells Jana Shah Shan
Nevertheless and spite the parallels, Luke Scull manages to keep his own voice all thru the narration. His setting might be derivatory, but he commands the events with obvious intent and purpose. A writer does not need to be slave to originality as long one remains true to the story. THAT being said, he does seems unable to deter from some of the classic pitfalls in fantasy literature. e.g:
I just wish modern-day writers would be as careful with their treatment of race as they are with the treatment of gender. We can still see that that “dark” and “colored” people retain that alienating otherness to them that separates them from any real protagonism.
Just like with Tolkien and C. S. Lewis, “colored” cultures are often delegated to the periphery of the civilized world i.e Jungles and desserts. The characters are used as literary props to exalt the qualities of the fair-skinned hero while remaining utterly exotic to the reader .
In “Grim Company” Davarus Cole mentor is an mysterious man from a far far away land, with dark skin and strange customs. The White Lady`s mercenary army is also “colored” but not “dark” as if to demonstrate their near-proximity to civilization.
The other narrative pitfall that Luke Scull repeatedly falls on; is his tendency of writing impossible situations, only to have solutions later propelled out of nothingness in the tradition of deus ex machina (An interesting choice, this being a godless world)
Take for example the the mystery objectg found in Magelord Salazar`s obelisk, during the events of GC.
The object is implied to be a important element in later installment of the series, but before that can happen the writer needs to take the egg from point A to point B, thus he creates an inconsequential character to advance the plot.
This character “X” has by chance remained frozen in time for about 500 years but awakes some time during TSOTN, to transport the mysterious object.
Later he is “casually” engaged by the party on the middle of the road as if resulted by a “random encounter” in the purest RPG terminology; The next problem arises when character “X” interacts with the party. Because by being alive before the apocalyptic event that shaped the world, he has potential access to information that could spoil the plot, so the writer arbitrarily makes him mute.
Fear not, however, one of our heroes, happens to randomly understand a 500 year old sing language, or at least enough of it to convey the minimal plot required information, to the reader. Finally when character “X” has reached his purpose of transportation, he is disposed and forgotten within one paragraph...
That casual treatment of causality, made me feel at times that I was witnessing a truly epic D&D camping or a “Let`s play” of a minor RPG, instead of reading a fantasy novel. Luke Scull has no qualms in forcing the the “invisible hand of destiny” in his books, nothing is left to chance, thus hindrancing on the reader`s “willing suspension of disbelief”
By the gods, I liked the setting and I liked the characters, but I found the immersion difficult due to the improbability of events. Just because it is fantasy it does not mean that the writer can play on the readers ignorance to will anything into existence.
Midway during the second book I had the constant impression that Luke Scull was either being intentionally obvious or being clever beyond his keen, but for now I am willing to give him the benefit of the doubt.
All in all I found the books entertaining, his characters interesting and his world fascinating. I would gladly recommend the series, if only to have something to read while one waits for Martin`s next book.