The Route: Taken By The Men Who Raised Me

by Amber Paige

Gabby, a fresh-faced college girl, loves her morning run and sticks to it. It’s not just the part about getting fit that Gabby enjoys though, it’s also the fact that her route takes her right past the home of the men who raised her.

It all starts as a joke, but the more these older men catcall Gabby from the front porch, the hornier she starts to get. Finally, things come to a head when Gabby decides to give the men who raised her a taste of their own medicine… resulting in a ruthless, taboo gangbang.

This very explicit short story is 4,000+ sizzling taboo words that will keep your heart racing.

35 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 29, 2014

Reviews

[Tink Magoo is bad at reviews · Rating 1 out of 5]

"Paint me with your seed you dirty old fucks!"

So it's pretty clear this is pure porn, like those bad pornos were the 'naughty' girl has bunches and doesn't know she's being lead into a gangbang, except in this one the girl does know and is a complete cock hungry whore for the men that raised her.

I wouldn't have minded this one if the phrase 'men/man that raised me' was not repeated over and over again. It was irritating as fuck. It didn't make it any more naughty or taboo just by saying it over and over, it just annoyed me and stopped any clit tingles that this might have produced.

So it's 1 star for these 'comically huge' step-daddy and step-uncle cocks.

[EroticaAfterDark (Lilith) · Rating 1 out of 5]

A short book gets a short review. I actually am baffled that I give this book two stars because there were some part that were to bad that it made me either laugh out loud or roll my eyes.

There's a build up, much to my surprise and that was actually quite hot. Not so much was the repetition of "the men who raised me", the over all narrative - this was really a woman? - and the outright porno scene that happened. Honestly, this is a porno. Short build up and then just jumping into sex shouting obscene things the character hadn't even described fantasizing about.

I skimmed through the last pages and preferred - maybe that's why it got this half additional star rounded up. Or maybe I just read this at the right time. *ahem*

edit: I purchased this book for free, now seeing that this is 2.99 I'm rounding down.

[TheDivergent · Rating 1 out of 5]

Just No! Would give 0️⃣ Stars If Given The Option.

Absolutely terrible. Sex in its cheapest & most trashy form.

A good example of porn done very badly.

Don't Bother.