An Arch Magus dies, only to find himself in the body of a young man in a medieval kingdom. He finds out that he is the second son of a duke, exiled to a desolate town by his own family. Shackled by the notorious reputation of his new shell, he tries his best to develop his domain, implementing new policies and innovations that lead his subjects to prosperity. In this world where magic is undeveloped, he shall once again pave a new path.
This series is always intriguing to me. Honestly, it is rough around the edges, a bit clunky and frankly, no offense, amateurish. On the other hand, there’s aspects of it that rise above the tropes of the genre. So, all in all, I always enjoy these books with characters I like and a satisfying building element. That said, this is filler. There’s no real story arc here, just maintenance for the next book, the last in the series. There’s barely any fighting. I don’t understand why the author feels the last book needs to be a certain length? Why not just write a long final book? I guess there’s money to be considered, and I understand that. But it’s gonna cost you a star.
As I said, this book is a bit rough around the edges, clunky with thorny dialogue, but I chock that up to not being professionally edited. Yet, I really like the main character. I like his backstory. And I really like the way he operates.
It’s not just the builder element of this character, and the story in general, it’s the way the MC rises above the tropes of this genre despite himself being a reborn, overpowered mage and thus a trope. Take the conversations with the various powers that MC has with various leaders on his diplomatic tour. He states what he wants, he listens, and he doesn’t force the issue. He notes things about the states of the nations he visits, and the character of their leaders, but he doesn’t openly judge them or comment on them.
This is because Lark isn’t your average always-right, righteous pursuer and enforcer of justice like most MCs in this genre. He doesn’t want power. He doesn’t want to make the world adopt his views. He just knows there’s a threat, and is doing his best to prepare everyone for it. He does this by holding his tongue, and taking the middle ground, the path of least resistance to achieve that goal, to face the threat and win. I love that.
I also found his conversations with the new Princess character startling deep for this genre, really getting into the reality beneath the superficial ideologies of governing. Pretty cool.
Honestly, these interactions probably saved me from rating this three stars as the clunkiness is on another level in this book, and the lack of a story arc, fighting and payoffs is a little too off the trail of the tropes of this genre for me to see this as anything but filler. A decision based on money, and I can prove it because this books ends randomly.
I hope the end of this series is worth the wait. And I bet it will be.
Well, this was a disappointment. Aimless, repetitive, and redundant, I gave this about 100 pages before throwing in the towel. I only picked this up because the afterword of the previous volume said this would be the last entry in the series, but the author decided to publish all this side-story fluff instead of bringing things to a close.
As much as it's a shame to go so far into a series and not finish it, I don't owe anyone anything. For me, this has turned into a sunk cost problem and I'm confident now that I won't have a good time with the remainder of the series.
Best of luck to everyone who keeps trucking on, but this is my stop.
Why not chase down the bloodstone? He wasted 2 days in Thorneforge but couldn’t chase down the bloodstone fragments which could be worth decades of kingdom expenses?
Why not relocate the arachnids since the eggs are useful for healing?
Why not chase down the mysterious group and artifacts after pretending to be the leader?
Why not revisit the dukedom?
Why not scout the demon realm?
Why not carry a communication device?
What’s happening with the elves?
How are we just finding out now about gryphons and dragons in the demon realm?
I think there’s a lot of plot points that could honestly be fleshed out in another few books.
This book flows well, but by the end it feels like there won't be enough time for the author to properly resolve everything in just one more book unless it's planned to be bigger then any of the largest novels of all time.. there are so many characters that haven't had a chance to really shine yet in these last few novels. And it took so long to get this one id forgotten the storyline so far completely. If they next book takes even longer to make sure it covers everything it needs to I worry for this series as a whole.
I thought the last book was supposed to come out next year. So I was pleasantly surprised when this book came out earlier than expected. But for the most part this book was boring. Not much action. Long winded philosophical discussions. No closure to any of the story lines. As a matter of fact the addition of several new story lines. The next book is going to have to be about 700 pages long just to tie all these lines up. Good luck. I don’t know if I’m going even try.
The possible relationship feels hamfisted but I guess since it’s been alluding to a harem it’s fine to some not most. Feels like a lot of plot lines introduced throughout the series as a whole haven’t been nipped in the bud yet. Granted, they all don’t have to be but there feels like there is too many or not enough closure.
This is one of the best series I have read in a long while. I look forward to every release with bated breath wondering what other shenanigans the characters will get up to. Truly a fun read, keep up the good work Mr. Sisa!
This is one of my favorite series right now and this book was absolutely great. Aside from some minor spelling errors, it was a joy to read. Easy to read and very intriguing. Can’t wait for the next installment and hopefully it won’t be the last!!!
I still enjoy the MC and the cast of characters. The editing is really good. I did have a lot of stoppages using the Kindle reader, 30+ times. I look forward to the next book.
Write is not the best book I've read its still a book that i enjoy reading when they get released. I'll be said to see this story end but have enjoyed the journey so far. How you release more books and you continue to improve your writing.
It is truly a joy finding a series that keeps getting better and better with every book. I thoroughly recommend giving the series a try. It is quite an enjoyable read.
I know the story is slowly coming to close, but everything is just so good… the new additions and paths laid out. Just hooking you right back in wanting more…
I love the world building and how certain things are being wrapped up while introducing some of the other regions. So happy that we get 1 more after this!
This story of a old demon hunter archmage getting a body of a young noble and rebuilding his power and resuming his old quest was a fascinating fantastic read.