As usual, really enjoyed this (though it needed a last beta read with some wording mistakes littered around!) It is great to learn more about the world, though I wish we knew a bit more about the customs and traditions. A lot of them are skated by and none really influence the characters - the only consequences of things are connected to the main storyline.
I'm really enjoying the slowness of the relationship - Zaydah says that she's not ready and isn't even as she acknowledges and accepts her feelings. Stand on your business and who you are girl, know your limits! Love that.
I HATED it being a funny lil joke about Claudius and (Finn?) getting with young girls (obviously age of consent), like that's not funny and I can't see Zaydah finding it appropriate to joke about? Why make that joke? Why not another about them being scoundrels without young girls being drawn into it? Because even Zaydah, I keep getting distracted by her age in comparison to some of the men hitting on her - she young!
Also, UGH, why can she not have close male friends rather than 'brothers'. Brothers in arms sure, but to define the closeness they always have to be brothers rather than close friends. Please just let them be close friends. You argue they are then take a step back at the defining of it. Let them be FRIEEENDSSS (this can be AS WELL AS brotherly but why instead of)
I LOVE that there is literally zero miscommunication happening. Misunderstandings? Sure. But each time some authors would let miscommunication spit some angsty boring plotline you are nipping it in the bud and saying hey. How about some communication. Doesn't solve all issues, could actually make some things harder to understand! But by god, these characters WILL communicate clearly. LOVE IT. Although. Gimme some more clear communication on Claudius' gal. Who that? (Just actually got jumpscared by the idea it could be this Ilyia who will be in the next choosing as mentioned by the but at the end of the book. Like, I guess he's only two years older, but at they would have to have met before the choosing which... Would be noncery...)
LETTHEPASTSHIELDSANDPRINCESBEGAY. IF THIS IS THE INTENSITY OF THE BOND AT LEAST SOME OF THEM WOULD HAVE BEEN GAY. Just a lil, they seemed super close... Rather than anything overt since it's obvs not okay in this kingdom!!!
I am so excited to find out where this ending goes. Mr Augustus sir, are you a traitor to your own kingdom??
Are you gonna get any powers from this stone?
Were you and Rainer revived from the dead with the other stone and it's given you the heebie jeebies and a list for power?
Is your wife gonna come into this more? Rather than being a sad discarded story on the side like Mara now has been? (Still think that lady should have been mentioned to be an Aero before she got pregnant with Brev and has to step down for some sexist reason to tie back to what we learned earlier).
Aris, Lucca, Aurelia, please gimme some good sibling action. I KNOW you play the court together rather than separately. Or at least the older two did and Lucca has now revealed he can too so they should team up a lot more.
Zaydah, you're ready for this power. But how will accepting being OP and heiress impact you? All those eyes on you but now with a confidence that you deserve them because you deserve the overwhelming power you contain. HOW is that going to change who you are my overthinking anxious queen? Excited to find out in June!