Thank you to NetGalley for this eARC copy to review!
*Fair warning: this is gonna be harsh*
Actually, wtf did I just read? I fear I need to say this first before going into detail about what exactly I didn’t enjoy about this book; I was at a solid 2 stars for my ultimate rating. I had actively been skimming since the 50% mark, and I already knew I wasn’t enjoying it. What brought this down to a 1 star rating was not only the end/twist, but also the fact that I was crying by the time I finished reading because THANK THE LORD it was over (y’all think I’m joking, I’m actively sopping up tears with my sweatshirt while writing this review).
I really don’t want to be mean. Writing a book is hard. It takes everything out of you, inhuman amounts of patience, and causes endless nights of frustration. I give so much credit to anybody that becomes a published author. This book was not good though. Terrible is a harsh word but in this case it feels like a fitting one.
The first book’s writing, characters, and plot were fine. Nothing revolutionary or life changing by any means, but it was decent. I was expecting the same going into this sequel, but boy was I wrong. The writing was worse. It felt like reading one of those shitty shifter romances written by fifteen year olds. The chemistry between Aiden and Evie we saw in book 1 was replaced with increasingly frustrating scenes of an exhausted babysitter putting up with a petulant child. Their “romance” consisted of constant fighting, Evie literally blackmailing him into being with her, destroying his property when she gets jealous, and running off to another guy when she gets upset. It’s like somewhere between book 1 and book 2, their relationship turned toxic. Evie was fine in book 1! She completely changed in book 2, and not for the better.
Idek what to say about the plot. Things were happening, but at the same time, no progress was being made. And the ending. Y’all don’t even get me started bc this was my breaking point. The Big Mystery: What really happened with Rook and Evie’s parents? What were they really involved in? The question that has been plaguing us since the very first book.
Well lemme tell you.
SPOILER ALERT: they illegally adopted Evie from the shadow government (bc regular adoption is so not cool) and under their orders, trained her to become an elite hacker, until the shadow government wanted to recruit her, which her parents were very unhappy about. They said no! 😬 The shadow government burns down their home! 🤯 Rook and Evie escape! 😱 And The Order… does nothing! For like ten years!! 🤔 Until they decide they want Evie again, and by then, at least two of the members have fallen in love with and are obsessed with her.
…
Bruh. What?
Anyways, TLDR: if you didn’t like the first book, don’t read the second. If you did like the first book, stop there. My mind is mush, my spirit is broken, and I fear I’ve lost my sanity. Ok, bye for now. 🙃