When Onyx Jefferson travels to Golden Waters, North Carolina to visit family, he doesn't see being robbed in his future. A hustler with a debt to pay sees an unfamiliar face rocking a little ice, and he has the idea to rob the man. What Ivan doesn't know is that Onyx may be a stranger to Golden Waters, but he's the man where he's from, and he doesn't let anything slide. Armed with a crew and a vendetta, Onyx heads back to Golden Waters with a grudge on his shoulders. He doesn't just want to make Ivan pay, he wants to torture the man and the first thing on his to do list of pettiness is to seek out Ivan's baby mama.
Tatum has had her fair share of losers, and she's over it. As a single mother, it grinds her gears to see her fraudulent baby daddy in the club popping bottles while neglecting his child. Tatum is focused on providing for her child. A man is the last thing on her mind until she meets the sexy and charming Onyx. It's almost too easy for Tatum to let her guard down with him, but she'll soon find out that was a mistake.
Oh this was another unique short! I love how initially the MMC first started out as getting revenge after he was robbed! But something switched up within him and he fell in love! There were some secrets and shockers! Definitely another page turner!
The cover was nice, the story was lovely and the happy ending was good too. All of this was about Onyx's revenge against Tatum's ex which turned into different paths for Tatum and Onyx.
This was a good read through and through but the ending seemed rushed and abruptly ended in my opinion. Onyx went to Golden Waters to visit his father and check out the scene to see if he wanted to move there to be closer to his father and he ended up getting robbed by Ivan and his crew. On some get back, Onyx started pursuing Tatum who is Ivan daughter’s mother. Onyx and Tatum really clicked while they were dating and conversing to the point that it affected them both when the truth came out. Onyx didn’t give up on Tatum and he worked his way back into her trust and a relationship. I thought Ivan’s interactions with Onyx’s father was going to come out but his actions still came back on him in full circle when Scarface shót and paralyzed him.
My girl is nothing to play with when it comes to that 🖊️ whew 😮💨 I can’t stand when I review basically tells the book, but from the whole thing starting off as revenge to Onyx really falling for Tatum and having to put in work to keep his girl !!! That baby daddy chile yall gone have to read it to understand how triflin he really is !!!!
The relationship that Onyx has with his dad despite the situation was so real I loved it shows you really can’t judge people .
That twist that had me laughing at the daddy and looking another individual side ways 😮💨😮💨
I love me some Natisha Raynor, she never misses. This book was so good, now I don’t subscribe to using someone like Onyx did Tatum. Because his beef was with Ivan and not her. He started feeling her and probably thought him and Ivan would ever come face to face in her presence. Now I would have never guessed that Ivan and Onyx’s dad were in a situationship. I didn’t see that coming at all. I am glad Onyx treated his dad like a person. I am glad that he didn’t turn against his father because of his sexual orientation. I loved how once Onyx met Angel, he stepped up and became that father figure she needed.
Once again Ms. Raynor’s pen game was definitely on point. This well written short story flowed well and definitely kept my attention. Onyx was quite the man. After going to visit his father, he was robbed by Ivan and a few of his friends. Ivan was a low life who used his friends, didn’t take care of his kids and lived a secret life. Eventually, his life caught up with him and he ended up spending his life in a wheelchair. In the end, onyx ended up with Ivan’s ex and daughter. Ivan’s mother made me mad in the end though. Absolutely loved it.
Onyx had me in a chokehold. The way he wooed the mess out of Tatum and I with his thoughtfulness. Yep, I knew what he was on and still fell hard just like her. The difference is, I never left him. Ten toes down at all times.
This book was 10 shades of karma for baby daddy. I loved that for him too. His tricking had all his lackies out there bad or dead.
When Gods sense of humor sets in, be sure he will have the last laugh. Your motive for doing something that may hurt the wrong person can turn around and be your blessing.
Natisha view on how God moves with his children was spot on you may think you are getting over on others the retribution belongs to the Lord.
Enjoyable read! I enjoyed the way Onyx loved and respected his father, regardless of his preference! Tatum one a strong single mom! Neither were looming for love, but it happened, though there were bumps in the road! Epilogue was good a d hope to see more of Tatum and Onyx!
This story reminds me that we must be careful of the seeds we sow,bad only begets bad! Ivan found out the hard way,bet he’s a reflective type now a days. Too short,would have like to read more about Onyx and Tatum’s relationship along with baby Angel…even baby Steel. Good. Read overall,five ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.as usual for a good story line.
This was a nice, quick read! I hate how Onyx came to Tatum, it was def wrong but something developed from it. I liked that he acknowledged it was messed up and really worked to gain her trust back. Tatum has a sucker baby daddy fr, and I'm happy she was getting princess treatment for both her and her babygirl from Onyx
Nice and easy read. Enjoyed the characters and how the story unfolded. I can tell within the first few minutes if I'm going to like the book. Got my attention from beginning. Onyx was my favorite. I like how he made peace about his dad and had a strong relationship with him. You only get one. I am curious about his mom. I will be following this author.
This story, "All This Love," was short and sweet. On a quest for some payback against the man who robbed him, Onyx Jefferson set out to get with the baby mama of his enemy and send very compromising pictures as part of his get back. Let's just say Onyx fell into his own trap.
I love me some Onyx. He didn’t stop loving his father because of his lifestyle. He didn’t give up on chasing Tatum. He stepped up and took care of her. He decided to let that beef with Ivan go. He went legit and became a family man.
Tatum was in the middle of a feud that she had no clue about. I don’t like how Onyx played her in the beginning. I understand Tatum baby daddy robbed him but he should have kept it real. This novella was good and had a few secrets.
The plot twist!!! I really liked Tatum, she was about her ish and made him work for it from the beginning. Onyx had every right to get his get back but he didn’t have to involve my girl but I’m glad he took accountability. Good read.
I loved it!!! Onyx was not to be played with!!! He thought he could use that girl like that and actually fell for her. I knew he did cause he never video them sexing!!!! Well done!!!
I feel like I needed more. I enjoyed it though. I am not new to this author, but I love how she gave him second a chance. I do feel like there was lot of hopping around in the story as well.
This story was a quick lil read.M I wish we had dived a little bit deeper into the characters, but we only occupied the shallow end of the story pool. I really liked Onyx & I enjoyed Tatum’s personality.
This was a great short read. I loved Tatum and Onyx together. I'm happy that everything worked out for them in the end. I'm also happy that Ivan got his karma.